Anjaana Ehsaas: (AK) Part 27 Pg. 35

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Amnu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#61

well again i m the fisrt one to reply 😳
thank god that secret was about the shoes.i was soooo worried. 😃
well it was a good upadate plz update soon 👏
i m sooo okay with prithvi and mishty's marrige as they can't be in way of a&k as in the show. 😉

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angullgrl91

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Posted: 18 years ago

#62

wow. ur fan fic seems really interestin. the sounds kinda like dat new movie...ummm...forgot the name...i think it has fardeen khan n esha deol...not sure. but ur fan fic seems so cooooool. cont soon.

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Neha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#63

Awesome part.... awwww prithvis sooooooo sweet n adorable!!!!!

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Samina

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Posted: 18 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: monikaseth
👏 👏 👏 awesome part 👏

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brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#65

i just started reading and i am really enjoying.. its nice

and as for mishti and prithvi.. nobody has a problem so leave it.. as long as they LOVE EACHOTHER and not others like ak.. 😃

continue sooooonn

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shraddha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#66

hey i just caught up with ur story its really good continue soon 👏

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Rima

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Posted: 18 years ago

#67

i think your fanfic is awesome i don'y think so that mishty and prithvi's jodi is weird becuz i have read them in others fanfics so yeah anywayz its good that now aaliya and josh can be together and it remainds of the scene of AK's wedding where aaliya couldn't recognize JOSH SHARMA-THE SINGER 😆 😆 its awesome fanfic continue it soon

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dancingdiva91

@dancingdiva91

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Posted: 18 years ago

#68

Thanks for your comments guyz, but i won't be able to update until monday or maybe tom. morning, cuz im goin out of town. I'll leave Mishty and Prithvi as a pair.

yours truly,
diva

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dancingdiva91

@dancingdiva91

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Posted: 18 years ago

#69

Part 8

Next Day

Kripa wakes up early, and goes to the washroom, showers, and gets dressed. She sees Angad sleeping peacefully and doesn't wake him up. Instead, she goes downstairs and like a good bahu, does the arti in the house temple. When she reaches downstairs, she sees her sister there.

Kripa – Arre di, aap?
Mishty – Haan, kyun nahin, yeh mera bhi to ghar hai?
Kripa – Haan lekin, aap yahan mandir mein?
Mishty – Who mein tumhara intazaar karrahi thi. Ab tum agayi ho to maine tumhara bhi intezaar kiya, arti karne ke liye.
Kripa – Wow, di, shaadi ke baad aap kitni badal chuki hai.
Mishty – Haan, woh to hai. Achha chalo hum arti karte hain phir kitchen me jaake naasta tayaar karna hai.

They do arti. Let's see what Angad's doing.

Angad is sleeping when he hears his bhabhi singing.

Angad – Ofo, yeh lo, phirse shuru hogayi bhabhi.
He turns around and covers his ears.
Angad – Pata nahin, yeh roz arti kyun karti hain. Oof, lagta hain yeh mujhe sone nahin degi.
Then he hears a beautiful voice singing.
Angad – Hmm? Yeh kaun hai?
He gets up in bed to listen closer. At first he doesn't realize that it's Kripa. He doesn't even remember getting married. Then he remembers.
Angad – Shayad yeh Kripa hai.
His curiosity leads him to wake up and get ready to see who it is doing the arti.

Meanwhile in Prithvi's room.

Prithvi – Ofo, shuru hogayi Madonna.
Rahul comes in.
Rahul – Papa…
Prithvi - ………….
Rahul – Papa uttho varna mummy ayegi paani ka jug lekar.
Prithvi – (opens his eyes) Tu kya mera beta hai ya dushman?
Rahul – Papa, agar aap uthenge nahin to phir mummy apko daategi, isliye to utharaha hoon.
Prithvi – (to himself) Arre beta ismein hi to mazaa hai, taki mein tumhari mummy ke saath thoda romance shomance to karlu. (To Rahul) Thank you, beta. Aaj to tumne mujhe bacha hi liya. Tum jao, mein fresh hoke ata hoon.
He pretends to go to the bathroom, he runs back into bed and pretends to sleep.

Kripa and Mishty finished the arti and were singing some devotional songs. When they finished they turned around and saw…

So who did they see? Read on to find out.

I hope you guys like it. I know I keep saying the reception is coming but it will come soon.

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Jia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#70

ANGADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD 😆 great part can't wait to read more pls coti soon I don't know if i ever comment 😕 but i read your ff regularly so great job 👏

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