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Posted: 18 years ago
i just read the last 2 parts. they were halarious!!!

u want us to pm u i get it but about waht?? i mean, write a part or tell u how u should make UR fanfic go?? lolz

just kidding but please do tel me what u awnt us to pm (ideas) and i will.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Friends,

I have to go out for an hour or two, as soon as I am back I will start writing the next part. 😊

Thanks to everyone who sent in comments & most importantly a bear hug 🤗 to all those who sent in PM's - will add more on this later! 😳

Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey looking foward 2 da update!!continue asap
ur FF roX
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Originally posted by: dostokedost

😆GOD THEY BOTH FIGHT LIKE KIDS 😆LOE THIS PART PLS CONTI SOON 👏👏👏

lol... Yes, I will continue soon... Thank you soooo much for taking out the time to reply! 😃

Originally posted by: Mulle

omg the last parts were just soooooo awesome Thank you dear!
i like your fanfic sooo much, that i even skipped doing my home work, just so i could read it
*MOUTH WIDE OPEN* no no no dear finish your homework first!! Tell your self that I will do the homework first, and as prize will get to read the FF's.... 😛 I can't call the parts I write a treat! They are far from it – actually, the one I wrote today for the first time I enjoyed writing it! 😳 just hope you will like it!
anyways cant wait to read the next part 😉😛

Originally posted by: goldi2

oo.. i see how it is.. so ur now gonna post 1/2 a part or sumthing?? No no yaar, actually the thing is I was supposed to include the second half in the first half it self, but since I got lazy I said second half 😊... Besides, that second half should have had only the vegetable & house scene, but instead it became big! 🤢..like u know how u osted 1/2 of it before and 1/2 of it now... why do u do that?? See, sometimes when I plan parts I decide this will happen in the part, but at times I get lazy so I say second half later! 😆 why dont u just make it 2 different parts?? 😕lol just asking...:P I couldn't do that! Sorry yaar once something comes in my mind – it stays that way – I can't quite change it! 😕

but great part this is really reminding me of Jaisi Jasia Koi nahi.. have u seen the show??
JJKN was my favorite show of all time! 😃
Angad reminds me of Arman ..
Actually, Armaan was better 😛 i loved Armaan! but im not really understanding why hes dooing this.. wait, till the next part! I promise I will reveal everything! i mean i know he wants reveng.. OO i know.. is this like his plan or sumthin.. i remember reading Angad saying he was gonna marry her.. yes! 😊
and why was kripa sooo happy??
The girl dreamt about him yaar.... see this is again taken from my best friend lol! 😆My best friend hated srk (i know who can hate srk? But, she did!) a few days back she dreamt that she hugged him & really liked him, so I am like maybe a part of you does not want to hate him. The situation is similar with Kripa, she hates him for that incident, but before she always admired him! she was happy because in her dream he was a really nice person... 😊 just hope i make sense!
lol okk.. am i just the confused 1 or is this appost to be a mystery?? lol:P
LOL! Now, this is what I loved reading the most... ehehehhehe

Hina

Hina dear, I am disappointed you didn't write quite a long comment... 😭 I love hearing things from you.... 😛 i m serious yaar, you r quite a interesting person... 😆

Originally posted by: pooja1221

it was amazing! Thanks dear! 😊n i'm loving the long parts... n plz don't have angad do something horrible to her n i don't get why he's being so nice n friendly with her! Hehehehe, hmmm that's a secret...actually, wait till the next part! 😉 i mean he's not being harsh after wat he'd sworn to do! Well, wait till the next part! oo n i hav a feelin dat chahiji will arrange Kripa's wedding with Prithvi 🤢eww.. n i stongly dislike chahiji!!! same!
and yaa gr8 job! 👏o n ya i love their fights 😆😆! they're adorable!
Thanks pooja! I am glad you find them adorable! 😃

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

perfect way of cheering me up afetr revsion really?

i loved the dialogue by jripa's chachi ' kahan mar gaye' 😆😆havent heard in a loooon time!
Hehehehe!

mexico?? im thinking something bad is going to happen.. maybe the first part of the plan will be executed??
**no comments**

waiting for friday now!

and i love kripa and angad's banter!!
Aww, I am glad you do!

Originally posted by: koolaries4

fantastic.. Thank you dear! 😊Am missing your long comments! cant wait for firday..

Originally posted by: Desi Pride

awww it was amazing!!! Thank you! 😃yo kripa rly gota messed up house 😆no offense. Yes, condition does play a major role in this FF! but kinda reminds me of vivah only its much better. Yes, while I was writing it I did have Vivah in mind! i still think anagd is cool yeee! 😃, and i luved the ending line. great now i have another reason to desperately await for friday

Originally posted by: hello64

amazing part Thank you kanwer!
I actually reall liked it
yeee! I am glad!
I think angad can be really mean sometimes
yes, he can be!
but then Again I get where your going with his character.

I thought that when angad came to kripas house
Prithvi would come and then angad would get
All jelous because I think he will slowly like kripa 😳Looking at the fact that he noticed how tired and Rude her family (hate them 😭)actually is
Hmmm that never came in my mind! I could have fully used that, since obviously he had asked Kripa out! And, she hadn't gone!

Just a thought 😉 lol! okay, that will be used in the future!


kanwer
😳

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part...Thanks! 😊it was excellent... i liked the part wid da subjiwala n da part at kripas house loll 😆Actually, to tell you the truth those were the only ones planned... they were supposed to go in first half only! There would be no need of second half then, but I got lazy & said second half... And, started writing it, and oh my god, it became long, the rest was just gibberish! N y was angad calling kripa's chachi chachiji loll 😆😆lol! Respect dear!! 😛

Originally posted by: Numera*

loved the part!!! yay mexico hmm wonder what will happen there! Ouuuuu lots of exciting stuff coming up – at least i find it exciting! 😛continue soon!

Originally posted by: erier101

OMG!! how did u noe?? 😳it was mansi wasnt it??? Hehehehe yes it was Mansi! gosh, how come u guys always talk lol! and then dissapear when i come back from school 😆well, thanx for the bday wish 😳and ill read ure two parts now! Sorry oh don't be sorrryyy yaar! Take your own time 😊..., didnt get a chance to read either one, was wound up in stuff yes, I can understand... I hope you guys won today! 😳

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part Thank you! 😊 i wonder wat will happen

Originally posted by: mansi1219

hello again..

man i m gettin lazier by the day.. lol! Same hereee! but i feel bad if i dont comment.. don't feel bad seriously why would you feel bad? i think u guys do a terrific job and its mean not to comment back ohhh no dear! its not mean... but, yes i think ppl should comment if they read it, a lil feedback can go a long way.. so here it goes!

the part was fantabulous!
Thank you!! 😳i dont understand y u always think its not good.. I will be very honest! I really though the vegetable & house scene was fine, the rest I wasn't too sure! Besides, I liked Part 4 A better! neway... i really liked it.. i was totally surprised the way it turned out.. yeee! 😊

wat is angad tryin to do? he yells at ehr but puts his pic in her cabin..
LOL! Well, its not like its done on purpose, to tell you the truth it was actually his cabin before (along with the present cabin), but he gives it away to his PA... i thought it was soo silly of her to talk to the pic like taht awww actually, to tell you the truth I really liked Kripa talking to the pic in the show! But, the way i put it i doubt i did justice to it... i didn't like that part as well... i really thought he uwd come in any second.. lol! i def was surprised with teh dream nad blush bit! i was like wow.. i didnt kno she admired him too.. like i knew she collected articles and read up on him.. but like i thought it changed after knowing him.. well... feelings can be very complicated, especially when you admire someone more... see, when your feelings get serious, you try to overlook even the wrong things.... try to think about someone you have a crush on....if things r really serious i have seen people who overlook the person's mistakes! josh is a sweetie pie! like their relationship.. oh yesss!

urghh her stupid chachi.. good chacha.. cant wait till MEXICO! fun fun.. really wondering how the whole trip will go.. it can really end up both ways..
yup! o btw u did get a lot of comments on kaa too.. just so u kno! Hehehe yes!.. andi mite pop in adn out here and tehre .. lol.. it depends on me mood at the time.. lol! Okay!

o and ANGAD hates bossing people around? wat??? he does taht wit kripa all the time man..
hehehehe! Yes, have you met people in life who r veryy dominating? Well, he is one of those dominating types for sure! poor girl.. he treats her like dirt! Yup! hope he turn into a cute person on this trip.. or he is gonna c some hatred.. wait & watch! but i cant hate shiv.. lol... this is so funny now.. i wanna say GOO shiv! LOL! yet boo angad for being mean.. lol!!!! lol... thats not possible.. ok well.. i m done blabbering.. Hey, thanks a lot, really had a wonderful time reading your comment! 😳

luv mansi

O and HAPPY B'DAY.. BIRTHDAY GIRL!!! 😃

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

great part. cont soon. Thank you dear!

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

hey Sona, (hope u dunt mind me calling u tht!!! No, i dont! 😊)
ok, first of all, AMAZING prt, like ALWAYS!!!!
Thank you rutu! lol!!!! 👏Lol!!! 👏👏
nd Josh is soooo sweet, i LOVE his character!!!
Awwww! well, u already know
wht i think abt Angad, so i wont say anything!!!
LOL! lol!!! but i think u shud
keep on making Angad jealous, coz i LOVE jealous Angad!!!!
OKAY! 😉
ok... now moving onto the new entry, i have NO IDEA how Prithvi, a
drunkard nd flirt, will change Kripa's life!!
He will... Just wait & watch! but, tht has got me
hooked!!!
Lol! nd i REALLY wanna know how he does it!!! lol!!! i can NEVER
EVER imagine Prithvi wearing those kind of 'mavaali' clothes, tht's just
toooo funny!!!!
Lol! but, it still made my day!!!! :)
ok... now moving onto Kripa's wierd talk to Angad's PHOTO!!! tht's just
funny!!!! lol!!! i WILL NOT say it is wierd, bcoz i do too sumtimes!!! 😳i
know, it may sound wierd to sum people, but i think it is kinda fun!!!
Hey, I found it veryyy cute in KYPH, but i really didn't have fun writing it out... i dunno maybe i didn't do complete justice to the scene!
anywazzz, the first conversation was REALLY funny!!!
LOL!
but the last conversation got kinda intense, but it was REALLY gud!!!
Yess! I liked that too!
the way u described the way poor people struggle with everything, like
buying vegetables, their living conditions, was just MINDBOGGLING!!!
Thank you dear! i
mean, u described it was PERFECT!!!
Actually, its thanks to the movies I watch! LOL! u have an AMAZING writing talent!!! Umm ask my high school english teacher... I am sure she will disagree.. lol!
i LOVED it!!!
Hey, rutu, thanks for writing in to mee! I really had fun reading your comment! 😃
anywazzzzz, continue soon!!!! 😛


p.s. abt the whole concept thing, i will think abt it and pm it to u soon
oh no, don't worry!

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

awesome..Thanks dear! 😊.really good.i feel sorry for kripa ...just wish she is not pained to much by angad....she already suffers alot yesss!
i love your style and you write really good
awww thank you!

Originally posted by: rimsibani

hey buddy Hi bani!...it tuk me an hr 2 read yer stuff....wow!! n lemme say...its stupendous.... 👏omg omg...its shoooo nice.... thank you dear that's very sweet of you to say it!....very well ritten...n all d feelins expressed in a crystal clear way...wow....con soon...we are allw aitin..... okay i will!

luv,
bani

Originally posted by: Desi Pride

yea man. i ahte it wen dat happens...i try to literally have my ending ready when i start a ff, cuz den ur more confident and sure of wut ur doing yes!!! . like in the mid of restless heart i totally changed what was gonna happen, and it killed me!!yes, i know what you mean! i pm u an idea its alright dear! I am seriousss! but...later cuz i gota think bout it cuz the only thing goin through my head is "KILL CHACHI LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL!" 😆so i'll get bac to ya...jus pray my idea doesnt have anything to do with death wishes and lechery LOLLLL! lolz

Originally posted by: goldi2

OMG!!!!!! LOL! ur joking me!!! LOL --- seee, this is what I missed in your last comment...
how can u not know!!!
Before you freak out! Trust me, the way I was heading it I did know where it was going, however I was slightly confused over one thing! omg noo i mean seriouly i realldy dont want nything happening to this story tis soo much fun LOL! lol its acctully helpin me study i go hina hehehehehehehhee!... its ok just a little more work and u get to read LOL LOL lol i have been dooing work all day long since i have a this drama thing soo my group members were evr and was having this sudden "craving" to cum on the forum and read Lol! lol but my frineds didnt let me hahaha that seriously think im addicted yes, you areee! which i know i am!! but lol can u blame me!! if peole like u r gonna write such fab stories how can i not read lol!! That is veryyyy sweet of you Hina jaan...
hahahaha i wounder who dissappointed u:P
lol! poor person doesnt even know what its missing out on well, it was you Hina!!! I missed reading out your long comment... especially when you talk about yourself – gosh, its hilarious! lol but ur right study cumes first i have been trying to do that but its hard!! I can understand... Don't tell anyone, but i post parts before studying lol! but i suceeded today i mean i have been rehersing for the play since 12 in the afternoon FINALLY like at 5 we finnished .. wowwwww! Give a pat to yourself on the back!! Be proud of yourself!! we didnt "finish" but we were to tired to redu it again lol so now we have to meet up again tommaorw which meeans i might have to read ur part late:(!! LOL! lol nywyas!! i loved ur parts and i seriously plan to kill u if u even think about messing this story up i mean seriously hehehehehehhehehe feel freeee too kill me! lol i want this to be really really really good!! Chaloooo at least i have someone who will tell me if i am going wrong! so u bette rnot do nutihing wonr lol i've got my eys on u:P:P:P:P LOL!!
lol
i have to go take off my contacts:P
but u continue soon!! mor elike ASAP!!
Okieee dear!


biii
luv u


Hina:)

Haila Hina, seriously man your comments are soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hilarious!!!! Just LOVE reading them! Don't you dare not comment – I have got my eyes on you! The future of this FF lies in your handsssssss 😉LOL!

Originally posted by: brainychild92

i just read the last 2 parts. they were halarious!!! Hey, thanks dear! 😃

u want us to pm u i get it but about waht?? i mean, write a part or tell u how u should make UR fanfic go??
Awww don't worry about it! lolz

just kidding but please do tel me what u awnt us to pm (ideas) and i will.
Oh nooo don't worry about it dear!

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏👏👏awesome Thanks monika! 😃

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

hey looking foward 2 da update!!continue asap
ur FF roX

Yes, another readerrrrrrr! 😃 Thanks dear!!! Oh & please do continue your FF!

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Thank youu sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for sending in comments!!!!!
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You guyssss are soooooooo sweet! 😃I had a wonderful time reading all the comments! 😳You guys take out a lot of time & put a lot of effort - I just hope you are paying attention to your studies!!!!!!!! 😊😊😊

Hope you all have a wonderful weekend! I will be back on Monday now. Next part coming up in a few mins! 😛 I just hope it lives upto your expectations! 😊

Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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Part 5 – On the way to Mexico

27th February, 2007

4:00 am

"If ever by chance you spot your high school teacher in a store the first thing you do is run away crashing into people, and run as if your life depends on it, only because you do not want to say hi"

A lone figure stood in the room overlooking the window gazing at the night sky. It was late November, fall had just begun and the leaves had turned a shade of red, a few were wilting, while others still remained on the branches of trees only to be plucked by little kids.

The moon appeared to be bright and distant, and the only source of light in the otherwise dark room. It penetrated through the window falling across the floor like a blanket.

The window was wide open and the only occupant in the room was a lady in her low 20's, she stood in front of the window with the cool breeze ruffling through her hair, and appeared quite tensed easily lost in her own thoughts.


The night was still very much alive when Angad Khanna stepped out of his house, with the millions of stars embedded in the sky still shining brightly gazing at him, the moon light falling on his face, the light wind breezing past made it all seem stunning.

On the way up to his PA's house, he spotted a bunch of long coniferous tress lined up in a row. The view was indeed splendid, with trees on the side, small hills creeping up now and then, the road moving up and down like a inclined place, clouds forming up in the sky, and the air a bit distant and moist added a wonderful touch to the view.


The stars blinked in the night sky and they reminded her of her old habit, whenever she would be upset about something she would go out in the open and sit for as long as she could remember. She had been taught that once people passed away they would become the stars of the sky casting light in our lives. So, she would sit in front of the stars and complain about her life and imagine someone giving her advice.

Her life was similar to the stars in the sky unknown, uncertain, lost and most importantly scattered.


The Khanna lad got down from his brand new Mercedes, and strolled towards the doorway in a relaxed pace. With his shoulders broad rising up, a lazy smile playing on his lips, hair nicely gelled back, and shoulders moving from the side, as he walked gave him the look of a gorgeous Greek god.

Before he could knock on the door, the door opened to reveal a tired looking girl standing in front of him with her hair left open and moving back due to the wind. Her face looking all tired, yet managing to give out that bright look and her eyes twinkled, as they took in his appearance.

Kripa had never ever appreciated this man's charm, from day one, she had termed him ugly all due to his personality, but if looks could be deceiving then Angad Khanna would be an excellent proof.

The guy was handsome, devastatingly handsome, nice broad shoulders, and muscles bulging from the side – that any girl would die for made him look all the more stunning. And, to add to it the unshaven look he wore all the time made him appear so manly, along with the strong jaw line giving him a rough look. While the gorgeous green big eyes, could read anyone's mind, with a gaze so powerful that anyone could melt under it. That there was no need of heat in this slightly cold weather – Angad Khanna was sufficient to provide 'the heat' to any girl.

"If you are done checking me out... can we leave?"

She instantly blushed at his words. Damn! He could really read minds. She turned her gaze to the floor and looked uncomfortable, as she looked around trying to find an excuse. But, soon the uncomfortable vanished, and instead replaced anger.

How dare he? What do he think of himself? She had to remember he called her ugly before, and she would die before admit that he was hideously handsome.

She pulled the bag in front so hard that it almost knocked Angad out, it hit him flat on the leg making him wince in pain, while she strolled to the side and walked to the car, while behind her Angad said some not so fine to her.

****

They had crossed the city, and were passing some secluded area with hills, beautiful mountains, streams, and farms when Kripa fell asleep.

Angad looked at her sleeping peacefully she resembled a heavenly looking angel, her cute innocent face all relaxed, and the smile on those luscious lips indicated she was dreaming about something nice.

He smiled, as he recollected her one sentence before she fell asleep, "If you think I am stupid, then you have to get your brain checked. I have heard about all those k-shows, in which a guy and a girl go out of the place for some work matter, and of course have all those romantic scenes & fall in love, but ----"

To which he had chuckled and replied, "that is not going be the case with us, so relax we will have no romantic scenes"

In his life, he had dated so many models and actresses some of whom were beauty queens, but they really weren't any match to this beauty next to him. Kripa Sharma was beautiful. Despite wearing some very cheap quality clothes some of were torn she had carried them with such grace, and made them all so stunning, that people would buy them would the dress for a price 10x more than they were worth.

He wouldn't exactly call her the prettiest girl on the face of this earth, since he had seen girls that were prettier than her. But, there was something unique about her, which he couldn't exactly pinpoint... she was pretty, yet at the same time she had this innocence on her face, which he had rarely seen.

She didn't have any trace of make up. Nor did he see any lip gloss on her lips, they were naturally shiny, her eyelashes needed no mascara, they were long, and curled nicely at the ends making her appear like a barbie doll. Her nose was straight and nicely centered – it was really small, her eyes were simply gorgeous – slightly chocolate brown, yet with a Grey tinge in them. They still held the innocence of a teenager; those chocolate brown eyes would be something anyone would die for. While, her cheeks were chubby and naturally pink, they needed no blush -- in his 26 years of life, he had never seen a natural beauty, but here was one sitting right next to him.... If without makeup this girl was a pretty girl, then he couldn't imagine what makeup would do to her.

The heavy rain brought him out of his thoughts, he was forced to stop the car, and bring the roof on top. It was very unusual for it to rain in Mumbai in November. The rain reminded me of his first encounter with Kripa Sharma, which was also highly unusual, and he was forced to ponder on whether the rain had any significance in this story.

****

Kripa yawned, as she stretched her arms widely, and took in the unfamiliar surroundings. Panicking slightly she got down from the car shut the door, and wondered where her partner had disappeared.

She checked the trunk, and noticed his bag was still there, so he had to be around. She looked at the small hotel in front of her with very few occupants, which wasn't so strange, since it was only 5-00 AM, and in a area like this with virtually no land the only people inside the hotel would be travelers like her.

She made her way inside the hotel, and looked around for her partner. She glanced around for a couple of times, but she didn't catch him, so she was forced to make her way to the counter. The cashier was busy engrossed in his work, while a young lad stood in the corner taking in orders.

She went near him, bent down, and asked, "Have you seen a tall man here? He is about 6'1, has green eyes, slightly brown hair, which is gelled back, broad shoulders, and.... um" she knew she was forgetting something, "oh yes, he has muscles... that too very nice ones" the guy blinked for which she was forced to repeat everything again.

The guy looked up, and froze. Ugh, a young guy staring at her was not a pretty sight.

"Wow, I didn't know I was that good"

She turned around for which she was met with a chuckle. So, the young boy was looking at Angad trying to match the description, and here she was thinking he had a crush on her. Sick. But, then again younger guys did always have a crush on her.

They made their way to the table. Angad had motioned the young lad to come by, and ordered a few things for breakfast.

"Kripa, if you are out of your dreamland, would you order something? The poor boy is waiting"

She looked up annoyed, "I don't want anything. Just get me Iced tea" and she dismissed the guy.

"Hey you wait...." the boy came back, "Kripa, what is this nonsense?" he yelled angrily coming closer, "You are not getting her Iced tea!" he barked at the young boy who just nodded his head in fear "Kripa, order something decent. I know you will blame me, if the flight does not give food of your choice, and I don't want to hear any of your excuses"

"I won't. I don't need anything" she replied again

The boy began to walk away again, when Angad stopped him, "get the same thing for her as well."

"What are you doing Angad? Didn't I make myself clear that I am not eating anything"

"And, I think I made myself more than clear that you will eat something"

"What the hell man? Who are you to boss around with me?" she replied angrily now getting up.


"I don't want my PA to fall sick." He replied in a no nonsense tone, "Look, I don't care whether you want to eat or not. I could care less about you... my only concern is because you are my PA. We are not going to Mexico for a vacation. You are going to be on your toes working constantly, and I am pretty sure Mexican food is not something you will indulge in, so this is my final request to you eat something or you will have acidity problems..."

"So, if the boss says sleep, then I sleep, if the boss says eat, then I eat?" she said sarcastically

"Yes." he replied with a smile, "I am glad we are on the same page now"

Kripa gave him a angry look, and like a school kid she sat with her hands folded furious that she did not get her chocolate, which of course was the Iced Tea.

****

Angad and Kripa walked up to the counter to pay for their little breakfast, as soon as Angad forwarded a 100 Rs – Kripa forwarded her note, while the cashier looked confused at the two.

It was highly amusing when he met customers, in which many were willing to pay for the money – they would push each other away to pay for the bill or sit and argue over who is paying the bill for hours.

In this particular instance, the green-eyed boy put the money in front, and said, "Don't take it from her"

"No, take mine as well" she demanded from the cashier.

"Don't listen to her," he said looking at the cashier thoroughly ignoring the pretty girl next to him.

"No, listen to me" she replied giving the green-eyed boy an angry look, as she tried to push him away, and put the bill in front.

Now, this is what the cashier hated in his job. Customers, who were too enthusiastic over paying the bill was not a problems, but ones who kept going 'take it from me' it was so confusing to pick one, some times he felt like saying, "how about you both give me the money?" Since he hated listening to one, and turning down the other. As it is he wasn't good at making choices, which could explain his wife, who was ridiculously stupid, and was the butt of jokes by his mother.

Before he could make a choice between the pretty girl, and the green-eyed boy, the pretty girl was lifted up by the green-eyes boy, while she hit him on his hands, as he chuckled and turned her in the opposite direction still maintaining his good hold on her.

And, that's when someone chose to make a wrong entry. That someone would be his mother, a short, plum lady, looking sweet with her nice round face, her hair tied in two plaits with a pair of big round glasses, since her eyesight wasn't too good due to old age.

She came to tell him something, but when she noticed the couple in the side, the guy holding the girl tightly in his arms, while she hit him on his arms, and say, "Angad, leave me alone" she smiled remembering about her husband.

"hayeee kya jodi hain/ haye, what a couple" she said to her son, the cashier, who pretended to not hear her words.

She put her hands in front, and pretended to take nazar away from them, as she added, "kisiki nazaar lage tum duno ko/ May no one's bad eye get you" she said this time loudly.

At her words she noticed the couple turn around, the guy turned around with the girl still in his arms, he looked completely shocked at her words, while she noticed the girl turn a deep shade of red.

"Ma," said the annoyed cashier, "go and check on chameli"

But, his mother continued to ignore him, and looked on at the couple, she quickly asked, "boy friend? girl friend?"

The green-eyed boy recovered completely from his shock, and instead replied, "nahin maaji humhari shaadi ho chuki hain/ no maaji, we are married" he said bringing the girl closer to him with a smile on his lips, the girl blushed, at least from the lady's perspective.

Kripa was furious in anger, as she heard Angad say those words she immediately smiled, and tried to pull out of Angad's tight hold, but failed miserably.

"honey moon pe jaa rahe ho kya?/ are you going on your honey moon?" she demanded smiling.

"Ma," said the cashier, pulling his mother, "go inside"

She waved at the pretty boy, and blew him a kiss, for which she was nicely returned one also with the words, "Maaji humhe ashirwaad dijiye ki humhara munna jaldi aa jayee!"

Kripa fainted in his arms at his last words

****

The next time she opened her eyes the sun already risen in the sky spreading its light and warmth everywhere. Angad was driving the car with a medium pace humming some tune.

Holding her head she tried to recollect how she ended up in the car only to remember about the hotel incident, turning red now in anger she yelled, "Why did you have to do that?"

Angad turned on the loud speaker to its loudest volume. She could hear the words, "Oh baby would you dance like that" coming out.

"ANGAD!" she screamed with the loud speaker annoying her, and making her head ache worse.

She put her hands on the speaker to turn down the volume only to feel him catch his hand. Looking at him angrily she shot daggers at him for holding her hand.

He immediately dropped her hand, and turned down the volume of the speaker, "sorry" he said smiling, though he seemed far from sorry, "I just was in the mood to tease you"

"Why did you do that?"

"Do what?"

"Tell the lady we were MARRIED"

He chuckled at her words, once he noticed her face, he stopped, yet the smile still remained on his lips, as he answered, "You know how you are a old fashioned cultural girl living in the 50's. I thought the thought of girl friend would disturb you, so I resorted to marriage"

She fumed in anger. He could see the steam coming out her ears.

A angry Kripa was surely a very interesting sight.

"And, why did you have to talk about kids?" she questioned looking at him. This time she looked determined – he would have no answer to that.

"Oh come on Kripa, don't me you didn't figure that one out?" he said giving her a glance, "old ladies like hearing such things!"

What?

She remained silent trying to figure a loophole in that. He was only fooling around. How stupid could she be?

For the first time he had managed to shut her up, and she didn't like this one bit.

"Besides Kripa, why are you taking my words so seriously? Don't you think I really meant that" he said smirking, "please, if you think I will marry you it will only be possible in your dreams. I had rather marry your buffalo chachi than you at least she has the manners to speak to me nicely."

And, there was another one of his insult to add to her already big long list of insults.

****


The rest of the journey to the airport went quite peacefully. Kripa pretended to be engrossed in the view outside though his insult remained on her mind, while Angad listened to the music, and occasionally both glanced at each other, if Kripa gave Angad murderous looks, then Angad did the same. He was competing with her on who gave better murderous looks, and who hated the other more.

By the time they reached the airport, it was beyond 7-00 AM, as they made their way inside several people gave glances at Angad.

Kripa had never felt more stupid in her life, as she walked along side with him with her ugly bag, and her outfit, which was worth very few bugs. She was highly aware of the class difference between the two of them, as people gave admirable glances at Angad, while she received the disgusted look.

She felt like running away except she didn't, instead she found her self walking as far as away from Angad as possible. She knew he would not want someone like her walking beside him. It would lower his dignity.

In her hurry to walk away from him, she completely lost him somewhere. She looked around unable to find him, feeling stupid now, she felt like crying for Angad's insult from earlier & now this, and that's when she felt a hand on her shoulder. She turned around to notice Angad.

"What are you doing Khanna?" she found her self asking

"The one thing you are supposed to do – you don't even do that properly! Is anything even up there?" he said pointing towards her head

She blinked. Tears came in her eyes.

"Angad, why are you holding me? What will these people say?"

"You don't know how to come with me, so what can I do?" He said looking at her "And, people won't say anything"

"Angad, don't you get it? You are a handsome, rich, charming and perfect, while I am ugly, pathetic, poor and stupid"

"Don't be stupid Kripa" he replied still holding on her

"Angad, I am ruining your image" she said tears falling on her cheeks

Before he could reply to her comment, he noticed tears in her eyes, "oh no!" he yelled moving his hand through his hair, "not that now" he said looking everywhere looking frustrated.

At his words she started crying more, and before he could stop her she had run away to the nearest washroom.

Silently swearing under his breath and cursing himself for leaving her, he made his way to the washroom.

****

When he entered the washroom, he was met with a pair of silly teenage girls, all of whom turned red at his sight, feeling awkward he asked them to leave, as he had something important to discuss with someone.

They giggled at the words 'important' and 'someone'. Never had Angad met such silly and stupid girls in his entire life.

When they left, he locked the door behind him, since he really couldn't bear another one of those girls.

"Kripa," he said patiently knocking on the door of one of the cubicles.

"Go away," she screamed, "I have had enough of your insults!"

"Kripa, I want to talk to you... come out"

"Get lost! I am not talking to you." She replied crying, "I am not coming with you to Mexico. And, I am going back home." Something had just snapped inside her. She was furious. Just beyond furious at this man.

Who did he think he was?

"Kripa, this is the last time I am asking you to come out"

"Do whatever you want to Khanna. I could care less of your stupid threats"

"Don't make come there Kripa" he replied

She laughed, "This is your problem. You treat me like I am some kid, which I am not." Before she could continue she covered her mouth, and as Angad moved to the side to jump into her cubicle, the next instant the door to her cubicle flew open, which thankfully did not hurt him, since he had moved to another cubicle. Covering her mouth she ran up to the basin and threw up.

"Kripa," he said walking behind her

"Go away!" she replied, and she threw up again.

"Are you alright?" he questioned

She started crying again. As he caught hold of her shoulders, she pushed him away, and screamed out loud, "There you have another thing to insult me. You can always remind me how horrible I look when I throw up"

"Kripa," he said holding her shoulders now, "listen Kripa, I don't know about people all I can assure you is that to me you are the most prettiest girl I have come across. You look pretty even when you cry and throw up" she choked on her tears, and laughed when he said throw up, "So, get rid of that ugly word from your mind. As far as class is concerned, it's too bad if people notice the class. I don't see that. I don't care about your class or anything. And, by the way you add beauty to that dress you are wearing," he replied looking at her dress.

She laughed still crying.

"And, Kripa please don't cry," he said looking at her, "sorry, its just I hate it when people cry. I really do. And, I have my selfish reasons for that – I have no idea how to stop someone from crying"

"Can I hug you?" she asked

"Ah! Of course, I know it must be hard to resist hugging a cute guy" he replied chuckling.

She hit him lightly on the shoulder at his words, and hugged him.

To walk into his arms was like walking into a home. His arms provided warmth, security almost everything – something she hadn't found in years.

****

I received a LOT of PM'S!!!!!!!! Thanks a lottt to every single individual who took out the time to write to me 😳.. I received some PM's which explained in detail where I should carry the plot... they were about a page or two in length... I have replied to all the PM's & even comments..

I had a idea my head I just wasn't sure whether to head in that direction, but your PM's have enforced it all the more.... I have taken a idea from almost every single PM i have received, and combined it to one - actually, I hope the idea that I had in mind will be the combination of your PM's...

Preview from Next part - Meeting with Josh, the girl who was pregnant with Angad's "kid" & Angad's real intentions! 😉

Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
yay, u updated, nd i am first!!! 😛
havent read it yet, but will read nd edit later!!! 😆

*edit*

ok... i read it, nd AWESUM prt, like ALWAYS!! 👏
i CANNOT believe Angad was a BIT nice in this prt!! shocking!!! 😲 😆
anywazzz... i know its all a pretense, he is just doing tht to gain her trust
or sumthing like tht!!! 😉 nd now WHO is Vivaan, is he evil or nice???
i hope he is nice, coz Angad is as evil as 10000 evil persons put
together!!! lol!!! i think the girl is Mishti, i think u mentioned it sumwhere
in the beginning prts, sorry if i am wrong!!! 😳 i wonder wht REALLY
happened between Angad nd Mishti, or w/e tht girl's name is!!! 😉 nd
NOW wht is Angad's plan!!!! i REALLY wanna know!!! lol!!! Kripa is sooo
self concious, she cares abt wht other people think, she needs to forget
abt wht other people think, nd just dont care!!!! like Angad said she is
really pretty!!! 😳 ya, sum teenage girls ARE really annoying, after all, i
AM a teenager!!! 😳 i know wht they do!!! lol!!! but who WUDNT act
wierd after seeing a REALLY hot guy like Angad!!!! 😳
ok, i will stop babbling now, nd stop boring u, i cud go on 4EVER!!!! lol!!!
anywazzzz.... all i wanna say now is continue soon!!!! 😛
Edited by berkeleygirl818 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
i knew angad was doing all this for a reason and whoo's vivan?? is that gurl back.. the oone kripa had sided with.. or is it a new one cuz im sure there couold be one 😉

cant wait for the next aprt and im glad u came up with a concept..

cont sooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey

that was simply fab... gr8 work ...

but there is something thats not adding up.... btw i loved ur descriptions... from their feelings to expressions lol it was hilarious they way they were fighting over the bill... i would say u go kripa...but coming bak to the point ... angad is acting my goody 2 shoes.. its hard to believe that a guy would change after his poor lil ego being hurt... thts one thing they wont compromise on N thts their ego... so lets see what in store...

coming bak to kripa i liked the concept of chachi and niece... its real and something that has being there... i have liked the way kripa character is shaping up in the story... very sweet and innocent and her talking to the picture frame.. her crying , the insecurity she was surrounded by on the air port. that was sooooo cute yet sad... but a brilliant way to show different emotions... Angad is surely acting like the prince of Cinderella who would come and sweep her off her feet.. or maybe like shahid in vivah... lol wouldnt mind that either lol.. ok going much far ahead..cuz it seems impossible rite now..still.i like the bickering between them... both completely different yet the same...

josh now thats one of my fav character... he is too cute.. i hope he doesnt turn evil because there has to be some good when one is surrounded with evil... not implying that Angad is evil.. lol just that Mr NoBrainer AKA Mr Kahali Dimagh has too many issues surrounded by him... but lets see the thing thts stuck in my mind is that he said he will make her pay bak..with those gelled hair something is cooking up… ahhh still thinking

i really like this story of urs. not taking the credit from Identity (Its like a mystery, n looking forward to it but i remember u had mentioned it would be a sad ending😭) and MM(was completely diff and diff story conveyed ). but this one its sweet and simple. hope u keep it this way... . alrite i will stop now.. cuz if keep writing it would be endless... i think have gotten used to writing now ..stupid essays... 😕

p.s i read that ur were from Mississauga... i used to work in Mississauga.. its ironic cuz i hardly find ppl from Ontario on IF...

take care
Hope u continue soon

Edited by princess1_43 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part….sorry I couldn't make a longer reply last time since had HW, and some other stuff to do…but wow the part was great…and is Kripa pregnant or something because whenever that throw up thing happens it means girls pregnant????...and how Angad seemed a lot nicer in this part…and awwww the hug it was cute it reminded me of some scene in KYPH where Kripa hits Angad's shoulder then hugs him..Ohhh yea what happen with the date with Prithiv…since she came with Angad to Mexico and all….i really find Angad very very very very very very very RUDE AND AGNORANT ALSO CONSEDED….and Kripa rreally cries too much but its so cute like she crys as if she's a kids and she didn't get her candy…cont. soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn as possible
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow. great part. im excited to read wat happens later in the fan fic especially the stuff about that girl who was pregnant w/ angads kid and wat josh has 2 do w/ the story. kripas so cute but why was she throwing up? cont soon.

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