Ek pal ke liye NEW**CHAPTER 26 PG: 27 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
okay guy the nxt part will be up soon like today....!!
but frist answer this question---->


*how to Quote more than one person at same post !! as i dont know how to do it !!

thanks !!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ek pal ke liye

Part : 5

Angad and kripa ,neev and prachi,kavya and anjali mehendhi

AT sharma house

Kripa was wearing a light yellow colour shalwar kameez which was back less but has lots of stings on the back her kamezz. Girls were around her and putting mehendhi on her hands. She was just smiling from out side showing everyone and her parents that she is really happy from this marriage but from inside she was so sad . she knew angad never belived in love and can never give her happiness. She was getting married to a person she hate a lot just for her parents sake. People say if girls mehendi colour is dark the guy she is marring loves her a lot her mehendhi colour was really dark . well ….she was thinking lets see it is ture or not angad will love her or not she will be happy or not.On the other hand prachi and anjali was more than happy …… prachi was wearing light orange shalwar kameez which was back less too but also had lots of stings on the back. Anjali clothes were same like kripa and prachi but was light blue in colour. Boyz were wearing white shalwar kameez and were sitting on stage with there future wifes. Getting bored . Then they saw josh and kajal there and call them and told them to do some dance .

JOSH while dancing

Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey
Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey

Ek kunwaara, phir gaya maara


Phas gaya dekho, ye bechaara


Ek kunwaara, phir gaya maara


Phas gaya dekho, ye bechaara


Do din ki hai ye chaandni


Phir kaari kaari raat hai


Tu maan jaa dulhe raaja

Kajal with other girls:

(Tak ser khaaji, tak ser khaaja


Kal teri shaadi tera baj gaya baaja) -2

Sujal dance and josh dance

Ek kunwaara, phir gaya maara


Phas gaya dekho


Ye bechaara..!

Ankhiyon ke pinjre mein bandh karke


Le gayi jo tujhko pasand karke


Soni soni meethhi baatein chand karke


Kismat apni buland karke


Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey


Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey


Ankhiyon ke pinjre mein bandh karke


Le gayi jo tujhko pasand karke


Soni soni meethhi baatein chand karke


Kismat apni buland karke


Sach kya hai zara jaan le


Us chehre ko pehchaan le


Unki galiyan mein na jaa

Kajal with other girls

(Tak ser khaaji, tak ser khaaja


Kal teri shaadi tera baj gaya baaja) -2


Ek kunwaara, phir gaya maara

End of the song

Everyone clap for josh and kajal and sujal

Then kajal and kashish danced while singing

kashish

Raja Ki Ayegi Barat, Ra.Ngili Hogi Rat
Magan Mai.N Nachu.Ngi, Ho Magan Mai.N Nachu.Ngi
Raja Ki Ayegi Barat ...

kajal

Raja Ke Mathe Tilak Lagega,
Mai.N Bhi Apane Man Ki Asha,
Me.Nhadi Se Pile Ho.Nge Hath, Saheliyo.N Ke Sath
Magan Mai.N Nachu.Ngi, Ho Magan Mai.N Nachu.Ngi
Raja Ki Ayegi Barat ...

Both kashish and kajal

Rani Ke Sa.Ng Raja Dole Sajate,
Jab Jab Unaki Yad Ayegi,
Naino.N Se Hogi Barasat, Andheri Hogi Rat
Magan Mai.N Nachu.Ngi, Ho Magan Mai.N Nachu.Ngi
Raja Ki Ayegi Barat ...

Everyone again clap!

the function comes to an end ………!!!

Neev prachi anjali kavya gos to sleep thinking that after three days they all will get married and have a hapyy married life.while angad and kripa gos to sleep that after three dayz they will get married and have to bare each other having a bad marriage life maybe they were right or maybe wrong.

I hope you guys like this part and plz leave more comments !!! 😊

even silent readerzzzz !!!

Edited by sabzz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
great aprt 👏
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
i will not continue till i get more comments !!!
i dont need 2 comments i need more than two commments then i will continue !!! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
👏 👏 👏 i wonder how things will be between angad n kripa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36

thanks for your comments here is the next part hope you like it and plz leave more comments😊

Ek pal ke liye

Part 6

The next day when kripa open her eyes she see neev standing in front of her. she got up and asked him what is he doing in her room.

K: neev what r you doing here

N:well….sleeping witch ! first tell me why are you sleeping …. Check the time it 12:30

K: neevvvvvvvvvvv ( kripa throw the pillow on him) I am sleeping bueaty not witch . then she wisphers to neev saying sleeping witch is anjali.

Neev and kripa give each other high5 and then laugh they stop laughing when they see anjali at the door who was fuming with anger .

Anj: kripa neev ARrGGGGg u guys r so mean

N: aww…. Sorry my sweet sister !!

N: hmmm……I will miss you guys you both will get married…..this house whould be so quite.

Neev gets emotional… !! anjali comes and sit next to neev while neev hugs his both sisters. Then neev went out as josh called him to his house….. while anjali tells kripa that they have to go to kajal house as she has to tell them something important.

KHANNA HOUSE

SPLASH……………………………

SPLASH………………………

K: ahhh….. prachi

A: prachiiiiiiiiiiii……

Prachi once again throwed the ice-cold water on her both brothers. Now she was standing in angads room…. While angad was shouting

A: prachhiiii what the heck

A: thank god you are going to get married then I can sleep whole day and there will be no scary witch waking me up like this.

Kav: yeh angad you are so right

Prachi gets emotional

P: what bhai!!! So are so mean . huh I am happy I am going and I will never come back to this house and she starts sobbing(lil crying)

Angad and kavya her both wet brother comes to her and hug her while saying

A: oh ! I was kidding my baby sis !

Kav: prachi dont cry I don't like you when you cry

A: now give your brother a big smile.

Prachi smile and tell her both brother that she will miss them and then tell them to get ready as josh called both of them to his house. Then prachi realizes that kajal has also called her to her home so she bid good-byes to her lovely WET brothes and rushes towords kajal house.

Kajal House

K: kajal I am asking last time what happened!

This was the 10th time kripa was asking kajal why she called all of them to her house. At last kajal spoke

Kaj: I am in love

P: WhAt ?

Anj: with who

K: when did you fall in love

P,anj and kripa : DON'T TELL ME KAJAL DID U FALL IN LOVE WITH JOSH

Kaj : yes guy I am in love with josh kapoor ( blushing)

On the other hand same thing happened ! josh told neev angad and kavya that he is in love with kajal ! but both kajal and josh had same problem how to tell each other that they love each other … thats why they called there friends .

Josh house

A: take her to a candel light dinner and tell her you love her

N: yeh angad is right

Kav: so dude call her and tell that tomorrow you want to take her to dinner!

J: you mean to a date?

A,n,kav: YUP ! NOW CALL

On the other hand kajal and her friends were confused what to do ?

When they heard the phone ring.

Kajal house

RING RING !

RING RING
kaj: hello

Kaj: oh yeh I am free okay bye !

Kaj: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh josh wants to take me to dinner

P,k,anj: you mean date

Kaj: yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

K: wow !! I will seclect an outfit for u

Anj: I will do make up

P: I will make your hair

Kaj: that's great guys thanks !

JOSH house

J: she said yes ! ( while putting the phone down)

A,N,kav: wonderful !!

Angad ,neev kavya : we will tell you tips to make your date EXTAR ROMANTIC

They all laugh !

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Edited by sabzz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
?????????? no comments !! 😕
i think you guys dont like my fan- fic !!!
should i stop writing ? 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
hey dear i just read last two parts and its really awesome. i hope after marriage angad would fall in love with kripa don;t treat her bad. well continue soon. we will be waiting. 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ek pal ke liye

Part 7

Next day josh took kajal for a dinner. Kajal was looking really pretty in her pink dress. While josh was looking handsome in his black suit. They both chat a little then they eat the dinner after that josh took kajal at the beach . Taking kajal to the beach was angads idea. Josh then porpose her over there and kajal said yes. Then josh give her a bueatiful dimond ring and kissed her on her lips.

Josh and kajal sitting on the beach

Kajal was resting her head on josh sholder then she asked him

Kaj: who told you to bring me at beach… because I am sure this is not your idea

J: well…. Angad .

They both laugh…… and have a romantic date.

The day before wedding at night Kavya and angad sneak into the sharma house while neev sneak into the khanna house. The boys wanted to meet there future wifes they had not seen them for a long time the last time they meet at the mehendi/halidi/dholki. Kavya and neev wanted to see there lovers as for angad well he don't wanted kavya and neev to get to know that kripa and he himself is not happy with the marriage .so he sneak into kripa room showing that he also wanted to see kripa .

Anjali locked her room door so no one comes in her room if her parents caught kavya in her room that was for sure they will kill both of them .Kavya and anjali were having chat and kavya kept flirting with anjali . same was happening with neev and prachi and for our angad and kripa well this was happening

KRIPA ROOM

Knock knock

Kripa who was reading a book hear a noise coming from her window. When she opened her window she saw angad . angad jumped into her room while kripa who was in shocked screamed

K: Ahhhhhh…………………..

Angad put his hand on her mouth and locked kripa room door so no one can come. Then angad took his hand off from kripa mouth.

K: what are you doing here.

A: well…. As so see my sweet brother wanted to see anjali . so he told me to lets sneck into the room of our future wifes I don't wanted to let kavya know that we are not happy with the marriage. So I sneak into your room .

K: well…. Angad khanna I never knew that you were that intelligent .

A: yeh yeh you think that your are intelligent person In this whole world.

K: what ever!

K: where is neev? Did he ----

A: yup he also sneak into our house into prachi room .

K: oh god you guys are so bad ….. what if our parents get to know.

Kripa who was standing sat on her bed while angad sat on a chair which was on the opposite side of the bed.

A: first tell me have you decided where are we going for our honeymoon.

K: angad look I wanted to talk to you about this.

A: same here

(Both angad and kripa said at same time) A&K : I don't want to have a relation with you after marriage…. I am only marrying you for my parents sake.

They both look each other and then laugh …..!!

K: amm…so I guess we are f9

A: yeh…. !

K: angad keep this in mind no one should get to know about this even my sister and brother even kajal and josh too.

A: yeh okay … same here prachi or kavya should never find out. We will act infront of everybody that we are having a great life together.

K: yeh.

Promo : marriage-etc

thanks for comments !!! i will only continue if i get more comments !!

Edited by sabzz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
aww yeh kya kripa aur angad? i bet u'll fall in luv with each other without realising 😉

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