Anjaana Ehsaas: (AK) Part 27 Pg. 35 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
Excellent parts... jus read da last few.... they were awesome... im glad angad didnt run away... i wonder wats gunna happen to a-k now that they r married
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
Awesome part.
liked it.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
great part!! cant wait until the wedding night, cuz then a-k iwll finally talkk!! lol! continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 6

At Khanna House

Naina is doing arti. All the rituals have been done and Kripa is upstairs in her new room. She's is confused and scared because she doesn't know what is going to happen.

The door opens and our hero walks in.

He sits down next to Kripa. Both are worried and confused. He lifts Kripas dupatta. Kripa's looking down.

Angad – Umm… hi… Pata nahin mein apse yeh kaise kahoon lekin…umm… kya hai na, ke hum dono ek dusre ko…well… we don't know each other that well…isliye mein sochraha tha ke kyun na hum….welll….kyun na hum dost bane pehle.
Kripa - …………..
Angad – I'm sorry agar maine apka dil dukhaya ho to.
Kripa – Yeh aap kaisi baat kar rahe hai. Balki main to khush hoon ke yeh baat apne kahi. Mein bhi apse se yehi baat kehne wahli thi.
Angad – Abh aap jake change hojaye.
Kripa – Thikh hai. Kripa gets up and goes to the bathroom to get changed.When she comes out she finds Angad sleeping on the sofa. Kripa goes towards him. She lightly shakes him. He wakes up.
Kripa – Umm…aap bed pe sojaye na.
Angad – Nahin, aap bed pe soye, mein yehi thikh hoon.
Kripa – Lekin, yahan pe aap kaise soenge, mujhe pata hain ke apko sofa pe sona nahin pasand hai.
Angad – Yeh apko kaise pata.
Kripa – woh mujhe didi ne bataya tha isliye.
Angad – Achha, lekin aap sojaye, mein yehi thikh hoon.
Kripa – Aap mere pati hai, shayad hum dono mein pyaar nahin hain lekin pati patni hone ke nate hum dono ek bed par sosakhte hai. Mujhe koi aitraaz nahin hai.
Angad – Lekin…
Kripa – Lekin kuch nahin, hum dono bed pe soyenge, bas.
Angad – Thikh hai. Aur ek aur baat.
Kripa – Kya?
Angad – Agar hum dono friends hai, to phir aap mujhe aap kehke nahin bulayenge.
Kripa – Ok, lekin ek shart pe.
Angad – Kya?
Kripa – Aap bhi mujhe aap nahin kahenge.
Angad – Okay, deal. Friends?
Kripa – Friends. Achha chalo ab sojao. Kal phir reception pe bhi to jaana hai.

Okay I hope you guys liked this one. Plz comment.

Preview: Recepetion and a secret between Prithvi and Mishty revealed.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
i jus caught up.u r good
yaar these secrets are a big problem
well cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
hey!!read ur entire fanfic now.it rocks!!
continue asap 😊
Edited by chubbyangel - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
wow great story continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
👏 too good..oe hoe angad is sooo shareef bacha..heheh

cont soon... 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent part.... i hope there is no prob between mishty n prithvi!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 7
In Prithvi and Mishty's room

Mishty – (Sits next to Prithvi on bed while Prithvi is reading a magazine.) Prithvi, kya mein tumse ek baat pooch sakhti hoon?
Prithvi – Haan jaan, puchho. (Still looking at magazine)
Misthy – Tumne joote mujhe kyun diye.

Flashback
Prithvi goes to find shoes when he sees that Mishty has them. He walks up to her.
Prithvi – Mishty, yeh joote mujhe do.
Mishty – Nahin dungi.
Prithvi – Achha? (Looks at Mishty naughtily.)
Mishty turns around to leave when Prithvi grabs her hand.
Prithvi – Arre, kahan ja rahi ho jaaneman?
Mishty – Mein kahi bhi jaoon, tumse matlab?
Prithvi – Achha, meine kahin dino se tumse ek baat nahin kahin.
Misthy – (Starting to blush) Kya?
Prithvi – Kehdu?
Mishty – Haan kehdo.
Prithy – I..
Misthy – You..
Prithvi – I love…
Mishty – You love…
Prithvi – I love you. (Prithvi tries to be all romantic with Mishty. Mishty is getting very shy. )
Mishty – Prithvi..
Prithvi – Hmmm?
Mishty - Tumhe…
Prithvi – Mujhe…
Mishty – Tumhe joote nahin milne vale.
Saying this she pushes Prithvi back and starts running, like the scene from Hum Apke Hain Kaun. Then Mishty trips and falls but Prithvi grabs her and they both stare into each others eyes. Prithvi grabs the shoes and starts running. He hides in a room and then comes out when he sees that the coast is clear. He looks to where Mishty is and sees her sad face. He walks up to her and hands her the shoes. Mishty just looks at him and when the girls notice that Mishty's got the shoes back, they pull her away
End of flashback

Prithvi – Woh mein tumhe haarte hue nahin dekh sakhta isliye.
Mishty – Aww so sweet. Lekin ek baat mujhe samaj me nahin ayi.
Prithvi – Kya?
Misthy – Angad to tumhara saga bhai, phir bhi tumne mera saath dia.
Prithvi – Woh isliye meri jaan, kyun ki, meine tumhare saath kasam khayi zindagi saath bitane ki. Agar mein aaj agar Angad ka saath deta, to mein apne kasam pe peechhe jaata, aur yeh mujhse bardaasht nahin hota. Aur ek doosri waje bhi hai.
Mishty – Kya?
Prithvi – Who yeh hai ke I love you.
Mishty – Aww, shoo sweet. I love you too.
Prithvi – Ha ha pata hai ab chalo so jao, kal reception hai. Good Night.
Mishty – Good night.

Okay, hope you liked it. I know there are no AK scenes but I have to show scenes from my other characters na. Don't worry AK scenes coming up. And yes that was the secret between Prithvi and Mishty.

By the way, I know many of you are accustomed to having Mishty and Prithvi in a brother/sister relationship. If anyone has a problem with the way they are in my story, please let me know. I'll change it around a bit.

Preview – Reception!!!!!!!!!!

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