Dus PM/SA/AM- pg53: Finale - Page 6

this was truly the day when they all came alive and enjoyed the company with each other..the night was such a blast!!!

i loved the whole song part!!!! awesome job!!!
plz cont soon! 😉

👏 lol great stuff! continue soon!

AW dat was soo sweet!!! pleaze cont soon!!!

your ff is just GREAT, BEST,MIND BLOWING....MAYBE THE BEST I'LL EVER READ.....

plz continue soon.....

Lots of Love
Aisha 😳

thanks for all the comments...thats so encouraging...it make me come up with better ideas..thaks 😃

Subah hogaye mamo..mamo

Everyone was sleeping in their respective houses and rooms...but 1 thing was the same...all the boys were groaning and woke up the girls

in Bajaj HOuse
A: aaaaahhhhgggggggg Prem!!!
P: o god..birju kaka koi hai...sar phat raha hai.
Anju woke up and came to his room with medicines adn tea...
P: anju you know i don't drink tea
A: shut-up!!! its 6:00 in the mourning..don't annoy me!!!
Prem quietly drank the tea..why do you have to shout so much???
Anju glared at him and Prem put a finger on his lips to indicate he would shut-up.

Soham's house
S:maithili..maithili
M:bhaiya!!! quiet!!!
S: chay laana
M: this is the 5th cup of tea since 5:oo its been an hour!!
S: you don't know how much my head hurts!!
Maithili chuked a pillow at him adn went away

Abhir's house
A: nisha!!!!
N: no no no no no!!! and finally NO
A: puhlease!!! with cute puppy eyes
N: arrggh!!! 5 mins more and that's it
nisha chuked the blanket on him that she removed. since the past half hour she'd been trying to wake up her brother but to no extent had he even turned...

Janki's house
MUkti: get-up!!!!!
A: no...its a hangover..a massive one...i have to sleep
M: no!!!
A: yes!!!
M: mayuri aunty.....
Mayuri: kya hua beta...
Mu: look...adi's not waking up
JD comes...J: Adi wake up beta...be a little responsible like mukti..
Adi groans and replies.." 10 mins more"

Virani house
B: manthan just go to sleep!!! god shut-up!!!
M: sis i can't sleep....my head's hurting
B: i'l bang it with a hammer!!! now shut-up!!!
Tanya goes into manthan's room joining bhoomi...
T: kya bhoomi ur telling manthan to sleep..he should wake up now...
B: i know..but whatever
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Its 7:00
NIsha yanks Abhir out of bed and shoves him into the shower... get ready quickly!!

Anju too shoves Prem into the shower threatening him
A: don't make me send Birju kaka in there!!!
P: eww...OK!!!

the girls finally manage to get the boys ready in track-suits and sweatshirts. Tehy drag them out and drive them to the gym
All the girls meet in the gym

A: o god!! Premis just impossible
Mu: i know...Adi..uff
N: and abhir..he's older than me but he acts like such a baby at times
Maithili: so does soham bhaiya
B: and manthsn..don't even ask

All the boys have head this
Ab: oy..nisha!!
P: these girls just like to talk about us
A: ya weather its good or bad
M: they know they can't resist us!
All the girls stare back at the boys

Anju: ok...umm how about me and bhoomi go to the smimming pool... and two of the boys come with us...
Anju was indicating at prem and Manthan but Abhir and Soham grabbed their chances
A: me..i'm comming
Soham: me too.
before the girls could say anything they went off.
The girls quietly followed.

Nisha went over to some equipment...i'm staying here
Mukti: oh...i want to go to the park
Maithili: i'm staying here too

Prem followed mukti to the park for a jog while Adi and Manthan stayed int he gym.
Metz went on the running machine with adi on the machine next ot her

Nisha sat on some equipment trying to figure out an exercise but didn't quite get it.
Manthan sniggered at her
nisha stared at him coldly. "you do it then"
Manthan came closer to her. nisha moved back a little. Manthan held her waiste adn pushed her lightly on the equipment...he held her hands and moved them onto the bars. he continued to hold her hands and pushed on them...thus moving the equipment backwards nad forewards...

Adi adn maithili were running on the machine next to each other... Adi kept pestering metz
A: so metz...remember last night
M: ya why?
A: well...i was thinking maybe both of us could go there ..alone!
M was getting annoyed and raised her eyebrows
A: you know you can't resist me..i'm a total chick magnet
M was really annoyed..she plastered a fake smile and pressed on Adi's running machine buttons..making the machine move faster...Adi lost balance and fell off...Maithili laughed a lot...
M: ok "chick magnet" i'll come with you if you can stand on the machine properly.
Adi was so angry..maithili mocked him..made him fall...she was gonna pay

Prem was jogging behind mukti and freequently stopped to flirt with girls..mukti got irritated adn decided not to wait for him anymore..
Prem realized mukti was no longer in front of him so he raced to her...
P: hey chashmish
M: U
P: D
M: Prem!! stay behind and flirt some more ok!!
P: oooooo getting jealouse i see..
M: huhu!! jealouse...of a looser>..i don't think so
P: common mukti..you know you want me
M: you have so serious ego adn attitude problem
P: and you dont??
MUkti got angry...suddenly prem dived behind her and hid.
Mukti was freaked out...what the hell??
p: its her...she's folowing me
M: who??? ohhhh your ex-girl...what's her name
(shouting out loud now) ZARA!! is that her name
Zara heard her name being called and ran to mukti...
Z: hi mukti..seen Prem anywhere
Prem was now behind a tree... Zara had her back to the tree and mukti was facing the tree.So prem and mukti could see eachother but zara could not see prem

Z: Prem kaha hai??
M: oh prem...
Prem was frantically waving his hand to signal NO
but mukti saw this as an opertunity...
M: umm Zara..He's there
Zara turned round and Prem changed his signal to a over-enthusiastic hello
Zaara smiled and hugged him
Prem was thinking: Mukti..you'll pay for this!!!

BHoomi and Anju came out of the changing rooms in one-piece swimming suits..then tied their hair up in buns and dived into the pool. they started their laps when the boys dived in. The boys just stared at them..SOham's eyes poped out and so did Abhir's. Anju and Bhoomi were feeling too concious. they decided to ignore the stares and swimm as far away from Abhir and soham as possible. Abhir and SOham strayed away and swam...after some time Abhir and Soham decided on a race...the girls thought of this as interesting adn they joined...
B: we want to race too...
Abhir and soham looked at each other and burst out laughing..
Ab: you know we are champions at this sport
B: i've won quite a few awards too
S: anju..ur gonna have a race with me???
An: ya...problem??? tell you what...if one of us girls win..then you guys have to obey us adn if you guys win then we'll obey you...
S: for how long do you have to obey us?
An: you will obey us for the rest of the week!!

S: ok..in position..1..2..3..GO!!

OMG....
THIS WAS SO GGGGGGGGGGRRRRREEEEEEEEEAAAAAATTTT.....
YOUR FF IS ONE OF THE BEST!!!!!
plz continue soon....
😃 😃
Lots Of Love
Aisha 😳

lolz dat was soo fun 2 read !!!!
i WONDER whos gna win da race??

lol i hope the girls win! continue soon!

i just read your fanfic from the begging and i must say, its rocking and u r such a great writer...keep up the gud work and do continue soon!!! will be waiting

bisma