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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mintfresh

sounds interesting
cont soon

thanksss!!!!!!!!😊😃😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: simrin1773

heyy thats great that u are starting another fanfic. I read both of ur other ones and I must say that u are a really good writer. Looking forward to this one as well. Sounds really interesting keep up the good work and continue soon.

aww thank you😳😊😃.......continuing soon...i'm really glad you like my ff's 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishu124

CONTINUE! THAT WAS AWESOME. continue now.

aww thank youuuu!!!!😊😃...continuing soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash9

GUN????????????????
do u plan to kill him in the 1st part it self??? 😆

😆😆😆...lolz hehehe no just wait and watch well acutally read but ye😆 i could never kill anyone in my ff's its too sad lolz

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey posting te first part, once again thanks for all ypu comments!! 😃

Part 1

Angad looked intensely at her , he tries to move to know what the heck is going on, when she pins the gun harder to his head, and she spoke for the first time: K- "don't move or else, get into the car and drive to where I tell you get it"

She didn't look like that type of girl that could kill someone or even harm a butterfly, yet as they say still waters run deep, and angad didn't want to take any chances knowing who she was to him. Angad just nodded and sat down with her in her car.

He started the engine and asked: A- where do we go, K – just drive straight, I'll tell you if we need to make any turns, A- okay , A- umm if you don't mind can I know the girl's name who has a gun pinned to my head, and he releases a little laugh,

K (sternly) – kripa , yours? , A- Aryan and he grins to himself. A- So what all this, I mean showing up with a gun and all, K- can I trust you, A- did I try to use self defense, cause you know I can easily take you on. K- Than why didn't you, A- because you're my goal, he said to himself under his breath.

Kripa just sigh not hearing what angad had said…. She looked at him, he seemed trustable, it's too shame she had never heard that quote" never judge a book by its cover"

She decided to tell him.

K- "well it all began a few weeks ago when my life was perfect until one day … my whole world got turned around……….."


well here is the first part... sorry it's like reallllyyyy short but i have to go somewhere , promise next part will be longer ...please comment even though its a short part!!!!i'll try and post part 2 when i come back
Edited by Chocolate_luver - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part .he lied about his name anywyas i cant wait 4 the next part when kripa tells wat happened,its really interesting cant wait 4 next part cont soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oooo...kripa trusted him too quickly

great part can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part 😊
can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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okay i'm back now a bigggg thanks for your comment!!, they help me alot!!!!!!
Part 2

K- "well it all began a few weeks ago when my life was perfect until one day … my whole world got turned around……….."

Well I was an ordinary girl, living an ordinary life alone, my normal day would be wake up, go to work , I was a receptionist for a really big company, I used to work till late hours, after work it was straight to home , dinner, and then straight to bed, basically my life was boring. One day I woke up not knowing my life would change, as usual I went to work, worked till late but this time it was really late, and when I finished work I usually walked through the car park which led to the main road where I normally caught a cab, so as I made my way through the car park, mostly everyone was gone there were only a few cars to be seen, one of them being my manager, he was filthy rich and when I mean filthy rich I'm not bragging… so anyway I was walking slowly through the car park, when I heard shouting coming from the other side, there were two voices , one which I recognized to be my boss and the other was unfamiliar to me… so I decided to go check what was happening just incase my boss wasn't in trouble, which he was , he was in a fight with the other guy, they were fighting about something priceless, valuable to both which my boss had, the other guy kept threatening my boss to give it to him, but my boss didn't give in so quickly , they both kept on shouting, I didn't know what to do, I thought maybe I should just leave I wouldn't want to get my self to get in this mess, so I turned around to leave when I heard a scream, I quickly turned around to dread what I saw, Kripa's voice became shaky , it was my boss he had a knife stabbed into him, the guy just left, I didn't know what to do call the ambulance, I was just to petrified, that's when I probably committed the biggest mistake of my life I went to help my boss. I went up to him, he was happy to see me, he was in great pain I could tell, I mean who wouldn't when you have a knife stuck deep into you, he was talking about that thing that they were both fighting about, he painfully moved his hand into his pocket and gave me a tiny bag that was knotted up and told me to keep it , and open it later , I took it and safely put it with me, I was about to call the ambulance when I felt myself being pushed to the ground I looked up it was that guy, my boss told me to run , I got up and ran only I few step I was able to be successful , he had pinned me too the ground, he turned me over and was about to search me for the "valuable" and then probably killed me when I screamed for help, he just replied by slapping me hard across the face, luckily I was heard by people who probably coming down to their cars, the guy heard them to , he got up as a white car pulled by, and all he said was " your lucky your saved this time, but when my boss finds out, your dead, get it" and he got into the car that's when I saw another guy in the car I couldn't see his face but by the way he was dressed he seemed like the boss, I wasn't sure if he saw me or not but I had felt my eyes tear up… it was most definitely the worst day of my life, to make it worst I had to answer the police and in know time my photos and interviews were famous which I didn't want as they would find me which they did, each day I would get threatening letters like "enjoy your last 24 hours" or "live life to the fullest you never know when it will end, especially for YOU!!!!" , they would even call up and stay silent, I had to get away, I didn't want to die, by this time kripa was fully broken down. And so after a whole week of being threatened I decided to move and change my identity, and when I saw your car stop I decided to threaten you to take me away, and as for the gun well I had got it for self defense just incase they would come back …and that's what leads me to now she said crying if there were no tomorrow for her.


Kripa got herself together and pinned the gun up to his forehead again and said in a more confident voice: K- you're now my driver for the destination or you give up your car its up to you. Angad just smiled. A- No I'll like to help you; I know your going through a hard time, I'm a generous person not to brag and as a person I'm glad to help a person in a dilemma. Kripa just smile at his kindness towards her, she felt could trust him to an extent. Angad just smiled. And they were on their way, A- hey kripa you don't mind if I ask but do you have that "valuable " with you?, Kripa just looked at him, K- yes I do, A- hmm maybe you should just give it to them and then you will be able to live your life like you used to do, K – no that will never happened they will just take and then kill me , they are not as nice as you and other people in this world. Angad just nodded his head signaling he understood what she had meant.


okay here is the part...please comment!!!! i know its not really a big twist but there willbe others comming up😉
Edited by Chocolate_luver - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
hey nice part......well at first I thought they don't know each other then I kinda felt tehy knew each other but the last lines makes it seem that they don't know each other....like they've never met before and all...can you just make it clear here if they knew each other ever before.......and well it's pretty interesting and do continue soon....but one last thing....I'm still a crazy fan of your ff Desire 😳 ....seriously I just love it way too much!!

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