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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 13


laksh couldnt bealive what he saw and was upset because what if nukul found out he thought manthan was up to no good so decided to do something and went into priyas room
priya- laksh tum how r you what made you come in my room
laksh - nothing i just have to talk to you thats all
priya- okay whats wrong
laksh came and sat next to priya look its like this i know about you and manthan
priya- oh well laksh you dont no how happy i am since manthan came into my life well lifes been sweet im in love laksh and with manthan
laksh- yeah it about that love thing priya looked at laksh look i dont think that manthan is the right guy for you his not a good guy he might leave you one day so its best if you stay away from him
priya - what laksh how can you this !!! i thought you was my friend and you want my love to go away from me what kind of person are you i hate you !!! priya said angery
laksh - priya what im just expalining to you priya he held her hand please dont be mad
priya- just go away laksh i hate you laksh went out of the room and was really upset of losing his best friend laksh cried in his room and wouldnt eat anything
kt went to see laksh
kt- laksh laksh whats wrong you havent eat anything is everything okay omg are you srying kt gave laksh a hug whats wrong baba tell me
laksh - nothing i was just helping priya and then she
kt- she what laksh tell me
laksh- nothing no laksh there must be something going on well priya and manthan are in love i told her to stay away from him and she broke are friendship and said she never wants to see my face again
kt - well daa laksh im sorry but hes in love and what if manthan has changed so whats the big deal you shouldnt of gt into there way
laksh - yeah i know but nukul likes priya and i cant see him in pain kt i cant
kt was angery seeing laksh cry over this and wanted to do something about it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kt couldnt take laksh being hurt and went to see priya hi priya how are you im fine thanks kt umm i need to talk about laksh oh who is laksh never heard of him anyways i dont want to talk to that person
what how can you be like this priya his your best friend so what would you do if someone was trying to take laksh away from you i no you love laksh but if someone was taking him away what would you do i guess your right but still
his going crazy and his crying like a mad person please do something sorry but im busy kt left manthan came behind priya and suprised her nukul was looking from the door and was jelous hi manthan jannu how are you im fine how are you my darling they began to hug and manthan kissed priya on the cheek nukul had soon relised there relationship and had gone to his room and couldnt stop crying laksh heard something and went to nukul
laksh - nukul whats wrong why are you crying !!!
nukul- laksh priya doesnt love me she loves that stupid manthan
what laksh was hoping not to happen it happend nukul come on you have to be strong why him why not me he doesnt deserve her
laksh couldnt take it and wanted to do something about it and went to see priya

to be cointinue ohh things are gettinf spicy pzl reply ppl i made all thios for you if you sonjt reply means you dont like it plz ppl reply for me
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 15

laksh was soo angery and wanted to talk to priya it was dark and priya was putting on her sari but couldnt do the back bit laksh came behind her and put her against the wall and holded her tight laksh what are you doing let me go im not talking to u remember yes well i tried to explain to you but you didnt listen to me did you laksh holded her tighter ocuh laksh you have no right to touch me only manthan really what about the person who loves you the person who cares for you the person who is crying right now because well his shattered his falling apart priya he loves you when he found out u become someone else his gone mad why laksh um tell me laksh its nukul priya was shocked oh i didnt no his crying i cant see his pain i cant
priya turned around laksh saw her love bite whats that what on your back priya hide it no let me see laksh took her zip off omg what did manthan do to you is this how he treats you watch what im ganna do to him stop it laksh it says his love in it bue tyou said enough laksh now leave me alone manthan heard everthing and thought he was hurting priya

to be continued
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 16

as soon as laksh left the room he went into manthans room with a angery yet sad face manthan !! manthan
manthan - wot iz it im not deaf how loud are you speaking i can speak as loud as i want anyways i need to talk to you well i dont want to talk to you well you will have to coz im not leaving your room until you talk to me
manthan - okay fine what is it lover boy
laksh- whats wrong whats wrong laksh held manthans shirt and manthan gave him a dirty look and took his arm off his shirt please do not touch me i dont want the laksh jerms just cut to the point
laksh said very angery who the hell do you think you are abusing priya yeah i saw the scar on her back that you gave her what kind of animal are you what what i didnt well look yourself and she wont tell you but shes in pain and she doesnt like it when you touch her to much soo stay away from her well i know you both are so just keep your distance okay manthan was thinking what laksh said is it true manthan was upset and didnt want to lose priya at any cost and decided not to go to close to her and love her but not to touch her

to be continued ..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 17


manthan went to see priya and while she was trying to put her necklace on and manthan came in and put the necklace on for her and opened her zip and saw the scar and found out that laksh was right manthan what are you looking at manthan put the zip back on and manthan left manthan ahh yeh ladka bhi na priya knew something was up but was too busy priya went to see manthan hi manthan my darling oh hi priya he said with a sad face priya went and huged him and manthan pushed her away
manthan whats wrong baba she touched his face and he pushed her hand away
manthan !! what is wrong iz it me manthan didnt say a word and was looking at a magzzine priya chucked the magazine on the floor and manthans face went red she sat in his lap and she looked into his eyes manthan baba whats wrong tell me he pushed her and she fell on the floor thats it manthan you might be angery but dont put our anger on me you you you umm you egghead manthan she kept on talking and talking and manthan shouted well you got what you wanted didnt you priya didnt understand huh well laksh tolded me dat you dont like it when i touch you so im never ganna touch you ever again and i saw the scar on your back thats it we are well we are done what manthan you cant priya started crying its for the best manthan moved away from her manthan please dont dont manthan priya ran to her room and couldnt stop crying she didnt eat or sleep because she felt so sad whatever laksh told him was a lie and she wanted to wack him on the face

to be continued
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 18

it had been 3 days and priya had stayed in her room and not come out everyone was worried and wondered what had happend to her manthan cryed and couldnt take priyas state but thought to him self priya desearved someone better but still loved her and couldnt see her with someone else but her happiness meant the world for him priya finally came out of her room and bhoomi saw her whats wrong with you and manthan espeaiclly you i mean you havent came out of your room 4 3 days you no how worried everyone was
priya felt dizzy manthan was behind her and she fainted probely coz she didint eat for soo long priya !!! everyone came and manthan wanted to but couldnt go near her he hated himself for doing this but knew it was for the best everyone was at the hospital manthan looked though the window and couldnt take it seeing priya in pain soon priya regain uncoinsouness

everyone ran to see priya the doctor came out umm sorry only a few people she kept saying someone name i think it was manthan yeah manthan there everyone looked for manthan but couldnt find him

to be continued ...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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excellent! ive just read through the whole thing
its fab! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 19

priya had soon came back from the hospital and everyone was taking care of her she had a sad face on her face even if someone said a funny joke she wouldnt smile but after 3 days priya was better karans old friend came he was very happy and his best friend dev had a daughter named kangana she wasnt thats pretty she was a show off and always wears mini skirts and small tops she always liked the male attention
and wasnt that nice she was rude to everyone but tanya and karan karan introduced her to everyone and manthan came oy manthan beta come here this is kangana manthan shaked her hand and she got excited and smiled he walked away
after kangana and her dad left she had told her dad that she had liked manthan and wanted to marry him her dad was happy coz it will mean him and karan would be related but he didnt have the time to tell karan so waited a bit and the next day told karan he was soo happy but didnt know what manthan would say
karan- hi manthan my lovely beta
manthan- okay then what do you want manthan knew that something is up because his dad has never talked to him in that manner so did you meet kangana yeah he said with a dirty look
karan- so do you like her
manthan- what i dont even know her shes a show off she used to go out with my friend he told me lots about her and really i dont like her charater
karan- what are you saying shes such a nice girl manthan looked at karan okay this is it well um kangana likes you and wants to marry you so what do you say
manthan was in love with priya and no one could take her place but if he wanted to forget about her he had to marry kangana that was the only way
manthan- okay dad ill marry her
karan - what are you serioud omg you have made me the happiest man ever and karan kissed manthan
manthan- ehhh dont kiss me
karan- sorry im just to happy but dont tell any on yet im ganna tell them in about a week let my enjoy this first

to be continued pzl reply ppl
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 20

priya coudlnt still forget what manthan said and just remember it was laksh fault and went to see him she entered the room
priya- laksh !! who the hell do you think you are ruinging my life
laksh- priya just relax whats wrong he touched her hand
priya - dont touch me you waste its all your fault becasue of you manthan wont touch me he wont talk to me he broke all are relationship because of you i hate you laksh i hate you just go away laksh started crying and was really upset he soon went to talk to manthan
laksh - hi manthan
manthan - what is it you whatever
laksh came inside its about priya what ever i told you its not true she didnt say any of that i lied and im sorry for doing that because of me you both are not together
manthan- what i cant bealive this you did this omg you idot i said soo much to priya and im getting married to some next girl coz of you ill sort you out later but i have to go to priya now

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