Dus PM/SA/AM- pg53: Finale - Page 7

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Jeet ya Haar

1...2...3...GO!!
the girls shot past and so did the boys...3 laps...2 laps...last lap...the boys beat the girls and won....seeing the amount of effort that went into this race...the boys decided to cool things down.
A: so..Bhoomi... for the rest of the week...
Bhoomi and anjali were graceful at taking defeat so they maintained their pations.
S: anju...
A and S: we've decided that for the rest of the weeek, every day of your life wil be spent with us

Anju and Bhoomi were shocked...they had no idea the guys were going to say this
A: no...nonononono
S: anju darling...forgot the bet...he said grinning cheekily at Anju's socked face. Anju finally agreed after a lot of puns being thrown at them by the boys.

Prem and Mukti

Prem was hugging zara unwillingly and glaring at mukti....Mukti tried to laugh but laughter just did not reach her mouth. she was angry at Zara for clinging onto prem like that...sh econvinced herself that it was a feeling of pitty for Prem..none the less.
Mukti intervened their "hug"
M: hey zara...a little tooo much of a friendly hug??
Z: what r u on about...don't you know Prem and me are going out
M: umm....wrong!!! Prem is not going out with you
Prem saw this as an oppertunity to get rid of Zaara...he left her arms and darted for mukti, placing his arm round her waist. MUkti was a little shocked. Prem came close to her face and whispered..."carry on wiht the act and i'll ofrgive you"
The last thing mukti needed or wanted was prem's forgiveness but somewhere she knew this act would be to her benefit.
M: see...he's my boyfriend
Zaara could not take it anymore: you b****, you stole prem from me..you orphan..cheap goat...behenji...prem can never be yours
tears trickled down mukti's face. Prem could not see her like this...
P: Zaara!!! Prem's voice boomed "don't you dare talk to mukti like that..." what did you say??? CHEAP!!! i'll tell you your the one who's cheap...running after boys as if you have nothing better to do...and if mukti wanted..she could have a thousand workers like you in her house..that's how rich she is. And zara i never was "your" that mukti will steal you from me...so just shut -up!!!"
Zara ran away and so did mukti.


Abhir took bhoomi to the bowling alley...they acctually had fun. bhoomi started to like the fact that Abhir teased her and flirted with her ever so often...she liked the fact that for the first time someone was challenging her...it was as if he was supposed to be the one....

Anjali too was having fun. Soham took her shoppig and surprisingly Soham took an interest in what Anju wore...It was more of a treat for anju than a punishment.
She loved the way Soham onlly spoke to her like that...he chose to be close to only her....

Mukti sat on the rocks on the beach. Prem joined her with Nariyal paani.
P: Hey...umm you wanna have some...
M ignored him and didn't respond
prem put the naryal paani down and turned her face towards him. wiping her tears he said " look mukti there will be lots of people who will say things to you..you have to fight them"
Mukti interrupted "prem...its not what Zaara said...people have been saying that all life...its baba..i remembered him when she said i was an orphan and ...and its you"
P: me???
Mukti : yes...no one's stood up for me like that before..i felt so..so bad for all the things i did to you..i'm sorry Prem.... Mukti hugged a surprised prem who's face was now in slight shock...
Prem clenched his fists and then released them...he knew he should not touch mukti...but she was his friend...ya right...an inner voice repeated. Mukti realized what she was doing and before prem could touch her she got up.
M: woh...sorry
prem smiled and gave her Nariyal paani..
both sat side by side on the beach drinking Nariyal paani...

aww too cute..prem stood up for mukti 😳
plz cont soon 😃

awwww^^ that ws soooo cute^^
plz continue i just love...
Love

Aisha 😳

i just loved it!!! plz plz plz coontinue soon~~~~ i just luv all ov the jodis!! your fanfic rox!!!
bisma

wow that was great! plz continue soon!

hwy ur ff is gr8..i jus luv it..kewl..here i luv soham-anjali and prem - mukti the most ,..to kewl plz continue soon 👏

plz cont soon...i luv ur ff so much.i cant wait to see what happens 😃

Love Blooms and Suspicions arise

After spending a whole day with Soham, Anju felt on top of the world...she never felt happier...she thought it was a trat rather than a punishment. She was now in Soham's car and as her house arrived...she really did not feel like parting from him...
the car stopped and so did the trail of thoughts inside Soham's head...
"ask her out...no maybe its too early" "kiss her" "mad or what???!! she'll slap me!"

He turned to look at Anjali who merely smiled bak at him. She moved her head closer and kissed him on the cheek. "Goodnight..."
she got out of the car and walked through the gates to Bajaj Mansion.
Soham in his heart was chanting: turn...turn..turn...Anjali, I LOVE YOU...
a warm breeze blew past and anjali stopped in her tracks. she slowly turned her head round and looked back at Soham.
Soham's smile turned to a grinn and brought a grinn onto Anjali's face too. Anju ran inside the house...

Abhir too dropped Bhoomi at the virani mansion, but before she left he held her hand.
A: bhoomi...be up at 8, i'm comming to pick you up tommorrow.
Bhoomi smiled at him: abhir, why are you doing his?
A: doing what?
B: you said you'll give me a punishment...today was like a treat...
A: aha so you like spending time with me.
Bhoomi quickly defended herself..: no..i
A: so you don't like me?
B: when did i say that..
A: so you deffinitely like me..
B: ABhir!! she laughed and got out of the car.
she ran into the house and into her room.

Anju lay on the bed in thoughts of soham..the time she spent with him. she smiled to herself and got up. she went to her closset and took out the clothes she bought with him and stood in front of the mirror with them.
She remembered when he said "blue suits you...you look very beautiful" and when he handed her a white churidaar " wear this...you'll look like an angel"

Bhoomi too sat on the bed thinking of abhir..the phone rang
B: abhir?!?
A: so you were thinking about me!?!
B: no...
A: then how did you know it was me?
B: i...just..
A: woh..umm..mai..woh (in a mimicking way)
B: Abhir!!!
Abhir and bhoomi laughed on the phone
A: do you believe in love?
this question took bhoomi in shock
B: i..don't know..
A: well...umm
B: yes...
A: nothing...get ready at 8 tommorrow...ok
Bhoomi: ok...she smiled and put the phone down

All the while when Anju was grooming herself in front of the mirror and placing dresses and salwaars in front of her....prem was standing outside her door.
Prem turned around walked to his own room...
Prem thinking: what the hell?? in the 20 years she's been living with me...she's never done that...then how now?? MORTHER INDIA!!!
Prem: Mother India....
Prerna came and sat next to him...:kya baath hai prem..bolo naa
Prem: mother india...when..umm..
Prerna: bolo..
Prem: why does a person stare at the mirror...and you know..like groom themselves...even though the have never done that before and suddenly they start doing it?
Prem had also noticed Anju had skipped dinner
Prerna was slightly confused
Prem: like what if they suddenly don't feel like eating or sleeping...(seeing as it was 10:00 by which time Anju would be in deep slumber)
Prerna had a slight smile on her face...she understood exactly what prem meant
Prerna: it means the Person is in LOVE
Prem was shocked and slowly got up to go to his room
Prem : Anju...in LOVE!!! how? and WITH WHO?????
As prem walked off, he laft a smiling prerna: Kaun hai woh jisse prem pyaar karta hai? (who is the girl that prem loves?)