Do Pal Ek Dashtan (12/29) Twist-*Note - Page 8

Awesome ff, im glad raj has accepted the fact that he luvs her, cnt wait for naina to figure it out as well@

Raj 2 goes too sleep..he keeps dreaming about naina....he dreamed...that naina was in kitchen making breakfast and he came from back and kissed her bare shoulder..she looked at him and smiled...
N: good morning shona

R: good morning jaan, saying this raj started kissing her nech and shoulde..now naina was irritated b/c she wasnt able to do her work while raj was kissing her..

N: raj mujhe choro mujhe breakfast banane hain..

R: kyun chordu...tum meri patni hoon..

N: to kya tum mujhe har waqt parashaan karte rahoge..

R: kyun tumhe asie aacha nahin lagta jab main tumhe aise karta hoon(while saying this he kissed her left cheek) and aise(kissed her right cheek) aur aise bhi( kissed her eyes) aur ..he came toward her lips but naina ran from their...and raj followed her, like that they reached their bedroom..naina was throwing pillows at him abut suddenly tripped raj saw that and ran toward her but both fall on bed, naina below raj and raj on top of her with mischeif in his eyes..naina saw that and tried to move but raj said...now where are you going to go now jaan...naina said raj plz janne do na..raj nooded as no...and came forward her face..now their face were very close and raj was just going o kiss her in lips but.....

his dream got disturbes by sun rays...he was irrited as he was just going o kiss..he didnt finished his thought as he was feeling ashamed of wat he dreamed.....but suddenly he heard somebody talking so he went outside and saw naina mumbelling...raj could hear that but he looked worried as never talked like that..he went to her and outs his hand on her shoulder..naina jerks up as got scared...

R: naina kya huya?

N: ya..uhmm..i am fine..

R: then y are you talking to yourself..and wat are you talking..?

N: sir first of all i am sorry for my behaviour for yesterday...i was being childish..

Raj smiled and said ot okay naina i am sorry also b/c i was acting like a 5 yr. kid..

naina too smiled but soon her smiled faded..raj saw that asked wat the matter is?

N: sir Alekh-H-Y are not with us.i am just scared if something happens to them..i am mean they dont have any supervisor and then those terriorists...
nainas face could clearly says that she is worried..

R: naina calm down...i can assure that nothing will happen to them...they can fight..you know that they are capable to handel this kind of situation easily...that way we teach in KMA..rght.. and these are my students
she smiled a bit but wanst convinces fully..

R: naina i think we should leave this place now..b/c we have to place these trrigers in safe place...

N: but sir we dont have trrigers..the box in which we had trrigers is with H-A-Y..

R: naina maybe they have a empty box...he smirked

N: wat do u mean?

R: well to tell you truth i dont have trrigers in that box it was just trick for terrorist that they fall for... i knew that terrorist are afte rthis box so i gahad planned this moved when you were sleeping yesterday..

N:but where are triggers then?

R: well check your backpack..he smiled

N: my backpack..

R: ya check it out..

naina took her backpack and opened it...she feels something hard...she took that thing out and saw that it was trriger...she was happy..she looked at him....and raj looked at her and winked..

N: smart move sir..even i didnt knew that i had those trrigers..

R: he pulled his collar up in a style...when made naina laugh and raj joined her too...

they both started to walk toward jungle
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here huda-alekh and yudi were stil sleeping...but soon alekh woke and saw that it was morning...he looked at yudi and huda who were sleeping peacefully but not for a long time ..alekh went and kicked both of them lighly...they both looked at him with anger in their eyes..

H: oye...why did you kicked me..

A: b/c to wake you guys up?

Y: bro you can wake us up in a much better way then kicking us..

A: nautanki chup kar..ek serious problem hain aur tu..

H-Y..looked at alekh who was looking worried..

H: kya huya?

A: wo box...

Y: bro kya huva wo box ko...woh to vahan(he pointed to the direction where he kept the box) he panicked...BRO where is the box..

huda looked at thier but he couldnt see the box...he got up and looked everywhere..but could't found the box...

A: where did you put the box yesterday..

H:i had kept their (he pointed to that direction)..

A: then where is the box( he said in anger)

Y: guys we have to be calm and find the box..
they all agreed with yudi and started finding box....after 30 min...they all came and had same answer NO BOX....but then alekh saw some footprints...

A: guys i think the box is stolen..

H-Y: stolen....but who can..their is no body except us?

A: yeh dekh..(he pointed to the footprints)

Y: oh shit!!! now how are we going to find those theifs..

H: theif or those ppl who were behind us?

Y: WHAT..?

H: i think those ppl were behind this box and as we were sleeping they stole the box..

Y: but then why didnt they killed us or attacked us?

A: b/c you see he was only one...as we can only see 1 foothprints..and we were 3 so i would surely defeat..

Y: BRO abb hum sar ko kya kahenge?

H: mujhe to lagta hian ki hum gaye? he is not going to spare us. he told us this box was important.

A: i know...i think we should go from here now..and let sir decide wat they are going to do to us..

they all started to walk to that point where the trrigers were supposed to be kept..

hey ami

too good

great FF

pl continue the story is exciting

jaldi kar Yaar

All for started to walk toward the detination where they were suppose to meet..

(lets look at raj & naina)..

both are walking silenlent but both had something going on in their mind...

R: GOD...i cant belive that i am in love..

N: what is happening to me why do i feel so attracted to rajveer sir..why do i like to be with him, why is that when ever he is near me my heart beats fastens, why do i always want him with him...oh god wats happening to me..

R: i hope naina loves me 2...i just want to know how she feels about me..but how? (he was in deep though but suddenly naina interrupted)

N: sir...where are we going...i mean wat direction.

R: uhh..hu..cadet singh we are heading to point 350 N.where we have to post the trrigers..and i think we might see huda-alekh and yusi their.

N: i hope they are all right...

R: cadet singh dont worry they are my cadets.(he said with a pride)

N: ya ya your cadets(said with a mischevious tone)

R: why..do you think i am not a goos teacher?

N: no...no you are good teacher infact you are a very good mentor, very good person, very good friend and very good lifepa...(she stopped)

R: and very good lifepa...wat?

N: umm..no..nothing si..nothing..sir (saying this she looked away)
she though wat was i gonna say that he is a very good lifepartner....naina wat have happen to you..on other side raj was happy that she likes him too...he got wat she was goona to say..he smiled to himself..
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their huda-alekh and yudi are all very tensed b/c of the lost box..he dont know how they are going to face rajveer sir....

Y: cheif how long do we have to walk..?

A: as the map says we have to walk 2 more miles..in left

again all are silent..but continued walking...all had same thing accept huda, he was thinking about naina. he was feeling very jealous as naina was with raj...he was just waiting to meet naina..
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here naina was tiread of walking....she stopped and sat in a rock..raj turned and lookedat her and asked wat happened...in which she said that she is tired she cant walk anymore...

R: naina just 2 miles plz...we cant stop here..this place isnt safe..

N: okay..but you sure its only 2 miles b/c then i will definately collapes..

Raj mummered: toh main hoon na tumko uthane ko.

N: did you said anything.

R: uhh no..come on get up (he gave her his his hand, she took the support of his hand and got up and started walking..)

after some time they reach that point nad we see that all 3 cadets are sitting on rock seeing them naina's all tiredness ran away...raj saw that and smiled as she was heading toward them,,,she was just behind huda and was BOO...non of tehm reacted but were happy to see naina and rajveer sir...they all hugged each other..but naina was raj can sense that something was wrong...so they asked wst is wrong?
all of them looked down..

N: say na..alekh tell me wats wrong..

A: woh naina...woh.

N: alekh woh woh kya kiya jaa reha hain...plz kuch bol na..

H: phoolan woh humse box kise nay chura liya.

R-N: WAT? (in suprise)

H: sirji hume maaf kar do..woh hum sab so reha thay aur koi lagya..aur hume pata bhi nahin chala..

Y: yes sir...you can give us any punishment..

A: haan sir..woh kya kehta hian..so.

Y: bro SOORY..

A: ha woh..sorry.

R-N looked at each other and than at their frineds and strated laughing and gave each othe high-fy..their huda-alekh and yudi were shocked with their reaction...and other side seeing A-Y-H's reaction they are laughing their heads out..finally huda asked..

H: sirji, phoolan we though that you guys are going to reacted other way but why are you laughing..

Y: yes isr..i cant figure it out either,,

R: woh ky hain na ki humne yehi expect kiya tha..

A: matlab?

N: alekh we knew that those ppl are after that box so wat rajveer sir did was he shifted those things to another thing..so that thing is still safe with us and the box that they stole was with grass and stones..

H: matlab ki hum sab asie hi pareshan ho rahe the..

A: naina ki bachi

N: abhi nahin huve hain

R mummered: jo jayenge

N: kya

R: nothing..

N: sir ap akele main bohut batheein karte ho.

Huda was watching all this..he was smelling something fishy with naina and rajeer sir but didnt know wat...

R: guys now no more masti we are her to finish our mission..so lets lets start..and huda and yudi up in the front, alekh and naina are going to be behind that rock..and i will go to that point and get those things their..

N: sit i think you should get somebody with you...(with concerned in her voice)

R: dont worry naina i will be safe..

N: but..

R: cadet this is a order i will go alone..come on take positons..and be awake all the time b/c those ppl are not going to let us go this easily...by this time they would haev found out that we haev betrayted them so be careful.(he lookd at naina)

listening to this naina was more worried but alekh puts her hand on her shoulder to assure her..raj was by that place now..he saw that two guars were their for protection, he went inside but a suprise was awating him..he saw a spy thier with gun pointing at him..he was shocked as this place was so procted that hardly anybosy can enter.

R: how did you get here..this place is so highly proctected then..

S: captian 3/4th of the guard are our people, so now be ready to got o heaven.
raj closed her eyes he thought that it was end of his world and....but then he heard a gunshot...he opened his eyes and saw that teh spy was lying in ground with blood dozing of his head...he looked back and saw naina with gun...they both looked at each other...their eyes met but soon their was second gunshot...
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BANG we hear a shot...naina broke teh eye contact and turned around she saw one of teh guard behing her with gun pointing to her...as she turned around raj saw that her stomach was bleeding...he saw naina collapsing on ground with her hand on her stomach....raj took gun from ground and shot the guard before he shots him..he runs to naina and takes her into his stong arm..
meanwhile outside all the cadets had killed the guards...as they saw raj with naina in his arms they all got numb..

they all reach the hospital and are waiting for DR.SHALANI to come out from operation theater and tell them about naina...the atmosphere outside was tensed..from other side we see thart naina and ali are coming to them...all saw them and got up...pooja as saw them showered them with question?
how is she? how did this happen? is she okay? pooja stopped as we see dr.shalani coming toward them...raj ran to her as he saw her

R: dr. how is she?

S: captain she is not okay..(hearing this raj was shattered, shalani continued) she is very critical as the bullet has hit her right on her stomach and thats why her internal bleeding is not stopping. if it doesnt stop withing 24 hrs then we might..

raj and other cadets were so shocked that they forgot to breath for a sec...saying this shalini walked away. raj sat their on bench with his head onhis hands..he said to himself in a low tone..this is all b/c of me if i would took her to mission then this wouldn't happen..he had tears in his eyes..suddenly he felt a hand i his shoulder he looked up and saw shalani..he looked down, shalani sat beside him and said captain..she will be okay..have fate in god..raj looked up and said shalani wat if..he didnt complete..shalani sais raj she is not going to leave you..raj looked at her with look like wat? she continued, raj dont look like that i know that you love her..raj looked at her in shock..i can read your eyes it clearly says that you love her..and i am glad that you accepted it..saying this she got left.

now it had been 22 hrs..and it was only raj and alekh their as he sent all the cadets back to academy...as alekh said that he is not going to go before naina gets her senses back. so after many requests raj lets alekh stays their..by this time alekh was asleep but our rajveer sir was still awake went by nainas room and saw her lying their peacefully...though she looked pale rajveer saw as the beautiful angel..but suddenly her saw naina moving her head..she was struggling..she was havign trouble breating..raj yellend DOCTOR....by his yelling alekh got up, not only alekh but shalani and other docs rushed to naina....alekh took raj and made him in bench..suddenly nurse rushed fro her room and asked alekh to bring some injection form pharmasist urgently..he rushed to get those meanwhile raj was very worried but he got up as soon as he saw shalani..he asked her..DR.wat happened? is naina okay?..

S: captain we have tried to medicate her but it is not working in her..her internal bleeding is stopped but she is not responding to our medication...is we doesnt see any prgress in 2 hrs..then..(before she can finish raj spoke)

R: dr. can i meet her..

S: captain you know this is not possible.

R: plz shalani..not as a captain but as raj your friend.

S: okay..come
THEY BOTH HEADED TOWARD NAINA'S room..shalani left the room as she opened teh door...raj looked at naina and went to her..he sat beside her. he saw that she was weak..he took her hand in his hand kissed it..and spoke..
R: naina..plz dont leave me..plz..come back i cant leave without you....after navin left i was broken but when you came along i felt to live life again..now dont take that life away fro me..I LOVE YOU..I LOVE YOU MORE than my life..plz come back to me..saying thishe cryed..a tear from his eyes fall on nainas cheeck..it was like miracel..as raj felt a grip over his hand he looked up and saw that naina was opening her eyes...he got up immediately and called shalani.she came and checked her and asked raj to wait ouside...outside raj-alekh were waiting for shalani..after a while we see that shalani comes out of her room with a sad exprssion..both rushed to her.

R: dr. what happened..i felt a grip over my fingers..is she out if danger.

S: captain..

R: dr. plz speak up..

A: shalani maan plzz

S: guys she is okay...now smile dont make aweful faces...i am sire she will not like to see his friend and mentor like this..

Raj said with anger: dr..you..but then smiled..

S: breath cap..she is okay..we gave her injection so she cant feel pain but she will be up by tomorrow morning..

R: thanks doc.if anything happened to her tha..)he stopped as alekh had a question type of look.) than i would never forgive my self..and now alekh go and take some rest and tell your friends that she is okay...(alekh nodded and went)

S: raj now you go to..you are up all night..go and take rest..

R: no shalani...i ca(but shalani continued)

S: no NO..from you go and get some rest...(she said in a strict tone) after this raj didnt wanted to make shalani more angryso he also went to academy..

after couple of days naina was perfectly fine and she has joined academy again but in these few days everything was changed pooja-ali were together now..naina was so happy for both of them but somehow she was confused she was feeling different about her rajveer sir..she was feeling attracted to him, she felt nearness to him
and on other side raj's love for naina was increasing as day passed...

now it was night time and naina was catching up wat she missed when she was in hospital..

N: pooja how did you found out that you love ali..i mean do you feel anything..

P: naina when you are in love with any one you see him everywhere, you want to be with him, you feel attracted to him, the feeling about him changes..when he is near you your heart beats increases..when all things happen that means that you are in LOVE..now leavea all this things i am very sleepy so i am going to bed..

saying this she went to sleep naina also changed and went to her bed but she couldn't sleep as poojas word were roaming in her mind..YOU FEEL ATTRACTED TO HIM, YOU WANT TO BE NEAR HIM, YOUR HEART BEATS FASTENS WHEN YOU ARE NEAR HIM...all this things happen to me when rajveer sir is with me so does that mean that I LOVE HIM..oh my god..i love him..i lve you rajveer sir..she said to herself..and went to sleep with a cute smile on her face..

hey ami

too good

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pl continue soon

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