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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEy...awesome part...loved all rn scenes...raj is soo fast ..hehehe...their chemistry rocks...cont soon....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good one da.. loved it.. cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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please update as soon as possible.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey too good

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ami where r u yaar plz update soon
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Soon it was new morning but with tensed atmosphere...yes it was the day when resutls were going to be declare. naina was pasing here and their...she was nervous. she knew that she did well in exam but still...not only naina everybody were nervous...soon the result was announced...

B.C: cadtes of this year did a excellent job...we have never expected cadtes do this well. this are the best results we have ever got...and i am proud to delacre that cadet naina singh alluwalia have topped this year...(niana couldn't digest what she just heard, everybody started clapping and wisteling...the crowd went mad, but on other side raj was very happy..he had a huge smile on his face which reflected his happiness ) so i would like cadet naina to come and get her award..naina hesitated but took the award..
everybody congrulated her and all asked for party..but naina said that she will give party when they go to dareeling....requesting a lot they all agreed...finally naina was alone so raj went to her...naina saw him and smiled..

R: so cadet naina ahh singh alluwalia topped..

N: yes sir.

R: so are you giving treat..

N: uhh yes but not now when we go to darjeeling
R: then what about me..

N: you also want treat SIR...(with naughtiness)

R: yes i do...and today.

N: today...

R: why do you have any problem cadet singh..

N: well okay then where should we meet..

R: in my room..(with eyes full of naughtiness)

N: your room (naina knew his intentions)

R: why do you have any problem...(asked innocently)

N: not really..so what time.

R:hhm..15oo hrs.

N: okay see you their..

R: yup i will be waiting.

SO now raj was waiting for naina in his room.....he was very happy today...he knew that after 2 days graduation was coming and then he and naina can get married and then naina will be his..he smiled at his thought.
soon their was a knock..he knew who that would be so he opened the door quickly...and found pooja their...he got scared as if she knew naina was going ot come....

P: sir dont worry i just came here to give tickets to you for our flight to darjeeling..BYE..

r: thanks cadet gahi and goodnight.

P: goodnight sir..(saying this she giggled)

raj closed the door, but soon their was another know he opened the door hoping to be naina but it was yudi.

R: cadet yudi why are you here? any problem?

Y: no sir i just came here to inform you that we are going to darjeeling on 07-26-07 after graduation.

R: okay thanks...

Y: anytime...goodnight...(yudi giggled)

R: goodnight..

raj was confused as the cadtes were paying him a visit again and agian....he was in hs thought but a door knock disturbed him..he went to open door knowing that it would be some cadet but this time it was naina..

R: finally..

N: wat finally sir..(she said innocently)

R: i was waiting for you from ages..

N: oh really...
Raj senced her naughtiness so he quickly grabbed her arm, pulling her inside the room and shutting the door behind her.Placing the palms of his hands to either side of Naina, Raj effectively trapped Naina between himself and the door.
R: really..he came close and kissed her tip of nose..
N: raj leave me...
R: why jaan..we havent spend time together b/c of exam so dont stop me. you know that i cant leave without you..
N; i kno that jaan....so whats plan for today..
R: today we are going to a special place...
N: where...
R: to a very romantic place where only you and me...nobody else..but you have to wear something special..
N: something special?
R: yes and i have something that you can wear(we went out and took a box from his cupboard and gave it to her) wear this....i will be waiting for you outside, saying this he went outside)
N: okay..(she opened the box and saw a beautiful peach saree.) wow..a saree..
naina took the sari and went to change and came out after 20 mintues....she was looking gorgeous...the saree was looking great on her. she had her ahir open and light make up. she came outside where raj was waiting for her. rah turned and looked at her, he was lost in her beauty...the only word came out from his mouth was WOW...naina heard that and bulshed. raj came toward her and said..
R: mam are you new here, i have never seen you..
N: well yes i am..
R: are you waiting for someone.
N: yes i am waiting for my BF..
R: oh really..looks like he is late.
N: yeah he is always late...
raj pulled her toward him by her waist and kissed her forehead....and raj continues..
R: jaan you look fab. i think we should stay here.
N: well i dont think so...lets go..she pushed him..
raj puts cloth around her eye...
N: raj what are you doing....i cant see anything..
R: and you dont need to see...i will walk you their...
N: but where are we going...
R: somewhere very special...so now no more questions..
naina didnt said a single word...she just waited for raj to open her eyes...soon she felt that raj have stopped the car ...he went toward her and took her hand in his and walks her to a beautiful place and maked her sit in a bench. soon he goes back and opens her eyes and rests his chin on her shoulder and asks...how is it jaan?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEy
awesoooooooooooomeee part...wow...naina must b lookin really b'ful in tht saari...I guesss tht place is somthin lik point 1857...hehe...just guessing..cont soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey too good

pl continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
sari... not bad..................
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