Ek pal ke liye NEW**CHAPTER 26 PG: 27

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: monikaseth
wowowoow great dear pl contii soon 👏 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

grt part...really funny 2.....cont. soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Ek pal ke liye

Chapter 10

Kripa please lets go back to hotel or sit some where and eat I am so tired!!

K: god angad you are so lazy!

A: what LAZY are you okay….like we are shopping for almost 2 hours and I am holding your 5 shopping bags which are full of things in each hand for almost 2 WHOLE HOURS and you still think I am so lazy…..

K: what Eva!

A: kripa please let's go and eat somewhere …

K: okay fine!! Happy!!

A: very happy …!!

Kripa and angad went to Paris and became very good friends more like best friends only in 1 week…!!

Angad loves to tease kripa and kripa get really irritate by this but inside in her heart she likes it when he teases her...!! On the other hand neev and prachi and kavya and anjali were enjoying also …but like angad the boys had to go for shopping as there wives were shopaholic! Neev and prachi don't know that Kavya and anjali is in London and same goes for kavya and anjali they don't know neev and prachi are also at London

Food court at shopping mall

K: yummy this is the best ice cream I ever had!!

A: yeh…it's good

K: so what are we going to do today …??

A: hmm….!! Let see

Kripa asked angad that she want to go to a shop. After begging angad for almost 2 mins. Angad took kripa took that shop …!! They were walking and were not looking ahead but were looking at each other because they were arguing about something.

K: angad you are too much…you can't even shop!

A: kripa I am a boy I don't like shopping!

K: oh yeh I forgot boys like doing stupid things!

A: no girls!

K: no boys!!

They were fighting looking at each other when the bump into two girls….!

LONDON (neev prachi and kavya anjali at shopping mall) note: [but they n-p don't know that Kav-anj are in London and same goes for kav-anj they don't know n-p are also at London]

N: prachi I am going to get coke for us from the food court okay!

P: okay …

Kav: anju do you want coke as I am going to food court to get one for me!!

Anj: yeh!! Plz get it for me too …

Kav: okay…

Both neev and kavya got the cokes when they both bump into each other!!

Kav: hey…NEEV!!

N: kavya!!

Kav: what are you doing here?

N: well… I came for my honeymoon …what are you doing here??

Kav: I also came for my honeymoon!!

N: okay …

Kav: neev … prachi and anjali should not meet each other other wise our honeymoon is going to change as a shopping trip!!

N: yeh….I agree with you …if they saw each other then Bubye to us and hi to shopping!!

Kav: so amm… sorry but we have to keep them away from each other …!!

N: yup …same thing I wanted to tell you!!

Kav: okay then bye!

N: bye!

Both kavya and neev went to there wives and did shopping and went back to hotel …what these two poor boys knew that they were staying at the same hotel and on the same floor.

Preview: angad and kripa meet there old friends which they bumped into accidently

please guys leave comments if you dont like my fan-fiction then i will stop writing please comment other wise i will not continue .....

Edited by sabzz - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

hey
gr8 part just read whole ff in one go please do continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

just caught up with ur ff.it'niceff .u r doing a wonderful job plz do cont with it.looking forward for next part

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Swapna

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

nice part i gusse angad will be jealuse of kripa's new friend
continue soon

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roshaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

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thanks guys for your commentsss !!!
and check out the banner i made for the f-f !!
how is it ?? 😛

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roshaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

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CHAPTER 11

London

Neev came out of his hotel room to go into the hall which was in hotel ….there was a party going on parchi was already in the hall and enjoying the party and she was also waiting for neev to come!! Upstairs on the 7^th floor neev closed his room door and was coming out… he closed the door and start walking he was not walking seeing in front because he was doing something on his mobile phone when he bumped in someone

Bump*

Paris (in shopping mall)

Bump*

The shopping bag which was in kripa and angad hands fell down when they bump into two pretty girls…

Kripa was picking up her shopping bags and angad was about to bend down and help kripa but when he looked in front of him he saw his and kripa old collage friend mishit and kt he hug mishti (she was his x-girl friend too) and was about to hug kt when kripa who was down on the floor busy picking up the shopping bags said not looking up

K: ufff… angad help me. I can't pick these all in two hands !

Kt: kripa

Kripa look up and she saw kt her friend

K: omggg am I dreaming…… kt!!!

She stands up and hugs kt and then she saw mishti behind her (she hated mishti because she was really mean towards her ….she didn't knew that now mishti was changed)

K: oh hi mishti!

M: hii kripa!!! (Smiles)

Kt: so what are you guys doing here and plus together like …as we both remember that

M: you both can't stand each other …

Kt: you guys hate each other …

Kripa says in her mind (but now I love with him … I can't wait to tell you angad that I love you! I don't know how but yes I am in love with you …..) yes kripa has fallen in love with angad on there 10^th day on honeymoon ….she had a crush on him in childhood but when they grow up she started to hate him as she thought that he was a man who cant stay with one girl and loves to break girls heart …

(Okay guys I hope you remember the old part that angad changes his girl-friends everyday he only flirts with them nothing elz but kripa thought that he also do more things then flirting with girls she didn't knew the truth)

Kt: kripa hello you there?

K: huh? Yeh …

A: actually we came for our honeymoon

Kt and mishti say together: WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT????

Kt: how did this all happenedddd????

Kripa and angad say together: amm…errrr long storyyy!! (They don't wanted to tell they were forced to marry each other for there parents happiness)

Mishti: okay forget this all …first of all you have to have a dinner with us tomorrow okay ….

Angad and kripa: okay we will

Kt: okay then see you tomorrow at holiday inn restaurant

K: okay Bubye

Kt: bye

A: bye

Mishti: bye

Mishti and kt left and angad and kripa also left to the hotel as they were really tired! While walking out of the shopping mall angad said

A: god! Krips You shop a lot!

K: and you talk a lot

A: what did you said?

K: nothing ….

A: kripAAAA

K: aahhhhh……

Kripa ran while angad ran after her …..

London

N: oh sorry…

Neev said this while picking his mobile phone for the floor looking down when he looked up he was shocked to see….

Preview: neev shocked to see the person he bumped into……

Heyy guys I made the banner for my f-f tell me how is it did you guys like it and yeh Please leave comments even silent readers too if there will be no comments then I will not continue…..

Edited by sabzz - 17 years ago