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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 5



kt - wow kitna kahna it looks soo tasty everyone was eating the food and enjoying it

Laksh- yummy wow priya tumne batay ne dat u make soo delisous food thanks laksh im making dinner later wow cant wait no beta its okay i dont you to be working your are guest you should be relaxing kya please i like serveing you manthan iterupts let her dadi after all she is the maid wot !!! i make food for all of you beacause you are my parivaar but if you dont think of me apart of your parivaar i guess ill be going tulsi speaks no its manthan kabhi tou apne mou bhand karo no its not dat beta your like my daughter after all this is your house please dont take it seriously you can do wahtever you like and if you want to make food its good for us because we never taste such good omlette like dis everyone smiled

priya - manthan tumhe main decklo gi
manthan- acha
tulsi - acha bhas tum dou nou please stop fighting priya went to bhoomi room ahhh
bhoomi - whats wrong
priya - whats wrong whats wrong ask that stupid brother of yours what does he think of himself we start getting along then he well he gets rude he calls me a nukar me watch i wont spare him just when i start liking him he
bhoomi - wait like
priya - i meant as a friend 😕
bhoomi - are you sure you dont like him ???
manthan is next to the door and listening to there conversation
priya - me like that manthan have you seen his face he looks like a bandir a monkey baboon manthan hears this and gets angery
manthan - accha or kya manthan laktha hai
priya - oh woh kutah ki tara lakta hai and his stupid , rude , monkeyfaced baboon , dog , and umm
manthan - bolo bolo
priya - manthan !!! umm woh maine i was talking about another manthan not you
manthan - acha tou maine bandir ho im a money !!!
priya - yes you are and thats the truth
manthan couldnt bealive she had the guts to say this to his face and ran after her and she was hiding behind laksh
laksh - um priya what are you doing behind me
priya - shhhh chup karo woh tume sunn le ga
laksh - who , kaun shhhhhh laksh cant you keep your mouth shut laksh was confused but stayed in one place manthan was looking all over for priya and saw laksh
manthan - laksh have you seen priya anywhere
laskh - woh tou when he was just about to say where she was priya kicked him really hard on his leg owwww wahts wrong laskh why are you acting weird nothing just akay freak im going
laksh then looked at priya wot da hell do you have any idea how hard you kicked me umm im sorry bye no your not going any where laksh held priyas hand i guess you was running away from manthan well im taking you to him nooo laksh please he draged her to manthan her she is thanks laksh left leaving priya and manthan alone
priya - bye wait and held her hand um soo thats what you think of me no no i told you it was another person with the same name manthan really 😡 and then he squezzed her hand ouch manthan look im sorry but it was yourself you have a really short temper you no you well you started it soon tulsi came and manthan let go of her hand umm priya come i have to show you something soon manthan was alone and he thought to himself why he was being like this and thought to himself now on his ganna be nice to priya

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 6

priya was in her room and thought she shouldnt of have called manthan all those names and felt she needed to talk to him she entered his room she was too nervous to talk to him but had to be brave
priya - umm manthan umm im really sorry for saying those nasty things about you i sohuldnt of said that im really sorry i hope we can be friends

manhtan - umm well i was ganna say sorry to if i hadnt said something bad to you wouldnt of said all that to me im sorry priya was blown away that manthan said sorry she smiled and said look manthan i got you something
manthan - really what she went and took a seat on his bed next to him first close your eyes okay she placed a friendship bracelet in his hand okay open your hand now
manthan - what is it
priya - its a friendship bracelet for both of us since you are my best friend she said sarcasticly and he smiled and said thanks and priya put it around his hand he never really excepted gifts but something from priya was speacial for him he soon knew he had to get her something soo priya umm well im going clubing tomomrow you want to come umm yeh sure ill love to come she smiled and left ,leaving manthan with a bright smile on his face
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 7

the next day priya couldnt decide what to wear she wanted to impress manthan and had to find a smashing outfit soon bhoomi entered priyas room why are ther all clothes around your room bhoomi i need your help i cant figure our what to wear manthan asked me to go clubing with him what wow well you cant wear any of that man we need to go shopping well i do have a lot of time left then lets go bhoomi and priya was shopping for hours to find the perfect outfit and soon found it priya was wearing a strapless white with diamonds all over it dress it was really short right above her knee and high heels and her hair out she felt weird wearing clothes like this as she has never weared anything like this but wanted to impress manthan
bhoomi - wow when manthan sees you he wont keep is eyes off you
priya - really you think so
bhoomi- look tell me the truth we have been friends forver so do you like me brother because im pretty sure he feels the same way
priya - umm well bhoomi i cant hide anything from you and i dont no what in feeling in my heart i cant sleep or eat i fink of him day and night could this be love i guesss i am in love with him bhoomi was suprised and happy for manthan that he found someone who loves him soo much okay enough chit chat goo to manthan

manthan was waiting downstairs impaiently yeh ladki kitne der lahgaygi
priya went downstairs and manthan looked at her he couldnt stop looking at her she was soo beautiful he was thinking and felt over the moon she waved her hand he look and said wow you look gorgous soo beautiful
priya - excuse me
manthan- nothing shall we go and u look beautiful
priya thanks and smiled
manthan and priya was at the club there was people dancing and manthan met his friend and left priya alone wait ill be back all the guys there had ther eyes on priya and asked her to dance she said yes and dance with a guy called jay by the way my name is jay hi jay wahts your name priya he held her waist tight and manthan saw them and felt soo jelous and went up to the guy uh um shes with me soo can you leave us alone
jay - okay nice talking to you priya and kissed her hand
manthan felt soo angery 😡 why was you dancing with that guy and not me umm well you went to yur frienda ns he asked me well how dare he touch you come lets dance he got her to da dance floor and hold her waist soo tight and started dancing they was enjoying eachotehrs company but soon a girl called linda came hey manthan looking hot thanks um its linda want to dance umm sure he left priya she went and got a drink and looked at manthan putting his arms around that girls hips she felt soo jelous she didnt no what she was drinking she started having lots of glasses of wine and was drank manthan was noticing priya and saw that she was having a lot of drinks and ran up to her
manthan - priya are you okay he notice she was drank and carried her and put her in the car and talked to her priya
priya - oh hi manthan hehehehe how big is your hand did u no you have 2 eyes do you love me she kept on asking silly questions manthan didnt know what to do he couldnt take her home like this hw took her to his other house that his dad gifted him for his brithday and layed her on the bed and called bhoomi
manthan - bhoomi priyas drunk so i took her to my other house take her in the morning and make a excuse why she didnt come home okay he shut the phone and went back to priya and remember his last girlfriend left her dress here and gaved it to priya
priya tum yeh panlo actually how she ganna put this on ahh man priya kept screaming for no reason and woke up manthan from the other room ahhhhhh
manthan - priya kya hai why arent you asleep at least let me sleep peacefully
priya - where did you go i missed you i cant go asleep
manthan - so what am i suppoed to do read you a bed time story
priya - yes please priya was laying down on the bed and manthan layed down and was telling priya a bed time story and fell asleep on her lap and tehy both sleeped together and woke up next moring and priya found manthan next to her manthan tum meri saat manthan wot was i sleeping with you yes you was drunk last night i read you a bed time story and fell asleep on you dont worry your not the only girl ive sleeped with ehh manthan your soo dusgusting i was joking anyways how are you feeling really dizzy and sick here take this water and medicine but no buts she drank it and huged manthan thanks manthan im sorry that becuse of me you had to manthan - shh itd okay manthan felt this whole new world coming to him when she huged him

to be continue ...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz reply if u dont it means you dont like it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 8


priya told bhoomi everything and bhoomi was trying t find a way to make them both confess ther love for eachtohers
manthan - priya you have to come to this party im going to please come
priya - sure ill come
unfortunetally priya was really busy helping tulsi dadi in the kitchen it had been 3 hours manthan was waiting tulsi came out the kitchen and manthan came it priya why are you taking soo long come lets go umm sorry manthan i cant come ive got lots of work to do maybe next time okay

excuses excues if you dont come i wont ever talk to you ever again sorry manthan i cant come please understand i dont want to understand anything its your last chance are you coming ?? no sorry woh manthan
manthan was soo angery and left and slammed the door
and the next day priya went to manthans room when he was doing push ups she went in and suprised him but he wasnt talking to her and ignored her and carried on doing his push ups
priya - manthan look do you like my mehendi he gave her air manthan manthan baba suno tou she came and layed on the floor while he was doing push ups and went under him he pushed her out of the way and she said look manthan im sorry he stood up and pushed her aginst the wall

i told you im not talking to you i hate you but i love you she blurted it out wot nothing no tell me nothing manthan i thought you wasnt taking to me well now i am what did you say i i i love you love who i love salman khan what hehe and she left him with a smile on his face you better tell me ...


to be continue will he ever confesss his love for her keep reading and replying to find out

love madz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 9

manthan was thinking of priya all day thinking did she say i love you to him or salman khan hmmm he heard dat she said i love you to him but was confused and felt the same way but was shy to confess his love
karan and manthan had a fight and manthan left the house and everyone looked everywhere for manthan priya couldnt stop crying and tried looking for him it was late and everyone was worried and relised priya was out looking for him she went everywhere looking for him soon it was dark and it was raining she was crying and soon saw manthan she was soo happy and manthan looked at her

she ran up to him and huged him and started crying tum kaha gi thi i was soo worried dont you no how much i love you manthan was soo relifed and so happy to hear those 3 words coming from her mouth they both huged instantly i love you to priya soo much promise me you wont ever leave me again i promise i wont ever leave you they both huged and tanya saw and was suprised and happy seeing manthan happy for once she knew this was the girl who was going to bring a bright furture to manthan she left and not letting them no she was there today was the most happiest day of manthans life soon manthan went home and karan huged manthan and was sorry of saying all those things too him they soon made up

to be continue ...plz reply ppl 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 10


life was soo much better for priya and manthan because they found there soul mate they loved eachothers so much they never stop thinking about eachothers for the first time manthan found out what love means and priya finally found her prince charming

everyone in shanti niketan was very busy planning a big party for tulsi and mihir it was their wedding annversary everyone was busy while priya was looking for the present shes going to gift tulsi and mihir she reminded herself where she had left it was ontop of the closet
it was to high for her so she got a stool but was still struggling to get it manthan looked at her and offered to help but she said no she kept on trying and fell ontop manthan he held her in his musculer arms and gazed into her eyes manthan gentley put her on the bed and got the present for her here you go why didnt you ask me in the first place if i wasnt there in time you wouldve injured yourself really bad but dont worry your superman is here and will always pretect you
priya - um im sorry
manthan- its okay babe priya smiled okay bye manthan i have got lots of work to do okay bye manthan held her arm manthan chorro mujhei not until you give me a kiss what no way let me go he held her very tight and was about to kiss her when laksh came um priya tulsi calling you priya ran down stairs and was very embrassed manthan what is it laksh didnt like the fact of manthan and priya together because he thought he would break her heart but dnt know because of her he has changed hello what is it laksh can you stop wasting me time nothing just im keeping my eyes on you huh laksh go away please
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 11


laksh went angery downstairs priya was talking to nukul
priya - HI Nukul how r you i havent talked to you for soo long
nukul- yeah ive been to busy working and that
priya - you need to take a chill pill if you work so much now when you get married you wont have any time for your wife they both laughed hahah nukul your soo grown up and you still dont no how to put your tie on umm dont worry ill help you priya put on the tie for nukul and he looked into her eyes she touched him on his chest and he felt like he was in heaven there done umm nukul what are you looking at nothing just your beautiful eyes priya said thanks akwardly priya triped over and fell on nukul he looked at her and smiled umm im sorry i have this big habit falling ontop of people laksh was seeing all of this and thought what if his brother had fallen in love with priya but he hope not because he couldnt see his brother in pain

soon nukul went happily into his room and found laksh in there whats wrong nukul why are you soo happy today ahh what should i tell you bro ahh ive never been this happy ever tell me fine ill tell you im in love what with who priya yes laksh im fallen in love with her shes soo simple so beautiful so sweet laksh wasnt happy at all to hear this are you sure she has a big nose what shes absoultly beautiful everything about her is just mindblowing why arent you happy for me dow laksh no i am you dont seem so happy nothing me and kt had a fight thats all (he lied and about the big nose )

to be continued ...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 12

ther party was off the hook it was nicely decorated and was very nice everyone looked gorgous most of all priya looked amazing she was wearing a blue and silver lenga the blouse was short but was very nice priya

went upstairs and was just walking around when she went close to manthans room someone pulled her it was manthan he draged her and holded her against the wall she couldnt see him because it was to dark
but manthan put his lighter on and then she saw him manthann shhh tum what are you doing shh he holded her tighter and said very quiety i warned you now you have to give me that kiss manthan no please he hold her soo tight and kissed her gently she smiled and said okay you got your kiss now can you let me go she qucikly kissed him and tried to go but he was holding her too tight manthan baba choro na
manthan- no i want more
priya - what no your not getting nothing she said very angery
manthan - accha so now you dont want to give me love fine then watch later ill let you go for now but later you will see what will happen okay baba thank you okay dont be sad im not just wait and watch then he kissed her again she walked out and saw nukul hi wow you look very handsome thank you look very i mean very beautiful thank you and she went downstairs and saw laksh hey hows my bestfriend he looked at her and walked away she wonder why he didnt talk to her

laksh went to a quite place and priya followed him laksh Laksh !!! omg is this boy deaf she went next to him and holded his arm laksh whats wrong why arent you talking to me did i do something wrong or something no then why are you acting this way come inside theres a party going on come on and you have to dance with me she dragged him to the dance floor and they both danced with eachothers he put his arms on her waist and nukul was very angery then after a while manthan came and couldnt take it that someone was touching his women so he went and got his women sorry laksh but i want to dance with priya go dance with your gawar laksh left and nukul said why was you dancing with my going to be gf she dragged me i was hopeless ahh fine i bealive you but i cant take that idot dancing with priya look at the way his holding her i cant take it im going far away from here but tulsi stopped him so he watched manthan put his arms around priya which they was dancing to the song dil keh ra ha hai manthan and priy danced very well all eyes was on them tanya was getting very happy seeing them together as well as bhoomi but tanya didnt have the chance to ask manthan about his feeling towards priya and was hoping of them to get married

to be continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 12


soon the party was over and manthan still remembered what he was going to do to priya it was very late and priya was in her room and was struggling to untangle her back zip manthan came in her room very sneaky and shut the door
priya - manthan what are you doing here
manthan - shh and he opened the zip slowly to her back and kept on kissing it she felt weird but loved him soo much she didnt care whatever he did to her ahh manthan bhas karo
manthan- kyun kyun i can do what ever i want im sorry if you want me to stop ill stop loving you he had this cute puppy face she couldnt say no to
sorry manthan its me carry on
he put her on the bed and was ontop of her he continued kissing her and took her sarf off and took his shirt off she got scared because she didnt no what he was doing so she got up and sat on the bed
manthan- whats wrong priya and kissed her neck
priya - nothing just this doesnt feel right
manthan - what oh i get it i no all girls get shy when they see my body
priya laughed what no just okay he done it again and she felt okay he was ontop of her and kissed her and laksh went to see if priya was okay and saw manthan and priya and felt disgust he all these questions went in his head and he thought that manthan was upto no good and didnt like what he was doing he thinked all night about this situation on the other hand priya got her frist love bite which was on her back done by manthan

to be continued ...

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