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Numera

@Numera*

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Posted: 18 years ago

#41

loveddddddddd it!!! it was from new york rite, so new york to cali whoa thats a long way!!! continue soon!

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himani

@Sour Skittles

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Posted: 18 years ago

#42

lmao i loved the part! well cant wait for the journey to begin! cont soon
himani

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candyprincess

@candyprincess

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Posted: 18 years ago

#43

great part wow riding with a stranger i would have never gone for it..i'd just chicken out on that thought..angad sounds more of the rough type of guy like u-come-in-my-way-ur-screwd type of dude..lol..cont sooon

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nerdynerd

@nerdynerd

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Posted: 18 years ago

#44

wohoo! I think I like the nice hot mean guy too 😆
awesome great start! can't wait for what happens on the journey 😛

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Jia

@dostokedost

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Posted: 18 years ago

#45

hey just catch up with your new ff aqnd let mne tell you one thing oh god this is just second part and its already more then interesting ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh cann't wait to read more and yes i notice the change i also thought it only take less time bu tyour new change is good so they are coming to california haha let me know when so i could welcome them 😉 😉 😳 specially angad 😆 ummmmmmmm but one more thing you said they are going to los angels first then kirpa is going to take buss to californis but i thing la is in california 😕 anyway it really don't matter all matter is how their ride is soooooooooooooooooo conti soon 👏

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#46

karishma i dont wanna be a know-it-all but no matter were he's going... colorado comes in the way doesnt it?? well of cali, yes i know it does if not of florida...(suck at geography, worst subject yet 😉 )

anywasy
Dad I'd walk on fire for you…but I cant believe that you would actually make me do that.

thats how i am.. i'd walk on fire for my parents but i trust they would never make me..

when nandani said you dont have to u shouldve said "good, cuz im not gonna!!"

that wouoldve caused some problems but still.. she couldve usedit against them..lolz

im thinking kripa has a past maybe with angad cuz she did say she lost her memory... and they found her.. loved daughter so took her in..(i know crazy but thtas how i am)

great part! cant wait for there journey!!! 😃
continue sooooonn

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Saz

@Chotii

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Posted: 18 years ago

#47

WOW! brilliant part! completly entertaining n omg...
Dad I'd walk on fire for you…but I cant believe that you would actually make me do that. wot a line!! loved it.. i fort it woz jus sooo... aaaaaaaa awesome! i dunno.. its sucha meaningful line..
nyway, at 1st, wen u described angad 2 b a tall, evil lookin guy, i woz like no... y's he gotta look disturbin 4? lol n then aftr we got 2 meet our tru mr.hotty angad.. wen d sweatshirt cum off 😉 lol 😛
fantastic part!! keep continuin, lovin d ff!! evn tho its only 2 parts old lol
n oooooooooooo ye, a-k's journeys jus began n looks like its gonna b looooooaaaaaaaaddddddsssssssssa fun!!! cant w8 til d nxt part!!
xx!MWAH!xx
xx Saz xx

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*dels*

@*dels*

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Posted: 18 years ago

#48

Amazing & the journey has begun😳 This journey is going to be exciting!!You know the line that u wrote last in kripa's letter, it was just..WOW! i mean it was effective. can' t wait for the next part. continue soon

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Mahek

@Mulle

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#49

yay youre writing a new fanfic 😛
awesome parts,pls continue soon 😳

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Rachandeep

@Rachu_1987

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Posted: 18 years ago

#50

fab part!!!!!! hw insensitive is karan 😡 😡 😡 so glad kripa ran away.....hmmm this ride will b very interesting 😆 😆 😆 wow angad has an attitude problem 😆 😆 😆 😆 neways great part, continue sooon 👏