DESTINY + ATTRACTION (NEW RN FIC) - Page 39

"indeed brigadier!!....indeed....
the oh-so disciplined SDDU head...Brigadier Arindam S. Kapoor...
kaun soch sakta tha ki tum....our own head...would shame our nation!

tumne bahut dukh diye hain sabko...but now...
i have permission to shoot u....abhimanyu ko sab pata hai Kapoor...
even if u did reach india...u'd be hanged!"

d brigadier started laughing....
"u think main waapis india jaa raha tha....
wat a fool u are??
waise i'm quite surprised u'r running around freely...."

before he knew he had 10 guards surroundin him....

"ah!!...phir phas gaye raj....how sad!!
i really pity you...
isse bhi le chalo saath...gira denge jab mood hoga!"
he sneered...

pushed inside d helicopter...
next to 3 other guards....
raj smiled....

he'd seen his weapon....

there were little bombs right at his feet....
he picked up one....
& waited for the right moment...
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"naina!..naina!..."
she was breathing wid immense difficulty now....

the waves on d machine nearby...were slowly flattening
approaching a line....

navin knew wat dat meant...

"doctor!!...doctor!..."he screamed

a smile appeared on naina's face...
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raj smiled....

it's time!!.....

he closed his eyes....

aashiq hoon main ,paagal hoon...
tere liye kuch bhi kar jaaoonga....
ishq mein tere jeeta hoon....
tere liye hi mar jaaoonga...

"i love you naina!!"
he screamed & his sound reverberated in d valley below....
the clouds heard him,
the sky heard him,
the mountains, d rivers, the birds....
all heard him........
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i love you raj.....
naina thought...

was it her last thought??

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as all d enemies stared in shock....
raj smiled....
& pulled d pin of d bomb wid his mouth...
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credit goes to crystalspark(dipika)

hey i am crying in this part yaar...NO MORE RAJ and NAINA 😭 i cant barley read more.... 😭

hey NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

i can see them die dear

aisa mat karna


but al in all a great FF

pl continue soon waiting for the end egarly

"i love you naina....my dear wife"

"i love you raj....my dear hubby"

many saw dat blast in d air....
a roar dat echoed everywhere.....
it was a scream....
a scream
of love....
of passion...
of sacrifice.....
of devotion.....
of brotherhood....
of freedom...
of loyalty...
& most importantly of friendship.....

friendship dat surpassed boundaries of religion, culture, caste....
friendship dat was ever-lasting!!

a scream full of tears, emotions....& undying love....

at d same time....
in an equally unfortunate event....
amidst her brother....her friends....
naina counted her last breath....

the clock struck d same second as 2 dear lovers were wiped from d face of earth....
both wid smiles...reflecting...peace & contentment ....

there it all ended....
the legend of love......

or was it a new beginning.....
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5 years later...

raj & naina sat hand-in hand....
while d others watched....

someone wid tears in their eyes....others wid a smile ...

smile dat called upon old memories...old reminiscences...

kehne ko saath apne
ek duniya chalti hai,
par chup ke is dil mein...
tanhaai palti hai....
bas yaad saath hai...
teri yaad saath hai....

a tear trickled down navin's eye....& shaalu hugged him...
fully understanding his torment...
his condition....

"naina...raj...chalo...bahut masti ho gayi!!"
ritu shouted.....

the 2 came running.....

"mom....i'm 5 years old....
& please call me captain rajveer huda!"

"me too aunty...i'm naina singh ahluwalia....
& i'll be a soldier like papa wen i grow up!"

2 little kids...wid lots of dreams in their eyes
went back to enjoy at their favourite beach....

a beach whose stories dey'd heard from their parents....

little naina loved dis place....
she loved her name....she knew she shared it wid her bhua....

raj too knew dat he'd been named after his parents friend.....

naina singh ahluwalia....daughter of navin & shaalu
rajveer huda.....son of amardeep huda & ritu....

one continues to wonder....
wat destiny has in store for dis pair....
dis naina & raj.....

will dey set a new love trend??
a trend dat no one could match!!

probably yes.....!!

with misty eyes all close friends....
aalekh & yudi uncle too....!
look at those two wonders remembering their naina & raj...
who dey knew had died for each other.....

hum rahein yaan na rahein kal....
kal yaad aayenge yeh pal...
pal yeh hai pyaar ke pal....
chal...aa mere sang chal...
chal...soche kya...
choti si hai zindagi....
kal...mil jaaye...to hogi...khush naseebi.....

shaam ka aanchal...
odh ke aayi dekho...
woh raat suhaani....
aa likh de hum dono milke
apni yeh prem kahaani.....

aane waali subaah jaane...
rang kya laaye deewaani....
meri chaahat...
ko rakh lena...jaise koi nishaani......

hum rahein yaan na rahein....
yaad aayenge woh pal...

the sunset showed a gleam of hope....
a hope...a plea dat their friends were happy...
together wherever they were!!

in another dimension,
another planet...
another world...

surrounded by the various realms....
naina & raj lay in each other's arms....
snuggled into each other....

the wind, water, earth, fire...heart...
all dese realms revered the two lovers...

agreed dey were a different species....came from a far-away place....
many light-years away...but their love was outstanding!!

nowhere had anyone heard a saga of passion as beautiful as dis one...

he kissed her deeply...

'dis sure is heaven!!..."

"hmmmm.." she enjoyed d warmth of his lips on her...

"awwwwwwwwwwww...
aap dono kya kar rahe ho!!??"

"navin!!...bhaag yahaan se..."
raj shouted...

"aye-aye captain......aa....dad!"
& d kid ran away...dancing around d tall trees..

"yeh navin naam ke saath koi problem hai kya??"

"wat!!?...of course not...kyon...?"

"why does navin...always spoil a romantic moment!!"
he thundered...

"shut-up!!...& i really miss bhaai....i hope dey knew we're doin gr8 here!!"

"tum kaho to God ko bol kar...
unhe bhi yahin...."

"raaaaaj!!..."

"ohhhhhh!!...come here....."

& he pulled her into his arms.....

lying naked in each other's arms....hidden by the tall grass...
their bodies slipping against each other...
dey relished d few moments....

"pehle pata hota.....ki itna mazaa aana hai...
to main yahaan pehle hi aa jaata!!"

the 2 laughed...& rolled off to sleep...
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destiny had played its role...
but their attraction had superceded their fate....

they were meant to be together...where ever dey went!!

mohabbat jisse baksh de zindgaani...
nahi maut par khatm uski kahaani......

their death was a new beginning...not the end!!

today they continue to play hide & seek with destiny &
attraction....but dis time round
they know one thing for sure.....



they won't die!!!!!!!!!!!!

for their spirit lives forever in our hearts..........

THE BEGINNING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THE END

-DIPIKA

GUYS THIS IS THE END N DIPIKA IS SOON GONA START A NEW FIC CALLED"LETHAL INSTINCTS"SO STAYTUNED TO IT........

hey very nice FF


good end liked it very much

when is she going to start her new FF

wil she be posting it here in IF?

pl reply

I guessed it right.Destiny naam hai story ka to end mein mar hi jayenge.O well it was nice I guess.

Your story has to contine and now in your story there has to be......


20 YEARS LATER.....