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Posted: 18 years ago
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pls reply fast!
this is getting so interesting!
i absolutly love it!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 21


Manthan ran to priyas room priya was sitting on her bed looking at manthans pic
manthan- priya
priya ran to manthan and was suprised he was talking to her priya im sorry i was being like this and im sorry i hurt you because of me u laksh told me everything and said its not your fault im sorry i thought you wrong its okay manthan just promise me you wont do that again they both begin to hug i love you priya i love you manthan they both cried and huged
it was the next day kangana told her dad that she has to go somewhere for a month and cant marry manthan until the month goes past and told her dad not to tell anyone about this marrige becasue she wanted to suprise everyone she told karan but he didnt tell manthan becasue he was soo busy he didnt tell anyone only him and manthan knew but manthan forgot all about it

to b continued ..


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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 22


priya was going back to her house since her dad was very sick manthan came behind priya and hold her waist hey baby oh hi manthan why are you packing oh im just going back to my house for well until my dad recovers his really sick you see
what no your not going anywhere my house is just 1 mile away from yours whenever you miss me just call me or come down my house ahh why im ganna miss you baba dont worry it will just be a few days what a few days i cant manage a minute without you and you expect me to go away from you for a few days no way your not going anywhere he hled her hand manthan choro agar ne kuyta tou then ill hit you then hit me you cant can you chup karo okay fine but you better call me every 20 minutes what umm okay fine and im ganna drop you okay fine dont worry ill visit you manthan went on his montorcyle and priya was on it
umm manthan arent we going in a car na i want to take my new motercyle for a ride umm okay priya was afraid of motorcycles okay hold me what he put her arams around him and he went soo fast she grabbed him soo hard this is your first time isnt it yeah dont worry ill take care of you she held on tight and they was there look where here oy itne kya jaldi hai he held her hand manthan okay bye and ouch do u no how hard you was holding me sorry its okay bye

to b continued ..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 23


priyas dad had recoverd quick and tulsi said since her dad is going back to london for a while she should live in shanti niketan for a while she wanted to suprise manthan
she went into shanti niketan and said hello to everyone and then went into manthans room she put her hands on his eyes
guess who priya!! you yes did you miss me did i miss you yeah i did a lot manthan picked up priya and swinged her around manthan put me down sorry well were ganna go out okay have a little alone time manthan what cant i love my lovely girlfriend yeah but what but nothing manthan and priya went out mantha suprised her with a candle light dinner she was soo impressed they was slow music playing

to be continued
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 24


manthan- may i have this dance priya and manthan danced to a ver nice a slow song they song played was pehla nasha pehla kumar naiya pyar hai naiya interzar manthan held her waist tight and she held his muscler arms manthan its getting a bit late shall we go sure manthan and priya went outside but manthan relised he left his wallet inside oh priya i left my wallet ill just get it dont worry ill b back soon a few guys went up to priya and surronded her
guy- wow kya ladki hai kya item wow wot a chick the guy touched priyas cheek she took his hand off she wanted to go but they didnt let her let me go ouf tum gosse maine bout aache lac te hou go away the guy went close to her and riped hee sleeve she screamed for help and guess who came her superman manthan !! oy what are you doing to my women let her go manthan punched them and kicked them they was in a bad state soon the stupid guys ran off yeah you betta run off you stupid waste priya ran to manthan and they huged manthan dont worry priya everything will be okay but how can i go home like dis look at this they riped a bit of my clothes manthan put his jacket on her and she couldnt stop crying priya please stop crying please his car broke down so they went into a cottage priya and manthan was on the bed and priya was huggin manthan he put his arm around her and kissed her gentley manthan he put his hand on her lips kuch ne bholo he took her jacket off that he gave her and kept on staring at her they both started to gaze at eachtohers eyes and soon stopped manthan wo shh tum bout bhati karte ho are we ganna be stuck her everyone must be worried kaun are family arent you even listening no and i dont want at least we get to spend time with eachothers yeah thats true manthan touched her back and she felt this shock and jumped whats wrong nothing he went behind her and kissed her neck they both fell asleep and and was sleeping together

to be continued
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 15



They both soon woke up and went back to shanti niketan
tulsi- tun douno kider tei we was soo worried
manthan - oh umm my car broke down so
tulsi- okay she said smiling
manthan soon went to his room and karan came
karan- manthan !! where was u he said very angery 😡
manthan - well maybe i dont want to tell u he said rudly
karan - manthan what was you doing he held his arm
manthan slowly took his hand off his arm dont touch me who are you to me anyways my car broke down so dont show dis attuide to me
karan - manthan you have no right to speak to me in that manner
manthan- just shut up i dont want to talk to that man who destoryed my mums life
karan - manthan karan was soo angery he slapped manthan and went out of the room manthans face went soo red and priya came inside his room
priya - hi manthan she relised manthan as upset and start making funny faces to make him laugh but it didnt work
manthan - priya can you stop acting like an idot
priya - what manthan wot happend to u
manthan- what happend to me that stupid karan virani slapped me he slapped me manthan told her the whole story
priya - what but still you shouldnt of done that i mean how could u like talk to ur father in that manner
manthan- what whoz side are you on mine or that thing
priya - manthan woh
manthan - just leave me alone plz priya
priya - fine be like that she knew if she had said this he would have ran to her fine then im leaving and i wont come back and i hate you she said angerly but was only jokin but manthan took it seriously


manthan realised in his anger he had said a lot to
priya and was upset

..... plz reply
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 26

Manthan wanted to cool down so went on a bike ride and was thinking does priya actually hate me i mean i know i can be a pain sometimes but ... he didnt really know she was jokin well she thought he had knew he was thinking a about priya and his dad and wasnt paying attention to where he was going
and out of nowhere a car came and bashed into him he as badly injured and taken to the hospital the nurse found his phone and called priya moblie phone she picked it up hello im calling from the caring hospital manthan virani is been badly injured please can you come to the hospital she droped the phone and cried but knew she had to tell everyone so she went and told everyone was shocked
karan - its my fault its all because of me my son is in this state they all ran to the hospital and waited for the nurse karan talked to the nurse
karan - hello madddam my son is her emanthan virani
nurse - oh him they are opperating on him please wait they all waited and waited the nurse came
priya ran to the nurse with tears in her eyes
priya - hello nurse is manthan okay now !!!
nurse - yes he is out of danger you can all go and meet him everyone smiled everyone went to see manthan but priya thought it was her fault manthan was in this state and waited outside
tanya - woh priya dont you want to meet manthan
priya - umm no sorry
tanya wondered why she had said no but wanted to see manthan badly so went inside priya cried
karan - huged manthan and couldnt see manthans state he had a bandage on his head and arm
karan - manthan beta im sorry for what i did i love you son please forgive me
manthan - papa its oaky it was my fault i love you too but wheres priya i dont see her anywhere please dad can you bring her yeah sure beta she just outside yeah and i kind of want to talk to her alone pelase karan wondered why he wanted to be alone with her but called her anyways priya went inside and went next to manthan and cried and couldnt help her self and was about to go out of the room when manthan held her hand
manthan - priya where are you going come her sit she sat near him im sorry she put her hands near his lips
priya - no manthan its my fault becasue of me your in this state im sorry manthan priya huged manthan


too be continued plz people reply i would really like it

luv madz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
all the parts are good!!!!!!!!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 27



Manthan got discharged from the hospital he was laying down in his bed tanya went to get him something but when she was just about to go inside priya wa in there
priya - decko maine kya leke ayeho your favorite gajar ka halwa she feed him the food and tanya looked
she didnt go for long she just kept on looking at his son and saw love in his eyes for priya manthan finnshed his food and huged priya
tanya was shocked and knew something was going on between them she walked in and pulled manthans ear
manthan - ahhh mum wot are you doing priya looked umm aunty im going
tanya - what im not letting you go so easily sit
manthan - mum wot is this please let go off my ear it hurts
tanya let go son you love me dont you then why didnt you tell me about you and priya
manthan - umm mum you know
tanya - yes and i approve atleast i got such a pyari bahu
manthan - thanks mum soo shaddi kab
tanya - wait a bit init thanks mum i love you i just have to tell karan okay
tanya went inside karans room karan
karan - wot is it cant you see im busy
tanya - i dont care if your busy i need to talk about manthans shaadi
karan - dont worry his shaadi been fixed with kangana
tanya - wot but he doesnt love her he loves ..
karan went out of the room
kangana called karan hi uncle im back and cant wait till i get married to manthan
karan - yes beta you come and ill tell everyone
kangana entered shanti niketan
manthan adn priya was upstairs
manthan - priya this is a good chance to tell everyone about you and me
laksh - umm manthan and priya come down stairs karan is calling you
manthan and holded priyas hand come lets go
they both went downstairs they nboth relised there was lots of guest and there was a party um dad whats this
kanganas dad - may i please call amthan on the stage and kangana ladies and gentlemen manthan is going to be apart of our family yes he is marring my daughter kangana
priya was shocked and so was manthan he looked at priya and proya ran into her room crying
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 28

Manthan was angey and hated his dad for doing this manthan went inside priyas room and saw priya crying he touched her shoulder and she hugged him
manthan - dont worry this marriage wont happen coz i only love u and i wont marry anyone else but u
karan heard and went inside and saw manthan hugging priya
karan - wot did u say manthan , huh i dont care the wedding is being fixed and ur getting married to kangana u heard that
manthan - no im not i love priya and im marrying her
karan - i dont care kanganas dad is my best friend and this might affect are friendship and i dont want it ruined because of and priya im sorry but manthan is marrying kangana karan left them both alone

manthan - ahh i hate that man
priya - his ur dad and i think his right i loved the moments we shared and i guess ill live with ur memories u go ahead and get married to kangana
manthan - no im not he holded her
priya - stop it manthan leave me alone she shouted just leave me alone and stated crying manthan left her alone

manthan had to listen to his father but hated him priya knew kangana was a nice girl and tried to make manthan forget about her she knew manthan would be her last love and she would never love again she booked a room for kangana she knew manthan wont come there so she said shes going to be there and come at 9 0 clock at night but he came early and saw the room which was fulled with roses and priya was next to the window and didnt see him coming he came behind her and and suprised her and holded her waist she looked beautiful in a sari he touched a bit of her skin and she felt this electric shock
he hugged her
manthan - i knew u wouldnt be able to stay away from me
priya - by manthan i have to go manthan held her hand
manthan - wot u talking about i only just got here her phone was ringing he chucked it on the floor and said to her wots going on tell me he held her against the wall
priya - nothing manthan anyways dont u think u should spend time eith ur going to be wife
her phone rang and he picked it up and it was on loud speaker it was priyas friend
friend - so priya how did ur plan work to get manthan and kangana in the same room i hope u be succesful bye
she tried to sneak our and he pulled her blouse from the back and grabbed it soo hard
manthan - so this is wot u came to do huh well listen to dis i only love u
he pushed her on the bed and was ontop of her and kissed her
priya - manthan stop it leave me alone go kiss ur wife / girlfriend
manthan - shut up shes not my wife or girlfriend coz u are tomomrow where getting married so get ready
priya - wot but tomomrow ur getting married to kangana
manthan - says who soon someone knocked the door it was kangana she shouted manthan darling open the door
priya - open the door and ill leave he put his hand on her mouth so she couldnt talk
manthan - shh let her go i dont want to be in the same room as her

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