Dus PM/SA/AM- pg53: Finale - Page 9

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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
OMG OMG OOMG😲😃
I JUST LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT....
IT ROCK MILLION DILLION VILLION ZILLION TIMES!...
you just got you a new fan..(i was you fan before but now iam more*LOL*)

cant wait to the next episode....
plz continue
dieing to read the next part...
Love yah
Aisha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
thanks soooo much aisha
thats sooo sweet of you
i'm updating tommorrow 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
whao amazing update...haha prem was so funny on his knees begging mukti to go with him!! 😆 ..and adi trying to ask maithili...
"A: so maithili....you know the dance...well i just wanted to ask if yu would come with me..you know..like..like umm...a friend!! adi took about 5 mins to say all this. Maithili just laughed out at this but agreed"
haha too funny 😆
plzz cont soon
😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
dat was a gr8 update loved it
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i luv it!!!
my fav pairs are ,prem-mukti and adi-mehthali....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
😆 well boys will be boys! cant wait for more, continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
thanks!!!! that was 7 comments...i'll update in a couple of hours...maybe @4 or 5 GMT 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
GIRLS!!!

the girls sat in a circle with pillows in their laps.
ANju and bhoomi started by whispering, the boys could not hear anything
N: you know, there is no one in the house, so might as well speak out loud..
Maithili: OK!! so...anju di..i want to ask you something...
A: yes..
M: do you like my brother Soham
the question took anju by shock
Nisha: yes!!! and bhoomi do you like Abhir bhai
Bhoomi choked on the coffee
A: umm he's sweet...
B: yes...Abhir's....sweet?..
nisha and maithili laughed.....
anju nad bhoomi went red in the cheeks nad blushed.
Mukti: so you do like them...
A: no...maybe...dunno
B: dunno
Mukti, maithili nad nisha started laughing

upstairs...manthan and prem focused their gaze on soham and abhir
soham and abhir tried not to look at them

B: nisha...i don't know what your laughing at...i know you like manthan
it was now nisha's turn to choke..
N: what???? that duffer...never!!

manthan was highly offended an dthe guys round him cracked up

Anju: mukti..admit it..you like prem
and maithili you like adi

mukti and MAithili: NEVER!!!
mu: you know...for me to love someone they need to have a lot of good qualities..which unfortunately your UD does not seem to have
she said in a high tune brusting of arrogance...the girls squealed with laughter.
N: and my hero has to be in equivelence to me...which i dout manthan is capable of
bhoomi laughed now
Mai: and adi!! that boy is good for nothing..all he does is run around girls and follows prem and manthan round...chamcha kahika..its like he's their "little pet"
the girls started laughing at this

upstairs adi gaped his mouth open and manthna and prem could not controll their laughter. they ruffled his hai
manthan: bark doggy bark
adi whacked manthna on the arm

mukti turned on the radio.......
Pardesia remix - babul supriyo

mukti:
O Pardesiya
she put her hands on her hips and winked at the girls

nisha;
pardesiya Yeh Sach Hai Piya
sab Kehte Hain Maine....Tujhko Dil De Diya
she holds up a picture of manthan and flashes her eyelashes at it. she points at her heart and then at him...then a thumbs-down sign

bhoomi:
pardesia yeh sach hai piya
sab kehete hai maine tujhko dil de diya
does hte same as nisha by picking up a picture of abhir...but not in a "mocking tone" as nisha did

maithili:
main Kehti Hoon Tune Mera Dil Le Liya
she looks in disgust at Adi and puts his frame down...then laughs and goes to the girls

anju:
hay baby..hay baby
all the girls line up and dance

during the music...
"phoolon Mein Kaliyon Mein Gaaon Ki Galiyon Mein
hum Dono Badnaam Hone Lage Hain
nadiya Kinare Pe, Chhat Pe Chaubaare Pe
hum Milke Hansne Rone Lage Hain"

nisha puts on a hoodie like prem and bling like prem...mukti comes up to her and pretends slapping her

prem can imagine mukti slapping him...his face is filled with horror. manthan laughes at this but soon is in the same position as prem....

"sunke Piya, Sunke Piya Dhadke Jiya
sab Kehte Hain Maine Tujhko Dil De Diya"

maithili wears a black top and poses with her arms bent like she has muscles...her top is labled MANTHAN
nisha comes up to mets and smile fakely..she lifts up ht eplastic weights maithili is holding and starts running after her around the house

manthan can see himself running for his life while nisha is behind him. next its adi's turn...

"main Kehti Hoon Tune Mera Dil Le Liya
ho
ha Ha Ha Ha, Ho Ho Ho Ho Ho "

mukti is dressed as Adi...wearing a black leather jacket and sipping coke. when maithili comes over and pretends to empty the coke can on her head

adi can imagine mets doing that and her holds his head.

the guys had enough...they all jumped from the flight of stairs and surrounded the shocked faced girls

Abhir grabs bhoomi:
logon Ko Kehne Do Kehte Hi Rehne Do
sach Jhooth Hum Kyun Sabko Bataayen

soham to anju:
main Bhi Hoon Masti Mein Tu Bhi Hai Masti Mein

Adi forcefully turns and swings maithili around:
aa Is Khushi Mein Hum Naache Gaayen

Prem forcefully hugs mukti:
kisko Pataa....kisko pataa Kyaa Kisne Kiya

manthna carry's nisha:
sab Kehte Hain Tune Mera Dil Le Liya

meanwhilie bhoomi is singing to abhir:
sab Kehte Hain Maine Tujhko Dil De Diya
main Kehti Hoon Tune Mera Dil Le Liya

anju to soham:
pardesiya, Pardesiya Yeh Sach Hai Piya
sab Kehte Hain Maine Tujhko Dil De Diya

bhoomi:
main Kehti Hoon Tune Mera Dil Le Liya

Abhir and bhoomi hug...while soham an danju hug...
both couples laugh at the sight of Prem, Adi and Manthan terrorising the girls

ok..here is the end of this part...i'll update tommorrow if i have 7 comments...by the way thanks to all th epeople who replied
what will happen next? will the girls forgive the boys? or will war break out?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
that was funny.......
cant wait to see what the girls will be wearing for the dance....
it took me FOREVER to choose my dress for the school dance.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
YEA!!! i hope the girls forgive the boys..!! i want to read wut happens next!! plz continue!!

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