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Posted: 18 years ago
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[same part....,scene now shifts, it's evening time..pari gets ready n is coming downstairs,sanjay, architaa, lakshay were sitting n talking...sudenly archita see pari n says] ARE PARI... accha hua tu neeche aagayi, sanjay, lakshay aur main bahaar jaa rahe hai...sanjay ek frnd ki b'day party hai vahaan..tum bhi chalo naa hamare saath...[thn sanjay speaks in between] Haan pari, tum bhi chalo naa plsss....[pari sudenly,thinks] ohhh god mujhe to rahul ke saath abhi bahar jaana hai...lekin sanjay ko bhi kaise manaa karun..gauuudddd,kaahan phas gayi main,[thn sanjay interuptts] Pari ji??? [she comes out of her thoughts] kahaan kho gayi...P:- nahi kahin nahi, Archita:- pari, tumhe chalnaa hai ki nahi, Sanjay:- pari main itne dino baad aayaa hoon aur tumhaare paas mere liye koi time hi nahi hai....P:- are nahi sanju?? main chal rahi hoon naa tum sab ke saath..[ lakshay, sanjay n archita gets happy, n on the same time..rahul is calling her constantly, but as her mobile was on silence so nobody listens to it..n she then switches off her mobile] scene shifts to rahul sitting in his car, n when he calls her last time he founds out tht she switched off her phone, at this rahul gets very annoyed..[scene again shifts to lakshay, archita n pari..as sanjay was in sitting in the driving seat, lakshay was sitting at front n pari n archita at back....pari was tensed...when archita n lakshay were busy talking 4 a while sanjay looks back at pari sitting quiety...he smiles on seeing pari n thinks]..S:- pari aaj tum bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho, kash tumse keh pata..[pari then looks at sanjay n passes a smile, n after tht lakshay interupts] Sir...??? chalen ab... S:- haa haa chalo[thn he drives, thn they reaches the party, sanjay's frnd comes to sanjay, archita,pari n lakshay]....[sanjay introduces his frnd...n then his frnd asks every1 to join in the dance..lakshay n architaa dances...thn a slow music begins..n sanjay n pari were standing n watching every1 dancing...thn his frnd comes][frnd of sanjay]:- come on !!! pari, sanjay??? tum dono, aise akele kyu khare ho.. come on jaao jaake dance karo...[firstly both of them hesitates but later they joins the dance]...[on the slow music they dance....n the music....baahon ke darmiyaan(song from film khaamoshi)begins,sanjay was constantly looking at pari..but she was tensed n looking at the ground, thinking she must hav told rahul tht today she couldn't come 2day n thn she thinks]] rahul ko ek baar batadena chahiye tha mujhe, iss tarah phone off karke maine theek nahi kiyaa...pata nahi kyaa soch raha hoga.....[sanjay interuptss] pari???[she came out of her thought] HAAN bolo??? S:- kyaa soch rahi ho, bohot der se dekh rahaa hoon thori pareshaan ho..P:- [ to change the topic..she pretends] are kuch nahi stupid[in a very normal voice] mujhe kyaa hua hai???? kuch bhi to nahi..S:- nahi tumhe thora pareshan dekhaa naa isiliye kahaa...P:- nahi nahi aisa kuch nahi..[scene shifts it's 11:00pm rahul sitting at his hall room...he is sitting on a sofa with his head laid back n looking at the clock..n thn he says]....ye pari ne accha nahi kiyaaa, ye usne accha nahi kiyaa...kyun nahi uthaayaa usne phone[n then mr mehra comes]....mr mehra:- rahul..rahul[he ignores his dad] ye pari ne accha nahi kiya, [he repeadtdely says this, n then mr mehra bents n holds rahul by his arms n shakes him] RAHULL HOSH ME AAO....KYAA HO GAYA HAI TUMHE[thn he suddenly, interupts] SHHHHHHH?????[tears were flowing thorugh his eyes, n in a shallow voice he says] aapko dikhaayi nahi de raha, main apni pari ko yaad kar raha hoon[ mr mehra gets shocked]pari sirf meri hai dad pari sirf meri hai...[mr mehra gets up n thinks] ohhh noo.....lagta rahul phir se..[n then he sits beside rahul n speaks to him] rahul beta?? dekho, main nahi jaanta ki tumhare aur pari mein kaisi understanding hai, lekin betaa tumhaara baap hone ke naate main ek baat kehnaa chahungaa ki, har rishte mein ek doosre par bharosaa hona chahiye.....agar bhaarosa nahi..to rishte ke tutne mein waqt nahi lagta [ but it makes no difference to rahul as he was still looking at the clock, n tears were not stoping from his eyes]......
[n then, scene shifts to pari....who returned back now n was just going to sleep..b4 tht she thinks to call rahul once] kyaa karoon,abhi phone karoon use..bohot narazz ho jayegaa kal to....par abhi bohot raat ho gayi hai, iss waqt phone karna theek nahi kal hi phone karoongi....[the part ends here..]***pls leave comments if u have liked it or not liked...***
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
Its nice, 👏 👏 but can you write in paragraphs and whenever the scene shifts write it alone in a line. Just a suggestion.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 25 wid the continuation of part part 24[pari....who returned back now n was just going to sleep..b4 tht she thinks to call rahul once] kyaa karoon,abhi phone karoon use..bohot narazz ho jayegaa kal to....par abhi bohot raat ho gayi hai, iss waqt phone karna theek nahi kal hi phone karoongi]

scene now shifts, its morning n baa n tulsi are praying the tulsi plant

[as the pooja gets over baa n tulsi as they were going inside baa smiling says] Tulsi beta?? T:- ji baa, B:- beta main pari ke baare mein kuch soch rahi thi, T:- kyaa baa...(curiously)...(baa giggles n says)..kuch nahi betaa aaj pata nahi man aise hi ek baat aayi ki, ki ab hame pari ke shaadi ke baare mein sochnaa chahiye, ( tulsi smiles)BAA:- kal shobha ka phone aayaa tha..vo bhi kal baaton baaton mein pari ki shaadi ka zikr kar rahi thi, T:- vo baat to theek hai baa lekin, pari ke layak koi accha larka bhi to hona chahiye, (baa giggles n says) are achha larka to hai (tulsi curiously asks) T:- kon?? BAA:- hamaara sanjay, (tulsi makes n ohh haan type reaction) T:- aree haaaan baa, hmmmm vaise maanna paregaa baa apki choice ka jawab nahi, (baa giggles) ab teri baa hoon meri choice to acchi hogi hi,(n both laughs)...

scene shifts to joydeep standing near the wall n listining wat tulsi n baa r talking about
scne now again shifts to hall room where kt, sanjay,pari,daksha,r having there breakfast

Daksha:- (she notices pari was sitting quietly n lost in her thought, whereas others are talking n eating) arrarraa PARI(she suddenly, comes out from her thoughts, n every1 listens to daksha), P:- kyaa hua daadi, D:- pari betaa, aaj tu khili khili madhuri dixit se khoya khoyaa ritesh deshmukh kaise ban gayi,(kt n sanjay giggles, n pari to hide it) nahi nahi daadi aisi koi baat nahi,S:- haan daksha daadi, main bhi bohot der se notice kar raha hai hoon, pari lagta hai thori pareshan hai, (pari prentends) main q pareshan hone lagi, (then kt jokes) lagta hai sanjay aaj hamari pari madam ko khaane mein kuch kam hi mila hai, shayad isiliye mood off hai(then pari hold kt's ears,) kt tu maar khayegi mujhse...KT:- ouch!!( every1 giggles, but sanjay looks at pari n thinks)kuch to karbar hai, kal bhi bohot pareshan lag rahi thi...

scene shifts, its afternoon time...mihir is coming downstairs, n pari was siting in the hall room n talking to archita n kt..when rahul comes

M:- are aao rahul beta, main tumhara hi intezar kar raha tha (pari gets surprised n looks at back, n see rahul is standing n passing a witty smile to pari, thn pari again looks at front, then mihir n rahul sits, mihir sits beside kt n archita n rahul sits beside pari..when rahul sits beside her, she gets very uncomfortable about the whole thing she did yesterday, but rahul n mihir only talked about business..n whn there discussion gets ovr n rahul was bout to leave, then mihir says) beta, abhi tum yaahaan aahi gaye ho to, to lunch yehin karke jaao (thn he looks at pari, n pari starts looking at ground) R:- nahi sir, aaj mujhe kuch zaroori kaam hai, isiliye main lunch baad mein kar lunga( rahul kindly excuses himself, n thn rahul n pari looks at him,becos she knew tht rahul is very annoyed, as she switched off her mobile yesterday n didn't answerd his calls),.

scene now shifts to police station, where sanjay is looking at the old case files,

frnds a lot is remain, the other half this part will be updated soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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same part scene shifts to police station, where sanjay is looking at the old case files.......

(he was looking at the old files n suddenly he remembers in the flashback,some shouting of a girl etc, sanjay was lost in his thoughts when a police constable comes n asks for some other files, n when the constable who takes the file n about to go..he calls him) S:- RAMAN????(the constable)idhar suno, R:- yes sir, S:- tum ek kaam karo, mujhe MR RAHUL MEHRA ke ghar ka address dhondhke do,. R:- sir, iss rahul mehra naam ka larka to yahaan lock up mein bhi tha..(sanjay gets shocked) S:- WHAT!!!! YAHAAN ISS LOCK UP MEIN!! KAB??KIS WAQT??, R:- sir uss waqt inspector desai yaahan par incharge the,(thn wid pause raman says) kisi larki ko bacchane ke liye jaghraa kiya tha usne.. S:- larki ko bachane ke liye(sanjay gives a ohhh really type reaction n then he asks)par mujhe ek baat samjh mein nahi aa rahi hai ki jab maine Desai se rahul ka pata maanga tha to usne kahaa tha ki vo nahin jaanta kisi rahul ko, lekin ab lagta hai ki desai ko dhoondhne ki zaroorat nahi lagti??? (raman asks curiously) R:- kyu sir?? S:- kyunki, agar rahul is lock up mein tha, to definatly uske ghar ka adress yahan police station ke registor mein hoga hi, Raman tum ek kaam karo..jaldi se vo registor le aao...

scene now shifts to pari sitting in her room n working on computer, her phone rings

P:- hello?? who is it? Rahul:- rahul bol raha hoon (sudenly a sense of tense comes to pari's face) Rahul tum??? Rahul:- main hotel kingston mein ek meeting ke liye aayaa tha, now i am free..tumse milne ka bohot man kar raha hai..kya tum abhi yahaan aa sakti ho (he behaves very normally, like nothing really happened yesterday..pari feels strange) P:- rahul??? tum mujhse naraaz nahi ho?? R:- NARAAZ!! kis baat pe??kyun?? agar tum kal ke baare mein baat kar rahi ho to usko bhool jaao,its ok..kuch nahi hota (pari gets surprised at this behaviour, she smiles n gets agrees to meet rahul at the hotel room)...

scene now shifts to hotel kingston,

(pari comes at the reception n asks 4 rahul mehra's room number, then she goes upstairs..n comes near the door)(she knocks the door two three times then she tht the door is already open not locked so she go inside, n see rahul is standing, as she entered the room, rahul facing the window side, he tells pari)
R:- darwaaza lock kar do pari!!(she locks the door, n goes near him but somewhere she was very scared)...
P:- rahul mujhe laga ki tum bohot zyada naraaz ho( rite now pari is standing at the back of rahul n he is facing towards the window n puffing a cigarette, n as pari says this rahul turns around and slaps her so hard tht she falls on the floor and her mouth starts bleeding, then rahul kneels down n hold pari by her hair n pari looks terrified her mouth is bleeding, n then rahul smoking n shouts), R:- kyaa samjh rakhaa hai mujhe, BOL KYAA SAMJH RAKHAA HAI MUJHE..DO TAKE KA ASHIQ...HAAN BOL KAL PHONE KYUN BAND KAR DIYA THA(rahul then gets up n kicks on pari's stomach...n she cries in pain,she was completly shattered n confused by his behaviour, this was the new thing she gets to know about rahul so she can't understand how to behave on this situation..except to cry in pain, then rahul goes n sits on a chair smoking n looking at pari on is laid on floor n crying holding her stomach, n rahul gives a witty smile on this n comes near her n grabs her by her hair n she gets up) R:- aaj ke baad agar maine tujhe kabhi bhi iss tarah mera call reject karte hue dekha then i will kill you...abhi tak mujhe theek se jaanti nahi tum(n then he leaves her hair n she again falls on the floor)....
this part ends here

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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 26 wid d continuation of part 25[tarah mera call reject karte hue dekha then i will kill you...abhi tak mujhe theek se jaanti nahi tum(n then he leaves her hair n she again falls on the floor).....

scene now shifts to hotel lobby
( rahul is a blind rage goes out of the room,whn he left the room n was in the lobby.. a waiter was passing n he senses something wrong, to check he goes inside the room..by the time rahul goes,the waiter opens the door n come inside n see tht pari is lying on the floor just at the side of the bed n crying in pain)..
Waiter:- MADAM!!! KYAA HUA AAPKO.. R U ALRIGHT(he helps her to sit on sofa) P:-(she tries to hide the pain n prentends to be normal) W:- madam agar koi problem ho to doctor ko bulaaun main, P:- no thanks(but tears are not stoping to come out,n her mouth was also bleeding, but she gets some courage n stands n gets ready to leave the room..n the waiter helps her, as she was walking in in the lobby, going near the lift she thinks all tht happened in the room...n says to herself)...rahul mere saath aise kaise kar sakta hai, kitna galat samjhaa maine use, uska asli roop to ye hai..ohh god i made a fool of myself, kitna pyaar kiya use..aur jaanwaron ki tarah maara usne mujhe..(n then she goes inside the lift)

scene now shifts to delhi were shobha n payal were discussing something

payal:- shobha beta kyaa hua?? tum thori pareshan lag rahi ho, bohot der se main tumhe notice kar rahi hoon..kya hua koi problem to nahi hai(n she keep her hand on shobha's hand very gently), Shobha:- haan mummyji, pata nahi kyun ek ajjeb sa dar lag raha hai mujhe, Payal:- darr!! kaisa darr, Shobha:- pata nahi, mummyji, pari ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai, main soch rahi thi ki use main yahaan delhi vapas bula loon,(payal smiles on this n says) dekho beta, ek maa hoti hai naa, uske liye uske bacche hamesha hi bacche rehete hai, chahe vo kitne bhi bare kyun naa ho jaaye, pari bhi ab samjhdar ho gayi hai beta, aur use hum ab pehele ki tarah nahi rakh sakte, aur vaise bhi samdhan ji ke yahaan pari itni khush hogi ki mujhe to iss baat ka bhi doubt hai ki vapas aanaa chahegi bhi yaa nahi(n she smiles again),Shobha:- lekin mumyji, pari ne mujhe ek phone tak nahi kiyaa, jab subhe phone kiya tha tab madam so rahi thi, aur ab uska mobile try kar rahi hoon to switched off hai, Payal:- fikr mat kijiye beta, aur vaise bhi ab to sanjay bhi vahaan par hai, don't worry at all.. (Shobha, still feels uncomfortable)
[scene now shifts again to police station, in mumbai]

(raman, comes with the registor..n sanjay was thinking something..n the door opens n raman comes inside n as he calls sanjay, suddenly sanjay comes from his thought) raman:- sir ye raha registor(n then sanjay takes it n quickly look for the adress, he search for it but he do not get the adress n instead of it he see tht a page is missing from the registor, sanjay feels doubtful) Sanjay:- YE KYA RAMAN!!! YE PAGE TO AISA LAG RAHA HAI KISI NE PHAR DIYA HAI, Raman:- lekin sir jis kisi ko bhi hum yahaan lock up mein rakte hai unkaa phone number aur adress to isi mein likhte hai, aur rahul yahaan pe tha sir, to uska record bhi yahin honaa chahiye, Sanjay:- jaanta hoon main, par ye page phata hua hai, aur main ye bhi jaan gaya hoon ki ye kaam desai ke alwaava aur koi kar hi nahi saktaa, Raman:- lekin sir.... desai sir aisa kyun karenge( then sanjay gives a very witty smile n says) hai ek bohot lambi kahaani, uske aise karne ki vajay main jaanta hoon, rahul aur uskaa baap isi shehar mein hai, bas ab unko dhoondhnaa hai mujhe, AUR YE main kisi bhi tarah karke hi rahoongaa..

scene shifts to pari, coming back to SN,

(pari was trying to hide the pain n her tears, but her face was saying all her story, n tulsi was just passing by her n she see pari like this n gets tensed)

T:- PARI!! BETA KYAA HUA, TUJHE ITNI SAARI CHOT KAISE LAGI, hey bhagwan, ye khoon kaise, KYA HUA TUJHE PARI, (she tries to hide the pain n smiles n says) kuch nahi nani...main theek hoon, vo kyaa hai na ki, apne dost ke ghar gayi thi, vahaan seriyon se pair phisal gayaa tha(tulsi feels something doubtful, and at the same time joydeep also comes n stands at pari's back) nani, main thak gayi hoon abhi thora araam karna chahti hoon, main apne kamre mein jaaun( tulsi looks into her eyes, n to hide the incident pari do not look into tulsi's eyes, n then tulsi looks at joydeep, n then again to pari n then tulsi asks) PARI, KYAA SACH MEIN TU SERIYON SE GIRI, YAA KOI AUR BAAT HAI, P:- nahi naani, sach mein kuch nahi hua hai, vo main bina dekhe chale rahi thi, to bas chot lag gayi, ab main apne kamre mein jaa rahi hoon, (tulsi was still not satisfied of wat pari said) THEEK HAI, JAO..(n as pari moves back she see joydeep was standing ,they both do not say anything to each other, but he understands tht something is wrong with pari)....

****i will update the part soon****

Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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same part:- scene now shifts to pari goes to her room.....
(she locks the door n goes to the bathroom n open the shower, as thr water falls on her she goes to the flashback when rahul beats her very mercilesly...n then she comes out of it n cries very badly, holding her face)......

scene now shifts back to sanjay in the police station, talking to raman
( raman n sanjay are thinking tht were they can find the adress of rahul, but they find no way for it...suddenly an idea clicks to raman n he says to sanjay)
R:- SIR, (sanjay suddenly comes out of his thinking n looks at raman in tension) S:- haan bolo?? R:- AAPKO YAAD HAI SIR, DESAI SIR NE jaane se pehele ek file di thi, jisme recently jitne bhi mujrimon ko lock up mein rakha gaya tha unke baare mein saari details likhi hui hai,( sanjay goes in the flashback when desai gives him the file, then sudenly something comes to his mind) S:- lekin raman agar, desai nahi chahata ki mujhe rahul ka pata mile to vo uss file mein to kabhi bhi rahul ka report nahi likhega..R:- sir, aap shayad ek baat bhool rahe hai, S:- kya?? R:- ek shatir se shatir insan bhi kahin na kahin galati zaroor karta hai..jahaan tak mujhe lagta hai, desai sir ne bhi aisi hi kuch galti ki hogi...
scene again shifts to SN, somebody knocks pari's room's door, n she goes n opens it, it was joydeep, with a Ist aid kit
P:- are joydeep tum?? aao andar aao,aur ye ist aid kit kyun laaye ho, J:- tumhe chot lagi hai naa pari, isiliye ( thn joydeep interupts) MAIN JAANTA HOON PARI, KI YE CHOT TUMHE RAHUL NE DI HAI (pari gets shocked) P:- tumhe kaise pata chala? maine to kisi se kuch bhi nahi kaha tha??? J:- tumharaa bhai hoon pari, tumhari aankhon mein mujhe dard nazar aa raaha hai, aur ye dard seriyon se girne kaa nahi hai..(then tears droped from her eyes, n joydeep puts a medicine on her forehead, sudenly some1 comes at the door it was sanjay, he comes in hurry, n comes near joydeep n pari sitting on the bed).. P:- SANJU TUM? tum to police station gaye the naa?? S:- haan, are yaar kal main tumhare table pe ek file chodke chalaa gaya tha, vo file bohot important hai, red colour ki file thi...tumne dekhi kyaa?? P:- well haan subhe to dekhi thi, i think bansi kaka (servent) mera room saaf karte waqt kahin rakh di hogi, main tumhe vo file dhoondke de doongi.. S:-(tensed n nervous) haan lekin jaldi dhoondhna bohot zaroori hai plss..(thn he notices pari's forehead) S:- PARI? ye tumhare sar pe kyaa hua hai (she n joydeep looks at each other n then pari says) kuch nahi vo vo main apne saheli ki yahaan gayi thi to uske ghar mein seriyon se phisal gayi... ( then sanjay holds her hand gently n says) tumhe apnaa khyaal rakhna chahiye...aur iss tarah bandaron ki tarah harkatein karti ho naa isiliye itni chote lagti hai (then pari joydeep n sanjay giggles, n suddenly sanjay's mobile rings ,it was raman's call, he quickly takes the call n bid gudbye to pari n joydeep n leaves the room, thn pari again looks at joydeep n says)...... joydeep, rahul ne mujhe iss taraah maara hai, tum is baarein mein kisi se kuch nahi kahoge pls promiose karo mujhe, J:- lekin pari, agar hum abhi chup baithenge to vo kal phir tumpe haath uthayegaa, P:-main uski naubat nahi aane dungi, uske saath maine rishta rakhke bohot bari galti kardi, kal usse jaake main apne saare rishte kahatam kar dungi.......(n then joydeep looks at pari n keeps his hand on her hand to giv her moral support)............. this part ends here


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part 27th wid continuation of part part 26[P:-main uski naubat nahi aane dungi, uske saath maine rishta rakhke bohot bari galti kardi, kal usse jaake main apne saare rishte kahatam kar dungi.......(n then joydeep looks at pari n keeps his hand on her hand to giv her moral support)
scene then shifts, its evening time n rahul is sitting wid his father n both r having wine
( whatever happens in the hotel room, rahul tell this to his mr mehra) MR mehra:- MUJHE JAWAAB CHAHIYE RAHUL? WHY DID U DO IT? kyun maara tumne pari ko, RAHUL EK BAAT MERI KAAN KHOLKE SUNLO, ISS BAAR MAIN TUMHE NAHI BACHA PAUNGA.. tum kyun nahi samjhte, i don't want to loose u..(rahul makes a straight face, n thn he says) R:- dad.. usne mera phone nahi liya tha.. kya aapko uski galati nahi dikhaayi deti , (he says this in a very relaxed tone as nothing happened), Mr mehra:- GALATI? galti sirf tumhari hai rahul. ek phone ke vajey se tumne pari ko iss berehemi se maara.. THTS COMPLETLY RIDICULOUS!!!!, (rahul smiles on it) Mr mehra:- rahul meri ek baat yaad rakhnaa, tumne jo galti pehele ki thi, use dohoraane ki koshish mat karna, main tumse baar baar isiliye keh raha hoon kyunki tum mere bete ho, aur main tumse bohot pyar karta hoon... ( rahul then passes a witty smile n says) you know wat dad? mujhe life mein do cheezein bikul pasand nahi, peheli HAAR, aur doosra LECTURE..( n then he pases a smile again n mr mehra makes a staright face),
scene now shifts, it's the next day morning...n tulsi was in her room , sitting on the bedside n thinking suddenly joydeep comes
joydeep:- daadi, aap nashta karne neeche nahi aayi ( n he sits near tulsi, when joydeep asks her about breakfast tulsi do not reply n instead she was looking at the ground n thinking something) Joydeep:- tulsi daadi, kyaa hua.. aap bohot pareshan lag rahi hai, T:- joydeep, main pari ke baare mei soch rahi thi..(joydeep gets tensed) pata nahi kya ho gaya hai iss larki ko, pehele sab ke saath baat karti thi.. hasti thi, aur ab dekho..AUR KAL....KAL USNE MUJHSE JHOOT BOLA KI VO SERIYON SE GIRI HAI.....Joydeep:- daadi ho sakta hai ki sach bol rahi ho....( tulsi smiles) joydeep mere chehre pe jhuriyaan aur baal dhoop mein safed nahi hue hain, uumr ke vajey se hue hai, jab nandani ko ansh ne pareshaan kiyaa tha...bilkul aisi hi bechani thi uss waqt nandani ke chehre pe, main bhool nahi sakti vo sab kuch, pata nahi joydeep..ek ajjeb sa darr raha hai mujhe...MAIN NAHI JAANTI KI YE KITNA SACH HAI KITNA GALAT, lekin pari ke chehre mein mujhe ek ajeeb sa darr dikhaayi diyaa hai....[ joydeep looks at tulsi n remembers tht pari forbided him to say anything about the incident] daadi, aap fikr mat kijiye sab theek ho jayega...
scene now shifts....to pari in her room..she calls rahul...
pari:- hello....Rahul:- (smiles) itna kuch hone ke baad bhi hai,hello bol rahi ho mujhe? mujhe to lagaa ki shayad tum aaj seddhe mere ghar aakar meri chatni banaogi... P:- mujhe tum par nahi Mr RAHUL MEHRA, mujhe aapne aap par gussa aa rahaa hai, KI KYUN MAINE TUMHARA JAISE GHATIYAA INSAAN KO APNE PAAS AANE KI IJAZAT DI, R:- (smiles again).. isiliye shayad mujhse kuch zayada hi impress ho gayi thi.. P:- SHUT UP!!!, MAINE TUMHARI BAKWAS SUNNE KE LIYE PHONE NAHI KIYA HAI, main tumhe sirf itnaa batane ke liye phone kiyaa, ki aaj ke baad tumhare aur mere raaste alag hai...(thn tear drops from her eyes, rahul on the other side also gets tensed n stands) PARI, TUMHARA DIMAG KHARAAB HO GAYA HAI KYAA, USS DIN KI ITNI CHOTI SI BAAT PAR TUM MUJHSE RISHTA KHTAAM KAR DENA CHAHTI HO?? pari:- ( still crying) CHOTI BAAT??( she asks curiously) YE CHOTI BAAT HAI?? TUMNE MUJHE JISS BEHREHEMI SE MAARA, tumhe vo choti baat lagti hai???????? ( on other side of the phone, rahul thinks), NAHI!!! pari mujhe chodke nahi jaa sakti, vo meri hai!! sirf meri....P:- HELLO?? HELLO?? ( he comes out from his thought) ,R:- pari main tumse milna chahta hoon( in a tensed n nervous tone)... P:- KYUN?? MERE UPAR DOOBARA HAATH UTHAANA CHAHTE HO? R:- pari plss meri baat suno sirf ek baar mujhse mil lo sirf ek baar( after pleading serveral times for a 2nd chance pari at last agrees to meet rahul)........to b continued
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it is a great story.. very captivating.. please continue soon.. cant wait to see what happens next.. hope rahul doesnt hurt pari too much this timee...
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part 28 with continuation of part 27(after pleading serveral times for a 2nd chance pari at last agrees to meet rahul)........)
scene now shifts, pari comes to meet rahul
(rahul was standing n pari comes from his back)P:-Rahul? (he turns back, n smiles..n making a very innocent face)pari.. accha hua tum aa gayi, P:- JALDI BOLO?? kis liye bulayaa mujhe yahaan, R:- pari, main jaanta hoon ki jo maine tumhaare saath kiya vo bohot galat tha, mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha..lekin pari, tumhari bhi to galati thi naa, tumne mera phone nahi liya tha...don't u think it's ur fault.. P:- FAULT?? YES U R ABSOLUTELY RIGHT..its my fault, meri galati ye thi ki maine tumpe bharosa kiya, meri galti ye thi ki tumhare asli roop ko maine pehele nahi dekha..aur jaante ho meri sabse badi galti kyaa hai....(after a pause) vo ye ki MAINE TUMSE PYAAR KIYA,(rahul looks apologetically, rahul tries to talk to her more but she do not listens to him n leave the place)..

scene now shifts to SN,
(n pari enters SN she see tht gayatri, daksha n damini were discussing something, pari was about to go to her room when daksha see her n calls her] ARE MERI M.D IDHAR AA( every1 looks at daksha, of y she called pari as MD) Gayatri:- Didi ye M.D matlab??? D:- ARE TUM LOG MD NAHI SAMJHTE offfo MD matlab madhuri dixit...(everybody smiles except pari), Gayatri:- kyaa hua?? pari?? tera chehra itna utra hua kyu hai, (tulsi looks at pari suspiciouly) Tulsi:- haan beta?? kya hua..koi problem to nahi hai tujhe(pari tries to hide it n say) nahi dadi kuch nahi, mujhe kya hua hai, kuch bhi to nahi..i am fine..app log baatein kijiye main thora fresh hpkar aati hoon. (pari goes to her room n tulsi looks at her suspiciously, by the joydeep comes n tulsi looks at him also)

scene now shifts, pari instead of going to her room..she goes to sanjay's room,
( n sanjay was getting ready to go to police station, he was wearing his watch n pari comes at the door step n knocks the door, rahul turns back) S:- are pari?? Aao ander aao, P:- sanjay maine tumhe disturb to nahi kiyaa naa, S:- are nahi !! pagal hai kya?? Bol kyaa kaam hai? P:- nahi kuch nahi, aise hi tumse baat karne karne ka man kar raha tha, S:- (sanjay feels tht there is something wrong wid pari, so he asks) Pari??? Sab kuch theek hai naa?? Koi problem to nahi hai…P:- (she tries to hide her pains n sorrows n smiles) nahi? Koi problem nahi..everything is fine, S:- maine isiliye pucha pari, kyunki tum mujhe thori tensed lag rahi thi, P:- nahi, nahi I am absolutely fine..(sanjay smiles)..accha pari, main jab ghar aaunga tab baat karunga, abhi mujhe police station jaana hai..i am getin late..i hope u don't mind ( pari smiles) are nahi..tum jaao apna kaam karo, hum shaam ko baat karenge..(thn both were goes out of the room)

scene now shifts to the office, where karan n mihir were discussing there project
M:- karan??? Kya hua beta tum bohot pareshan lag rahe ho…koi problem hai?? K:- haan papa?? Main soch raha tha ki kahin rahul ko ye project dekar humne koi galati to nahi ki??? I mean ki vo abhi inexperienced hai,,aur itna bada project use de diya humne??? M:- haan karan beta main bhi yehi soch raha tha, pata nahi ye larka iss project ko kaise handle karega, par ek baat to manni paregi, ki abhi tak usne hume koi shikayat ka mauka nahi diya,
K;- haan papa….n I hope ki aage bhi vo humme shikayat ka mauka naa de??? (just thn rahul opens the office cabin n enters) M:- are rahul aao??? (rahul sits, n karan was about to say something just then mihir interupts) M:- rahul beta tum jo vo project lekat gaye the??? To kya kahaa clients ne…(rahul was looking down, n does not say anything), K:- papa mujhe pehele se hi lag raha tha ki rahul abhi inexperienced hai iss field mein isse thori aur mehenat karni chahiye…(as karan says this,rahul looks towards mihir n then karan , then he takes out a check n some important papers n hands it over to mihir, n looks at karan, n then mihir reads the documents..n slowly his tension changes into a smile) K(karan curiously) kya hua papa……M:- KARAN(wid excitement n zeal) hume ye project mil gaya hai….aur vo log humare company ke saath hi ye project karma chahte hai…(karan also smiles ) thanx rahul...i am sorry, maine tumhe galat samjha (rahul gives a witty smile) karan uncle…ek insane ne pehele kya kaam kiya hai iss zyadaa ye zaroori hai ki vo aage aur kya karta hai (both looks at each others, n to better the situation mihir says) rahul, karan..dekho ye project hamare liye bohot impotant hai..aur iss project ki milne ki khushi mein main chahta hoon ki kal hamare ghar mein ek party ho, vaise bhi bohot dino se hamare ghar mein koi khushi manane ka mauka nahi aaya hai..(karan n rahul looks at mihir, n mihir smils n says) AUR HAAN ?? rahul tum hamare sabse khaas mehmaan ho.. ye deal hame sirf tumhare vajay se mili hai!! Maine chahta hoon kit um zaroor aao, iss party mein….R:- SURE UNCLE (n he looks at karan again like giving him a challenge without saying it, n karan also looks at rahul in the same manner)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was great 👏 👏 👏 ...please continue soon 😊

-Nisha❤️

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