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Posted: 18 years ago
K first things first, I dont know you so mujhse dosti karogi??? 😛
ur fanfic is just mindblowing....its perfect
i love evrythin abt it
esp d way u describe evrythin n d way u make ur parts so long 😃 plzzz keep dem long like dis in d future!
i cnt believe i havent read mismatch nd identity....man im missin out!!! 😭 😭
oh n abt angad....heas meannnn....poor kripa 😭 😭 😭 i fink his plan will go all rong because hes gna fall in love wid her 😉 well i hope he does
n awww thats so sweet how he was her idol n stuff til der 1st meeting...hey ejaz khan is my idol i hope d same fing dnt happen 2 me....i dnt wna meet ejaz khan no more 😆 😆 😆 lol jk
cept d only difference between me n kripa is dat i dnt tlk 2 his pic hehehe 😆 crazy woman but i love her innocenceeee
n in one part u mentioned abt shilpa shetty or sumthin....so im guessindat da girl who angad was yellin at it was all actin??? dey were shootin for a movie? 😛
write bk soon
mwahz xxx
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

K first things first, I dont know you so mujhse dosti karogi??? 😛
ur fanfic is just mindblowing....its perfect
i love evrythin abt it SO DO I😃
esp d way u describe evrythin n d way u make ur parts so long 😃 plzzz keep dem long like dis in d future! lol i will kill her if she didn't😃so dont worry bout that lol
i cnt believe i havent read mismatch nd identity....man im missin out!!! 😭 😭
OMG U HAVE SOoo missed out!1 lol u should go check them out RIGHT NOW they r sooooooooooooooooGOOD lol

oh n abt angad....heas meannnn....poor kripa 😭 😭 😭 i fink his plan will go all rong because hes gna fall in love wid her 😉 well i hope he does
n awww thats so sweet how he was her idol n stuff til der 1st meeting...hey ejaz khan is my idol i hope d same fing dnt happen 2 me....i dnt wna meet ejaz khan no more 😆 😆 😆 lol jk hahaha same!! u know i had always dremat about meeting Iqbal khan lol.. how sum day i would jsut bump into him but not no more!!lol which is a really good idea cus im already adicted ot hiss toruies i dont wanna be adicted to him too:P
cept d only difference between me n kripa is dat i dnt tlk 2 his pic hehehe 😆 crazy woman but i love her innocenceeee
n in one part u mentioned abt shilpa shetty or sumthin....so im guessindat da girl who angad was yellin at it was all actin??? dey were shootin for a movie? 😛
write bk soon
mwahz xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 i m just at loss of words
u r an incredible write plz carry on i just loved all of the parts its just so beautiful the way u write
keep it up 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol like i told u iwould im comenting again lol first of all i wanna eat Mexican food lol!! i've alwasy "heared" bout it but never actuly tried it.. im not a fancy restranut type of person lol.. WAIT.. i LUv Taco Bell!1 is that mexican though?? lol u see i have absolute no knowledge bout Mexico excpet the cow boy stuff lol..i read a book about them lol lol.. hehehe the cow boy in the book sounded CUTE lol hehehe and he was like 14 or sumtin:P.. i think lol
i got confused whent he lady came.. and then im like OOO ok lol cus i was like thwere di she xcum from but then im like ooo shes the waiter dude's mother... ahhhh "waiter dude" 😳 lol now thats a memory that can never be forgoten
aww and i felt soooooo bad for KRIPA i mean when she was walking away from him cus .. sumthin sumthin his dignity lol bbut seriously poor girl!!i feel soo bad ffor her STUPID PEOPLE!!bu i was just like 😳 when he said she looked pritii when she cried and threw up lol... hmmm that reminds me of sum1 lol o gosh lol i cant belive im actuly thinknig about this!!
lol
but u saiid that eveything was ognna be reveled in the next part!! i didnt see nything geting reveled in this part! u lied!!!
o wait actully u didnt.. or did u lol cus u did say next part.. maybe this was another1 of ur 1/2 parts i really cant keep track of parts lol but i remvebr u teling me that.. lol dont kill me if im wrong:P:P lol
hehehehe
im bored now
im gonna go eat ice-cream lol
bibi
o and continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
and thanks to all the people who pm'd u lol atleast now u know whats gonna happen in the furtue lol!!
SO DONT SCREW UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol
ur dooing really really good with IDentitiy im like in love wiht after readint that part i read today lol
soo keep wrintg the way u do and DONT CHANGE unless its for the good lol

bii now
i relly wanna go eat that ice-cream
bii
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww... angad's cho chweet! i jus hope he isn't actin so dat he'll make her miserable later! keep up the awesome work!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

omg, I finally get time to comment!! So sorry man!! I have been real busy…a lot going on… news flash: we lost the competition!! There were 21 teams, and we were so excited when we passed the first round and were a part of the top 4 teams! And then, just like last year, we lost to the same team, this time by 25 points!! It sucked!! I was mourning over it yesterday, all day, but im just gonna let bygones be bygones, my teacher told me to forget it, and that's what I am gonna do. "There is no use crying over spilled (split?) milk!"

It was just that, I felt that I should have done better and listened to all my team mates because I was the captain, and it was my duty to answer the questions correct!! If I would have given the correct answer to one toss-up, we would have gotten a bonus, and if we had gotten the bonus, we could have tied, and gotten another chance!! UGH!! (another thing I found pretty darn sad, but hilarious at the same time was when they asked us who the villain against spiderman will be in Spiderman 3, my team didn't remember, but since out coach told us to always give an answer, even if we aren't sure if its right, and I said "Evil Spiderman" it was so hilarious, the judges were laughing their a** off!😆)

And the stupid coach for the other team was throwing dirty looks our way, and when we lost, I said something not-so-nice about what should happen to her, and then… like my friends said….karma.. I lost my iPod !! Plz pray that I find it soon, my parents will kill me if they find out!! Okies, now I am gonna stop talking about this (will discuss details later ;)) and talk about the part!!

K, so, the previous parts were fab… I was just going wow through the whole thing…. Angad was her idol?! That is just plain sad… she trusted her idol so much, and was so expectant about meeting him! I really have a feeling that he isn't bad, she just jumped to conclusions or something, she didn't hear him out. I also don't think that he would succeed in his original plan! He will become too nice for that, and won't be that cold-hearted!

I loved how you gave the little thing about the scene at the market or something, when Kripa is fighting with the grocery dude, and then he charges so much for the cauliflower and stuff when he sees richy-rich Angad!! That was so funny, I was lmao!!

I actually was pretty dam* shocked when I read this part, like, angad's attitude in it! he actually seemed so nice and all, that it made me think of the story and stuff that I've mentioned above^^. I really hope that him being nice is actually all coming from the bottom of his heart, and is a reflex. I don't wanttt it to be to gain her trust because then it means that he is not even close to reconsidering his plan!!

Another thing: This Mexico thing was so out-of-the-blue it makes me suspicious…But I'm lovin it (parapapapa im lovin it, <reminds me of the McDonald's ad!! Lol!>) …. Angad was checking Kripa out!! HAHA!! Loved the description of her from his point of view, pretty, in a unique way, the fact that he had seen prettier girls, but she was more angelic and innocent, and how she made a cheap dress look 10 times better, and how she gave a heavenly look to stuff….it was all so….PERFECT!!

Man, I just reread it, because I didn't comment right after reading it… so this will be a bit longer than expected….lol….so here I go… LOVED how Kripa described Angad to the little boy, she made him sound so handsome, that he said "Wow, I didn't know I was that good" and Kripa realizing that the young boy was checking her out!! LOL!!!

What the heck man??? She didn't get her iced tea!! Lol!! She has to do everything the boss tells her to do??? GRRRRR!!! I WANT ICED TEA!! I loveeee iced tea, man, I gotta go tell my dad to buy me some peach iced tea!! (am obsessed with Snapple :P)

LMFAO!! Angad told the lady that they were married, and then when he mentioned the part about praying for their little kid, I was literally ROTFLMAO!! My mom was right behind me and she was like, what is so funny, that you keep on smiling and minimizing the window when I am looking? I was like, ahem, nothinggggg….😉

Aw man, that thing about him marrying her buffalo chachi, was such a rude insult!! That stupid monkey….but he called her chachi a buffalo😆 😆

"The rest of the journey to the airport went quite peacefully." Thank goodness!! 😆 😳 It was so sad about how Kripa felt bad about hanging around Angad because he was all rich and stuff, and she looked different..😭But I cant believe he went to the ladies bathroom!! [:))] See, that's the guy I want, a guy that has guts like that!!

Some teenagers can be so stupid!! Girls, especially, I mean what is with the giggling!!😕 I just wanna strangle them when they laugh continuously for a sarcastic remark, corny joke, or no reason at all!! 😡Its like, can you please shut up, before I do it for you? LOL!! 😆So silly and stupid!- I agree with Angad on this one…

Guys can be a bit more mature in these things, except sometimes teenaged guys get a bit too mature!!🤢 I would know, having spent so much time with my friends, and all these other guys at school!! They can get a bit disgusting!! (Well, okay, really sick and digusting!!)

K, I am getting carried away once again!! I loved the little hug thing!! It was so cute and adorable!!😳 Its really hard to find someone to hug like that, a hug which provides such security and comfort, and isn't forced!! And I agree with Angad on another thing—I hate seeing people cry!! Even though I do it as well, sometimes for no reasons (weird and creepy, I know!)

Its no use to waste tears, crying isn't always the cure for things, facing it helps better than just crying over it!! 😊

So yea, here is my comment, wow, its pretty long, I just realized that… well, enjoy reading it…. and now we will be getting another long part I hope!! 😉Cont Soon!

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P.S – Why does Kripa keep on throwing up?😕 Is she ok?? Was it just the surroundings or something, maybe, Angad forcing her to eat that food when she only wanted iced tea?? Hope it isn't anything too big or serious!!

P.S.S- Sorry, didn't get a chance to pm the concept thing to you, I think it's a bit late for that… is it? I think you have it planned out, are getting the gist of it…. it seems that way from the part! If you still need a concept, then tell me, ill write one out and pm it to you!! 😳

P.S.S.S- "If ever by chance you spot your high school teacher in a store the first thing you do is run away crashing into people, and run as if your life depends on it, only because you do not want to say hi" What was thattt all about???!! Lol!! 😆Was it just some random thought? (Randomness is totally my thing...ask Mansi😉....orr...if you read the though boxes in ROMH, those are actually all my thoughts, well duh, anyways, they are all gonna be so random, you have noo ideaa😆) My teacher just said the exact same thing yesterday….creepy…he was all like, when you guys graduate, don't come back to school, hang around here, or something, its just stupid, I hate it. and I was like, I am still gonna come for service hours, if you like it or not. LOL!

Okay, Okay, am seriously gonna stop now and go watch Dhoom, I never watched the first one, so decided to watch it. Come on Yahoo so we can talk, mansi and I want to have that conference thing on Monday!!

<3

Madiha😳

Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part after reading the magnificent i read the marvellously descriptive part of madiha both r simply exquisite 😆 well priview seems a bit suspicious angads not planning to hurt poor kripa or somethings fishy anyways con asap
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 awesome dear well writen 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 can i kill u now?? lol soo wat was ur address... ?? 😆 lol no really where on earth r u!!! its been like FOREVER!!! tommaorw i have to go to my cousin's daughter's 2nd b-day party in the eavening soo i wont be home!!
and if u post the part then.. then when will i read it like tuesday... that too AFter school!!!!!! omg thats like centeries away1!!! u have no clue how bored u have made me lol i tried cooking for gods sake!! and all i ended up with is a messed ktichen which i refuse to touch and soar stomach!! lol and my poor daddy was all like "aww mere bete ne paarata banaiya hai!" lol and u should've seen his face when he acctully saw it hahaha lol and he still had some!! lol hehehe that was fun lol except now.. my stomch hurts lol.. i dont think it was well cooked hehehehehehe lol i tried cooking it lol but it was starting to burn ... i think it was a little toooooooo thick and i think i made it wrong as welll... i was checking out how to ACCTULLY make1 and ur appost to take tooo pieces of roti's and put them together.. or sumthin lol i just made a took a round piece of dough and mixed everything in it lol NOT the best way to make it... and yuck it took me 3 hours to tkae the dough off of my hands i mean seriously wats up with that!! lol owwwwwwwwwwww!lol my stomch still hurting!!!!! gosh stupid thing!! lol and i think u have sumthing to do with it!! see.. if u had posted the part i would've been happy and not bored.. but see i got bored and then hungry.. lol and then i started craving for desi food lol and my moms gone to sum party with my siss.. brother is at work i was to be gooing shopping iwth my firned but she had sum shit gooin on soo she couldnt cum!! BASICALLY i was home alone soo i had to make sumthin on my own lol which is when this entire mess started lol .. soo u did have sumthin to doo with it!!
now before sumthin else happens post the next part ASAP!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: goldi2

😆 can i kill u now?? lol soo wat was ur address... ?? 😆 lol no really where on earth r u!!! its been like FOREVER!!! tommaorw i have to go to my cousin's daughter's 2nd b-day party in the eavening soo i wont be home!!
and if u post the part then.. then when will i read it like tuesday... that too AFter school!!!!!! omg thats like centeries away1!!! u have no clue how bored u have made me lol i tried cooking for gods sake!! and all i ended up with is a messed ktichen which i refuse to touch and soar stomach!! lol and my poor daddy was all like "aww mere bete ne paarata banaiya hai!" lol and u should've seen his face when he acctully saw it hahaha lol and he still had some!! lol hehehe that was fun lol except now.. my stomch hurts lol.. i dont think it was well cooked hehehehehehe lol i tried cooking it lol but it was starting to burn ... i think it was a little toooooooo thick and i think i made it wrong as welll... i was checking out how to ACCTULLY make1 and ur appost to take tooo pieces of roti's and put them together.. or sumthin lol i just made a took a round piece of dough and mixed everything in it lol NOT the best way to make it... and yuck it took me 3 hours to tkae the dough off of my hands i mean seriously wats up with that!! lol owwwwwwwwwwww!lol my stomch still hurting!!!!! gosh stupid thing!! lol and i think u have sumthing to do with it!! see.. if u had posted the part i would've been happy and not bored.. but see i got bored and then hungry.. lol and then i started craving for desi food lol and my moms gone to sum party with my siss.. brother is at work i was to be gooing shopping iwth my firned but she had sum shit gooin on soo she couldnt cum!! BASICALLY i was home alone soo i had to make sumthin on my own lol which is when this entire mess started lol .. soo u did have sumthin to doo with it!!
now before sumthin else happens post the next part ASAP!!!!!

hina hun... i just wanted to say that.. u r the cutest person ever!... ur soo sweet with the comments.. lol.. u post ur life on here.. its nice to kno about it..

ok me done..

mansi

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