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hey sorry for posting for the 3rd time....but yesterday I was reading in halves 😳 .....anyway the gr8 suspense for most of us now is that.....is angad the boss or one of them........and I guess you might not reveal tha sometime soon,ryt? 😉

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

omg!! is angad the other dude who kripa didn't seee!!! cuz you wrote your lucky your saved this time, but when my boss finds out, your dead, get it" and he got into the car that's when I saw another guy in the car I couldn't see his face but by the way he was dressed he seemed like the boss, I wasn't sure if he saw me or not

i am sure angad is that dude but i could be wrong

great part!!

lol hmmmm guess time will tell😉😆..thanks

Originally posted by: jdsean

That was good. Maybe Angad is the boss that Kripa is trying to run away from. I hope not.

thank you😊..hmm lets see...anything can happen😉

Originally posted by: Rejected

that was fantastic i wonder what the valuble is, continue soon it was a great part...lol it is real hard to give a long comment when you have been commenting for so long...so i will just say like always your a great writer and continue soon cant wait to know what will happen next

thanksssss!!!!😃....aww thankyou😳

Originally posted by: ash9

who was the other guy?????????

lolz guess we will all have towait till later on lol sorry

Originally posted by: ice _girl

A can b d boss as she did not see him n he said in d start wen he saw her 'its her'

Originally posted by: ixi-shaj

Great part!

Im just gonna jump ahead and guess:
Angad is the 'big boss' (or he works for him) that Kripa didnt see, and now hes undercover to get the valuable and then kill her....

thank you!!!!😃😊............let's see😉

Originally posted by: ishu124

haha..i was thinking along the same lines...

guess we'll just have to see😉..thankss!!😊

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part

thank you!!!😃

Originally posted by: sweetangle04

as u advised in ur desire..ff..i checked this one..its not tht bad...2 parts and u have suspense built up..good job..continue soon..

thanks for checking it out😃😊..hoped you liked it

Originally posted by: popgirl

Great Fanfic Continue Soon

aww thankyou😳😊

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

hey sorry for posting for the 3rd time....but yesterday I was reading in halves .....anyway the gr8 suspense for most of us now is that.....is angad the boss or one of them........and I guess you might not reveal tha sometime soon,ryt?

lol no its okay post as much as you want😃...lol yep you guessed rite i sure won't say anything now😉😆

once again thank you to everyone that commented!!!!!!!😃😊😛

Part 3

Part 3

Angad stopped the car halfway in the middle of the road. Kripa, who was actually falling asleep, came to her senses, she couldn't sleep, even though he seem trustworthy, he could easily take advantage of her; he got out of the car and walked back to the trunk. Kripa just wondered what was going on and what with this sudden stop.

Angad came back with something in his hand, kripa noticed. He sat in the car, closed the door and handed the thing over to kripa, it was a blanket. K- What is this for? A - Oh I saw you falling asleep so I thought you would like it to keep yourself warm since you know its raining outside and its kind of cold inside the car, which it was she had to admit, K- oh umm thank you, A – (smiles) – no problems.


Angad starts the car back up, while kripa was getting cozy by putting the blanket over herself but still holding on to the gun tightly, Angad on the radio softly , which at that time was playing a soft romantic song setting the mood, Khamoshi- Baahon ke Darmiyaan

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Uljhi uljhi saanson ki aawaaz hai pasand
Moti luta rahi hai saawan ki badliyaan

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan .

And the song continues to play, angad just drives while kripa thinks about her life before and her life now, will it ever be the same, will she ever find her soul mate which she always would dream about. She always used to hope one day to find true love, but after that night she new it would be impossible she'd just be risking her and her love's life if she had found her love.

She turned to look at angad, she thought, how lucky he was living a normal life and she turned away, angad noticed her glance towards him. A- What's the matter, K- oh umm nothing, A- anyway so where do you want to go now, I need to know. Hmmmm that was a good question she thought to herself, where did she want to gooo……..

A- Hello? Please don't tell me you don't know where to go
Kripa just thought ignoring him, when she found an answer, she couldn't believe she was saying this but for some reason she trusted only him after that night, I mean after all his willing to help.

K- can I trust you?

heres the next part.. hope you liked it..plz comment!!!!!....

yes it was a short part(!) 😛

has she alreday planned her escape? and if hes a bad guy then she's basically telling him everything...

actually another thought came to me- what if he was sent to protect her instead? 😉

short part but do continue soon......and one more thing.....well it was a nice part...bur I didn't like the ending 😉 ...too much suspense....but wait that wasn't the last thing what I wanted to say....I wanted to say that for DESIRE 😉 😳 .....plz don't make short parts like that....coz you are ending it soon enough...and...well......yah so that was it.......

One more thing-related to your previous quote- I am actually not allowed to post as much as I want.

1) It's almost like spamming.
2) What I did previously wasn't intentionally but unintentionally I posted a few times after a part.
3) The mods here would warn me for posting more than once (especially if it's not important or intentionally) that I shouldn't post more than once after each part.

😊

is angad bad guy?????? 😕
or good guy?????????
😊

tht was a short part dear...but indeed a good one...continue soon 😃

Originally posted by: ixi-shaj

yes it was a short part(!) 😛

has she alreday planned her escape? and if hes a bad guy then she's basically telling him everything...

actually another thought came to me- what if he was sent to protect her instead? 😉

😆😆..thank you😃...lol hmm wish i could tell you😉..