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Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

hey nice part......well at first I thought they don't know each other then I kinda felt tehy knew each other but the last lines makes it seem that they don't know each other....like they've never met before and all...can you just make it clear here if they knew each other ever before.......and well it's pretty interesting and do continue soon....but one last thing....I'm still a crazy fan of your ff Desire 😳 ....seriously I just love it way too much!!

heheh no probs..well i can't say to much for now but no they haven't met as for the last line i cannot say anything about it rite now ..aww thankss...now i feel bad for ending it

wow...really interesting.......do continue soon.....

I hadn't read the 2nd part...I guess when I posted my comment on the 1st part that time you had posted the 2nd part....maybe coz i hadn't seen the 2nd part while I was posting my comment....

and well I didn't really want to know about the last line in the 1st part....since that's the ff and all....I just wanted to know if AK had met ever before which you already answered in your previous quote...thx for clearing my confusion and do continue soon......hey since you are feeling bad now for ending Desire(that's what I guess you meant in the previous quote)...so can you make it longer😳.......

omg!! is angad the other dude who kripa didn't seee!!! cuz you wrote your lucky your saved this time, but when my boss finds out, your dead, get it" and he got into the car that's when I saw another guy in the car I couldn't see his face but by the way he was dressed he seemed like the boss, I wasn't sure if he saw me or not

i am sure angad is that dude but i could be wrong

great part!!

That was good. Maybe Angad is the boss that Kripa is trying to run away from. I hope not.

that was fantastic i wonder what the valuble is, continue soon it was a great part...lol it is real hard to give a long comment when you have been commenting for so long...so i will just say like always your a great writer and continue soon cant wait to know what will happen next 😃

who was the other guy????????? 😛

A can b d boss as she did not see him n he said in d start wen he saw her 'its her'

Great part! 👏

Im just gonna jump ahead and guess:
Angad is the 'big boss' (or he works for him) that Kripa didnt see, and now hes undercover to get the valuable and then kill her.... 😉

Originally posted by: ixi-shaj

Great part! 👏

Im just gonna jump ahead and guess:
Angad is the 'big boss' (or he works for him) that Kripa didnt see, and now hes undercover to get the valuable and then kill her.... 😉

haha..i was thinking along the same lines...

as u advised in ur desire..ff..i checked this one..its not tht bad...2 parts and u have suspense built up..good job..continue soon..