'THE TURTLENECK GIRL' AK ff end,p131

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Ami

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Posted: 18 years ago

#231

awesome part...
hehe mr.chipkoo makes me laugh..😆

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MeethiMirchii

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Posted: 18 years ago

#232

arghhhh naina and chipkoo get on my nerves!
kripa needs to be abit more clever....like make prithvi her bro! 😛

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#233

Thanks everyone. The reason I am not able to update this one as regularly as my previous ffs is because this is a current ff. Some of my others were already written before, so I could post them regularly.

Prithvi is a good doctor but quite a duh in real life 😆 😆

Kamli, be patient fireworks will happen soon...let the fire sizzle a little 😊

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cheeselova

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Posted: 18 years ago

#234

amazing part
oh god prithvi is sooo chipku

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sana

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sweetmittal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#235

ughhhhhhhhhhhhh prithvi i hate him. please do something about him or get kripa and angad get married. soon. continue soon. its going really interesting. 😳 😳 😳

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Rutu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#236

just caught up with the last few parts!!! nd they r AWESUM!!! 👏
👏 glad to know they r falling in
love with each other!!! YAY!!! i just hope they confess their love soon coz i
have a feeling Naina will wanna get Chipkoo & Kripa married!!! nd Angad
& Mishti!!! anywazzz, CANNOT wait to read more... continue soon!!!
😛

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#237

Thanks everyone 😊 😊

PART 23: another short one!

After a quiet dinner, Prithvi suggested, "Kripa…why don't you and I go for a walk? I am sure Angad wants to rest after a tiring day at work."

Angad intervened before Kripa could say yes, "Prithvi….don't you have to go back to the Hamptons tonight? You will miss the last train."

"Actually, I was hoping Kripa would walk with me to the train station….please Kripa?" Prithvi pleaded.

Kripa was too tender hearted to say an outright 'NO', "I would love to come Prithvi, but I am not familiar with this area yet…..specially in the evening…..Angad, do you mind coming with us?"

Angad smiled and said, "Of course….I need to pick some groceries on the way….let's go, before Prithvi misses the train."

Prithvi made a sour face, but had no choice; he thought, "Why is Angad always interfering?"

Kripa thought, "Why can't Prithvi get the message that I am not interested in his company?"

Angad thought, "Yeh Dr Chipkoo ka koi permanent ilaaj karna padhega!"

The three of them walked to the train station. Kripa walked in between the men, but tried to stay close to Angad. Prithvi desperately tried to brush his hands with Kripa's. Angad sensed Kripa's discomfort; he put a protective arm around Kripa and pulled her closer to him, "so how was your day Kripa? I hope you enjoyed our bike ride together this morning."

Prithvi was not too happy, "bike? Kripa you should not bike in the city…..you could have an accident….I have seen so many cases of severe trauma from bike injuries…..when I move to the city, we can go for walks….they are safer."

Angad held Kripa snugly, "Kripa is a great biker…..she is very careful, and I am always with her…..she will never have an accident….don't worry doctor!" Angad looked into Kripa's eyes and smiled. Kripa was quite enjoying this attention from the two men. She was pleased to see Angad being so protective, almost possessive about her! She wanted this walk to last forever.

They had to cross a street; Prithvi pulled Kripa's hand, "Be careful Kripa….let me help you cross the street!"

"Kripa, come with me….I will help you!" Angad held her other hand.

Kripa freed herself from both men, "please don't treat me like a child…..I can cross the street myself!" Now she was wishing this walk would be over soon! Just a moment ago, she was enjoying being in Angad's arms, but now that they were both treating her like a vulnerable child- SHE HATED THAT! Her mom had treated her like that all her life; she wanted to be an independent person now…..yes Angad could give her company and support her, but she did not want to depend on anyone…..she did not want to be pitied by anyone! She was capable of taking care of herself!

After dropping Prithvi to the station, Angad and Kripa started walking back. Angad sensed Kripa's irritation on being so over-protected by everyone.

"Kripa…have you ever walked on the Brooklyn Bridge at night?"

Kripa looked a little puzzled, "no….why do you ask?"

"Just wait here…I will be right back!" Angad ran upstairs to their apartment and came back with his camera, "I have always wanted to take some night time pictures of the bridge….do you mind coming with me? I will show you New York as you have never seen before."

Kripa liked the idea and they hailed a cab towards the bridge.

"You know Kripa, the Brooklyn Bridge has been shown in so many Hollywood movies," Angad pointed at the magnificent suspension bridge from the cab.

"And Bollywood too!" she quipped

"Oh yeah? You watch Hindi movies?" he asked

"Yes…mom is very fond of movies….Kal Ho Na Ho song was shot on the bridge I remember," Kripa looked out and smiled, 'I loved that movie."

"What is that movie about?" he asked

"It's about how a guy teaches a grouchy, unhappy girl to be happy and enjoy her life, and in that process…….," she paused.

"Then what?" he asked.

"She falls in love with him," she said softly; they both looked at each other and did not say anything. They both could not help wondering about the parallel with their own lives.

Angad looked outside and asked, "how about the guy? Did he fall in love with her too?"

Kripa looked the other way and said, "Yes, he did…except he died and married her off to her best friend."

"That's sad…..that is why I don't read or see romantic stuff…..I love action and Sci-fi movies!" Angad said.

"Do you believe in romance and love?" Kripa was surprised with herself for asking that question.

Angad smirked a little, "Romance? Yes! I am good at that….but love…..I am not sure…..I think it is an overrated word……I think most people say they fall in love because they like the idea of love…..but then fall out of love when they get bored of that idea…..I don't believe in love Kripa……it is either lust or as in our case…..just friendship…..nothing more…nothing less."

Kripa swallowed a painful lump in her throat as she thought, "I don't know why do I feel something more than just friendship for you? It is not lust…..it is deeper than that…..I think it is love…..but may be you will never understand…..I am happy you are my friend…..and I can live with your friendship all my life, in the hope that may be you will sense that there is more to our friendship….that may be there is love between us….."

They arrived at the foot of the Brooklyn Bridge and after paying the cabbie, started walking on the bridge. Angad started clicking photographs of the beautifully lit bridge and New York skyline. Kripa just walked and admired the East river under the bridge and the beautiful city lights. She did not notice that Angad was essentially clicking her photographs against the backdrop of the bridge and the city.

After Angad's camera ran out of a memory disc, he finally joined Kripa and started walking with her.

"You love photography…don't you?" Kripa asked

"Since I was a child…my dad got me my first camera when I was 10….since then I have never stopped," Angad said.

They kept walking and talked about their childhood, schools, colleges…..they seemed to always have a lot to talk with each other, and before they realized, they were at the end of the bridge.

Angad and Kripa stood at the edge and admired the river and lights from it's railings.

Angad gazed at Kripa; she looked beautiful with her hair flowing in the gentle breeze, the moonlight falling on her face gave it a celestial glow, her faint smile, and above all her expressive eyes. His gaze then fell on her slightly parted lips. He remembered how he had once kissed one of his dates on this very bridge…it was a very monotonous kiss…..she had probably practiced a hundred times and Angad was just one of them! Angad was tempted to kiss those innocent, untouched lips tonight. Why did he want to do that? Why were they inviting him with open arms tonight? Was it just lust…..or was it something deeper? He licked his dry lips and swallowed hard to moisten his parched throat. He came closer and put his arm around Kripa. Kripa was startled and looked at him; she felt a little shiver in her spine as she was caught unaware by his touch.

Angad sensed the reaction in her body; he really wanted to take her into his arms and kiss her gently…..he knew she wanted that too…..but would it be right? That would change their relationship forever, after all a kiss on the lips is the gateway to a whole different relationship…..was he ready for that?

"Chalo….let's go…..we can take a cab from Brooklyn….it's not too safe at this time of the night," he guided her to the end of the bridge with his arm around her shoulder.

Song in background, as Angad's confused mind tries to make sense of his inner feelings: "mitwa" from KANK

http://www.dishant.com/lyrics/song-48982.html

jaaniye heeriye
jaaniye heeriye
mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

jeevan dagar mein prem nagar mein - 2
aaya nazar mein jab se koi hain
tu sochta hain tu puchata hain
jiski kami thi kya yeh wohi hain
haa yeh wohi hain - 2
tu ek pyasa aur yeh nadi hain
kaahe nahi isko tu khulke bataye
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

teri nigaahen, paa gayi rahein
par tu yeh soche jaaun na jaaun
yeh zindagi jo hai naachti toh
kyon bediyon mein hai tere paanv
preet ki dhun par naach le paagal
udta agar hai udne de aanchal
kaahe koi apne ko aaise tarsaaye
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa
mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu
mitwa...
…to be contd…

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eternal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#238

plz update soon i cant wait...angad is starting to realise his feelings... 😃 😳

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saima

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Posted: 18 years ago

#239

gr8 part
cont soon
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ishiqa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#240

ughhh they didn't kiss...o well next itme

great part i hate prithvi so much he is so annoying

i love the description u can actually imagine it
cont. soon

ishuu♥