KISMAT SE HUM MILE-sk fanfic { updated}

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kashish

@goodkashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#721

yeh surprize wala part bhi bahot achhca laga.........kya sujal ne bhi zabardashti than li hai.........kashish ko apne pass bithake khana khilaya.......lekin ab darr hai ki sujal to wapas apne kamre me chala gaya yeh maa kuch gadbad na kare......kahi kasish ko ghar se na nikal de.........lekin archie aur maa ka chehra dekhne layak hoga na..........barak ke barah ghante baje honge..........mast part tha.........ab koi surprize ho to de do......thanks

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Anisha

@anishaumer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#722

dats brilliant of sujal lol, shame on sujals mom

reli good!!!!

plz cont x x x x

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

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Posted: 16 years ago

#723

wow me so happy the way sujal behaved gr8 job cont soon

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#724

neelu dear i'am, back with my commen on this fanfic of your's... yaar sorry itne waqt se i was a bit busy , tho time hii nahii mila for me to comment... chalo now i'll stop my talking and start typing my comment.. 😊 yaar waise dekha jaye tho tumhari yeh story starting se lekar ab thak bohat hii dilchasp rahii hai.. i really liked reading this fanfic of your's.. it is so goodd... it is written very well.. har ek rishtha , har ek emotion has been shown in such a nice way... sujal , kashish ke beech ka joh rishtha hai woh bada hii anokha hai.. sujal apni zindagi mein apni marzi ke liye nahii but he is being forced to marry archie , pushed toqwards because of money..God this is bad.. aur sujal kii haalat aisi hai kii bechara kuch karr bhii nahii saktha.... aur dusari taraf hai kashish.. joh zindagi mein aise haalat se guzar chuki hai ,kii usne jeene hii chod dia tha.. lekin jab sujal aur kashish dono mile tho yun laga kii dono ko apni manzil mil gayi.. un dono ko woh raah , woh jeene ki ichcha mil gayi..joh woh dono apni-apni majbooriyon mein gawa chuke hai... i really sujal , kashish ka role.. sujal , kashish ke beech koi rishtha nahii hai.. lekin phir bhii woh dono sabse ghehra rishtha bas ek dusare se hii hai.. ek taraf sujal hai joh kashish ke liye kuch bhii karne ko taiyaar hai.. aur ek duji taraf kashish hai joh sujal ke liye sab kuch kar sakthi hai... sujal tho dheere-dheere has become kashish ke pillar of strength.. sujal is there by kashish to support her through all the thick and thin situations.. sujal is a complete sweet heart.. woh kitna khayal rakhtha hai kashish ka.... sujal aur kashish dono hii bina ek dusare se kuch kahe ek dusare kii dil ki baat samaj lethe hai... too gooddd... isse kehtha hai na dil se dil ka naata.. and this also shows kii sujal , kashish ka rishtha kitna ghehra hai.. itna ghehra hai kii chot ek ko lagthi hai tho dard ka ehsaas dusare ko hotha hai.. hyee..hyeeee.. kya baat hai... kahin nazar na lag jaye un dono ko.. i like mrs.dsouza.. she is a very nice lady.. she is there to stand by sujal and kashish.. jab bhi un dono ko unki zaroorat pade.. waise i want to kick archie.. uski tho main... she is so irritating.. woh sujal ka peecha kyun nahii chodthi.. kyun palle pad rahi hai woh sujal ke... akela kyun nahii chodthi woh sujal ko.. cannot she understand kii sujal ko usmein minus zero percent bhi interest nahii hai, phir bhii sujal ke gale pad rahii hai.. mera mann karr raha hai kii main archie ko kheench ke ek thappad maaroon..samajthi kya hai woh khud ko.. coming ack to sujal and kashish.. sujal , kashish ke beech achchi dosti tho hai.. lekin ab unke rishthe mein ek tarah ka attraction bhii hai.. joh woh dono hii jhutla nahii paa rahe hai.. very nice.... jab sujal ne kashish se apna pyaar ka izhaar kiya tha na..aur kashish ne bhi haami bhari i was so happy.. i was really flying high yeh sochke kii sujal , kashish ne ek dusare se pyaar ka izhaar kar diya hai aur ab unhe duniyaan kii koi taakat durr nahii kar sakthi.. lekin yeh archie aur sujal kii maa.. dono hii sujal , kashish kii zindagi mein kaala saaya bankar aaye hai.. archie kii kashish se kahii hui baatein.. main kashish kii jagah hothi na tho archie ka mooh thod dethi...aur upar se yeh mahaan hasthi , wohii sujal kii mother.. how the hell can she tell sujal kii woh shaddi archie se karle aur rahe kashish ke saath... how cheap... ek maa aise kaise keh sakthi hai... uska beta usse kehtha hai kii he loves kashish and wants to marry aur uski maa aisi baatein karthi hai.. disgusting... aur ab when his mom comes aur jis tarah ka bartaav woh kashish se karthi hai.. jis tarah woh kashish ko majboor karthi hai.. i really wanted to throw her in the dust-bin.. actually agar sujal kii mom ko dust-bin mein phekenge tho this will be dust-bin kii touheen.. woh itni buri hai.. woh apne bete kii khushi ko na jan pa rahii hai aur na hii samaj rahi hai...God...I hate her... lekin i like the way jahaan har waqt sujal , kashish ka haath sabke saamne thaamtha hai.. chahe woh archie ke ghar pe se kashish ko kheench ke le jaana ho.. sabke saamne se himmat karke... ya phir sujal ka dinner table pe uske aur archie ke ghar waalon ke saamne kashish ko hakh se kheench kar , uska haath thaamkar apne pass bitana... i liked sujal's confidence very much.. very good going sujal..lage raho.. you are on the right track... yaar waise joh baatein sujal ne drink karke kashish se kahii and the way he was forcing kashish to tell him kii she loves him only.. this shows sujal kitna pyaar kartha hai kashish se..and how helpless he is feeling right now... lekin kashish bhi tho guth rahii hai... woh bhi tho majboor hai.. wakayi mein pyaar insaan se kya kya karwatha hai.. iska andaza sirf joh pyaar kartha hai woh laga saktha hai.. anyway a veru well written story.. keep up the good work going.. i like your writing style bohat bohat zyada... ek dum cooll... mast... zabardast... awesome..amazing..superb..fantastic...great..lovely...wonderful... beautiful.. waise dear now coming to my guess on the next parts..coming up parts mein shayad yeh hoga kii kashish sujal se durr rahegi aur time to time sujal sabke saamne kashish se apni closeness ka izhaar karega by way of his actions.... aur phir shayad sujal , kashish ke beech ek bada argument ho jahaan sujal keeps pestering her kii woh uske saath aisa kyunkarr rahii hai.. aur phir kashish sujal ko saari sachayi bata de...ab sujal ko strike ko kii sab log usse aur kashish ko durr karne ke liye itna girr sakthe hai.. aur phir shayad sujal , kashish ko sabke saamne apna le.. shaddi karle kashish se.. aur tukra de archie ke dikhawe pyaar ko.. aur duthkaare samaaj ke kholke osoolon ko... well mere khayal se tho yahii hoga in the foth-coming parts.. tho kya neelu mera guess sahii hai.. tum mujko batana i really want to know if my guess is right.... 😉 neelu dear next part jaldi se post karna..me waiting for the next part very , very , very eagerly....😊😛😃

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

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kashish

@goodkashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#725

Originally posted by: belanila
aa gai main

welcome back yaar............too good to see u

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Anisha

@anishaumer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#726

Yay ur bck!!!!

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Shahida

@Inshira

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Posted: 16 years ago

#727

I jus read all of ur ff wow that was long ur an excellent writer n plz do cont writin I loved it. Its a n excellent ff I luv the way u made their love story its different,😛