could it be love fanfic part 1

could it be love fanfic part 1

hey guys dis iz my 1st fanfic so it wont be dat could plz reply i would really like it im sorry if its bad

its a love story about manthan and priya i fink its his turn too fall in love

manthan

priya

priya is going shopping and is walking with 3 bags in her hand

priya- ahh these bags are soo heavy

manthan come and bumps into her

priya -ahh u stupid bandir look waht u did

manthan- excuse me it was ur fault u should be the one looking where ur going

priya - what

manthan- yes anywayz i dont want to waste my time talking to you so im going

priya - wait a second who is going to pay fo this all my vegatables are dirty and its your fault

manthan- fine here you go its prob about 15 ruppai but ill give you 500 reppai maybe you can by some propper clothes

priya - what did you say these clothes are very exspensive fine just go i dont want your stupid money andlook at your self !!!!

manthan - bye miss angery tum bout gousa karte ho

priya leaves and manthan has a smile on his face bhoomi calls priya on her phone where are come to my house i thought you was coming

priya- yeah in coming i went to get vegatables for my dad but some stupid boy came and messed everthing up and wsted my time

bhoomi- oh well are you coming

priya- yeah im coming in a bit okay bye

priya enters shanti niketan wow what a big house

manthan is playing football in the house and by accident hit priya on the head she falls on the floor

priya - ouch

manthan brust out laughing priya sees him

priya - you what are you doing here!!!!!!!!!

manthan- i should be asking you dat question anyways this is my house

priya - wait ill come and sort you out how dare you hit me with dat ball

manthan- it was a accident but im glad it happend

priya runs after him and bhoomi and tanya come

tanya - what are you doing

priya- look aunty he hit me on the head with his ball and bhoomi thats the same boy who bumped in to me

bhoomi- oh thats my brother im sorry for what he done

priya what his your brother i feel sorry for you

tanya- manthan come here why was you playing football in the house and why did you hit her now go and say sorry to priya

manthan - me say sorry to her no way and mum it was a accident

priya - aunty no his lieing

manthan - wot would i ever lie to you mum

tanya leaves and smiles at priya dont worry ill make him say sorry to you one day

bhoomi- come priya

priya - wait i got to do something frist

manthan turns his back and leaves

priya gets the ball and hit manthan in his head

priya - hahahhaha now dats pay back

manthan- oh my god bhoomi did you see that ahahha

bhoomi starts to laugh

manthan - wait im not ganna leave you

bhoomi geta a phone call and leaves them both together manthan goes one step closer to priya

manthan - you better run

priya - why what are you going to do :s

manthan- run !!!

priya - ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

manthan start chasing after priya everyone sees and starts laughing

tanya- oy what are you doing leave her alone now what did she do

manthan- she hit me with da ball to get revenge see mum i told you

tanya- is this true priya

priya- yes but

manthan- see

priya goes upstairs

kt- dont worry i know how he is its not your fault

laksh- priya soo wot happend

priya tells laksh and kt the whole story

laksh - what he done that ahh watch

priya - no laksh dont do anything

laksh- no i have to teach him a lesson

priya- hmmm maybe we could do something but not to much

laksh and priya and kt start thinking of a plan

priya- yes i got it come guys lets start

kt - manthan

manthan - what is it you gawar

kt- your mums calling you in da kitchen

manthan - fine im going

laksh and priya get a bucket of water and attached it to da door

manthan opened the door and the water fell on manthan start screaming lasksh leaves priya brust out laughing and manthan hears her

manthan- priya !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i know its you

priya - comes in the kitchen and starts laughing hehehgheehhe

manthan- hehehhehheeh you done this didnt you

priya - maybe

manthan get a angery face and grabs priya and holds her against da wall

priya- what are you doing let go off me

manthan - pulls her hair look i have no time for stuid girls like you

priya - ouch

manthan starts shouting at her priya starts crying

manthan- ahh man now dont start crying

priya - im not crying and let go off me

manthan - no this is your punishment

priya - please look fine coz if someone comes here its ganna be your fault

manthan is just about to let go when laksh enters

laksh- priya woh manthan what are you doing priya runs to laksh ehat did yu do to her ehy are you crying

manthan- ill leave you 2 alone

laksh - i said wot did u do

priya - leave it he didnt do nothing

manthan - see manthan leave the kitchen and smiles at priya

laksh - what did he do

priya- nothing it was my fault for doing that and he was only shouting at me

laksh - come lets go

priya goes home laksh goes to manthan room

laskh- manthan

manthan - what

laksh - seriously what happend she wont tell me

manthan- whatever happend its none of ur bussiness

laksh- look it wasnt her fault it was me i done it and she took da blame

manthan- what oh well i dont care she was laughing at me i wont leave her now get out of my room laksh leaves and sees bhoomi

bhoomi - laskh what happend laskh tells her bhoomi goes to manthans room

manthan- oh hi sis

bhoomi - manthan what happend between you and priya look shes my friend and i dont want to lose her as a friend beacause of you

manthan - ahh fine dont worry sis ill do something

bhoomi- promise

manthan - yeh i guess ill say sorry but only 4 you

bhoomi - yes and ill tell her to say sorry and u 2 can be friends

manthan- wow wow dont get excited now im just saying sorry i dont want dis dosti dosti but if it makes you happy ill try

manthan call priya while shes sleeping

priya - hello

manthan- hi dis is manthan wait dont hang up i need to talk to you

priya- at this time !!!

manthan - plz

priya - fine go one talk

manthan - meet me outside my house

priya- fine priya come outside the house

manthan - hi

priya- yeh hi so what did you want to say

manthan-well umm im sorry

priya - what did yo say can you say it again

manthan- im sorry for what i did i shouldnt of done that so will you forgive me

priya- ill think about it

manthan-😡 cant u fink now

priya- fine i forgive you

manthan brings his hand forward and they both shake hands

priya - bye i guesss

manthan -bye

bhoomi comes out when priya leaves

manthan- happy i dont it

bhoomi - thanks bro

plz tell me if u like it coz im making part 2 dis is just der little fights and dey just made up but soon love will happen

plz do reply and tell me if u like it or not its my frist time so it wont be that good im sorry if it was boring

if u like it ill make part 2

love madz aka madiha 😊

it was really cute 😃 plz continue

tz ok! cause i don't like manthan and priys jodi! i like pulkit samrat & mouni roy jodi!!!!! but it was good!!!! u wrte very good detailz!! continue!

WOw.. i luved it .. its soo cute..
PLz conitnue soon. 👏

Oh! I'm going to add this to my list of fanfics! 😊

-Pooja

it was really good plz continue soon both da jodi's rock and any fanfic of tina is most welcome and kt-laksh too

hey guys

you all said dat u liked part 1 and u wanted me to continue soo dis is part 2 i hope u guyz like it

love story between manthan and priya




the next day priya and her dad come to shanti niketan

priya and her dad - hello everyone

tulsi - hi im soo gald too see both of you

priya- umm ill just go and say hi to everyone tulsi says go ahead priya goes to bhoomi room

priya - hi bhoomi

bhoomi - hi wow you look nice today

priya- thanks so do you so wheres umm

bhoomi - who manthan ???

priya - yeh

bhoomi- his sleeping

priya- at this time

bhoomi - yeh he would prob wake up in about 2 hours why dont you go and suprise him and wake him up tanya mum was trying to wake him up but you no

priya - okay

priya enters manthan room manthan wake up

manthan - ZzzZzZzZzZZZ

priya goes on top of manthan but manthan grabs her and she gets stuck in his arms

priya - manthan

manthan keeps holding her and and finds himself on top of her he keeps on sleeping and moving around and falls down the bed when he wakes up he finds himself on top of priya

manthan - priya umm

priya - ahhh manthan get off me

manthan - na i fink ill go asleep for a bit longer

priya - fine bt atleast get off me

manthan - ohh anyways what was you doing in my room and why was you under me huh huh

priya - umm woh bye

manthan smiles and holds her hand

manthan - you still didnt answer my question

priya - umm well i just came to wake you up and then you was out off control and grabed me

manthan - what like this (manthan grabs her wastte)

bhoomi enters

bhoomi - ahh um

manthan lets go

priya - bhoomi woh

bhoomi smiles at manthan

bhoomi - no need to explain your dads calling you downstairs to go i didnt even get anytime with you spent it all waking up manthan anyways bye (bhoomi and priya hug )

manthan - bye priya

priya waves at manthan and leaves

bhoomi - umm so manthan i guess this means you both are friends

manthan - i guess you can say that

manthan cant stop thinking about priya soon manthan gets a phone call

manthan - hello

amar - hi you want to met me and the guys are going out

manthan - kya yaar why did you have to pick dis time when i was just dreaming about

amar - dreaming bout who

manthan - no one yeh im coming let me just get ready

amar - okey yaar

manthan and his friends go out and are just on there way of going back home manthan is sitting at the back

manthan - wait stop the car priya tum

priya - oh hi manthan

manthan you need a lift

priya - no its okey manthan ill manage

amar and the guys - oh come in we got a lot of room and those bags look heavy look you can sit next to manthan at the back

priya - umm

manthan - come on yaar if you dont come ill think that you havent still forgiven me

priya - okey

manthan- YES!!!

everyone looks ant manthan

manthan - what i said yes and start the car

manthan and priya sit together at the back soon all the friends leave leaving manthan and priya alone but someone driving amar is driving the car fast and priya falls on manthan

manthan - are you okay

priya - yeah

manthan - oy stupid drive the car slow

amar - cant too much traffic but ill try

later priya keep on banging into manthan

priya - sorry this traffic oouch

manthan - what happend

priya - this amar keeps on banging into cars and it hurts me

manthan puts his arm around priya

manthan- dont worry we just have to be really close

priya - umm okay i guess oh theres my house bye manthan byt amar

manthan gets out of the car priya umm you forgot your bag anyways whats in it priya - vegatables and bindi and goshed and ...

manthan - okay i get it

priya- yeh i have to go and make food for my dad and me you should go but one day you will have to taste my gajar ka halwa

manthan- gajar ka halwa thats my favourite wow cant wait 4 dat day anyways see you

amar - presses his horn yaar kitne deer lagow ge jalde karo

priya - you better go bye

manthan - bye and come init down my yard

priya - yeh i will im coming tommorow

manthan - kool well c ya

amar - ahh kitne bhati karogi yaar kitne minute hogiye hai tum douno bhat kariho

the next day priya goes shanti niketan and enters the house

bhoomi - hi priya

priya - hi

bhoomi - whats that in your hand its gajar ka halwa ooh for me you shouldnt have

priya - umm sorry but its not for you its for manthan

bhoomi - oh

tanya and tulsi and karan come

tanya , tulsi , karan - hi beti how r u

priya - im fine umm manthan kider hai

tanya - upstairs (priya goes upstairs)

karan - she wants to meet manthan manthan wasnt they fighing about 3 days ago

bhoomi - well now there friends priya made something speacial for manthan like gajar ka halwa

everyone smiles and says manthans fave

karan- huh i like gajar ka halwa

bhoomi - sorry dad but she made it speacial only 4 manthan hheheheh

priya knocks on the door

manthan - come in priya wow how nice to see you

priya - hi look what i got for you gajar ka halwa

manthan - no way yum lets go into the kitchen come

manthan sits and is munching on the food priya laughs

priya - so do you like it

manthan - yeh its da best gajar ka halwa i ever tasted

tanya - accha tou mera gajar ka halwa ka kabhi ni tarif kiya

manthan - umm

tanya - heheheh just jokin kalow she made with love for you

manthan -

priya - ah hum with love ah hum i just made it coz he likes it

tanya - okay i get it

manthan finnish his food and he and priya go upstairs

priya - wait i just need to go to the bathroom okay

manthan okay

priya goes into the bathroom and sees the biggest spider ever

priya - ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhh mujhe bachalo

manthan - runs to the bathroom kya hai

priya ------ ahhhh and jumps on manthan save me ahhh its coming closer pick me up (manthan picks her up)

manthan -where is it omg your scared of that tiny spider ha hah hahah

priya - let me go

manthan - fine and drops her on the floor

priya - ahh pick me up look its coming closer

manthan - ahh yeh ladki (and picks her up again ) and takes her to bhoomis room

bhoomi - umm bro why r you picking her up

manthan- please take her ahahahhahahahaahahah

bhoomi - whats soo funny

manthan - she got scared of a tiny spider and jumped on me

bhoomi brust out laughing hehhehheheh

priya - manthan tum kya sab ko baato gi

manthan drops her and says yes manthan tells everyone priya goes downstairs and everyonre starts laughing at her

priya - manthan meh tumhara gala doubadogi fine im not talking to anyone in this house

manthan - okay sorry baba and bends down and pulls his ears ab math karoge

priya - nay teack hai maf kardiya

manthan - fine im going sleep now i feel really tried

priya - its only 7

manthan - yeh but its better then to listen to you talking omg your soo boring

priya - what

when manthan is asleep priya goes into his room and puts lipstick on him and paints on his face manthan hears her laughing and wakes up

priya - look in the mirror

mantan - what (priya gives him the mirror and runs)

manthan- ahhhhhhhhhh

manthan s running after priya and everyone is laughing at manthans state priya is running too fast and suddenly falls and hurts her leg and blood is pouring

priya - ocouch manthan

manthan - r you okay see thats what you get for making me look like a girl even that i look quite dashing

priya - manthan !!! (manthan picks priya up and takes in inside and lays her on the sofa)

manthan- gosh man how much do you weigh (priya chucks a pillow at manthans face) everyone rushes to priya

tulsi - yeh kya howa you got hurt really bad

laksh - sits on the sofa and comforts priya and says are you okay and give her a hug manthan gets soo jelous

tulsi - laksh beta get up 4 a second take her to manthans room

manthan- my room

tulsi - your staying here today ill inform your dad and call a doctor

priya - doctor no no ba its okay my legs fine ( she gets upp ) owww

tulsi - r you sure okay bhoomi take her too manthans room

bhoomi tries to put the medicine on her leg

priya - oww dont worry ill be fine ill do it my self (bhoomi leaves and manthan comes inside

priya - oouch

manthan - come let me do it

priya hids her leg no its okay manthan

manthan- look dont worry i wont look

priya - okay

manthan puts the medcine on her leg is that better

priya - hey you opened your eyes

manthan - opps anyways umm tulsi ba said you should move into the guest room so i can have my room back

to be continued .....

PART 3


could it be love


priya soon went to da guest room she went to the bathroom and got changed and was wearing a really nice nightey dress upto her knee she knew that no one would come to her room and would change stright away after she woke up but she was wrong manthan came inside her room without knocking priya was sitting on the bed and manthan was shocked what she was wearing the simple girl who always was wearing da clothes in her culture was wearing this his eyes was wide open and he couldnt stop looking at her when she turned back he stopped and went next to her

priya 😳 MANTHAN tum ya wot da hell are u doing in my room cant you knock !!!!

manthan - cool down if i had knock i wouldve missed out on dis wow ur looking soo hot!!

priya - wot 😳

manthan - nothing i didnt say nothing r u sure manthan she heard everything he said she was shocked he actually complimented her then manthan started talking um yeh i was just shocked seeing you in these clothes thats all but actually you kind of look really fat in them and really bad

priya - what !!! u manthan i hate you manthan started laughing its just my nighty anyways not like im going outside in them and goodnight and why did u come in my room i didnt invite you !!!

manthan - i just wanted to see if ur okay and if yuor leg is okay it look fine to me manthan looked at her bare legs and stared at them priya relised what he was looking at and got really angery

priya - you r soo disgusting chi how dare you look at my legs stop looking at them manthan kept on looking she went towards him and was ganna punch him when she tripped over a shoe and fell on manthan they both gazed into eachothers eyes but priya soon relised who she was ontop of she let go and manthan left and smiled at her she went into her bed and had a nice dream about her and manthan on top of clouds she didnt no what was happening to her could it be love ???

manthan couldnt go to sleep because all he could think of is priya he really wanted to no wot was happening to him but was confused

too be continue .. some more romantic scence coming up plz reply tell me if u like it

madz xxx

PART 4

could it be love


soon priya woke up at 7 am and everyone was asleep and she was wearing a really nice pink tight chalwar chamise she went and cleaned the whole house it was soo clean it sparkled she went in the kitchen and was making breakfast for everyone tulsi came and said wow you clean the house much better then me but there was no need for this your are guest dont worry let me make the breakfast

priya - no dadi ill do it please let me okay fine ill call everyone and tell them to come downstairs okay dadi she was making chilli omellette and toast and parata and tortillas and pancakes it was all on the table everyone gazed at the food beause how tasty it looks no one in the family has ever made like that

to be contuinue

wow really great parts!continue sn!!