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Posted: 18 years ago
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gret story.i love it! btw who is plzying rahuls role
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry double posting😳

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part 8[P-WOW, Sh- uff, chilaa mat, aur sun aaj hummne party throw ki hai, saare politicians, industrialists aa rahe hai...maine Maa aur baki sabko bata diya hai..tu bhi shaam ko taiyaar ho jana.[pari again wid excitement] OK MUMMY[n she hugs shobha, n both smiles]]
[scene shifts to party now...the whole viranis were there in the party....pari was also enjoying n she was standing wid archita n kt, n then suddenly sum1 cals pari frm d back] [a guest in the party asks pari 4 dance][archita n kt smiles, archita says 2 pari] A-pari, jao naa dance karo uske saath[Kt stand n giggles]P-[smiles] n gets ready 2 dance wid him.[she was dancing wid d guy, thn sudenly some1 else says],may i hav a dance wid her....[pari n the guy who was dancing with her looks at him...it was rahul,the guy excuses n rahul gives his hand to pari 2 dance wid her, pari also smiles but lil bit shy also n hesistatingly she gives her hand 2 him n they starts dancing]...R- aisa kyun hota hai,ki main jahan jaata hoon, app vahin aa jati hai?,P[looks at his eyes,n in a soft voice says] P- main bhi to ye keh sakti hoon ki mere aane se pehele hi aap pohonch jaate hai.[both looks at each other, wid lots of affection] R- aapka naam kya hai? P- i'm pari, R- i'm Rahul....R-[ rahul was dancing with her n thinks] R- kya hai tumme aisa jo baar- baar mujhe tumhari taraf kheench raha hai, main kyun ek anjaani dor se bandhe jaa raha hoon....kyun jab tum mere sammne hoti ho meri nazrein tumhari in aakhon se hatne ka naam nahi leti, aur jab tum dur jaati ho, to meri yahi aakhen tumhe dhoondti reheti hai..[ pari was dancing n due to shyness she was looking at the ground, n she is also thinking] P- maine to tumhe theek se jaanti bhi nahi, par tumhare itne nazdeek aakar, meri dharkane kyu badh rahi hai...[ n then pari again looks up at rahul, n they keep on dancing]....[suddenlly Karan comes from the back n says] K- are rahul tum? [rahul looks back at karan, n then pari gets surprised n they both goes near to karan] P- are mama aap rahul ko jaante hai? K- haan beta? vo rahul mere business partner ka beta hai..lekin tum dono ek doosre ko kaise jaante ho?[pari was about to say something, then rahul interuppts] R- vo uncle hum dono, yehi party mein mile? [pari looks at him wid lots of questions in eyes] K- ok. rahul, you both enjoy the party.[rahul n pari pasess a smiles to karan n then karan goes]....P- rahul tumne karan mama se jhoot kyun bola, ki hum party mei mile hai? R- maine kaha tha naa, tum bohot bewakuf ho...tumhe lagta hai ki jis tarah hum pehele mile the, vo humme karan uncle k batana chahiye, vo bhi aisi jagah par[ he says this wid arrogance]...[pari makes an innocent face n says]P- ohh, u r rite, ye to maine..[rahul interuppts] R-socha hi nahi tha.. jaanta hoon, larkiyan vaise se bhi bohot kam sochti, samjhti hai.. [n then rahul leaves, n pari looks at him..n thinks] P- thora akru hai,par cute hai....
Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 9 with the continuation of the 8th part[P- ohh, u r rite, ye to maine..[rahul interuppts] R-socha hi nahi tha.. jaanta hoon, larkiyan vaise se bhi bohot kam sochti, samjhti hai.. [n then rahul leaves, n pari looks at him..n thinks] P- thora akru hai,par cute hai.... ] then [rahul was sitting in a place n sipping a drink..n was looking at pari silently, n pari was busy laughing n giggling with kt and archita...][scene now shifts to gayatri n daksha]
G- to didi, kaisi lagi aapko ye party..D- haan,theek hai...par yahan jhoonagarh vaali baat nahi hai,G- kyun didi vahan ke log kya yahan se bhi zyada modern hai...D- modern.... arre yahan ki larkiyan to kuch bhi nahi hai jhoonagarh ki larkiyon ke aage...agar aishwarya bhi dekhe naa to vo bhi sharma jaye.. (Gayatri giggles)[scene the shifts to tulsi, payal n shobha]Payal- to samdhan ji...kaisi lagi aapko party, T- bohot acchi hai,kyun shobha,[shobha was lost in her thought n looking at pari.. then payal notices this and shakes shobha.. she sudenly comes out of her thought n payal smiles n asks] ....P- kya hua beta? kahaan kho gayi, Sh- kuch nahi mummy ji, bas pari ke baare mein soch rahi thi..(tulsi interuppts)itna kya soch rahi hai, Sh- bas mamma uski shaadi ke baare mein... T- arre shobha, tu kyun itna fikr kar rahi hai... are abhi uski umar ki kya hai..P- haan beta itna bhi fikr mat karo.. SH- kya karoon mummy ji, ab beti bari ho gayi hai naa, to maa ko to fikr hoti hi hai...bas kabhi kabhi sochti hoon ki iss pagli se shaadi karega kon...[then tulsi, payal n shobha giggles] [scene then shifts to mihir and karann... mihir was talking to one of his business client...when karan comes from the back] M- are aao karan beta? inse milo ye hamare naye business client hai, iss baar hamare project mein ye hame madad karenge.. K- haan papa? papa mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai..akele mein [mihir excuses the client] M- haan beta bolo? K- papa iss baar hamare saath ek bohot bari company partnership karna chahti hai aur hamare overseas business mein vo hamari madad karna chahte hai [ suddenly someone comes from karan's back n says] hello MR mihir virani...[ karan smiles at him n mihir looks with lots of questions to know the person] K- papa yehi uss company ke maalik hai jo hamare saath partnership karna chahti hai..n most imporatant inka beta rahul jiske baare mein maine aap se kaha tha, vo hamare saath kaam karenge...Mihir- vaise mr mehra(rahul's father) aapki hamare company ke saath partnership karne ke bare mein kyun suji, i mean market mein itni saari comapnies hai then why viranies..Mr mehra- mere bete ne recommend kiya tha mujhe, business mein meri bohot madad karta hai [rahul's father says this wid proud], jaise hi MBA kar lega, he will look after my business then. [then mihir n karan smiles] [ n with a pause mr mehra says] bas ek hi cheez pasand nahi hai usko...jhoot aur dhoka [mihir n karan looks at mr mehra] [ then to ease the]enviroment.. karan says] K- aap fikr mat kijiye hamare taraf se rahul ko koi shikayat nahi hogi, he will definatly be satisfied working with us...[Mr mehra looks at karan..


Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PLEASE continue.. it is getting interesting..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 yaar keep it up I was able to picturize everything infront of my eyes,,,,,,,,,,
keep u ur gud work 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 10 with the continuation of part 9[[then mihir n karan smiles] [ n with a pause mr mehra says] bas ek hi cheez pasand nahi hai usko...jhoot aur dhoka [mihir n karan looks at mr mehra] [ then to ease the]enviroment.. karan says] K- aap fikr mat kijiye hamare taraf se rahul ko koi shikayat nahi hogi, he will definatly be satisfied working with us...[Mr mehra looks at karan.. ]............. [next morning,its janmashtami..,baa was in the hall room n calling tulsi] B- tulsi beta? are tulsi..[Tulsi comes] T- are baa aapne kyun taklif ki? mujhe bula liya hota? B- are nahi beta? main theek hoon? vaise bhi iss umar mein thora chalna phirna chahiye?[tulsi smiles at baa] B- beta dekho? bees saal tak tum iss ghar mein nahi thi? isiliye yahan kisi ko yaad bhi nahi hota tha..iss avsar ko manane ke liye. meera ne iss ghar ke bacchon ko koi sanskar nahi de payi? [tulsi gets a bit upset] B- aur aaj bees saal baad tum yahan ho,to main chahti hoon ke thakur jee ke janamdin ko hum dhoomdham se manaye[ baa says this wid excitment, n tulsi becomes normal with it n smiles] T- theek hai baa... [KT,Lakshay,pari n joydeep were sitting in eklavya's room n they were talking to him..] KT [says to everyone] - chalo naa aaj kahin bahar chalte hai? L- haan main bhi yehi soch raha tha? P- lekin plz haan kisi party mein jaane ke baare mein mat sochna plz...[kt jokes with pari] KT- haan haan zaroor? kyunki kahin tumhara vo dreamboy tumhare saamne naa aajaye? aur tum use dekhar behosh naa ho jao..[kt laughs, n other people smiles..n pari feels very shy about wat kt says n she blushes...then tulsi comes in the room n says] T- hmmm, kya ho raha hai bachhon, KT- are baa aap? T- haan main? [then she holds kt's ears..kt shouts] Kt- are baa? kya hua? kya ho gaya?[lakshay smiles n teases kt, n pari says] P-accha hua dadi.. iske kaan kheenchne hi chahiye the,[kt also teases to pari.. then tulsi says]T- isiliye? krishna tulsi, isiliye main tujhe mumbai nahi lana chahti thi? dekha kitni bigar gayi hai tu? J- kyun dadi? kya hua? [tulsi then leaves her ear n says] T- tum log yahan gossip karne mein lage ho? kisi ko yaad hai,aaj ghar mein janmashtami hai? [everyone makes a " aree haan!!"type reaction)T-[with a small smiles says to eklavya] aur tujhe bhi yaad nahi raha? E-[very innocently] sorry dadi,kal ki party ke baad,main bohot thak gaya tha, sorry dadi yaad nahi raha..[tulsi giggles]chal theek hai koi baat nahi. aur haan tum sab aaj meri madad karoge puja manane mein, aur ghar ki sajawat ke liye? L- [lakshay to kt]sun liya madam? [Kt teases him, n lakshay smiles]....[scene shifts to hall room where some people are decorating the walls with flowers..while mihir was standing and talking on cellphone,n karan n gatuam comes from back]M- jee theek hai? yaa bye? [n he puts the phone down n looks back] are tum dono? G- papa, saare relatives, aur family frnds ko bata dia hai...M- aaccha kiya gautam? G- aur koi reh to nahi gaya papa? M- haan beta? mr mehra aur unka beta? par unhe maine bata diya hai? K- par papa unhe iss family function mein bulane ki zaroorat kya thi? M-[ smiles n says] zaroorat thi beta,actually vo iss shehar mein naye hai, aur ab hamare business partner bhi, to vaise hi hamare ghar mein ab unka kai baar aana- jaana hoga? to maine socha, kyun naa yahin se shuruaat karein[karan smiles] papa ye to aapne bohot accha kiya? M- haan beta? par ek problem hai? G-kya papa? M- vo gataum beta? rahul, mr mehra ka beta thora busy hai,to vo to aa nahi payega....par mr mehra aa rahe hai...[kt n archita was just behind their back n they listnes to it...pari gets a bit upset about it...n archita says ] pari?kya hua?[pari tries to give a smile n says] bas kuch nahi n then she goes to her room?

Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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part 11 with the continuation of part 10 M- haan beta? par ek problem hai? G-kya papa? M- vo gataum beta? rahul, mr mehra ka beta thora busy hai,to vo to aa nahi payega....par mr mehra aa rahe hai...[kt n archita was just behind their back n they listnes to it...pari gets a bit upset about it...n archita says ] pari?kya hua?[pari tries to give a smile n says] bas kuch nahi n then she goes to her room? .........

[pari,was entering her room,n was getting all the flashes of when she first met rahul till the party...then she sits on her bed n a song begins..[iss pyar ko main kyaa naam doon..bechainiyon ko kaise araam doon..rabba mere rabba]][then suddenly the phone rings, pari.(bit upset n she picks up the phone)]P- hello?[after a pause]hellow? who is there? kon bol raha hai? hello?[she gets angry] ,ARE BAAT NAHI KARNI TO PHONE KYUN KIYA...IDIOIT [n she puts the receiver down .BANG][scene shifts to the person who called pari...it was rahul, n he was having a small tape recorder..n whatever pari said he recorded it]...[then he again plays of what she said...HELLO?HELLO?BAAT NAHI KARNI TO PHONE KYUN KIYA IDIOT?..then the recorded thing ends n he plays it two more times..n the second time it ends... rahul gives a very clever smile n then he kisses the speaker of the small tape recorder...n then he shows a bit of arrogance on his face n says by looking at the recorder]R-i hate u....i really hate you....[then rahul starts laughing slowly n he looks up n shouts..]I HATE YOU PARI...I HATE YOU...[then the same songs begins again...[rabba mere rabba[2]..hadd se zyada teri chahat main karta hoon, ye pata nahi tujhko main tujpe marta hoon..rabba mere[2]]....
[ as rahul was sitting on sofa.. he keeps his head back,holding the recorder n closes his eyes...n he smiles..but the tears run through his eyes..]
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part 12.....with the continuation of part 11[I HATE YOU PARI...I HATE YOU...[then the same songs begins again...[rabba mere rabba[2]..hadd se zyada teri chahat main karta hoon, ye pata nahi tujhko main tujpe marta hoon..rabba mere[2]]....
[ as rahul was sitting on sofa.. he keeps his head back,holding the recorder n closes his eyes...n he smiles..but the tears run through his eyes..]
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part 12 [scene again shifts to pari sitting in her room,n thinking]P-kon ho sakta hai...[n she gets upset, n then archita n joydeep comes in pari's room where pari was lost in her thoughts, archita calls pari] A- chalo pari..puja ki taiyaari ho gayi hai..dadi sbko neeche bula rahi hai lets go[ but pari do not pay any attention, n then archita calls her again but she was lost in her thought...n joydeep, archita looks at each other..n then archita smiles at pari n softly hits on her head..n pari suddenly comes out of her thoughts n looks at archita n joydeep..n then archita says]A- oye madam, tulsi dadi sabko neeche bula rahi hai, puja mein aana hai ki nahi, P- haan tum log chalo? main aa rahi hoon.[n joydeep says] J- kya hua pari tum thori pareshan lag rahi ho? kisi ne kuch kaha kya? P- are nahi to? vo bas main thori tired thi naa, isiliye dhyan nahi diya..thts it. aur kuch bhi nahi..[but joydeep feels tht there is something wrong with pari, but he do not talk bout it.at tht moment...n instead says]j- chalo pari... scene now shifts to the hall room where all the viranis were standing,in the front tulsi n mihir was standing n tulsi was holding the pooja ki thaali n all were standing at back n were praying] ....[one by one all the family members do the aarti, n when pari's turn comes...rahul arrives there as karan was standing just behind pari he says] K- are RAHUL tum?[ karan smiles with excitment, n pari looks at rahul..then mihir also smiles n says] M- are rahul beta aao, tum bhi aarti kar lo? then rahul smiles at mihir n then pari n rahul holds the pooja thaali n do the arti 2gether..n while doing the aarti both look at each other.. but pari do not say anything..after tht the pooja gets over]......[after tht pooja gets over, rahul was talking to karan..n then pari comes from the back n says]P- karan mama? [karan looks back n rahul also looks at pari n he smiles, pari also looks at him but she shows no reaction] K- haan beta bolo? P- karan mama? aapka phone aaya hai? K- kiska hai? P- pata nahi.. appke kisi client ka lagta hai..[karan smiles n says ok n he goes...pari was standing beside rahul n rahul continusly looking at pari..n as pari was feeling a bit uncomfortable.. she was bout to leave the place, n then rahul says from behind] R- kaisi ho pari...P- [turns back n says] haan theek hoon? [ as rahul was wearing something indian so pari comments on it n says] P- tum iss kurte mein acche lag rahe ho..[rahul stares at pari n passes a smile n says in a shallow voice] thankyou [n then rahul leaves].....[ scene now shifts to bhoomi n joydeep][joydeep brings food 4 bhoomi,n bhoomi was talking to some1 on phone][joydeep calls bhoomi for, 2,3 times but she ignores him n atlast she replies coldy] B- YOU IDIOT, DIKHAIYE NAHI DE RAHA HAI..I AM TALKING ON PHONE...kyun bula rahe ho mujhe [ and at tht time daksha n KT were passing from bhoomi's room n they both stand at the door step, n watches wat happens] J- vo bhoomi main tumhare liye khana laya tha, tumhe bhook lagi hogi...[scene again shifts 2 kt n daksha standing at door step n watching] D- aarrraaara KT? ye pati varta patni suna tha... lekin iss ghar to patni vrata pati rehete hai lagta hai...n then they goes n reaches the hall room, then daksha asks kt] D- kt? ye sab kya hai? bhoomi joydeep ke saath iss tarah kyun baat kar rahi thi? KT- daksha dadi, ye to roz hota hai.. bhoomi joydeep ke saath issi tarah baat karti hai. D- arraaara KYUN[ daksha asks,wid curiosity n then kt tells her everything wat happened n how bhoomi n joydeep got married]...D-[ after listning the whole story she says,] hmmmm to ye baat hai? [ n she says to kt] D- kuch karna parega kt? iss joydeep ka kuch karna hi parega? KT- lekin kya daadi, D- arre tu fikar mat kar, aur dekh teri ye dadi kya karti hai....iss joydeep ko maine jacky shroff nahi banaya to mera naam bhi daksha nahi..[ n kt looks at dakha confusing]
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part 13[with continuation of part 12...D- kuch karna parega kt? iss joydeep ka kuch karna hi parega? KT- lekin kya daadi, D- arre tu fikar mat kar, aur dekh teri ye dadi kya karti hai....iss joydeep ko maine jacky shroff nahi banaya to mera naam bhi daksha nahi..[ n kt looks at dakha confusing
[scene now shifts to virani's office, where karan,gatuam,mihir were sitting bout there new projects]
M- are gatuam ye rahul kahan reh gaya...10 baj gaye hai abhi tak aaya nahi...[rahul comes inside the office room n interuppts]R- wrong abhi bhi 10 bajne mein 5 min baki hai n every1 looks at rahul..[Karan smiles at rahul n says] are rahul aao? baitho..[ n he sits]R- vo iss project ke saath related saari details ke baare mein main research kar raha tha..so it took time but??[n then he looks at mihir n gives a clever smile n says] see, i am here on time. [mihir also looks at rahul, n thinks something n karan gets happy for rahul's hardwork n says] very good rahul? you r quite hardworking..isi tarah mehenat karoge to zaroor zindagi mein chahoge vo milegaa.[n then rahul says with a smile says] haan zaroor? vaise bhi main jo chahta hoon use pakar hi reheta hoon..[ n he imagines pari's face]...
[scene now shifts to SN, when mihir,karan n gataum returns home]...[tulsi was sitting with gayatri n damini n talking..when she sees them she says]arre aagaye aap sab? [ tulsi says to mihir] jaaiye muh-haath dho lijiye, tab tak main aur damini khana lagate hai..[tht time pari was coming downstairs, tulsi says to pari] are beta? chal tu bhi abhi khaana kha le? [as she was coming down..rahul sudenlly entered the main door.. n gayatri says] are rahul tum?[pari stops at the stairs n looks at rahul...[both looks at each other for sometime n the tuning of the song rabba mere rabba begins...][then pari n rahul comes out from their thinking as mihir calls rahul]are rahul beta idhar aao [n pari stands at tulsi's side n rahul mihir's side..n mihir smiles n says]tulsi vo rahul aur mujhe abhi thori der mein phir bahar jaana to maine socha kyun naa, vo hamare saath hi lunch karle..T- are ye to tumne bohot accha kiya mihir..rahul aao[ n every1 sits, n rahul sits beside pari..when rahul passes a smile to pari..she ignores it, n rahul gets a bit annoyed on this n thinks something then he see pari keep her one hand under the table..rahul see this n d undertable he holds pari's hand tightly n as every1 were busy so nobody notices this..pari looks at rahul..but rahul behaves very normally n talks to mihir..n inside the table he holds her hand tightly till he comeplets his food..then sudenly gayatri asks pari] are pari beta? kya huaa?P- kya daadi? G- beta tum ye ulte haath se khana kyun kha rahi ho? P[ pari keep on trying to freed her hands frm rahul but he keeps on holding her hand n smiles by looking down at the opposite side..pari thinks n makes an excuse] G- vo vo dadi mere right hand mein thora dard ho raha hai bas isiliye? G- accha..
[ then atlast rahul leaves her right hand, n both looks at each other pari looks bit upset n rahul gives a cunning smile]

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