~Mahi*Shabd~fan-fic *The Test*~PART 6pg12 - Page 8

Awesome part.... i wonder wats gunna hpeen wid dis reema?

wow. continue sooon. that was awesome.

great part, hummm looks like this meera girl...whateva..lol..is blackmailing him..does she like him? trying to break them apart! she betta stay away from ma cute jodi..lol...great part..continue soon.

Thanks everyone!!!!👏👏👏

Luv ya..

Ouma

Fabulous job, Ouma! 👏 👏 👏
I loved their little conversation--fitteh mooh and whetever! 😆 😆 😆
Interesting mystery developing!

BTW I have a name for Jr. Veer---how abt Arjun? 😳 😃

Pallavi

😛😛😛..Thanks guys! Pallu di! I luv the name..

~ From today on Jr Veer is now called Arjun! Such a cute name!😛

~ Thanks Pallu di!

Luv ya..

Ouma

great part!! 👏 👏
continue soon!

1stly, i'm soooooo sorry 4 not bein able 2 read the updated parts but its only cos i got exams (GCSE's) n i reeeely should NOT b on IF rite now n n i wantd 2 say awwwww thank u sooo much 4 ur good luck! that woz sooo sweet xx luv ya! xx
n abat the ff, omg.. i had sum reeely big.. almost a cravin lol 2 jus read this ff 2day, n it took me quite a while 2 find it.. but o wel init lol
i definetly gotta say
i reeeely fort dat d 3rd part d blouse scene woz sooo cute!! 😳 but d bst bit had 2 b where shabd sorta dint want mahi 2 go n held her arm awwwww!! in part 4 yus, that "vaada raha" song 4rm Babul is sooo sweet n i fort u added it in beautifully!
n finally, OMG! the last part..! wow! i LOVED it!.. n who the hel is this girl?!!!!!!! she bettr not come in between shabd n mahi now ok!!! i fort it woz soooo cute where sleepy mahi woz telin shabd 2 go 2 sleep aswel.. awwwwww! that part woz sooo sweet
continu wen u can!! lovin ur ff sooooooooo much! fanx 4 writin it sooo beautifully, n LOADSA luk wiv ur exams 2!!
xx!MWAH!xx

Hey guys,

Enjoy😛..Thanks for reading..and appriciate the comments..

Part 6

Shabd looked at Soni regretfully, and told her everything about Reema, a past which was sort of haunting..Soni looked at him horrified..

S: Shabd yeh ladki Mahi ko to kuch kareghe nahin..

Shabd looked away, even he didn't know what was to happen, what if Reema became too obsessive and took things far? Last time he was lucky she left him, but now she is back and it didn't sound like she was just going to leave, he gently whispered.

Sh: I don't think she'll do anything…

Soni let out a sigh of relief…. But Shabd hadn't finished…he added on yet…

Soni looked at him,

S: Matlab! Mahi ko sab kuch bhaa..

Sh: Nahin…Please don't tell her anything..agar usko ye sab pata chalegha toh phir..

S: Agar kal kuch hojaye…. Ye Reema agar Mahi ko kuch karle..to phir??

Sh: Kuch nahin kareghe…karna se pehle who mujhse ek baar milleghe….

Back at the Sareen mansion later on, Mahi had done everything she possibly could, it was getting sort of dark, she sat on the sofa, waiting..and waiting for Shabd..he did phone her and tell her he'll be late..but she didn't feel to good about it, she wanted to see him now..

She turned on the telly and started flipping through channels, the house was empty apart from Mahi and Shabds siter, who Mahi felt didn't like her very much..

Mahi flicked through, until she came to a channel that was playing Keh raha hai..(from that dance thing..lol) Mahi stopped she smiled as she re collected those memories of her and Shabd dancing.

Instantly everything went dark, the tv switched off, Mahi sat up, she looked around,

M: Yeh kya hua..lights ko..

She got up, she couldn't see a thing, but she new her bedroom quite well now, she made out where everything was..she muttered as she walked around slowly feeling everything..

M: Lights ko aaj jhaana tha, woh bhi jab koi ghar main nahi hai….

She got to the lights and tried to turn them on, but like she assumed; the lights were gone, it was silent and dark, Mahi felt a shudder but she ignored it. She started feeling around, to find the drawer where the candles were..

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Soni sat in her bedroom, pacing up and down again, was it right of her not to tell Mahi everything, her life could be in danger, she sat down on her bed, why was it always Mahi, can't she stay happy or is she always meant to be getting these life changing shocks in her life??

What if something did happen to Mahi because of Reema…Reema…she remembered what Shabd had told her about Reema…she shuddered…she looked up…pls save Mahi from any trouble she pleaded..

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Mahi had placed candles everywhere in the room, the room was full of a warm orangy glow, she sat down and smiled out her self, if Shabd was here he would have surely made this a romantic moment.. She looked around at the candles, the room was filled with smell of scents Vanilla, Strawberry..etc..

Mahi enjoyed it, Mahi suddenly noticed a shadow, a shadow that she thought had just moved, she looked to the other side if there was anything there, but it was empty..

Mahi roled her eyes, she was imaging things, she looked down to chck the time, suddenly the room was filled with the noise of something breaking, Mahi jumped, what the hell, she got up to see one off the vars in front her room was broken.. bits of china was scattered all over the floor, she bent down to pick a bit up, Ouch she gasped, one of the sharp edges had cut her finger, she looked down, she saw another shadow move, it looked like it had stepped inside her bedroom, Mahi was certain now that someone else was in the house… Could it be Shabds sister..

M: Kaun hai…bollo kaun hai..

It struck her, could be Shabd playing a joke

M: Dehko Shabd agr yea koi prank hai, then Fitte Mu, meri haath kaati hai,

She moved closer towards on the tables which had candles all over it, her intention was to get one of the candles..

M; Shabd sun rahe ho, dehkoo kitna dhook ra hai, aur kitna khoon behra hai..

--: Aur bhi behaghe…jab main tumme khatam karlonghi

Mahi's eyes widened, an unknown voice echoed in her ears, there was someone else in the room, she turned around..

M: KAU…

Before she could finish she screamed, a sharp knife was pointing right at her face, she couldn't make out who was holding it, a lady from the voice, a lady with long hair..Mahi screamed even more, the knife seemed to be getting closer and closer..

~ Hope u liked..

Luv ya..

Ouma

Originally posted by: Chotii

1stly, i'm soooooo sorry 4 not bein able 2 read the updated parts but its only cos i got exams (GCSE's) n i reeeely should NOT b on IF rite now n n i wantd 2 say awwwww thank u sooo much 4 ur good luck! that woz sooo sweet xx luv ya! xx
n abat the ff, omg.. i had sum reeely big.. almost a cravin lol 2 jus read this ff 2day, n it took me quite a while 2 find it.. but o wel init lol
i definetly gotta say
i reeeely fort dat d 3rd part d blouse scene woz sooo cute!! 😳 but d bst bit had 2 b where shabd sorta dint want mahi 2 go n held her arm awwwww!! in part 4 yus, that "vaada raha" song 4rm Babul is sooo sweet n i fort u added it in beautifully!
n finally, OMG! the last part..! wow! i LOVED it!.. n who the hel is this girl?!!!!!!! she bettr not come in between shabd n mahi now ok!!! i fort it woz soooo cute where sleepy mahi woz telin shabd 2 go 2 sleep aswel.. awwwwww! that part woz sooo sweet
continu wen u can!! lovin ur ff sooooooooo much! fanx 4 writin it sooo beautifully, n LOADSA luk wiv ur exams 2!!
xx!MWAH!xx

😳😳..Aww hun ur so sweet, I haven't updated in a while either coz of gcse's hope u do well! Good Luck again..Thanks for the comment..really appreciate them! and yeah..i need that luck..im too addicted to IF!😆 Glad u liked all the parts...tried my best..😳

~ Thanks again..ur soo sweet!

Luv ya..

Ouma