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Posted: 18 years ago

Main Characters

Angad Khanna (Iqbal Khan)

Kripa Sharma (Neha Bamb)

Character Sketch

Ruthless, angry, selfish, heartless, shrewd, arrogant, dominating & shallow were some of the only words to describe him. He was a rich spoilt brat.. His eyes resembled a lion?s they emitted fire as you looked at them, when he walked - the world would come to a complete stand still and when he spoke no one dared to speak such was the powerful presence of Angad Khanna. A man of his own charm, a man who spoke in every matter - be it personal or professional. At least that was the image the media portrayed of him.

He was the most dangerous tycoon in the business world, with a vision as cunning as a fox the guy had bagged the title of one of the most the richest men in the world. At the mere age of 26, Angad Khanna had achieved everything in life, one word from his mouth, and it would be given to him. And he dealt with everything by paying the price of money. But, his priorities, his motto in life everything would forever change once he met the crazy Kripa Sharma.

Kripa Sharma, an honest girl lived in one of the poorest locations in the city. She had nothing in life, no name, no money, no status, no house nothing, yet she claimed to have everything... her life revolved around her family. Nothing mattered to her more than they did.

At the age of 22, she worked as an assistant in a small business firm and her happiness lied in her family and in her work. But, everything was about to change when she would meet Angad Khanna. The man, who would force her to bring out a different side of her personality, a personality that was hidden from everyone and was strictly meant for Angad Khanna.

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Index (Old version of IF)

Part 1 - Page 3, Part 2 - Page 5, Part 3 - Page 7, Part 4 (A) - Page 10, Part 4 (B) - Page 11, Part 5 (A) - Page 14, Part 6 (A) - Page 22, Part 6 (B) - Page 26, Part 7 - Page 30, Part 8 (A) - Page 40, Part 8 (B) - Page 45, Part 8 (C) - Page 50, Part 9 - Page 54, Part 10 - Page 58, Part 11 - Page 60, Part 12 - Page 66, Part 13 A - Page 67, Part 13 B - Page 70, Part 14 - Page 75, Part 15 A - Page 79, Part 15 B - Page 82, Part 16 - Page 85, Part 17 - Page 89, Part 18 - Page 91, Part 19 - Page 94, Part 20 - Page 98,

Index (New version of IF)

Part 1 - Page 3, Part 2 - Page 4, Part 3 - Page 6, Part 4 (A) - Page 9, Part 4 (B) - Page 11, Part 5 (A) - Page 13, Part 6 (A) - Page , Part 6 (B) - Page, Part 7 - Page , Part 8 (A) - Page , Part 8 (B) - Page , Part 8 (C) - Page , Part 9 - Page , Part 10 - Page , Part 11 - Page , Part 12 - Page , Part 13 A - Page , Part 13 B - Page , Part 14 - Page Part 15 A - Page , Part 15 B - Page 63, Part 16 - Page 66, Part 17 - Page 70, Part 18 - Page 73, Part 19 - Page 75

My previous ff's:

Mismatch and Identity (AK): https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/467476/mismatch-identity-the-end-pg-93
Colours of my Life (AK): https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/630533/colours-of-my-life-ak-the-end-pg-33

Edited by Sonali06 - 16 years ago

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nerdynerd

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Posted: 18 years ago

yaii ur starting a new fanfic...waiting for it...as for the other fanfic of urs i reallie do like it actually and so lots of other people...if ur not enjoying writing then just put a long part w/ ending to it...but i personally do enjoy it...and i absolutely luved fanfic...will be waiting eagerly to read this one..kay im done rambling 😳 😃

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Numera

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Posted: 18 years ago

hmm i think concept first but what ever ur comfortable with! lol girl i love ur writing style dont u dare change it!!! as for the actress, ur pick i like them both but also depends on character! its hard to picture pallavi screaming so if the story has dark shades involving yelling i wouldnt pick her, lol neha screams- well all know that seeing kyph! im excited ur starting a new one!!! continue soon!

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Hina

@goldi2

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Posted: 18 years ago

first of all count me man !! lol seriously as much as loved writing mismatch i loved reading!!! i seriosuly loved that story i think i must of rereade it like 5 times already even if u wrote the same story again i would more then be happy to read it lol!! but sumthing similar would be just as good!! lol
mostly writers write concept frist lol like i told u befor ei likfe "different" so i would perfer u write a few parts and then post the concept.. it would give the readers to u there brain and guess wat the story is gonnaa be like lol:P:P:P
i just hopeu dont loose ur intrest in this 1!! lol
u know what u could do.. u can like preplan it on a piece of paper and swear to follow it lol hahahaha but i wont gaurnette that this plan of mine will work lmao lol it never worked with me when i tried keeping my days schedual in order lol i was like no india-foumrs untilli finnish my hw but lol i ended up cumin here nyways before i finnished my hw:P:P:P:P:P lol but u can try!!! u might get lucky!!

and im soooo soooo happy ur writing this fanfic!!! i just wish u good luck!!:)
but WAIT!!!!
what happend to Angad and Kripa??????? ur not gonna write about them ???:(:( u rather write about shiv and neha????:(:(:(

to tell u the truth i think i will enjoy it much more if u write about Angad and Kripa... even though i said i like change but not such a HUGE change lol but ur the writer its all in ur hands lol!!!

post the part or concept.. which ever u decide on SOON!!
lol

Hina 😊

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Rutu

@berkeleygirl818

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

yay!!!!! ur writing another FF!!!! i LOVE reading ur FF!!!! so i CANNOT wait!!
i have no suggestions abt writing style bcoz ur writing is PERFECT!!!! 😳
i wud prefer tht u post the concept 1st, then u can post the 1st LONG prt!
on the same day, but after a few hrs or so!!! 😉 😆
soooo.... is it Shiv & Gauri or Angad & Kripa!!!! 😕
i wud prefer Angad & Kripa, but rest is up to u!!! 😳 continue soon!! 😛

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Madiha

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Posted: 18 years ago

awesome!!! yay, will be looking forward to it!! I lovedddd Mismatch, i wonder how this concept will be related to it... um, well, usually, the writer posts the concept before the parts, but i think it would be cool if you post parts first and concept later. Or, maybe you dont even have to post a concept like i did for my ff ROMH. I never posted a concept, the readers just slowly began to form the concept in their minds and understand it. (Well, i hope they did 😆 )... and oh, oh, oh, before i forget!! its shiv and neha, not Angad-Kripa?? awww... oh well, i dont really mind as long as teh couple is iqbal-neha and you are writing it, because i know it will be awesome 😳 ... and i lovee identity, how come you dont like it anymore? 😕 and you're writing style is unique, its awesome man i love it!! dont changee it!! 😳 oh and another thing, if you like post the concept you will have to stick to it, i mean, from my experience, when i write the parts, the original concept becomes twisted as i get new ideas...lol....well, its still up to u!! will be looking forward to the story so post it soon, or else.... well, i dont know where u live, but i do have ure email and i will send you a thousands messages until you do 😛 😆 😳

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RandomSquared

@RandomSquared

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Posted: 18 years ago

heyyy cool a new ff! see i never read identity bc..i dunno the parts were rly rly long and i got lazy. but i'll def. read di sone. umm wait soo which girl neh aor pallavi? im happy wit both but im prefer neha. anywayz umm yea post the concept first please.

i noe wut ya mean...in the mid restless heart jus lost my interest too n i always avoid wrting my other ff kuch pal ka saath jus cuz i tired of the story 😆 dats y i divided it in seasons so every new season i'll have a new story. i get bored very fast 😆

Edited by Desi Pride - 18 years ago

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salt

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: *guesswho*
yaii ur starting a new fanfic...waiting for it...as for the other fanfic of urs i reallie do like it actually and so lots of other people...if ur not enjoying writing then just put a long part w/ ending to it...but i personally do enjoy it...and i absolutely luved fanfic...will be waiting eagerly to read this one..kay im done rambling 😳😃

Thank you! 😊 I have decided to try and update Identity one once a week – most likely on the weekend. Initially, I had liked it – way back in December, but slowly I started to loose my interest, now it has come to a point that I can't even end it abruptly nor leave if half way through. There is a lot left to happen, so I will still do it, with a slow pace though...

Originally posted by: Numera*
hmm i think concept first but what ever ur comfortable with! lol girl i love ur writing style dont u dare change it!!! as for the actress, ur pick i like them both but also depends on character! its hard to picture pallavi screaming so if the story has dark shades involving yelling i wouldnt pick her, lol neha screams- well all know that seeing kyph! im excited ur starting a new one!!! continue soon!

Thanks! 😛 I loved reading your screaming bit... that's so true... the character of Neha is more like Pallavi's... It really depends who the reader wants, if you can imagine Neha then imagine her... I am personally sticking to Pallavi, since I feel the character is a lot like her, though she might scream – not too sure about the screaming at this point. Lol!

Originally posted by: goldi2
first of all count me man !! lol seriously as much as loved writing mismatch i loved reading!!! i seriosuly loved that story i think i must of rereade it like 5 times – wow!! I didn't even read it once, well I managed to read the first few parts once, but later on ditched them... I really want to read it b/c I am so curious what do ppl like about it... already even if u wrote the same story again i would more then be happy to read it lol!! but sumthing similar would be just as good!! lol
mostly writers write concept frist lol like i told u befor ei likfe "different" so i would perfer u write a few parts and then post the concept.. i have decided that I won't put up the concept at all.. You can definitely guess... actually, it will be clear once a few parts are through... it would give the readers to u there brain and guess wat the story is gonnaa be like lol:P:P:P
i just hopeu dont loose ur intrest in this 1!! lol yes, I loose interest too quickly, so I am going to try my best to update this regularly.. Possibly a small scene every other day.. it really depends on the amount of time I have..
u know what u could do.. u can like preplan it on a piece of paper and swear to follow it lol hahahaha but i wont gaurnette that this plan of mine will work lol!! I never change the basic drift... I have the basic plot in mind, but I am clueless as to what will happen in the middle... lmao lol it never worked with me when i tried keeping my days schedual in order lol i was like no india-foumrs untilli finnish my hw but lol i ended up cumin here nyways before i finnished my hw:P:P:P:P:P hehehehe! I just loved reading this... you are sooo cute Hina!!! lol but u can try!!! u might get lucky!!

and im soooo soooo happy ur writing this fanfic!!! i just wish u good luck!!:) Thank you!!! 😳
but WAIT!!!!
what happend to Angad and Kripa??????? ur not gonna write about them ???:(:( u rather write about shiv and neha????:(:(:( - sorry hina, I am tired of writing AK, besides Angad was a rockstar.. he was never a business guy & I just can't make him bad... shiv can be bad, not Angad..

to tell u the truth i think i will enjoy it much more if u write about Angad and Kripa... even though i said i like change but not such a HUGE change lol but ur the writer its all in ur hands lol!!! Don't worry I am going to put up AK for those, who are really into AK...

post the part or concept.. which ever u decide on SOON!!
lol

Hina 😊

Wow Hina!!! I was so happy to see your comment – that too such a long one! Yeee! I really had a wonderful time reading this comment – actually I am going to save these comments – all these long ones, incase I am ever disappointed by the lack of response – I can read these and start writing... 😃 Thanks a lot for taking out your time to comment – that too a very long one...👏

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818
yay!!!!! ur writing another FF!!!! i LOVE reading ur FF!!!! so i CANNOT wait!!
i have no suggestions abt writing style bcoz ur writing is PERFECT!!!! 😳
i wud prefer tht u post the concept 1st, then u can post the 1st LONG prt!
on the same day, but after a few hrs or so!!! 😉😆
soooo.... is it Shiv & Gauri or Angad & Kripa!!!! 😕
i wud prefer Angad & Kripa, but rest is up to u!!! 😳continue soon!! 😛

Thanks!!! 😳 I am putting up the character sketch... And, I will be putting up AK parts! Happy?

Before I forget please continue your FF man... I have been waiting so long for that one... 😭

Originally posted by: erier101
awesome!!! yay, will be looking forward to it!! I lovedddd Mismatch, i wonder how this concept will be related to it... its related – quite similar lines... um, well, usually, the writer posts the concept before the parts, but i think it would be cool if you post parts first and concept later. Or, maybe you dont even have to post a concept like i did for my ff ROMH. – yes, I read your comment & decided that I am not going to put up the concept, ppl can guess it! 😉I never posted a concept, the readers just slowly began to form the concept in their minds and understand it. (Well, i hope they did lol! 😆)... and oh, oh, oh, before i forget!! its shiv and neha, not Angad-Kripa?? awww... oh well, i dont really mind as long as teh couple is iqbal-neha and you are writing it, because i know it will be awesome 😳... and i lovee identity, how come you dont like it anymore? I am bored w/ the concept! and you're writing style is unique, its awesome man i love it!! dont changee it!! I am bored of writing this way.. I want to write differently... try something new...😳oh and another thing, if you like post the concept you will have to stick to it, i mean, from my experience, when i write the parts, the original concept becomes twisted as i get new ideas... 😆😆😆😆lol....well, its still up to u!! will be looking forward to the story so post it soon, or else.... well, i dont know where u live, but i do have ure email and i will send you a thousands messages until you do hehehehee! Yes, I got your message – though it was not a threat!

Thanks Madiha!!! I loved reading your long comment 😛... keep them coming man... it really makes my day....😳

Originally posted by: Desi Pride
heyyy cool a new ff! see i never read identity bc..i dunno the parts were rly rly long and i got lazy. Lol! I can understand Karishma, I personally get lazy w/ long parts – see this is the main reason I never got around to read Mismatch.... for this problem I have a solution I will put up small scenes every day so that everyone can check the FF regularly & read about 10 sentences a day... but i'll def. read di sone.- dont .. please don't.. hahaha seriously man w/ Mismatch so many ppl were quite happy - I feel like i have let ppl down big time... umm wait soo which girl neh aor pallavi? Its upto you!!! im happy wit both but im prefer neha. anywayz umm yea post the concept first please. – sorry I took Madiha's suggestion.. 😳

i noe wut ya mean...in the mid restless heart jus lost my interest too n i always avoid wrting my other ff kuch pal ka saath jus cuz i tired of the story 😆dats y i divided it in seasons so every new season i'll have a new story. i get bored very fast – same here, I wonder how JK rowling lived with Harry Potter for 15 years... I can't live with a story line for a month.. 15 years my god, is a very long time.. perhaps, this is what sets JK apart from me... she is a writer & I am not... 😆

Thanks a lot for your comment Karishma!! 😃😃

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Truly, all of your comments were truly wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Thank you soo much - and please do keep them comingggggggggggg... 😃😃😃

A bear hug to all of you for taking out time to post such beautiful long comments... 🤗

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mansi

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Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

hey

the concept seems to be really good.. i m really excited cuzit sounds like mismatch.. i dont kno why.. but i really liked it.. i love long parts.. but tahts just me.. i was gonna give u the madiha suggestion.. to just put the parts up.. u r bound to change things arounds as u write.. at least she does.. 😆 i love her "i m so confused days".. neway.. nice to hear that u will cont. wit identity eventhou it will be slow.. i can imagine the shiv and gauri thing now.. so i m cool wit it.. 😉 .. i love shiv man.. the old one.. whoa no yash tonk.. ok i m off topic now.. haha.. cont soon..
ttyl..

luv mansi 😃

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Mani

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Posted: 18 years ago

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cool
is this a AK ff or SG ff

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