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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: zeenat_786

hey!! i love your fanfic!! the beggining was a bi like fida, but u put ur own idea in it..do u understand wat dim trying to say?? but like, i loveee it and continue with it!! its awesome,,continue soon! šŸ˜› šŸ˜›

thank a lot and i son't undrstand what r u really trying to say!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4

Next morning
Sunshine hit in the room where you see the clothes scattered around the room then you see 4 legs intertwined then camera moves up and you see a guy hiding his face in color bone of women and he is playing with her hand and fingers which are locked with his. Then he starts moving his another hand toward her stomach and starts to tickle her and you hear her laughing and you see her face and its kripa then you hears "stop it angad" you see the guy is enjoying the moment and you see his face its angad

K-still laughing -plz jaan stop it naa
A-no and laughs at face her expression
K-then she gets idea and grab his other hand and bits it really hard
A-OOWWWWW KRIPA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
K-what
A-plz yaar kuch karo bahut dard ho raha hai
K-well mr.khanna thats what you get when you mess with me
A-really then I luv the love bites he comes near her face
K-NOOOO angad plz aisa mat karo plz
A-sorry and bites her ear
K-dekho ab main to mere ear ko pamper bhi nahi kar sakti
A-well mrs.khanna thats what you get when you mess with me
K-so mean koi apni nayi biwi se aisi harkat karta hai (pretends that now she was gonna cry)
A-sorry kripa I didn't mean it plz don't cry look scream, get mad, hit me but PLZ don't cry look you know I can't see tears in your eyes
K-(really excited)-really I can hit you
A-matlab tum natak kar rahi thi
K-ummmmmm actually I was just kidding but you took it seriously so I thought why don't I play a little game????
A-ab game to main tumhe dikhta hoon aur wo bhi aisi kamre mein aur aisi bed par
K-no angad dekho 9 baj gaye
A-so what we are on our honeymoon means no work or anything else one and only and that is romance
K-bu….
Angad locked her lips with his and covered themselves with the black silky sheet at first kirpa tried to protest but after that she gave up

At 4:00
K woke up and saw that angad was still sleeping with his mouth open she bent down and gave him a quick peck the she decided to have a shower she came out around 5 and angad was still sleeping so she upto him
And let the water drop from her silky to his face angad opened his eyes and saw her face in front of him and how he wished he would for his lifetime see this face every morning perhaps it was evening but who cares so lifted his face from the pillow and let it rest in her lap
K-angad wake up and take a shower
A-kissed her tummy-NO
K-jaan kya hamara kisi bhi baat par agreement nahi ho sakta without any argument
A-Ok baba I am going but I need to have kiss first
K-jitna mila utna kafi nahi tha
A-now look who is arguing
K-what??? Main hamesha argue karti hoon
A-no lekin right now you are plz dedo

They were about to kiss when kripa's phone rings
It was the callers which you guyz know that its prithvi

K-(sya one second to angad and goes to pick up her phone )Hello
P-Hi to kab aa rahe ho tum log
K-mujhe khabar nahi
P-mere paise ki baat ki aur haan jaan paise angad ko kaho ki tumhare naam pe karde kyunki waise bhi tum hi khanna mansion ki aur meri bhi raani banogi samjhi
K-smash gayi main tumhe aadhe ghante main phone karti hoon wo idher hi khada hai so bye
P-bye

Camera takes us to prithvi and he is dreaming about him and kripa getting married, then kissing and hugging and some mores then camera shift where our love birds are kissing and then kripa pushing angad in the bathroom

A-kripa that was not fair
K-everything is fair in love and war jaan
A-I hate you
K-but I still love you
A-thank you kripa can you plz go downstairs and make something for us to eat
K-OK jo hakum maharaj

Kripa was making pasta when angad came up from behind and hugged her
A-wow!!! Pasta umm
K-angad ek baat kaho
A-kya
Kripa's phone rang!!!!
K-hello
?-hi kaisi ho
K-josh bhai aap aur aali kaise hai ur haan prem bhaiya kaise hai
J-hum sab theek hai tum kaise ho achhca wo sab chodo aur batao tumne sach much shaadi karli
K-Haan jaise ki aapko pata hi nahi
J-accha to bata plan kaisa chal raha
K-awesome usko shak nahi hua
J-thats great to aisa kar ab bolde angad ko samjhi
K-ok lekin do ya tin din baad ok bye sabko hi kehna
J-theek hai bye apna khayal rakhna

A-yeh josh kon hai
K-baad main bataungi ok abhi khaana kha le
A-sure sweetheart

Afer they ate kripa was sitting on angad's lap in living room
K-angad callers ne kaha ke wo jo property aur paise maange wo sab mere naam par se unhe milne chahiye
A-matlab
K-wo log chahte hai ke property mere naam par se unlogo ko mile aur paise bhi
A-theek hai to problem kya
K-matlab tumhe koi problem nahi hai
A-of course not jaan ye sab main tumhare liye hi to kar raha hoon
K-thank you and sorry tumhe yeh jab jhelna pada meri vajhe se
A-hey DON'T ever say that you get me
K-ok

At 6 both went shopping and came back and called angad's lawyer to do the stuff with the property and money then kripa received a call from prithvi and she pretend to angad that she was talking to callers and she told prithvi that angad was ready to give the property and money to them and hang up and sid to herself "prithvi ab dekho maza kyunki the GAME begins NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How did josh knew about the plan????
Is kripa betraying prithvi or not????
Who is kripa playing games with angad, prithvi or both of them????

~Rima
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 5

After 2 weeks means they are back in India and today at 5 they(angad and kripa) are gonna go to meet their so called callers angad make sure that the property papers and money were okay and put the money in the trunk and gave the property file to kripa to hold they reached the place and waited the in the car and angad's phone rang and he picked it up
A-hello
P-hello paise aur property hai
A-haan aisi car ke trunk main aur property kripa ke haath main
P-ok gaadi se bahar niklo sirf tumhi
A-lekin kripa
P-kuch nahi hoga tumhari biwi ko

Angad got out without giving a second thought even though he felt that he knew the person really well but he didn't stayed on the car he saw someone coming and he was trying to see the face and all of a sudden two people grabbed him and tied his hands to the rope around the pole that was near and made him stand he was too shock to notice he saw kripa getting out of car and hug the caller guy and he was too shock to get mad at anybody and he saw the kripa had a evil smirk and she walked upto him and started to caressing his face
K-so mr.khanna bura laga
A-you b**** f***** w**** how could you do this to dam* it????
K-ssshhhhh no cussing okay look I am sorry but what could I do my husbad asked for it?????????
A-what so you mean?
K-well pehle tumhe main caller se milati hoon and she yelled jaan
A-was mad as hell that how could she be like this in front of me?
K-sorry bura laga lekin isse milo and she removed the mask and angad was shocked as hell it was his own cousin PRITHVI KHANNA
A-prithvi??????????????
P-sorry lekin tumne kabhi bhi mujhe kuch importance hi nahi diya aur jab maine suna ki mom aur dad mera 50% bhi tumhare biwi ke naam kardiya tab mera khoon kohl utha and I made a plan with kripa I was coming back from my friend's party and I was really drunk and kripa helped me and we clicked although nothing happened between us I was jealous of you and now you're gonna get killed sorry bro
A-agar tujhe kuch chahiye tha to mujhse manga kyun nahi
P-mujhe bheekh lena pasand nahi hai
A-what the f***
P-no angad now I don't live in your house and you don't scream at me
K-boys chill and angad darling calm down and pritz lets just go
P-krips hume isko marna hai
K-no abhi divorce papers bhi sign karne baki hai so bye darling kal milte hai and she kisses his cheeks

They go from there and kripa calls shabbir and tells him that she needs the papers by tomorrow morning and she calls josh and says that they are ready and she goes shopping and prithvi goes to office because there were some financial problem

Kripa is talking on the phone
K-hello bhi
J-hi kya hua successful or not
K-done man you, aali, prem, and mukti better be there OK
J-ok jaan bye and take care I'll see you tomorrow
K-bye and says hi to everybody from me

NEXT DAY

Prithvi comes and then kripa was already there waiting for him with 4 other people which are josh, aaliya, prem and mukti and prithvi is surprised that he didn't know and he like kripa who are they??
K-oh meet them my bro josh, my bhabhi aali, my cousin bro prem and this is his fiance mukti and guyz this is prithvi khanna
And he shakes hands with josh and prem and says hi to aali and mukti
And kripa hugs everyone and they go to wake angad up
Pr-Prem   ; ; M-Mukti J-Josh Aa-Aaliya P-Prithvi K-Kripa A-Angad S-Shabbir R-Rano

K-come on darling wake up good morning
A-moans and yells-GET YOUR DIRTY HANDS OFF ME B****
J-hey buddy control your self she is my sister okay
A-then I pity you cause she is nothing that what a sis could be
K-Guys shabbir is here and he got the papers
P-I'll go outside and get the papers and krips do u want me to bring him here??
K-yeah and plz there is a girl name rano with him ok

Prithvi came back and shabbir went upto angad and told him to sign the divorce papers while angad just refused and prithvi got mad and hit him in the stomach and kripa got mad at prithvi

K-PRITHVI !!!!
P-wat????
K-aise vo manega nahi to kya fayda use maarne ka aise karo iske hath chordo wo sign karega
P-pagal ho gayi ho
K-maine kaha waisa karo naa darling plz
Prithvi was untying the rope and angad fell on the floor kripa took the chance and took the papers and pen from shabbir's hands and took out her gun from her leather jacket that she was wearing and sat on the floor and pointed gun to angad 's head and threw the paper and pen in front of angad's face and told him to sign it

K-sign it
A-nahi and even if I die today I will not sign the papers cause I still love you
J-kripa yeh aise nahi manega
K turns her head toward josh and angad took the chance and grabbed the gun and her on his lap and pointed the gun toward kripa's head and says
A-main tumhe bhi apne saath leke maroonga and he made kripa get up and he also got up while pointing the gun with the right hand and put his left arm around her neck
P-ANGAD!!!kripa ko chordo and he was about to run toward and angad pretend that he was gonna shoot kripa if prithvi doesn't stop
Josh and Shabbir were quick enough to hold prithvi tightly and josh nodded his head to kripa and angad and looking at that rano grabs the rope that was behind josh and aali and mukti ties it around prithvi and prem quickly runs inside and grabs a chair and makes prithvi sit on it and prithvi is too shock and he is trying to get out and yells "LET ME GO" but the guyz didn't leave him and made him sit and he tried to get up but no luck and then he looks up to see kripa is hugging angad tightly crying badly while angad is trying to console her that he is fine and nothing happened to him and they separates and angad cupped her face in her hand and kisses her lips to stop her from crying and prithvi is shocked as hell since he thought that it was kripa and him who were playing games with angad but he just realized that it was angad and kripa who were the REAL KHILADIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
While all this happened s-r, j-aa, pr-m werw facing back but guyz were still holding prithvi
S-angad are you done ????????????????????
Angad laughing-yeah
Pr & J together- krips you okay????????????
K-yeah and she sees that rano is calling some1 and she goes upto her asks
K-tune police ko bulaya??????????????
R-haan bhi aur nahi bhi
K-matlab
Prem comes from behind and puts his arm around kripa and says-maine mana kiya police ko batane ke liye
K-lekin kyun
Pr-kyunki yeh case humhe mila tha tumhare aane ke do din baad
K-oh okay

And they hear sirens and gets out and taking prithvi with them and you see that at last prithvi took out his gun from his jacket and was about to shoot at kripa(she was hugging her bhais and bhabhis ) and you hear a shot and see that prithvi is laying on the floor and with pools of blood around his face he was shot at the middle of his forehead where you do the Indian tikas and everybody is shock and kripa turns to see who shooted the guy and she sees is ANGAD and he is walking toward prithvi and falls on his knees with tears in his eyes and kripa runs to him and gets hold of him and hugs hium tightly and she is crying even knowing that prithvi was about to shoot her

K-I'm sorry because of me you lost him
A-sshhhh aisa kabhi bhi mat kehna
K-sorry plz dekho tum rote huye bilkul acche nahi lagte and by the way aaj conference hain state ke saath all DC hamara naya case aa raha hai
Angad got hold of himself and got up holding kripa as his support and said-sharman nahi aaya in logo ke saath?????????
K-no he is mad at us that we didn't bought his car and by the way tumne sham kya khaaya
A-kuch nahi
K-what ???????????? Angad what is this tum hamesha hi aisa karte ho kya ek din bhi mera bina khaana nahi kha sakte the

Pr-lo shuro (start) tumahari mother India angad bete
K-shut up prem
J-vaah pyar ho to aisa jaise hi apne pati dev ko pa liya hume shut up keh diya
A-tum log ise pareshaan mat karo yeh already mere liye pareshaan hai
K-guyz lets getr out of here and they take prithvi with them and angad to the funeral and everything is back to normal

1 year later
Kripa is giving delivery and angad is waiting outside and he is worried
J-angad sab theek ho jayega
Dr comes out and says its a baby boy
Angad goes inside and showers her with the lovely and passionate kisses
J-angad yeh tera bedroom nahi hai
A-so aakhir biwi to meri hi hai

They all laugh and they name their son prateek

People are whistling and saying "lagi raho chamiya" all of a sudden angad feels like beating crap out of them and he goes up to her(part 1) the reason is he was married to her and loved her so much
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K-thik hain main apna risk leti hoon mere dad ke underworld ke saath contacts the aur un logon ne mere dad ko kuch kaam karne ko kaha lekin mere dad ne mana kar diya isiliye unhone ne mere dad ko mardala phir meri mom ke piche the par meri mom ne suicide kar liya aur phir unhone mera pata dhood liya aur ab mujhe yeh calls mil rahe hain she was crying badly all of a sudden she just holds him very tight around his neck and starts to sob and angad puts him hand around her to comfort her and he just hugs her tightly then both realize and separates (part 1) this is what really happened to kripa's parents and she was still not over that fact
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Angad got out without giving a second thought even though he felt that he knew the person really well but he didn't stayed on the car he saw someone coming and he was trying to see the face and all of a sudden two people grabbed him and tied his hands to the rope around the pole that was near and made him stand he was too shock to notice(part 5) this was their plan

Guyz angad and kripa had been married before even prithvi knew they met in college and angad had proposed to her and they all worked for the I-tech and they all were spies and then one day angad found out that prithvi was about to take his property and found out that he also had connections with the underworld people and josh and kripa helpes him made the plan and shabbir took care of the paper work means they were always acting in front of prithvi all the calls that kripa made to prithvi she always told angad about it. So guyz everything that happened in this fanfic was planned by angad and kripa


THE END

I know you guys expected that this fanfic will be longer but I am sorry I had to end it and I am moving I might be leaving I-F and that is NOT sure yet
Edited by rima791 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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guyz hope you enjoyed it and have a great summer and hope you guys enjoyed it cause i will

~Rima

Edited by rima791 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow. great but short fan fic. good job. šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow great and thanks alot for great ff have anice holiday to you 2 šŸ‘ šŸ‘

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