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@starasdf

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Posted: 16 years ago

#101

omgg gr8 updateee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ARGHHHHHHHH!! hate that Nandani

the girlfwend boyfwend convo between Raj-Naina wazz too cutee

just wonderin is this "Rahul" gonna cme in the story????

cont.soon

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jyothilakshmi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#102

the whole update was superb. i can't see naina and rajveer sufferring coz of nandini. please clear what ever doubt is there in between naina, raj, and nandini. i liked the way raj was protective and concerned about naina when she stepped in the pool at night coz of nandini.

loved the conversation between raj and naina, the understanding between shalini and yudi towards our lovable couples.

Please update the next part soon, can't wait any longer

take care and best wishes

jyothi

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: starasdf

omgg gr8 updateee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ARGHHHHHHHH!! hate that Nandani

the girlfwend boyfwend convo between Raj-Naina wazz too cutee

just wonderin is this "Rahul" gonna cme in the story????

cont.soon

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i m glad u like it

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: jyothilakshmi

hi

the whole update was superb. i can't see naina and rajveer sufferring coz of nandini. please clear what ever doubt is there in between naina, raj, and nandini. i liked the way raj was protective and concerned about naina when she stepped in the pool at night coz of nandini.

loved the conversation between raj and naina, the understanding between shalini and yudi towards our lovable couples.

Please update the next part soon, can't wait any longer

take care and best wishes

jyothi

i m glad u like it

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

ON THE TREK TRAIL]

Shalini's walkie-talkie bursts alive with life…..

"Ma'am…ma'am there's a problem…she's ….she's all red…..i donno what to do…..i mean….pata nahi kaise…..i mean eik minute thik thi….phir….oh ma'am….mein kya karu…hello ma'am….can u hear me??....ma'am please reply….ma'am please…."

The voice on the other end was totally panic-stricken…..stammering words out….in a hope that dr. Shalini could comprehend the…..and being dr.Shalini….she did of course understand the shaking words…

"Cadet Huda…take a few deep breaths……..tum aur nandini waha se hilna math…..mein abhi pahunchti hoon…..tumhare tree ke pass ka bark no. kya hain…"

A visibly shaken Huda looks around at the marked tree nearest to him…

"96 ma'am…."

"Oh good…..hum pass hi mein hain…we'll juz reach there…

But before cutting off the line….she felt obliged to relieve him of some of his unwanted tension….

"And Cadet Huda…."

"Yes ma'am?"

"Don't worry. I KNOW ki wo bilkul thik hain."

The line is cut off….

Shalini starts walking without a word towards Huda nd Nandini…..Yudi follows….no questions r asked by him…..a true gentleman….he knows better than 2 bombard an upset nd nervous lady with questions……but wait a minute….she didn't look upset nd was not in the bit nervous…..infact…unless his eyes were playing nasty tricks on him….she seemed 2 him……..AMUSED!!!!!

What was up??....he had heard enough of the conversation to know that Huda was nervous…..nd if he was….why wasn't Shalini??.....onli once they reach Huda could he make sense of the situation…..

So he followed Shalini…in silence…..no questions asked.

Yudi nd Shalini weren't that far off frm Huda nd Nandini….they reached there in a few minutes….

On seeing Nandini, Yudi let out an audible gasp….

"Shit….What the??......Ma'am……shit….r u all right?"

He stepped back a little afraid of the sight that welcomed him…..

I wouldn't blame him….after all nandini's condition was indeed very very bad.

Covered in red boils nd itchy rashes all over her body…..she did quiet look a fright!!!

"Ma'am….accha hua aap aa gaye…pata nahi nandini ma'am ko kya hua hain…"

"Relax Cadet Huda….aab mein aa gayi hoon na…."

Huda nods slightly, wiping his sweaty brow with a just as sweaty palm…..

"Par dude….ye…..ye hua kaise…"

"Pata….pata nahi…bas eik minute ma'am thik thi….aur phir acchanak…(points out to nandini)…..ye"

"Mein janti hoon ye kaise hua."

All three of them….Yudi, Huda nd Nandini(still in pain) look at her….

"Kaise ma'am??"

"Badmein batati hoon Cadet Huda…….pehle aap dono isse lijiye…"

She hands them a long piece of cloth( as much as a dupatta)

"……aur pas mein eik nadi hein….aapki maps pe wo marked hain….waha jakar isse pure tarah se gila karkar layiye…"

"Par ma'am, hamare pas to yahi par pani hain….usse hi use karlenge"

Yudi protests….nd Huda nods in agreement….

"Nahi…."

Shalini's voice is firm…

"Maine jo kaha…wahi karo…..now leave…."

In different situations they would have argued with her….bt the present situation nd her stern expression makes them do otherwise….nd they oblige to her demand…

Both of them walk away towards the lake without another word….

[NEAR TREE 96]

Still wimpering in pain….Nandini looks up at Shalini……

"Pata nahi mujhe kya ho raha hain….shayad helicopter bulana padenga….aur mujhe camp wapas jana padega….."

Shalini smiles in amusement….

"I can't believe u Nandini….Camp wapas jane ke liye tum aapne aap ko bhi itne dard mein dal sakti hoon…..ye maine kabhi nahi socha tha….."

She pauses…

"……ya shayad soccha tha."

She gives Nandini a sweet mischevious smile….

"Mein….mein kuch samjhi nahi….."

"Samjhogi bhi kaise….tum to isske baare mein kuch janti hi nahi hoon"

"Kiske baare mein….."

What crap is Shalini speaking, wonders Nandini…..isn't she frightned seeing Nandini's state??

Shalini smiles nd calmly sits next to Nandini…..

"Pata hain Nandini, mujhe apni padhai karte samay…..eik thesis karna pada….uss thesis mein…humme academy mein se eik sathi cadet ki medical report par thesis karna tha……aur pata hain mujhe kaun mila??"

Seeing the look of horror on Nandini's face, Shalini smiles in acknowledgement…..

"Bilkul sahi samjhi Nandini….mujhe tumhara report mila tha…..tab kya pata tha ki us thesis ka payda itne saalo baad honga…..tumhe jungle ke red berries se allergy hain na……"

A look of defeat spreads over Nandini's face, then she realizes smthing nd smiles…..

She looks up at Shalini….

"Par tumhare pas…."

Shalini interrupts her as she realizes what Nandini wants 2 say…..

Shalini says with a sweet, purposeful drag…..

"Don't worry Nandini…..akhir dost hi to dost kein kaam aate hain…..haina??"

She puts her hand into her purse and voila!!!, out comes "ZEREPHORIN"

ZEREPHORIN is used to cure the mild "jungle red berry allergy" in people….

"Aab to tumhe camp jane ki zaroorat nahi padegi….haina??..........mujhe doubt that kit um aisa kuch karongi issiliye aane ke eik minute pehle hi maine ye dawai bag mein rakh di thi…..ye lo"

Nandini grudgingly accepts the medicine…..

Just the Yudi nd Huda cm up with the wet cloth…

"Ma'am ye lijiye…."

They hand over the wet cloth 2 Shalini

"Thank u Cadets……Maine Nandini ko dawai de di hain…"

"Par unhe hua kyat ha??"

"Ghabrane ki koi baath nahi hain Cadet Huda…..Nandini ko red berries se allergy hain…ussi ka reaction hua tha"

"Red berries??.....Par wo kaha se aaye??"

Shalini gives Nandini a huge smile….

"Main bhi yahi punchne wali thi…..batao Nandini…ye allergy to sirg berries ko khane se hoti hain…"

Huda continues…

"Agar aapko allergy hain…to aapne berries khaya hi kyon??"

"ah….wo main….haan……wo maine galti se kha lit hi…."

"Galti se??"

"Haan….mera matlab….red berries ke bhi bahut types hote hain na…to mujhe nahi pata tha ki ye wo berries hain jinse mujhe allergy hoti hain….."

Shalini suddenly speaks up……

"Ab aap Cadet Huda ke saath to nahi ja sakti…u'll slow him down….eik minute…mein major nair se baath karti hoon"

Inspite of all that had happened, Nandini still has a flicker of hope about going back 2 the base after hearing this…

Shalini walks a little away frm the other 3 nd switches on her walkie-talkie,

"Major Nair…can u hear me…"

"Bolo dr. shalini……koi problem hain…..???"

"Yes sir."

Shalini goes on to explain the situation……

After a few minutes on the walkie-talkie, she cmes back 2 join the other 3 trekkers….

"Maine Major Nair se baath kar li hain……yudi aur huda…..tum dono aapne-aapne routes follow karonge, par akele jaonge…bina aapne mentor ke….don't wrry….tumhare marks deduct nahi honge…..main aur nandini koi aur route se aayenge….now u can leave."

"Yes ma'am…."

Both yudi nd huda go off in their respective routes.

[MAJOR NAIR]

Major nair couldn't have been happier…his plan was going better than planned…..all through the trek he was wondering how to separate nandini nd huda….now, without him doing nething…god had separated them…..wow!!...now the fun was gonna start…

Huda, Better watch out!!

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jyothilakshmi

@jyothilakshmi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#106

Great. I liked this edition a lot. What a wicked lady nandini could be, she thought of going back to base so that she can have a watch on our Raj and naina, but so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet of Dr. Shalini how she understood raj and naina and their privacy, stopped nandini from going back to the base.

what is this u never mentioned anhything about our hero and his love, hope u do something about them but good and beautiful in the next update.

eagerly waiting for ur next updation. Please update soon.

take care and best wishes

jyothi

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jyothilakshmi

@jyothilakshmi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#107

great episode yaaar. how understanding and caring is dr. shalini 2 her friends that she understands what trouble can be expected from nandini to them that before hand only she takes all preventive measures. SHould say raj and naina are really lucky to have her as a friend and well wisher. Good that all the tricks of nandini got failed coz of shalini. She had made all plans to go back to base to spoil our Raj and naina's privacy, shalini very smartly spoiled her plan. Great job.

but why nothing is mentioned about our hero and his love, hope in the next update u shall do it.

please update soon, eagerly waiting to read about raj and naina and when they will confess about their love to each other. Hope they will do the same very soon.

take care and best wishes

jyothi