Crossroads-Part 16 page 43!!! - Page 6

wow great just catch it wonderfull 👏

loved the ast two parts!! ugh!! dont really like karan! 😡 😡 forcing his daughter to marry!! 😡 😡 🤢

yay.. krpia ran away!! so road trip with angad?? really looking forward to it! 😆 😆

btw.. how long does it take for them to get to California?? 😕

continue soon.. will be waiting!!

Awesome part.... cnt believe her parents did that to her, i dnt blame her for running away, n kool, now da actual story is gunna tart rite???? CNt wait for da nxt part

Awesome Part Continue soon 👏 👏 👏

WOW!!! AWESUM prt... once again!!! 👏
HOW can Karan b sooo mean... if my dad did tht, i wud probably run away
too... like i said i am sooooo alike Kripa's character in this FF... i LOVE it!!!
WOW!!! Angad's like a hardcore dude... NIIICEEE!!! i like tht!!! Kripa's one
lucky chick!!! 😆 i have feeling this journey is going to b one of THE
best journeys i have ever been on!!! 😆 anywazzz... CANNOT wait to
read more!!!! so... continue soon!!! 👏
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OMG! now tell me how i missed ur ff! i knew u were starting one.. and saw the intro.. but forgot bout it.. whoopsie... i read it fianlly! i was determined to find it.. hehe.. so wow.. the chracters are totally different..

kripa is a spoiled brat angad so far sounds like a gangster kid.. lol.. that will be interesting.. cant wait to see wat happens on their journey.. i loved kripa's letter.. .. that sunny's name was bugging me.. i was like quit praising ur kid man... bravo kripa for running away and not knowing how the real world is.. its gonna be sooo interesting to read this thing.. i m way too excited rite now..

and my brain is not wokring at the moment.. so iwill comment longer later on.. lolz..

luv mansi

interesting part
so angad is a truk driver sort of person???
continue soon...

hey i luv ur work...its 2tally off the hook....well i hope u continue soonn...

wow..excellent..i really enjoyed reading it from d beginning..too gud..keep it up 👏

Originally posted by: Numera*

loveddddddddd it!!! it was from new york rite, so new york to cali whoa thats a long way!!! continue soon!

hey, yeah ny to cali is like 2 days but they take alot n i mean alot of detours😆

lmao i loved the part! well cant wait for the journey to begin! cont soon
himani

aww so sweet. thank you so much. i hope u like the next part

great part wow riding with a stranger i would have never gone for it..i'd just chicken out on that thought..angad sounds more of the rough type of guy like u-come-in-my-way-ur-screwd type of dude..lol..cont sooon

hahaha i think h's a come-here-and-lemme-punch-you type too😆thanxxx xoxoxox. yeah i think i wouldve have gone either, but whatever dats not the point.

Originally posted by: reshmi30

a lovely start cant wait

thanxxxx. i hope ur start in IF is lovey too😳

Originally posted by: *guesswho*

wohoo! I think I like the nice hot mean guy too 😆
awesome great start! can't wait for what happens on the journey 😛

i luv the nice hot mean guy man. i mean he's so nice n hot n mean. lolz thanx hun hope u like it onwards too

Originally posted by: dostokedost

hey just catch up with your new ff aqnd let mne tell you one thing oh god this is just second part and its already more then interesting ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh cann't wait to read more and yes i notice the change i also thought it only take less time bu tyour new change is good so they are coming to california haha let me know when so i could welcome them 😉 😉 😳 specially angad 😆 ummmmmmmm but one more thing you said they are going to los angels first then kirpa is going to take buss to californis but i thing la is in california 😕 anyway it really don't matter all matter is how their ride is soooooooooooooooooo conti soon 👏

awwwwww thank youuuu sooooo mcuh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! o luv long comments😳 i too mak eit more interesting wit sum funny parts. haha yeah florida jus wasnt working. cali takes 2 days but im putting some detours in it. and wut else....sry for the mistakes. you mite wanna read it over i fixed it up. its jus that it was getttng late here i was gettied tired. forget the LA part. kripa wants to go to colorado n angad is going to cali.

karishma i dont wanna be a know-it-all but no matter were he's going... colorado comes in the way doesnt it?? well of cali, yes i know it does if not of florida...(suck at geography, worst subject yet 😉 )

anywasy
Dad I'd walk on fire for you…but I cant believe that you would actually make me do that.

thats how i am.. i'd walk on fire for my parents but i trust they would never make me..

when nandani said you dont have to u shouldve said "good, cuz im not gonna!!"

that wouoldve caused some problems but still.. she couldve usedit against them..lolz

im thinking kripa has a past maybe with angad cuz she did say she lost her memory... and they found her.. loved daughter so took her in..(i know crazy but thtas how i am)

great part! cant wait for there journey!!! 😃
continue sooooonn

yes yes i noe, i screwed up there. i was tired n im bad at geography. but dats normal considering im from america (american tend to be bad at that generally) see angad has to go to cali n kirp ahas to go to colorado..n their close to eachother so anagd will drop kripa in colorado. happy? kripa didnt lose her memory? i thin ur mixing up ff;s. kripa's memory is fine. lolz newayz thanx sooo mcuh luv ya

Originally posted by: Chotii

WOW! brilliant part! completly entertaining n omg...
Dad I'd walk on fire for you…but I cant believe that you would actually make me do that. wot a line!! loved it.. i fort it woz jus sooo... aaaaaaaa awesome! i dunno.. its sucha meaningful line..
nyway, at 1st, wen u described angad 2 b a tall, evil lookin guy, i woz like no... y's he gotta look disturbin 4? lol n then aftr we got 2 meet our tru mr.hotty angad.. wen d sweatshirt cum off 😉 lol 😛
fantastic part!! keep continuin, lovin d ff!! evn tho its only 2 parts old lol
n oooooooooooo ye, a-k's journeys jus began n looks like its gonna b looooooaaaaaaaaddddddsssssssssa fun!!! cant w8 til d nxt part!!
xx!MWAH!xx
xx Saz xx

lolz eah i noe. angad seemed a lil disturbing at first but dun worry. he's a nice hot mean guy. and the line is rly one of my fav lines. if my parents ever try sumthing liek dis with me, i'll use dat line on em😆 and angad's hood came off, but i wish his sweatshirt came off too😉lolz thanx hun n keep reading

Originally posted by: *dels*

Amazing & the journey has begun😳 This journey is going to be exciting!!You know the line that u wrote last in kripa's letter, it was just..WOW! i mean it was effective. can' t wait for the next part. continue soon

heyy. i hope the journey is exciting and doesnt make any1 fall asleep. 😆thanxx hun. i rly didnt wanna put the letter part in bu i did so it wud look like a long part😆

Originally posted by: Mulle

yay youre writing a new fanfic 😛
awesome parts,pls continue soon 😳

yes i am n i hope u like it. thanx for readin xoxoxo

fab part!!!!!! hw insensitive is karan 😡 😡 😡 so glad kripa ran away.....hmmm this ride will b very interesting 😆 😆 😆 wow angad has an attitude problem 😆 😆 😆 😆 neways great part, continue sooon 👏

thanx xoxoxo. karan got issues ma, stupid dad. n angad attitude isnt a problem, its a characteristic😳lolz

Well First Set Done. xoxoxoxo

Karishma****