~Mahi*Shabd~fan-fic *The Test*~PART 6pg12 - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part, Ouma! Loved Mahi and Shabd's dance and song item! 😳
Plz continue sooooon!

Pallavi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
awsome part~ very cute and the song you chose for MS was perfect! 😊
Shabd's past???????????????
Edited by Chick91 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
very nice. keep it up. love mahi and shabd romantic moments
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
hey ouma jaanu...how u doing yaar. ur mahi shabd fan fic is rocking yaar! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😛😛😛 Thanks everyone!😛

~ Kaju u not on msn anymore!😭 Thanks fro reading😳

Luv ya..

Ouma
Edited by ~Ouma*n*Eijaz~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great job, you are doing here! please comtinue when you have time! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey,

~ Sorry updates after a while..😛

Part 5

The party finally came to an end, Soni had decided to keep the piece of paper to her self, she was confused with what she should do, if she showed it Mahi then problems would arise between MS, but she didn't want that to happen (flashbacks of MS dance) but if she didn't tell Mahi then she'll be betraying Mahi because if something did happen between Mahi and Shabd then Soni will be responsible because she never warned Mahi.

Soni stayed up all night walking from one end of her room to the other trying to figure out what was the best thing to do. She sat down on the edge of her bed and looked at the piece of paper again she read it again; she had to talk to Shabd before doing anything.

Meanwhile at the Sareen house Mahi was fast asleep, but Shabd was in his study with the envelope again that had the cut pieces of paper in it, he glued each piece down on a piece card, fitting them together so he get the perfect image. It took him a while but he got there, when he looked down at the final piece he couldn't help thinking he had seen the eyes somewhere, his seen so many models, but these eyes belonged to someone he was familiar with, he got up and walked up to his shelf and started flipping through the photo albums. His bound to find this girl somewhere…as he flicked through, the phone started ringing, he looked at his watch.. who could be calling at this time.

He walked picked up the phone;

S: Hello,

So: Shabd Jiju..

Shabd was confused but gave a little smile..

S: Aree Soni, tum isss waqt, Mahi toh..

So: Shabd jiju, mujhe appse bhaat karni hai,

S: Mujhse, kyon kuch hua?

So: Nahin kuch milla, app ki ghar main, main itni confused hoon, app pls mujhko kaal mil sathe hai.

Now Shabd was very confused, why in the world did Soni want to meet him, he always had a feeling Soni didn't like him much, but then why did she want to meet him. He agreed to meet her tomorrow morning. Shabd put the phone down and started flicking through his photo albums again..

There was a knock on the door, Shabd turned around…in a hurry he dropped the photo album on his desk. He knew it was Mahi and she wouldn't be happy if she found out he was doing work at this time.

Mahi opened the door and peered through, her eyes half closed.. she spoke in a tired voice..

M: Shabd kaun tha aur is waqt, fitte mu uska..

Shabd laughed a nervous laugh..

S: Urrm Mahi, chale koi nahin tha..

M: Agar koi nahin tha, toh phone kyon bajthi?

Shabd rolled his eyes, Mahi was not in the right state of mind, she was half asleep, she could hardly stand up straight..

S: Neend se utti kyon tum,

He rolled her eyes, and walked up to her, and picked her up.

S: Now I have to pick you and take you to bed..patta hai tum kitne heavy ho?

Mahi hardly awake replied back..

M: Fitte Mu..

S: Whatever..

He walked down the corridor towards their bedroom, holding Mahi and then when they entered their room he placed her on the bed and put the bed covers over her about to sneak off to his study again. But even though Mahi was half asleep, she knew what he was going to do, she grabbed his arm,

M: Math jao, soh jao,

She tugged his arm.. Shabd rolled his eyes..

He sat down next to her, and waited for her to fall asleep, while he sat down looking at her he couldn't stop thinking about Soni, why did she want to speak to him, he a had a gut feeling it was about the photo.

*****

It was the next morning, Shabd got out hsir ed sports car and walked up to the park where Soni told him to meet her. Soni who had a confused expression on her face walked from one to the other holding the piece of paper in hr hand..

S: Soni,

She turned around to see Shabd.

Meanwhile back at the SraeenMansion, Mahi had finished clearing the table DM helped her. Mahi looked at the clock she had nothing much to do she deicded to go upstairs and frame some of the photos from yesterdas party.

Back at the park, Soni glared at Shabd..Shabd looked back at her,

S: Yeh? Yeh ky hai?

SO: Parre (read) kar dehklo

Shabd looked at her confused…

*****

At the Sareen house Mahi sat down, she had everything she needed, she pcikd up the first picture which was Jr Veer, she gave the photo a lil kiss and started framing it.

*****

Back at the park, Shabd read the piece of paper, he was confused he r ead it again and again, looking at in horror…

Soni looked at him, confused..

*****

Mahi began to frame her fourth photo; the last one, which was a photo of her, Brij, Moni, Soni, Prince and Rajji.

*****

Shabd looked at Soni, unable to say anything..

S: Soni, yeh tumme kaha milla?

So: Kaal Party main, yeah kaun hai…kya chahthi hai?? App jhaanthe hai usko

****

Mahi, looked at the rest of the photo, she decided to put them in a photo album, the only place where she would find photo albums was in Shabds study, she got up to go there.

*****

Shabd: Yeh toh, Shayad yeah Re..Reema hoghi..

Soni looked confused, she confused him.

So: Reema??

Shabd looked at the piece of paper, flashbacks came into his mind, the photo of those eyes, it was Reema's eeys..

*****

Mahi who was in the study, got a phot album out of Shabds cupboard she looked at his desk, no surprise, it was a mess, she went up to it and then noticed the card which had the eyes glued to it…

M: Yeh Photo phir se (she remembered the envelope that she found in Shabds pocket)

~ Thanks for reading..comment pls..
~ Sorry fro any errors, didn't have time to proof read!😆

Luv ya..

Ouma
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ouma dear loved it gr88 part ...continue sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was awsome hun..hope nothing bad happens.... 😃 😃 😃

❤️Love Ya❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
Very nice and interesting part please continue soon!😃😳

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