*KhiladiyonKaKhiladi*Secret-Unfolded pg4

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INTRODUCTION

angad khanna-top businessman of india,smartyet sexy and handsome,every girl's dream man, have no parents but a dadi and a cousin brother prithvi bose

prithvi khanna-very fake person and always have hated angad for his success and now trying to take his business and angad and dadi has no idea that he is the that is after angad's business and angad's life

kripa sharma-a dancer and singer in a club and has no family except a cousin bro josh and bhabhi aaliya(i am not making their entry soon so no intro)

how can a businessman and a dancer's faith be same ????

to find out keep reading Khiladiyon Ka Khiladi

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome.. 👏 👏

Please post character picz..

Continue soon..
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hey great intro 😃 ..continue soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great intro can't wait for the first part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds VERY intriguing!!! CANNOT wait to read more... continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ANNOUNCEMENT
there is NO dadi!!!!!!!! i already edited the intro part!!

THANX A LOT PEOPLE!!!!
angad khanna played by iqbal khan
prithvi khanna played by amit tondon
kripa sharma played by neha bamb

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Posted: 18 years ago
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im soooooo excited to read another ak fanfic. cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice intro
continue soon [:$]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

You see a guy walking in white suit to his car he sits and start driving his car to his home all of a sudden his car stops he comes out you see his eyes and then his lips and ear and puts his phone to ear and he sees that it says no signal he throws his phone away and says "dam it" and you see his face it's the GREAT ANGAD KHANNA he hears music so he looks around to see where is it coming from and he sees that its coming from a bar he enters it and sees bunch of man gambling and drinking its very low class one then he hears the beautiful memorizing voice of a lady on stage he looks toward it and he sees a lady's back he can tell that she sure has nice figure and he tries to get a glimpse but he is unsuccessful she turns around to sing and you see her eyes then her lips then her face and its kripa sharma she is singing tinka tinka from karam

[(Tinka Tinka jara jara
hai roshni se jaise bhara) - 2
Har dil main armaan hote to hai - 2
bas koi samjhe jara] - 2

(Dil pe ek naya sa nasha cha gaya
kho raha tha jo khwaab vo laut aa gaya) - 2
(Yeh jo ehsaas hai jo karaar hai
kya issi ka hi naam pyaar hai) - 2
pootche dil thumke jara
Tinka Tinka jara jara
hai roshni se jaise bhara
Har dil main armaan hote to hai - 2
bas koi samjhe jara
Tinka Tinka Tinka Tinka


People are whistling and saying "lagi raho chamiya" all of a sudden angad feels like beating crap out of them and he goes up to her

A-you have a beautiful voice
K-thanx mr.khanna
A-you know me
K-of course after all app itne bade businessman jo hain
A-thank you ms.???
K-kripa sharma and you can just call me kripa I don't like formality
A-ok par tum jaisi padhi likhi ladki yaha kya kar rahi hai
K-long story
A-I sure do have time
K-some other time but app jaise businessman yaha kya kar rahe hai
A-meri car kharab ho gayi isiliye mere manager ko phone karne aaya tha
K-yaha phone nahi hai
A-oh I guess mujhe raat gadi mein hi kaatni padegi well I guess chalta hoon
K-if you don't mind mr.khanna then I can give you ride
A-are you sure????
K-definitely
A-ok…but on one condition
K-and that is
A-…well tum mujhe angad kahogi
K-um done to chale
A-sure

Kripa sits and shows her thumbs up to her rear view mirror when angad was not looking and starts driving to the way where angad is directing her and her mobile phone rings she picks it up and says

K-hello
?-hi sweetheart
K-feel a lump in her throat but says what do you want???(she is trying to keep her voice normal and low)
A-kripa turn right plz
?-gussa acchi baat nahi kehlata hai health ke liye
K-bolo kya kaam hai
?-acting acchi kar rahi ho
K-kaam hai ya nahi
?-plan action mein lo abhi aisi waqt
K-plz meri baat suno main tumhe tumhare paise dedongi jab mere paas honge lekin abhi mere paas koyi paise bhi nahi hai
?-accha bahut achha
K-plz mujhe waqt chahiye
?-thik hai do hafte
K-thank you
A-kripa kon tha???
K-koi nahi
A-I thought wo tumse paise mang raha hai
K-haan wo again long story
A-time hain
K-can I trust you????
A-depends on you and by the way log kehte hai main bahut accha dost hoon and maybe I can help you
K-thik hain main apna risk leti hoon mere dad ke underworld ke saath contacts the aur un logon ne mere dad ko kuch kaam karne ko kaha lekin mere dad ne mana kar diya isiliye unhone ne mere dad ko mardala phir meri mom ke piche the par meri mom ne suicide kar liya aur phir unhone mera pata dhood liya aur ab mujhe yeh calls mil rahe hain she was crying badly all of a sudden she just holds him very tight around his neck and starts to sob and angad puts him hand around her to comfort her and he just hugs her tightly then both realize and separates

K-sorry
A-hey its okay

They drive more and reaches his house and he looks at the time and tells her to stay she refuses and he says
A-hey Angad Khanna naa nahi sunta
K-sorry lekin kripa sharma kisi ki baar nahi manti
A-okay I guess main tumhara friend nahi hoon
K-aisi baat nahi hai
A-plz dekho raat bahut ho chuki hain and look this is the first time in my life I am doing this so respect this thing plz with the puppy eyes look he went on his knees and brought up his hands like praying
K-get up
A-not until you say you will stay
K-um….fine
A-thank you now lets go inside

Who did she showed the thumbs up????
Who was kripa talking to?????
To know answer keep reading I might not be able to continue soooon so plz have patience

~Rima
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

You see a guy walking in white suit to his car he sits and start driving his car to his home all of a sudden his car stops he comes out you see his eyes and then his lips and ear and puts his phone to ear and he sees that it says no signal he throws his phone away and says "dam it" and you see his face it's the GREAT ANGAD KHANNA he hears music so he looks around to see where is it coming from and he sees that its coming from a bar he enters it and sees bunch of man gambling and drinking its very low class one then he hears the beautiful memorizing voice of a lady on stage he looks toward it and he sees a lady's back he can tell that she sure has nice figure and he tries to get a glimpse but he is unsuccessful she turns around to sing and you see her eyes then her lips then her face and its kripa sharma she is singing tinka tinka from karam

[(Tinka Tinka jara jara
hai roshni se jaise bhara) - 2
Har dil main armaan hote to hai - 2
bas koi samjhe jara] - 2

(Dil pe ek naya sa nasha cha gaya
kho raha tha jo khwaab vo laut aa gaya) - 2
(Yeh jo ehsaas hai jo karaar hai
kya issi ka hi naam pyaar hai) - 2
pootche dil thumke jara
Tinka Tinka jara jara
hai roshni se jaise bhara
Har dil main armaan hote to hai - 2
bas koi samjhe jara
Tinka Tinka Tinka Tinka


People are whistling and saying "lagi raho chamiya" all of a sudden angad feels like beating crap out of them and he goes up to her

A-you have a beautiful voice
K-thanx mr.khanna
A-you know me
K-of course after all app itne bade businessman jo hain
A-thank you ms.???
K-kripa sharma and you can just call me kripa I don't like formality
A-ok par tum jaisi padhi likhi ladki yaha kya kar rahi hai
K-long story
A-I sure do have time
K-some other time but app jaise businessman yaha kya kar rahe hai
A-meri car kharab ho gayi isiliye mere manager ko phone karne aaya tha
K-yaha phone nahi hai
A-oh I guess mujhe raat gadi mein hi kaatni padegi well I guess chalta hoon
K-if you don't mind mr.khanna then I can give you ride
A-are you sure????
K-definitely
A-ok…but on one condition
K-and that is
A-…well tum mujhe angad kahogi
K-um done to chale
A-sure

Kripa sits and shows her thumbs up to her rear view mirror when angad was not looking and starts driving to the way where angad is directing her and her mobile phone rings she picks it up and says

K-hello
?-hi sweetheart
K-feel a lump in her throat but says what do you want???(she is trying to keep her voice normal and low)
A-kripa turn right plz
?-gussa acchi baat nahi kehlata hai health ke liye
K-bolo kya kaam hai
?-acting acchi kar rahi ho
K-kaam hai ya nahi
?-plan action mein lo abhi aisi waqt
K-plz meri baat suno main tumhe tumhare paise dedongi jab mere paas honge lekin abhi mere paas koyi paise bhi nahi hai
?-accha bahut achha
K-plz mujhe waqt chahiye
?-thik hai do hafte
K-thank you
A-kripa kon tha???
K-koi nahi
A-I thought wo tumse paise mang raha hai
K-haan wo again long story
A-time hain
K-can I trust you????
A-depends on you and by the way log kehte hai main bahut accha dost hoon and maybe I can help you
K-thik hain main apna risk leti hoon mere dad ke underworld ke saath contacts the aur un logon ne mere dad ko kuch kaam karne ko kaha lekin mere dad ne mana kar diya isiliye unhone ne mere dad ko mardala phir meri mom ke piche the par meri mom ne suicide kar liya aur phir unhone mera pata dhood liya aur ab mujhe yeh calls mil rahe hain she was crying badly all of a sudden she just holds him very tight around his neck and starts to sob and angad puts him hand around her to comfort her and he just hugs her tightly then both realize and separates

K-sorry
A-hey its okay

They drive more and reaches his house and he looks at the time and tells her to stay she refuses and he says
A-hey Angad Khanna naa nahi sunta
K-sorry lekin kripa sharma kisi ki baar nahi manti
A-okay I guess main tumhara friend nahi hoon
K-aisi baat nahi hai
A-plz dekho raat bahut ho chuki hain and look this is the first time in my life I am doing this so respect this thing plz with the puppy eyes look he went on his knees and brought up his hands like praying
K-get up
A-not until you say you will stay
K-um….fine
A-thank you now lets go inside

Who did she showed the thumbs up????
Who was kripa talking to?????
To know answer keep reading I might not be able to continue soooon so plz have patience

~Rima

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