~Mahi*Shabd~fan-fic *The Test*~PART 6pg12 - Page 5

aww this was sooo romantic...looking forward to part 4

~Rashi~

OOOHHH Thats really romantic, Ouma!
Daroon likhchhish! Plz continue soon! 😳 😃

Pallavi

Hey..

Thnku everyone! 😳
~ I felt so bad about writing the previous part..for obvious reasons...
~ Thanks for the encouragement..next part will be up 2day or 2maro..

Luv ya..

Ouma

Originally posted by: ~Ouma*n*Eijaz~

Hey..

Thnku everyone! 😳
~ I felt so bad about writing the previous part..for obvious reasons...
~ Thanks for the encouragement..next part will be up 2day or 2maro..

Luv ya..

Ouma

You better make it today😡😆

Continue soon😃

yes, hurry up! can't wait much longer!

omg i luv ur ff plz continue!! 😳

Hey,

Thanks everyone fro waiting, I've continued finally😛
~ Enjoy....😛

Part 4:

Mahi had picked up the phone, it was only the guard, asking if he should let in the guest, the party had finally started.
The Khurana's had come with Jr Veer (can't actually think a name for the baby!)
Everyone adored the little baby there were many discussions about which side the family the baby looked Durga arguing mostly that Jr Veer was just like her son. Well Mahi argues back saying that Jr Veer had Rajji's eyes, discussions or light arguments should I say continued on who the baby looked like the most. Everyone had bought the baby presents from little toys to clothes to even money, Rajji and Veer politely thanked them all. Exchanging smiles at each other at times. After a little while you can say that Jr Veer got bored of all these adult fighting over him, he had falled into a deep sleep, Rajji gently picked him up and gave him kiss on the forehead, Mahi and Rajji went upstairs and securely left him to carry on sleeping Mahi and Shabds bedroom. Rajji sat by her baby admiring while Mahi, closed the windows, suddenly amobile phone started going off, Mahi turned around,

M: Oooo so sorry, uff phone kaha, (she hurried around the room trying to locate the phone before Jr Veer woke up)

R: Jaldhi Mahi!
M: Wait wait,

She stopped right in front of a chair which had Shabd's blazer left on it, typical she thought to her self, she shacked her head and received the phone, when she was getting the phone out she accidently pulled out a few other things from his pocket, but instead of picking them she picked up the phone..

M: Hello, (she said in a low voice)

There was no reply..
M: Hello…(who ever it was had put the phone down on Mahi, Mahi frowned)
R: No answere?
M: Haan, joh bhi tha, mujhse bhaat nahin karna chahthe the, chalo akhir ye kaun tha (she checked the received calls list, the number was private, she thought to herself, a private number that didn't answer to her voice..hmmm..)

Mahi then bent down to pick up all the things she had dropped, which were just a handkerchief, a memory card from Shabds camera and an envelope, she turned around and read what it said ..(my Shabd..)

Mahi read it again jut to check if she read it right, who's Shabd she thought to herself! She opened it up, and again all the little bits of cut out paper fell on the floor; Mahi became confused, just like how her husband was earlier!

There was knock on the dorr, Rajji who was watching Mahi a little confused, and was patting Jr Veer at the same time got up and opened it..
It was DM, asking why it was taking them so long and to come and join the party everybody was dancing and having fun, Mahi turned around, quickly stuffing all the paper into the envelope,

M: Urrm, I'm coming,
R: Haan chalo Mahi,

DM, blew a kiss to the sleeping Jr Veer and all 3 walked downstairs.

Mahi walked over to Shabd who gave a smile and handed him his phone

M: Next time, kahi par bhull math jaana, (frown on her face)
S: Whatever, (Shabd was enjoying the party to much, Jeet was singing..)

Both standing next to each other watched Jeet singing, Mahi looked up to Shabd's face who was enjoying himself, thought to herself was doing anything wrong by keeping it a secret that she had once loved Jeet. Would it ever cause a problem between them in the future?

After Jeet had finished his signing, he declared that it was now time for couples to dance, starting of with Veer and Rajji, the spotlights moved over to them, Rajji looked down shyly. Veer gave a big grin but then realized what Jeet had just said, before he could do anything it was too light an eager Jeet had ran upto Rajji and started pulling her towards the centre of the big hall, Rajji shaking her head saying No.

J: Aapko dance karna hoga, aapki party toh hai, kaise chalgha, bhabhi c,mon (holding the microphone to his mouth still so he could be heard)

Rajji stopped, she could feeling her self blushing, Durga glared at her, Jeet looked around, where had Veer vanished too?)

J: Bhaiyaaa!!!!! ~ Police Offi….(someone tapped him on the back)

Jeet turned around to see Veer, Jeet knew it was his que to move into the audience…
Veer smiled at shy Rajji and lifted his hand towards her, Rajji was blushing more then ever now, he whispered to her,
V: Would you like to dance?
Rajji looked away and nodded, the song Vaada Raha began playing..
They danced all the way through the song, a few other couples came to join, everyone watched admiringly.

--Veer --Vaada raha(Vaada raha pyaar se pyaar kaAb hum na honge judaa) - 2Yeh meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda --Rajji--Chaahe tumhe kis kadar mera dilTumko nahin hai pataYeh meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda…(song continues)

The song to an end, Veer and Rajji had their foreheads touching each other, the lights came back on everyone clapped and laughed, Brij had huge smile on his face how happy he was to see his daughter happy!

Immediately the second song started playing..
(The song is Keh Raha Hai from Babul, it's a really nice song, its not slow because I don't think slow songs would suit MS much, its more of a bubbly song, if you have it play it while your reading this.. your'll enjoy the song I love it!)

The song began, Mahi who was still clapping suddenly had her hand grabbed buy Shabd who pulled her to the centre of the hall, Mahi in total shock looked around, everyone had began to cheer, Mahi looked at Shabd her face wore and expression that pleaded him not to make her dance, she had totally changed her mind now…Shabd began whistling. (the song has a whistling bit in it..) Dm watched with a big grin on her face..

Keh rahaa hai dil deewana jaane jaa khaake kasam

~ Shabd began to sing…he walked around Mahi and was leaning against her, Mahi who was behind him facing the other side, gave a nervous grin to the guests..

Keh rahaa hai dil deewana jaane jaa khaake kasam

~ Shabd this time grabbed Mahi's hand and pulled her to face him, he was still singing..

Hum ishq mein mar jaayenge
Kuch bhi sanam kar jaayenge

~ He bent down on his knew, lifting his arm out…

Chhodenge na daaman yaar ka

~ He got up quickly and grabbed her hand…

Wada raha wada raha wada raha pyar ka – 2

~ He twirled her around and around, Mahi laughed, a bunch of people came to join them..

Keh rahaa hai dil deewana jaane jaa khaake kasam
~ Mahi sang still being twirled around by Shabd…

(The music played and MS did a bit of slow dancing… when Shabd came across this pretty girl and left Mahi half way through the dance, she folded her arms and watched him, about to walk away..)

Dooriyan na ab zara ho jaana

~ He moved towards her

Saanson ke darmiyaan

~ He pulled her towards him and his face gently touched hers..

Chhedti hai dhadkano ko pal pal
Mausam ki narmiyaan
~ He smelt her hair..slow dancing…

To aaja chaahaton ki shabnam pi le
Lamhon mein sadiyon ko ji le

~ Mahi moved away and began to run, she ran around Brij and Dm and Rajji…moving away from Shabd who was trying to grab her..suddenly he disappeared.. Mahi looked around…

Keh raha hai pal suhaana jaane jaa khaake sanam

~ Someone tapped her, it was Shabd, he gave her smile and began to twirl her round again.

(The song continued, MS danced and Mahi sang..)

Keh rahaa hai har fasaana jaane jaa khaake kasam

~ Mahi and Shabd danced…as Mahi sang..

Keh rahaa hai dil deewana jaane jaa khaake kasam
~ SHabd sang both still dancing..

Hum ishq mein mar jaayenge
Kuch bhi sanam kar jaayenge
~ Shabd took a few steps backwards and ruffled his hair while singing.

Chhodenge na daaman yaar ka
~ Mahi ran up to him while singing put her arm round him..

Wada raha
Wada raha
~ He picked her up and started spinning her around..
Wada raha pyaar ka
Wada raha
Wada raha
Wada raha pyaar ka...

~ He put her down and both started laughing, everyone cheered, and DM did that Nazar thing…😳

Jr Veer had began to cry. Soni went upstairs to go and get him, she walked into the room, where he was screaming, she smiled and said aww, she sat on the bed where he was, she looked down surprised as she noticed he was holding a little piece of paper, she took it off him and read it,

~ Shabd; I left you a few years back, not knowing what I had done,
I ruined my life the moment I walked away from you thinking I had better thing in store,
When things went wrong, I felt I could handle them,
but as time went by I realized that I only needed you,
I'm back again, this time I promise I won't leave you…

Soni read with a frown,
So: Yeh Kya hai????

~ What did ya think..
Comment..

Luv ya..

Ouma

omg.. soni.. shes the confused one tho.. i dont even know whats the rite thing to do.. give it to mahi and its over.. give it to shabd n he is going to hide it.. anyone else reps over....

ab soni kya karege.. mere samaj ke bahir hai

continue sooooonn

wow ouma your story is rocking toooooo gooooooood continue soooon 👏

🤗 Thanks!!!😛😛

Luv ya..

Ouma