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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry for making you all wait that long but her's the next part for you!

recap: adi and mets had some fun painting themselves rather than the walls, Soham flirts with Anju in the restaurant, Manthan and nisha go to select the costumes for the dance

Prem aaya

"GOD!!! Prem...why do you always have an objection?"
"Shut-up, chashmish! its coz none of them are good!"
Mukti: "ya whatever...i doubt you know anything about music...you know music is a talent that....
Prem: "bla bla bla bla...you know what you remind me of?... Basanti...from Sholey!"
Mukti: "i'm not Basanti and you could at least wait untill i finish!!!!"

Prem and mukti kept on argueing untill the next band came.

Prem: now this is worth watching!!!
M: ugghh, its only coz its got girls in it!
P: yes...sexy hot girls unlike you chashmish!!
M:Prem!!!!
P:Chashmishh!! stop calling me Prem!!! my name is Yudi!!!
M:prem prem prem prem!!!
P: chashmish basanti Chashmish Basanti!
M: stop it!!!

Saying this mukti started to hit pre with a file she had, and during this "merry war" Prem lost his balance and fell to the floor with mukti on top of him. Both stared into eachother's eyes....Mukti no longer had her glasses, they fell off. it was just her eyes. Prem felt the same feeling as before when in the library he just saw mukti's face...plain...without her glases,
Prem reached out to touch this angel's face.
M: what r u doing???
Prem came back to his senses...umm nothing!! now get up!!
mukti tried to get up but something was stopping her.
M:ouch!!
P: what?
M: my hair!!!
mukti's hair was stuck in Prem's chains!
M: you and your stuppid Bling!!!!
P: don't dis the bling!
M:shut-up..i can't get up now unless i untie this.

Prem sighed and tried to see where mukti's hair was stuck.
P; move your head!!
M: sure! i'll cut it off and give it to you ok!!
P: god do you ever stop being sarcastic..
M:not if you ask such stuping questions! i can't move my head!!
P: you know what!! just chop off your hair. you don't need it anyway!!! i mean it dosen't make you look beautiful so why have it?
M: shut-up! she said sunding a little hurt.

"ahem ahem...what going on?..."
both prem and mukti turned around, in this effort, mukti's hair came out of the chain rather painfully
M: ouch!!
Soham and Anju were standing in frnt of prem and mukti
A: seems like prem's doing a lot more than just auditioning the bands...
S: i wish something like that happened to me and you!
Anju looked at Soham with her eyebrow raised..."trust me Soham...nothing like that will EVER happen to me and you

Mukti and Prem got up
m: woh...my hair was stuck and
A: aacha!! so is your hair still stuck???
P: come on Anju...you know theres nothing between me and chashmish!!
Mukti gave Prem and evil stare and stormed off
S: yudi.. why do you always argue with mukti??knowing you, you'd have probably done something really bad to her
P: 1. she's Adi's sister
2. i don't know...i like teasing her...besides she's the ffirst girl to backanswer to me...except anju...whom i handeled very well
saying this he winked at Anjali.
S: what!!! so you and Anjali...
A: no!!! how many times do i have to say this!! he is my BROTHER---i only tolerate him coz i'm the only girl he respects and because of mom!!!
S: mom???
A: ya...Prerna mom!you know she's like my mom. i don't have parents and Prerna mom is like god to me..she gave me shelter when i had no one...Prerna mom and dad Bajaj.
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Everybody was gathered in the hall. Bhoomi and abhir were facing the opposite ways and it seems they didn't interacwell and possible left out the word "co-opperate!"
Mukti and Prem weren't even looking and eachother... Soham was sitting close to Anju but anjali just ignored him. Adi and mytheli were laughing over another joke Adi whispered into mytheli's ear and Manthan and Nisha just arrived.

anjali got up when they came back and took the bags from them. Te costumes went round and it seemed everyone liked them.
A: so is all the work done? i mean if it is..then we can get onto the coreograhy.
she looked at bhoomi and Abhir.
Ab: its done...just tell miss India... that not everything goes her way!
B: shut-up...your the looser who can't accept that i'm better at dancing than you!
Ab: whatever!!!
Anjali: OK!!! we'll see both of you then decide ok??
Abhir and Bhoomi got on the stage and danced to different songs...both were very good and their ideas for the group dance were very good too...
A: why don't we mix both ideas together..
Ab: don't mind
B:same here..its fine with me.
It was decided that people would come on stage in groups of threee and at the end all would dance together.

the song was Bhagam Bhag

Adi-Mets-Soham
Soham-Anjali-Abhir
Abhir-bhoomi-Yudi
Yudi-Mukti-Manthan
Manthan - Nisha

Adi-Mytheli-Soham they would dance on stage till the first stanza, then Adi would take Mets away leaving Soham on the floor.
them Anju and Abhir would enter and dance, SOham take anju away... Abhir left till Bhoomi and yudi come....then yudi left alone till mukti and Manthan come then manthan left alone till nisha comes.
in the last stanza all the couples come on stage adn dance....
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The plan was set adn all students called it a day...they went home. Yudi went home to Prerna.
Prerna: Prem beta tum aagaye
Prem: mother india..its Yudi!!
Prerna: acha theek hai
but i'll call you prem
Prem: look...Daddy cool calls me yudi...then why can't you?

just then someone entered the house.
It was anjali
Prerna will be Pr and Prem will be P
Pr: arre anju
a: hi mom!
Pr to Prem: dekha...anju bhi mujhe mom kehrahe hai...tum mujhe maa kab kahoge??
Prem just ignores that and goes to anju
A: yudi...mukti...
Prem's eyes welled up.
Prem whispered to anju: if you tell mother india about mukti..she'll go to her ouse and set up our marriage..so just SHUT-UP
Anju had a glint of mischief in her eyes.
A: mom!!....college mein...
Prem closed her mouth and said: nothin..nothing.
A: mukti...
P: shut up!!!!
Pr: mukti??? new girl??? who is she?
Prem: no one...trust me!!
Pr: MUKTI!!!!!
--------------------this is a nice long part 4 all of you----------
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
that was really gud!continue sn!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
kool
i loved it
plz continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
dat was really gud 😛 da couples seem so cute so does this mean dat adi n mukti r bro/sis or they jus share a bro/sis relationship cuz i'm really confused 😕 😆 i think prerna probably nos mukti sumhow 😛 update soon can't wait 2 read da next part 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
nice part 👏 👏
continue sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46

Since this one was such a nice part can u make the next one even longer?😳 Can u also PLEASE have more Adi and Mets scenes😳 I can never have enough of those two😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
wow that was sooooo sweet! im loving this! lol cant wait for the next part! keep going hun, its turning out great 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
keep on going. Loving it all the way
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was really good cont soon! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
sorry for making you all wait that long
Adi and Mukti have a brother sister relationship but not of blood..Adi just treats Mukti as his younger sis as he had known her practically all his life

Janam Din

Prerna: MUKTI!!!!!
Prem and Anju swing their heads round. We see mukti at the door. All three ladies present have huge smiles on their faces, its only Prem that seems to have a frown.

p: yeh chashmish yaha kya karrahe hai?
Prerna and Anju completly ignore him and go towards mukti. prerna hugs mukti and mukti hugs her back.
M: chotimaa...aap..
Pr: mukti tu kaisi hai beti? aur baba kaise hai?
Mukti's expression dies down a little: woh...baba...baba abb iss duniya me nahin hai

prerna's face fills with shock and she hugs mukti again... so where are you living now?
M: woh..i'm living with Janki dadi
Pr: janki ji???
M: yes...well mamma and mayuri aunty have known each other for years..and so have me and Adi, we are like brother and sister. Mayuri aunty lives with Janki dadi and Janki dadi knows me quite well. Mayuri aunty asked me to stay there.

(Yes...Janki Devi is Adi's DADI!! and ADI lives with HER!!!)

Pr: well mukti..you know you can always come and stay here...this is your house
Prem: oh...god!!!! aab chashmish iss ghar par raaj karegi (now chashmish will rule over this house)

Prerna and anju gave prem sharp looks..prem understood he was getting a little annoying now so he just shut-up.

Prem went into his room and shut the door.
he called manthan, soham, Abhir and Adi to ask them if they wanted to come out to the disco tonight...all agreed.
Prerna shouted from downstairs: Prem...Prem!!!
Prem came running down stairs.
P: mother..
Pr: mukti will be like a member of the family from now on...just like you look out for all your friends and their sisters..look out for mukti ok!!
P: ok mother india..
Pr: oh.tonight take mukti and anju out somewhere
P: what!! i'm not their personal chauffer!!!
Pr: from today you are! its been so long since i have sen mukti..you will take full care of her!!

Prem reluctantly agreed and just then got a call..
he spoke on the phone for about 10 mins...it was from his friends... they all said they were bringing their sisters along too.
------------------------in the evening-------------------
Prem was waiting..sitting on the couch.he was waiting for anju and mukti who both were in a room taking hours..chatting or dressing up..god knows!
P: hurry up!!!!!!
A: comming!!!
anjali came down the stairs followed by mukti...she was looking so different...so beautiful...that all that ran through prem's mind
she wore contacts...a knee length white skirt..and a hot pink strap top...she was so simple..thats what struck him

P: oh..umm..you look different?!?!?!
Anju sniggered but mukti looked on wierdly
M: oookkay!
Prem just realized what he said...umm no,,i mean a change from the hideous outfit you wore to college..only now you look even more hidious!!!
Mukti's eyes glared with anger: you!!!!!
she ran down the stairs to attack him but slipped and Prem caught her. Both stared into each other's eyes and got lost for a moment...all of mukti's anger seemed to melt away.
Both left eachother's arms and quietly walked on.
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Everbody reached the disco. All the girls were looking ravishing...the boys looked at each of "their" girl and admired them. Adi at mets
Soham was drooling at Anju
abhir at bhoomi
Manthan at nisha

they sat round a table and odreded drinks..the girls going for juice and boys for beer. Prem, Adi, Soham, abhir and Manthan went on the diisco floor.
Prem
Manthan
Abhir
soham
Adi

Koi kahe, kehta rahe kitna bhi humko deewana
Koi kahe, kehta rahe kitna bhi humko deewana
Hum logon ki thokar mein hai yeh zamaana
Jab saaz hai, aawaaz hai, phir kis liye hichkichaana
Jab saaz hai, aawaaz hai, phir kis liye hichkichaana
Oh, gaayenge hum apne dilon ka taraana
Bigade duniya, bigadne bhi do
Jhagade duniya, jhagadne bhi do
Lade jo duniya, ladne bhi do, hum apni dhun gaao
Duniya roothe, roothne do
Bandhan toote, tootne do
Koi chhoote, chhootne do, na ghabraao

Hum hain naye, andaaz kyoon ho puraana
All the boys sang together. they took the girls with them to the photo shoot. All stood next to eachother for the photo.

Soham: Aankhon mein hain bijliyaan, saanson mein toofaan hai
Prem: Darr kya hai aur haar kya, hum isse anjaan hai
Manthan: Hamaare liye hi to hai aasmaan aur zameen
Abhir: Sitaarein bhi hum tod lenge, hamein hai yakeen
Adi: Ambar se hai aage hamaara thikaana

All together: Hum hain naye, andaaz kyoon ho puraana
during the music the girls came on the dance floor. the boys twirled them round really fast and it seems they did this forcefully. the girls' heads were spinning. the boys all left them and started singing again

Soham: Sapnon ka jo des hai, haan hum vahin hain pale
😉 Soham danced round anju. and anju just rolled her eyes 😉
Abhir: Thode se dil phenk hai, thode se hai mann chale
😆 he pulled bhoomi closer but she pushed him away
Manthan: Jahan bhi kahe apna jaadu dikhaate rahe
😳 he ran his fingers down her face she knocked his hands off
Prem: Mohabbat haseenon ko aksar sikhaate rahe
😉 prem pushed mukti but then grabbed her by her waiste.
Adi: Aaye hamein dil aur neendein churaana
😃Adi danced round mytheli and showed off to her. while grabbing other girls and she just waved her hand dissmissively and walked off

All together: Hum hain naye, andaaz kyoon ho puraana

Prem: Koi kahe, kehta rahe kitna bhi humko deewana
Abhir: Koi, kehta, kitna bhi humko deewana
Manthan: Oh, hum logon ki thokar mein hai yeh zamaana
Soham: Oh, jab saaz hai, aawaaz hai, phir kis liye hichkichaana
Adi: Jab saaz hai, aawaaz hai, phir kis liye hichkichaana

All: Oh, gaayenge hum apne dilon ka taraana
Prem: Bigade duniya, bigadne bhi do
Abhir: Jhagade duniya, jhagadne bhi do
Manthan: Lade jo duniya, ladne bhi do, hum apni dhun gaao
Adi: Duniya roothe, roothne do
Prem: Bandhan toote, tootne do
Adi: Koi chhoote, chhootne do, na ghabraao
All: Hum hain naye, andaaz kyoon ho puraana
Oh, hum hain naye, andaaz kyoon ho puraana
------------------By now the boys were litterally swinging the girls all around..it was clear they had had too much to drink and all the girls dragged their respective brother home.
that was the end of a funfilled night-------------------

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