*KhiladiyonKaKhiladi*Secret-Unfolded pg4 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start!! uh oh kripa is trying to trap angad eh.. sad.. lol.. contineu soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: erier101

great start!! uh oh kripa is trying to trap angad eh.. sad.. lol.. contineu soon!!

you never know !!!!remember my fanfic name and right now kripa is khiladi so keep guessing

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

It kept on going like that means that angad would go to club to hear her songs and soon everyday his car would take turn on that club road then he would give her ride and they became became friends and he asked her to work with him at first she said she will think about it and then he gave her two weeks of time and she accepted his offer and he gave her a flat, a car, and a job of personal assistant of him. From the beginning angad always had feeling of kripa and he wanted to know so on day he asked her out and she luckily said yes and she started to have feelings for angad and during this the callers called so much that now she had a job of P.A. at angad's place and they even find out that angad and kripa were going out and they were calling and one day angad picked up her phone since he came to pick her up for lunch and she was taking shower

A-hello
?-kripa kaha hai
A-tum kon ho
?-main uska jo bhi hoon tum kon ho
A-mind you mr. main uska boyfriend hoon
?-then tell her that I need my money in 3 days or else I will kill her
A-don't you dare to come near her tumhe kya chahiye
?-ab aaya na line pe mujhe 25 Karor chahiye
A-what???????????????
?-haan tumne thik suna warna
A-kahan mina hoga mujhe tumko
?-I personally will give you a call soon and since you are giving me money give me 50% of your property suna hai tum ne use propose kiya hai
A-mujhe kuch time chahiye sochne ke liye
?-theek hain 2 din baad main tumhe phone karoonga bye and do think about it

After five minutes kripa comes out and finds angad with worried look and she goes to him and makes him sit on the bed and sits on his lap with her arm around his neck
K-kya hua????
A-callers ne call kiya tha
K-in scary voice she says-kya kaha
A-shhh kuch nahi bas mujhse 25 karor aur mere property se 50% ka hissa manga
K-what??????????????? Aur tum aise sirf keh rahe ho pagal ho kya
A- haan tumhare pyaar mein
K-angad shut up ok now listen tum aisa kuch nahi karoge
A-mein unhe paise aur property dono dunga kyunki mere liye tumse important aur koi nahi he not even prithvi and kisses her cheek
K-lekin kyun
A-bcuz I luv you
K-theek hain agar tum wo sab dena hi chahte ho to phir 1st of all yeh sab mere naam karo
A-on one condition aur wo bhi tum mujhse shaadi karoge aur wo bhi ajj means tonight so ms kripa sharma bolo will you marry me???????????????
K-angad ye kya pagalpan hain aaj aur wo bhi tonight
A-hey shaadi ke liye sirf sur sirf 2 logo ki jaroorat hoti and that has to be a man and a woman
K-ok how about you give me some time to think about it??? And I promise If my decision is yes then I will marry you tomorrow morning and if I don't then I will let you do whatever you want to do with your property
A-Deal
K-now sorry but need time to think so can you plz leave????
A-but what about lunch???
K-sorry plz
A-okay on one condition give me a one lets see 10 minutes kiss
K-angad tum pagal ho tumhe kuch nahi mil..
Angad locked her mouth with his and didn't leave her for another 15 minutes and let her breath
A-kaisi lagi
K-trying to catch her breath and says tumne lunch to yaha kar hi liya ab dinner tum apne ghar kar lena now plz get out before I get mad and scream at you
A-okay sorry bye luv ya
K-pagal

Kripa picked up her phone and dialed the #
?-hello
K-hi darling
?-hey sweety kya khabar hai
K-well honey wo mere naam pe property kar dega aur paise bhi dega lekin uske badle mujhe usse shaadi karni hogi so kya kehte ho
?-darling go ahead lekin plan main ek change hai
K-what???ab kya hua???
?-nothing to worry about tumhe sirf plan tumhare honeymoon ke baad action main rakhna hain samjhi
K-got it by the way meri wedding kal hai
?-great matlab jitni jaldi ye angad chootega utni jaldi mein tumhe paa loonga awesome anyway luv ya bye
K-bye

She hang up and says "sapne dekhna bahut hi buri baat hai"

Who was she talking to????? Keep guessing
Guyz this ff is like very short cause I think m parents are thinking of moving so I don't want to leave you guyz hanging!!!

~Rima
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow. great part. at first i thought kripa was gonna be bad but now im confused. cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I just caught up with ur ff today, and wow, I really like it, Kripa is trapping angad? omgggg, OMG, She is such a B****, what a player! 😡 😡 I hope something bad happens to her, 🤢 anyways plz cont soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu-pre4eva

I just caught up with ur ff today, and wow, I really like it, Kripa is trapping angad? omgggg, OMG, She is such a B****, what a player! 😡 😡 I hope something bad happens to her, 🤢 anyways plz cont soon 😳

i think so too

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

Kripa hangs up and says "sapne dekhna bahut hi buri baat hai"

Scene changes to the person who was talking to kripa you see his eyes then his evil smirk and his face and its prithvi khanna bell rings and he goes to open the door and its angad

A-dude I have to talk to you
P-sure but about what
A-I have decided to get married
P in his thoughts angad tum itni jaldi meri jaal mein phas jaaoge ye mujhe pata nahi tha -kis se?
A-kripa, my girlfriend
P-when do u plan to get married?? I mean I can look after the office since you always had dream of getting married and on that night you can go to your honeymoon
A-thanx that was all I needed to know thanx once again
P-you welcome bro but when are u getting married?
Angad's cell rings
A-hello
K-hey its kripa I am ready to marry you angad khanna
A-really thanx kripa for giving me the best news ever I luv ya and kept on talking
P thinking angad jiss din tum kripa se shaadi karoge vo din tumhari zindagi ka best nahi worst hoga lekin mere liye best hoga
Angad had already hang up
A-prithvi to earth dude
P-sorry
A-anywayz meri kal shaadi hain aur abhi main kripa ko leke shopping jaa raha hoon

Next day
It was time for going to the honeymoon of 3 weeks(I am skipping the marriage part)they both were excited and both went on honeymoon to America and were in hotel room resting in each other's arm and angad kept kissing her hair and she tells him that she has to make a call and angad was wondering that who was kripa calling because she didn't had any family he meant that he wasn't trying to be mean but anywayz
This was his honeymoon and he doesn't wanna ruin it so he called the hotel people to let them know that he was checking out and on the other

Kripa came in balcony and made a ring to prithvi
P-hello so how is America??
K-shut up and listen now I won't be able to call and I think he is already suspecting me since I have no family so listen I think wo tumhe kisi deal ke liye pune bhejne wala hai usi waqt main property papers le loongi ok so now don't make any changes
She hears angad calling her so she hangs up without saying anything
Angad comes from behind her and picks her up in his arm and make her lay on the bed and gets on top of her and says
A-so mrs. Angad khanna banke kaisa lag raha hai and kisses her ear while whispering in her ear
K-sach bolu ya jhoot
A-jhoot to tum bolti hi nahi to wo hi boldo
K-bahut bura lag raha hai
A-thank you and kisses her nose
K-so mr khanna aaj ka plan kya hai
A-well shopping to hain hi nahi list main
K-wow!! I am lucky
A-was that supposed to be a sarcastic comment???
K-I think so
A-well sorry agar tum chaho to shopping bhi chal sakte hain
K-I was just kidding bolo tum aaj mujhe kaha le jaooge
A-well mera plan yeh tha ki hum yaahan se mere house main chaley you know waha hame disturb karne koi nahi aayega
K-house????
A-yeah actually mera sapna tha ke main shaadi ke baad apni wife ke saath yahi raho
K-to ab problem kya hai?????
A-well u know business India mein hai amywayz chalo hum nikalte hai maine hotel walo ko batadiya hai aur meri car bhi aagayi
K-car??? Kon leke aaya
A-well mera manager
K-ok chalo

They checkout of hotel and went to his house which was a beach house it had 4 rooms and 1 guestroom they settled in their room and angad decided to have a nap and kripa was going out of room when she slipped on something and was about to fall but angad was quick enough to let her not fall he quickly grabbed her and fell on top of her and angad got naughty and took her in his arms and went downstairs still carrying and while kripa was dam confused and then she felt her feet getting cold and she noticed that angad had brought her to the pool and she tightly grabbed him around his neck
K-angad plz abhi nahi mujhe bhook lagi hai
A-sorry jaan but right now you have no choice except for eating me (lol)
K-angad plz
A-sorry and yeah before you do that puppy look of yours let me tell you something its not gonna work right now and yeah I didn't had my suhaag raat and he started to kiss her neck and she didn't complain at all after that he kissed her eyes, left cheek, tip of her nose,and right cheek and finaly came to her lips and kissed her passionately with equal passion kripa kissed him back and then angad carried her in their room and started to strip her clothes while kripa did same and finally angad made her fell on bed with him on top and started to kiss her neck and he kissed every part of her body and he claimed that now she was his and no matter what he will always love her like this soon the scenes changes to moon with angad making love to kripa the entire night

Sorry guyz I am not good with the romantic parts so plz bare with me and hopefully I think in two or three more parts the secret of secret will be unfolded so keep reading

~Rima

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey!! i love your fanfic!! the beggining was a bi like fida, but u put ur own idea in it..do u understand wat dim trying to say?? but like, i loveee it and continue with it!! its awesome,,continue soon! 😛 😛
Edited by zeenat_786 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 work cont. soon...

❤️love Ya❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
kool FF!
great part!! 👏

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