DESTINY + ATTRACTION (NEW RN FIC) - Page 37

Jul 7(4 days ago) TIME: 12:OO P.M ( TIME'S UP!!)

finally d end had arrived....he was pushed up on d dias....
the cord wound round his neck..tightened...
he struggled to draw air...a mask covering his face....

the lever was pulled!!!!!!!


I LOVE YOU NAINA!!!


aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


he found himself falling in a small pit....not too deep...

wat d hell!!...yeh ho kya raha hai...


THUMP!!!



OUCH!!



someone fumbled wid his cord, his mask....as he tried to breathe...
koi uske haath khol raha tha....


as his eyes opened slowly....
he found himself lying in a gloomy cubicle...
d place was too small...he could make out shadows standing...
shaking him...

"raj...raj...tu theek hai??"

"navin!!!..."
his happiness surpassed everything else...
"aalekh, huda , yudi.......rehmaan....to tumne inki mada kari...
shukriya...."

dey all hugged each other...a task dat proved difficult due
to the limited space & the time...dat ticked away....

"raj...yeh le gun!...ready guys...1...2...3..out!!"
huda shouted.....

wid d speed of lightening...all of dem jumped out...
including raj....whose pains lied forgotten in d company of his dear friends..

lots of shots were fired....
all 5 of dem distributed demselves....
d guards obviously taken aback took time to gain consciousness...
something dat proved to be a benefit for dese guys....
dey ducked .....saving demselves as well as each other....

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a voice rang out..............


SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

credit goes to CRYSTALSPARK(DIPIKA)

Thanks a lot for the update

too good dipika


pl continue soon

Thanx for the update..gr8 parts..pl. continue

wow yaar wat a plan to save raj....great job.. 😛

meanwhile naina sat in d car tensed....
itni der kyon lag rahi hai....

shit!...mujhe andar hona chahiye tha...
aise to main paagal ho jaaoongi!!

she hid her face in her hands...

"kya hua??...tension ho rahi hai!"
azmi smiled....

"tum...so u'r up....khush ho na...
aaj tumhaari wajah se mere sabhi dost wahaan museebat mein hai..."

"abhi tak to nahi the...haan ab zaroor hai!"
he smiled...

his smile terrified her....
kuch to gadbad hai!!

"kya matlab??"
she asked innocently....

"kuch khaas nahin...ab tak to sab tapak chuke honge"
seeing her eyes widen in horror....he continued..
satisfied wid her reaction.."woh rehmaan jis par tum log itna bharosa
kar rahe the....woh mere saath mila hua hai...
he saw me tied d other day....humaara plan tha to get u guys in dere
....ab wait karo....ek ek kar ke tumhaare doston ki dead bodies..."

slap!!!!!
she slapped him across his face...

shut up!!....
tears running down her face....

she panicked...knowing every word he said was true....

in an impulse she was out!!...running towards d prison wid a
gun in her hand.....
..............................................

AALEKH!!!!!!!!!!

firing blindly dey all rushed to their friend's side
who was lying down in a pool of blood...

"jaao...yahaan...se...goli ne sirf mere shoulder ko ...graze kiya hai....
keep firing...main do minute..mein uth jaaoonga!!"

dey all nodded...wen dey saw dat he was right....

raj turned around..wondering who'd shot his friend....

he was shocked at wat he saw....
"tum!!...rehmaaaaaaaaaan!!...."

like a maniac he got hold of him
kicking him....slapping him...

"raj..raj chod usse!!....kill him..."
sayin dis huda shot him.....

at d same time yudi & navin got hold of d general....
& shot him dead....

after sometime...tired to d bone dey looked around....
sab khatam ho gaya tha....dere was blood all around...
guards dead......d prison seemed empty....

"guys...lets move out of here...
jisse pehle koi aaye...." yudi called out...

"chal huda....aalekh ko utha" navin called out...

"aaja..take my suport...." yudi told raj....
raj smiled muttering a thnx...deadly tired now....

as dey stepped out in d backyard....
from where dey'd planned their escape...
dey saw someone approaching dem...

immediately attentive dere guns were taken out....
pointing it out to d figure ...dey all called out..

"hands-up!!"

hearing so many voices...naina got scared...
but she kept nearing dat group.....

"aage mat aana...aur we'll shoot...!!"

sighing...recognizing d voice....
naina rushed towards dem....
& hugged raj.....


AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!
SOMEONE WAS SHOT YET AGAIN!!

credit goes to crystalspark(dipika)

hey great part........who is shot 😕 😕 oh my god plz reveal the suspense 😆 😆

hey great part

pl continue soon

it is really interesting

hey guys...thnx a ton for readin continually!!
thnx for updatin varsha....
i hope u guys know dat d fic's bout 2 end!!
just 2-3 more updates left...
orkut par it's already over....

atleast last update ke baad acchi si reply kar dena...
tellin me whether u liked d ending or not...
waise i guess there r just 3-4 readers here...
anyway...hope u liked my fic....
cyaaaaaa sooooooon...

i'll be back soon with yet another fic called
lethal instincts...
hope u read dat too...

byeeeeeeeeeee

as naina ran towards her friends wid a smile on her face....
dey aimed their guns at her...it was dark inside & dey obviously didn't recognize her...

"raj"..she called out...

all arms went down....a horrorified look came across dose faces...

"naina!!!..." dey exclaimed together...

limping raj moved forward.....extremely happy to see her...
yet terrified for her...

the others moved away...to let raj & naina greet each other...

she ran & hugged him...
tears streaming down her pretty face...

"naina...." he took her in his arms....
holding her tightly...treasuring her.....
trying to believe dat she was here...next to him.....

"tum andar kyon aayi??...we could've shot u!!"
he took her face in his hands....
lightly caressing her cheeks....his eyes teary....

"azmi ne kaha ki rehmaan uske saath....."
she shivered at the thought......

he held her trembling form....
realising dat she'd gone through a rough patch...

"he's dead naina....woh mar chuka hai...."

dey all came close to the pair....
"aalekh!!...yeh sab...." she looked stricken at d sight...

"kuch nahi hai...bas goli choo kar nikal gayi...apun theek hai"

naina hugged him tightly....

yudi & huda too gave her tight hugs....

"ahem-ahem....main bhi hoon shaayad....!!"
navin exclaimed..a teasing smile on his face..

"bh..bhaai..." she ran into his arms.....
he was glad dat he got d oppurtunity to see his lil sis again...

kissing her on the forehead he exclaimed...
"tujhe andar nahi aana chaahiye tha....
ab jisse pehle kuch gadbad ho...
let's get out of the backdoor.....!"

"i bet rehmaan ne nahi socha hoga ki hum
itne logon ko maar kar yahaan se nikal sakte hain...."
huda wondered loudly.....

"don't be overconfident huda....we're not out of here as yet!"
yudi reminded dem....

as dey walked together....supporting each other...their guns out...
naina found herself next to raj....