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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 17..wid d continuation of part 16..n thn tulsi says[ rahul tu fikr mat karna hum jaldi kuch karte hai] n then police takes rahul n those boys inside van to police station.....[scene now shifts to gautam siting in the office n talking to the clients, sudenly his mobile rings, gautaum 1st tries to avoid the call as he was in a meeting but latter as he see tht it's tulsi's call so picks it up] G- excuse me gentlemen!!ek important call hai plz..[thn he talks to tulsi], haan mummy boliye?? T- gatuam...tu abhi police station aa sakta hai kyarite now tulsi, archita n pari r on the spot were the incident happened, not in police station...[gataum gets shocked] mummy police station?? par kyun?,Tulsi- beta vo? vo..rahul ko police ne arrest kar liya hai[gatuam gets more shocked] G- WHAT?? par kyuun?[n thn tulsi tells him the whole incident] G- ohh god!! mummy aap fikr mat kijiye main abhi vahaan jakar rahul ko chudake laata hoon...mummy aap bhi vahan pohonchiye, T- kyun beta?? G- mummy ho sakta hai ki police aap se puche ki vahan kya hua tha, isiliye..T- theek hai beta main pohonchti hoon..scene now shifts to the place where d incident took place [pari asks in very nervous n upset tone]daadi kya kaha gatuam mama ne.vo rahul ko chudvane jaa rahe hai ya nahi,T- haan beta[in upset voice] maine gatuam ko bol diya hai, vo abhi police station gaya hai, aur mujhe bhi bulaya hai..Archita- aap ko kyun dadi, T- beta ho sakta hai ki police puch tach kare.. isiliye, tum dono ek kaam karo, ghar jaao main police station jaa rahi hoon.P- nahi daadi, main bhi aapke saath chaloongi[ she insists] nahi pari tum vahan nahi jaaogi...[she again insists] nahi daadi, rahul vahan musibat hai, main ghar kaise jaa sakti hoon..[then archita interupts] pari, daadi sahi keh rahi hai..gatuam chachu gaye hai naa use chudane, aur ab dadi bhi jaa rahi hai..chalo hum ghar chalte hai,T- haan beta tu fir mat kar..are main keh rahi hoon naa use kuch nahi hoga main chudake laaongi use..[pari still do not feel comfortable,but unwillingly she agrees to go home]..scene now shifts to police station, n tulsi reaches there n as she was about to enter, gatuam was coming out..she goes near gatuam n in a very nervous tone she asks..Tulsi- are gataum??kahaan hai rahul, tune uski bail karvadi??,G- mummy uski bail pehele hi ho chuki hai..[Tulsi gets shocked]T-KYAAA, kisne, kisne karvaiye uski bail..G- MR mehra, rahul ke pita..abhi abhi mr mehra use ghar le gaye hai..[Tulsi wid ohh achha type reaction, but she do not say anything] G- mummy ab ghar chaliye?? T- nahi beta tum ghar jaao, main rahul ke ghar hokar aati hoon!![gatuam do not understand] G- RAHUL KE GHAR, magar kyun..T- beta aaj jo hua.. dekha jaaye to humari vajay se rahul ko itni pareshani uthani paree, main ek baar usse baat karna chahti hoon..isiliye..G- theek hai mummy. ab chaliye..scene now shifts to rahul's home..in the hall room where mr mehra was sitting on a sofa..n thinking about how he got rahul out of the lock up.scene again shifts in flashback where he freeds rahul from the lock up..[inspecter, sitting n working..n rahul sitting inside the lock up, suddenly mr mehra comes...n the inspector looks at him n mr mehra looks at him n thn at rahul] inspector- are mr mehra aap?? Mr mehra- ji main..aap ki himmat kaise hui mere bete ko lock mei band karne ki..inspector[thn tell him the whole incident,n thn mr mehra looks at rahul n a sense of tension comes on his face..but thn he says]..dekhiye aap mere bete ko chod dijiye..main yahan uski galati sunne nahi uski bail karvane aaya hoon...inspector[thn passes a clever smile n says]vaise?? mr mehra.ek baar pehele bhi to rahul ne!![with a sudden nervousness on his face..but to hide it he interuptts]..kyaa ab aap rahul ko chodenge..main yahan purani baaton ke baare mein baat karne nahi aayaa hoon..inspector- haan par dhayan rakhiyega meri baaton ka jo aapko maine pichli baar batayi thi..[mr mehra makes a staright face]..n then scene again shifts to mr mehra sitting in the hall room, when tulsi comes n calls out his name he suddenly comes out from the flashback]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part18wid d continuation of part 17 n then scene again shifts to mr mehra sitting in the hall room, when tulsi comes n calls out his name he suddenly comes out from the flashback.....[mr mehra looks at tulsi,]MR mehra- AAP? [very coldly], aap yahan kya karne aayi hai? mere bete ko lock up mein rakha gaya,utna kafi nahi tha..ki aur bhi kuch baaki hai..[tulsi wid a feeling of embarasment,on her face],tulsi-[in a soft voice she apologises about the incident]dekiye..mr mehra,jo kuch bhi hua main uspe sharminda hoon..lekin mujhe ek baat ki khushi hai ki aapne rahul ko ek aurat ki izjaat karna aur uski izjat ke liye larna sikhaya hai..mr mehra gives a clever smile[n then tulsi says]tulsi- lekin aapko kaise pata chala ki rahul lock up mein hai..mera matlab main to use chudvane ke liye aahi rahi thi.MR mehra[wid a pause]..vo rahul ne mujhe phone kar diya tha, n then tulsi wa about to ask another question whn mr mehra interupts in a cold voice]dekhiye? jo ho gaya, so ho gaya..iss baat ko yehi khatam kar dijiye..lekin ek baat main aapse keh dena chahta hoon..[after a pause]ki mere liye mere bete se badkar yaa uski khushi se zyada kuch bhi important nahi..aaj ye hua hai..aainda zara khyaal rakhiyega ki use kisi tarah ki musibat naa uthani pare..[tulsi feels bad bout wat mr mehra says..but she still tries to handle d situation n says] mr mehra, aap fikr mat kijiye..main iss baat ka dhyan rakhoongi..Mr mehra- i hope so.. scene now shifts 2 SN,in pari's room where KT, archita n pari r there..archita n KT r sitting n thinking..while pari is roaming here n there restlessly,KT-pari? tu ek jagah baith jaa,baa gayi hai naa rahul ko chudhane, abhi tak to rahul ghar bhi ponchon gaya hoga..Pari- agar ghar ponchon gaya hoga to mujhe phone kyun nahi kiya..ARchita- pari, ho sakta hai ki waqt vo pareshan ho? aur kisi se baat nahi karna chahta ho..Pari- vo sab to theek hai..lekin daadi ne bhi mujhe ek baar phone nahi kiya?? kitni der ho gayi hai..are kamsekam mujhe itna hi bata deti..ki rahul ko chudva liya, ya nahi..aur tab se rahul ka phone try kar rahi hoon, par switch off hai..kt,archita gets more upset..by seeing pari so restless..[thn tulsi enters pari's room]KT- ARE BAA? archita n pari looks at tulsi 2..[pari wid restlessnes]daadi? daadi kya hua? rahul ko aapne chudvaya ya nahi..kahan hai vo..usne naa aapne koi phone kiya mujhe??Tulsi- haan beta vo??[wid upset voice] rahul ko uske pita chudvake le gaye the.[n thn she tels her the whole incident]...[thn wid a sigh of relief] pari- ohh accha..[lekin daadi..aapko aane mei itni der kyun lag gayi]tulsi- vo main rahul ke ghar gayi thi..P-KYAA RAHUL KE GHAR??kyaa kaha usne?bohot gusse mein tha kya..Tulsi- beta main uske ghar gayi thi,par meri baat mr mehra se hui thi..main rahul se nahi mil paayi..[pari wid an ohh achha type reaction, but she do not say anything]tulsi- beta sab theek ho gaya hai..rahul iss waqt thora pareshan hoga tabhi usne phone nahi kiya..par kuch der mein vo khud hi phone karlega..ab tu fikr mat kar..aur jaake nashta karle..subhe se kuch nahi khaaya tune..[whn tulsi says this, all emotion comes in2 pari's eyes as tears but she do not let it drop frm her eyes..n gives a small smiles]....dis part is not completed here..i will update it soon..enjoy reading!!! 😊

Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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pleasse continue soon.. you are a great writer..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part19, wid continuation of part 18....[whn tulsi says this, all emotion comes in2 pari's eyes as tears but she do not let it drop frm her eyes..n gives a small smiles]...it's evening time..scene shifts to mr mehra sitting wid rahul in the bedroom..Mr mehra- why? WHY RAHUL? YE BEWAKUFI KARNE KI KYA ZAROORAT THI?[rahul was quite sitting n passing a smile, at his father's reaction]MAINE TUMHE HAZAAR BAAR SAMJHAYA HAI...LEKIN TUMHARE DIMAG MEIN YE BAAT KYU NAHI JAATI..KI ISS BAAR AGAR KUCH HUA TO MAIN TUMHE NAHI BACHA SAKOONGA..hazar baar, hazar baar kaha hai, apne gusse ko control karo..ek baar, pehele bhi musibat mein par chuke ho...[rahul thn again passes a smile n says]..R- Dad..i'm not crazy[mr mehra makes a frusted face],main jaanta hoon ki main kyaa kar raha hoon..pichli baar ke liye meri koi galati nahi thi,usne mere gusse ko bharkaya tha..aur iss vajah se usse ye sab face karna pada..[mr mehra looks at rahul..n in a suspicious tone he asks]...mr mehra- rahul??kahin tum?vo larki??wat's her name? [rahul interuppts]-pari naam hai uska? mr mehra- haan? vahi..kahin tum usse pyar to nahi karne lage ho...[rahul gives a witty smile..n says] dad, aap apne bete ko acchi tarah se jaante hai..[mr mehra...gets more tensed] rahul tum jaante ho naa, tum kya kar rahe ho...R- mujhe jo karna tha vo main kar chuka hoon..ab baari pari ki hai..[thn rahul starts laughfing, n mr mehra gets more tensed..n then rahul leaves d room]...[n mr mehra's secretry comes in..mr mehra was tensed n thinking..thn sudenly his secretary calls him n mr mehra comes out of his thought..]secretary- kya hua sir? aap bohot pareshan lag rahe hai..any problem..mr mehra- haan?? haan rohit.. pareshani to hai..mujhe samjh mein nahi aaraha,ye rahul iss bar kya karna chahta hai...pichli baar jo hua tha, use bhulana bohot mushkil hai..aur ab ye nayi musibat..Rohit[secretary] musibat kaisi musibat sir?? mr mehra- pari? rohit- ye pari kon hai sir..aur ye rahul ke liye kaise musibat ban sakti hai..mr mehra- pari viranis ki relative hai..[in an upset tone]mujhe lagta hai ki ye rahul use chahhne laga hai...rohit-[smiling] to sir ye to acchi baat hai naa..aap pareshan kyu ho rahe hai...mr mehra- ye tum keh rahe ho rohit...mujhse zyada tum use jaante ho..[rohit gets tensed]..sir hp sakta hai ki uss haadse ke baad rahul badal gaya ho..mr mehra- huh? kuch nahi badla rohit..mujhe uss larki ki fikr ho rahi hai[rohit tries to give sympathy to mr mehra]..sir aap fikr mat kijiye..ho sakta hai, vakiye mei rahul badal gaya ho..jo usne tab kiya shayad ab vaisa kuch naa karen..[mr mehra do not say anything..but thinks] tum kuch bhi kaho rohit..vo haadsa bhulna yaa bhulanaa asaan nahi hai..[scene now shifts to pari sitting in her room, n thinking about rahul, suddenly the phone rings Pari,was just about to say hello, n then rahul says]...R- hello, bolne ki zarroorat nahi hai..tumhari aahat pehechanta hoon main..[pari gets surprised]P- rahul tum? tum kahaan ho??[ she gets tensed n asks questions frequently]..tumne ek phone karna zaroori nahi samjha??main pure din kitni pareshan thi??[tears rolls through eyes]n she was about to asks more, whn rahul interuppts]..R- WILL U KEEP UR MOUTH SHUT N LISTEN TO ME[he shouts] .[pari gets a bit afraid n thn she calms down n listens to him][in an upset tone]P- haan bolo?..R-[whn pari calms down he says in a soft voice]..jab chilaata hoon, tab baat samajh mein aati hai naa..[pari makes a face wid no reaction..but tears roll thorugh her eyes, n she says] P- kyaa hai? jaldi bolo??[rahul smiles n says]..main tumhare ghar ke neeche hoon, gaadi mein..5 min mein necche pohoncho..[pari gets surpirsed..she goes near the window n see tht rahul's car was standing outside]..P- rahul tum? ghar tak aaye ho..to andar kyu nahi aate..[he again passes a witty smile n says]R- tumhare pure group se milne nahi aaya hoon main..i have just came here 2 meet u..ab bak bak karna band karo[he says wid arrogance] aur jaldi neeche aao..P- lekin meri baat to suno?[ by the time he cuts the call]P- hello? hello..[then scene shifts 2 pari, reaches near rahul's car..n rahul sitting inside d car..looks through d mirror,tht pari is comin from the back..n suddenly flashes comes to him the first day he met pari in the telephone booth..whn she was very scared of seeing him]..n as pari opens the front door of the car rahul looks at the side..n pari sits inside the car]P- haan bolo..kya baat hai?[rahul looks at her n do not say anything]..[after a pause..pari again asks]rahul kyaa baat hai??kuch kaam tha mujse[ he still do not say anything n keep on staring her]..[pari feel irritated n says]..fine, tumhe koi baat nahi karni, to main jaa rahi hoon..[as pari was about to open the door, rahul locks the door..from his side.n she turns back n says..wid irritation] rahul kyaa problem hai, why r u behaving so starnge..[sudenly rahul grabs pari by her hair..n get her close to his face] P- OUCH!! rahul pagal ho gaye ho kyaa..HAVE U GONE CRAZY OR WAT..baal chodo mera..[rahul shouts at pari,still holding her hair]..R- TUM MUJHSE PUCH RAHI HO..KI MAIN ITNA AJJEB KYU BEHAVE KAR RAHA HOON[pari looks in2 his eyes]..P- rahul mujhe dard ho raha hai..u r hurting me...[rahul thn feels her pain n thn he leave her hair]..R-[n in shallow voice,n tears in his eyes coming out]..tum dard ki baat kar rahi ho..mujhe kitna dard ho raha hai, kabhi socha hai..JAB TUMHE KOI DEKHTA HAI NAA..TO JEE MEIN AATA HAI KI USKI AAKHEN NOCH LOON,jab koi tumhe chune ki koshish karta hai to man karta hai vo haath ukhaad doon..aur tum dard ki baat karti ho..dekhna chhaati ho dard kise kehte hai[pari feels gets very scared from rahul..but on d same time she also feels tht how much rahul loves her]..R- dekhna chahti ho tum..[thn he folds his sleves n shows tht his wrist was burnt]P- OMG...ye.,ye kaise huaa rahul..tumhara haath kaise jaala[she asks wid lot of pain in her eyes n tears were just not stoping..]tumhe yaad hai..jab hum doosri baar tumhari daadi ke party pe mile the..tum kisi doosre larke ke saath dance kar rahi thi...HAS RAHI THI, BAATEIN KAR RAHI THI..[thn pari remebers in the flashback] R- YAAD AAYAA MS PARI..USS DIN, USS DIN maano mera rom rom jal utha ho..aur tum dard ki batein karti ho..[ thn rahul burries his face in his hands n cries like a baby..n by seeing rahul crying like this..she hugs him tightly]P- RAHUL LISTEN TO ME..suno meri baat suno..ek baar dekho meri taraf plzz..[n then rahul looks at pari..completly hard broken]..[pari thn cleans the tears from his eyes wid her palms n burries his face in her palms n says]..tumne mujhe ek baar bhi batana zaroori nahi samjha...tht u love me..main tumhe khaa jaati kya[n she kisses at his forehead]..tum to ek bacche se bhi zaayda bacche ho...[n tears were not stoping from pari's eyes]..itni si baat bata nahi sake..stupid[n thn rahul smiles..n both tightly hugs each other..n rahul says] pari, tum mujhe kabhi chod ke to nahi jaaoygi naa.. [then..she looks at him n says...][now as everything got cleared between rahul n pari..she says very straightforwardly]..main tumhara saath aakir tak nahi chodungi....aaj ke baad..maine apni zindagi tumhare hawale kar di hai..[n rahul kisses on her forehead][this part ends here]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part20 wid d continuation of part19....aaj ke baad..maine apni zindagi tumhare hawale kar di hai..[n rahul kisses on her forehead][this part ends here]...
[scene..at the same place,in the car..now rahul n pari r happy bout their new relationship, n all misunderstanding r clear so ..rahul takes pari's hands gently n says]
pari?? P- hmm..R- thank you...P- thank you kis baat ke liye,R-mujhe itna khoobsurat rishta dene ke liye.thanks thank you very much[he smiles,n gently kisses on pari's cheek..thn something comes 2 his mind he backs off n looks at the opossite side lookin tensed..pari don't understand this n asks]rahul??kyaa hua..achanak tensed kyu lag rahe ho..[rahul again looks at pari's side] nahi kuch nahi???P- rahul main tumhari aakhen padh sakti hoon koi baat to hai[she asks a bit curiously..thn he says]R-pari!!har insan ke do "kal" hote hai...ek beeta hua "kal"..aur ek aane vala "kal"..[then rahul goes a bit more near to pari's face n says] dekhaa jaye to har insan ka beeta hua kal accha hi hota hai..[then he becomes a bit more serious n says..wid a pause] lekin ye zaroori nahi hai ki har kisi kaa beeta hua kal acchi tarah guzra ho..[pari gets more confused.]main samjhi nahi rahul??tum kiski baat kar rahe ho??kiska beeta hua kal accha nahi guzra[she asks wid curiosity,thn rahul change the topic]kuch nahi,rehene do...bohot raat ho gayi hai tum ghar jaao..aur ab mujhe bhi chalna chahiye...[pari smiles, n says] okk..[n as she was goin 2 open d door, she remeber something n looks back at rahul n says..]rahul? R- hmm..P- ek baat to batana bhul hi gayi..R-kyaa meri laado[he says this wid a giggle,pari too giggles]kal archita ka b'day hai..tum aarahe ho naa, R- sure...[n scene now shifts to SN..it's morning n everybody are sitting in the hall room..]

frnds there is some problem..i will update the whole part soon, this is just the half of it...do read it..n sorry 4 d inconvineince

Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 20[same]n scene now shifts to SN..it's morning n everybody are sitting in the hall room,deciding wat that how they r going to celebrate archita's b'day......[in the hall room,whn evry1 were deciding wat 2 wear at the party n othr stuff,bhoomi is talking on her cellphone, when joydeep comes.]...J-bhoomi?? [she is still talking on phone n ignores him]J- bhoomi..mujhe kuch zaroori baat karni hai tumse...[she looks at joydeep,]DIKHAYI NAHI DE RAHA PHONE PE BAAT KAR RAHI HOON...i mean just look at ur self..tumme to basic manners bhi nahi hai YOU FOOL..just get lost...[till thn every body were staring at bhoomi]NOW WAT?? sab aise kyu dekh rahe ho mujhe...[thn tulsi comes frm back..n she breaks the ice of silence n tension] Vo tumhe isiliye aise dekh rahe hai bhoomi[n she turns back]...kyunki tum shayad is duniya ki peheli aisi larki ho...jo apne pati aur naukar mein koi fark nahi samjhti....B- HELLOW? tum mujhe sikhaane ki koshish mat karo TULSI DAADI....ek to zarbardasti ISS JOYDEEP KO MERE GALE BAANDH DIYA[joydeep gets very upset]...aur ab bare bare lectures suna rahi ho..T- HAAN? SAHI KAHA TUMNE...main lecture hi suna rahi hoon...lekin tumhare bhale ke liye...B- OHHH GOSH..THIS WOMEN..T-bhoomi ek baat meri hamesha yaad rakhna,ek accha pati har kisi larki ke naseeb mein nahi hota..TUM JISSE AAJ ISS TARAH BAIZZAT KAR RAHI HO...MAT BHOOLNA BHOOMI..jis din tumhe apni galti samjh mein aaeyegi kahin uss din bohot der naa hojaaye...[till then tulsi n joydeep both leaves]joydeep was standing on terrace whn daksha comes..joydeep was crying D- arrrarra mere gayab film ke tushaar kapoor[he looks at back] kya hua?[wid a smiling face]J-[clear the tears from his eyes n wear his specs back] kuch nahi dadi?? vo bas mai aisi hi..ankhon mein kuch chala gaya tha...Daksha- haan haan dikh raha hai..bohot kuch chala gaya hai tera...nahi???
hansi, khushi...bas agar reh gaya to gum...J- nahi daddi aisi koi baat nahi hai main khush hoon...aur agar aap bhoomi ke baare mein baat karne aayin hai to main aapko baata doon ki vo bohot acchi hai bohot pyar karti hai mujhse...D- acchaa? haan? sahi kaha tune..lekin vo pyaar nazar to nahi aataa..dekh joydeep..mera kyaa hai main ekdum starightforwarly baat karti hoon....agr bhoomi ko pana hai to gayab ka tushaar nahi balki dhoom ka hrithik banke dikha..samjha??[he makes a staright face]... part ends here

Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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part 21[with the continuation of part 20[..dekh joydeep..mera kyaa hai main ekdum starightforwarly baat karti hoon....agr bhoomi ko pana hai to gayab ka tushaar nahi balki dhoom ka hrithik banke dikha..samjha??[he makes a staright face]... part ends here]..........

[scene now shifts, in evening SN is now full of guests every1..it's a party time, archita, kt,pari n lakshay r busy talking]...[kt asks lakshay]KT- lakshay, baato..aaj main kaisi lag rahi hoon..[lakshay bullies kt n archita n pari looks at them] L- TUM? kt mujhe lagta hai kii...tum??? KT[feels curious] aree bolo naa..kaisi lag rahi hoon..L- hmmmm rehende do tumhe bura lag jaaeyga,[she gets more curious,then archita says are lakshay kyu use tang kar rahe ho bata bhi do kaisi lag rahi hai aaj kt] L- theek hai theek hai...to suno madam..[thn kt smiles n lakshay also smiles n says]tum aaj ekdum eshaa ki tarah lag rahi ho..KT- ye essha kon hai[she gets bit more curious n jealous also] L- well esha meri maths techer thi...100 kilo vazan waali..do bachon ki aamma..[pari n archita laughs at kt]..KT- lakshay..kyaa kaha tumne..aaj to tumhari khair nahi..[lakshay bullies her more...now pari is looking at the door...n waiting 4 rahul..then lakshay sees this n asks].L- kyaa hua pari tumhe main notice kar raha hoon ye tab se darvaze ki taraf kyu dekh rahi ho...P:- nahi kuch nahi bas aise hi, [kt bullies pari n says to 2 archita] KT:- mujhe lagta hai archita ki hamari pari hai naa vo definatly apne prince charming ka wait kar rahi hai...A- ARE HAAN?? HMMMMM MUJHE BHI YEHI LAG RAHA HAI...[thn lakshay bullies kt n says] L- oye madam...meri behen wait karti nahi karati hai...aur vaise bhi tum to itni moti ho, ki maine socha ki tumse shaadi kar loon..vaise bhi main social service to karta hi reheta...KT- [runs after him to hit him..n they leaves] A- pari? P- haan bol archita? A- tu kahin? rahul ka wait to nahi kar rahi?[ pari blushes, n archita understands n giggles] hmmmmm, main sab samjh rahi hoon madam...pari sach sach bata kya chal raha tum dono mein[ pari smiles n again to hide her love 4 rahul] nahi nahi kuch nahi??? pagal hai kyaa..rahul to sirf mera accha dost hai...A- ohhohho dosst hai...tabhi saare doston ke aane ke baad bhi aap sirf uss ek khaas dost ka intezar kar rahi hai...aur isiliye mere ko cake bhi nahi katne de rahi...kyunki rahul ke aane par hi main cake kaatoon..yaad hai thori der pehele aapne request ki thi mujhse....P- [she again pretends] haan vo..vo main?? A- bas bas madam.. zyada dimang mei presure mat dallo main sab samjh rahi hoon...[ n then both of them giggles].........[scene shifts to daksha standing wid tulsi, baa n gayatri] D- gayatri sun?[tulsi n baa looks at daksha n says] mere ek baat ka staright straight jawab degi kyaa?? [gayatri curiously asks] haan didi puchiye naa?? D- aaj main prajakta se zayada bold n beautiful nahi lag rahi..next to shakiraa,[gayatri thinks wat to say..n thn she says]..haa haan didi? aaj to aap bohot hi acchi lag rahi hai...[thn daksha asks baa..] D- baa aap bataiyena...kyaa main vo prajkta se zyada young nahi lagti..BAA- nahi nahi prajkta se kyaa..aaj to tu bhoomi, kt, archita inn sab se bhi kam umar ki lag rahi hai[ daksha makes a confusing face, while tulsi,baa n gayatri giggles]....[scene shifts to rahul going to sit in the car, suddenly his mobile rings...] Hello? [ a person on othr side of phone]:- good evening bolun sirji? kaise hai aap? R- TUM???? TUMNE YAHAAN PAR PHONE KYU KIYA...[person]:- Vo kyaa hai naa sirjee aajkal dhanda barabar nahi chal raha hai..[n rahul is getting tensed...n angry]...agar kuch jeb karchi mil jaataa to????? R:- dekho iss waqt main bhahar jaa raha hoon..main baad mein aakr baat karta hoon...[and was about to cut the phone, n thn the (person)starts singing.. jo hai samma kal ho naa ho......[rahul again listens to him n do not cut the phone] [person]:- sirjee aapne ye gaana suna hai naa...kal ho naa ho[ he sings] kuch bhi hamesha ke liye nahi hota...R- tum kehna kya chahte ho.....[person] :- sirjee main ye kehna chahta hoon, ki koi hai jo garhe hue murde ukhadne ki koshish kar raha hai, aapke atit se...[rahul gets shocked] WAT???? KON..HAI VO...peheliya bujhaana band karo aur MUJHE PURI BAAT BATAO....[person]:- [laughs] n says...sirjee diwaaron ke bhi kaan hote hai...aap mujhse abhi aakr miliye..kyunki kal main shehar se bahar jaa raha hoon, jiske liye mujhe kuch aur paise chahiye???R- paiso ki fikr mat karo tum....main abhi aaraha hoon..bolo kahan aana hai...[person]:- theek hai? jaisi aap ki marzi??? 2 lakh rupe lekar sunshine cofee house mein pohonch jaaiye..baki baatein vahin hongi...R- alright..abhi ponchon raha hoon...[scene now shifts to SN, tulsi saying to archita] T- are archita beta tu cake kab kategi...AR- haan bas daadi kuch der mein...T-lekin beta jaldi...mehmaano ko intezar karvana theek nahi hota....[archita gets tensed..n whn she see pari standing at a distnce n waiting 4 rahul...archita says to tulsi] AR-[in hurry] daadi main abhi aarrahi hoon??T- haan beta par?? AR- daadi ek min bas..T- are sun to ???[n archita leave] [scene shifts to pari n archita....archita comes to pari n says] ..A-pari aur wait karna theek nahi[pari looks at archita..n sadly says]....haan archita shayad tum theek keh rahi ho..rahul abhi nahi aane wala...[n unwillingly pari says to archita]chalo lets go..archita- [while walking] pagal din chota mat kar..ho sakta hai koi problem hai tabhi nah aaa paya...pari- yaa rite[ in a soft sad voice].........[part ends here]


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part22 wid the continuation of part 21[chalo lets go..archita- [while walking] pagal din chota mat kar..ho sakta hai koi problem hai tabhi nah aaa paya...pari- yaa rite[ in a soft sad voice].........[part ends here]scene again shifts to sunshine coffee house..rahul sees the personthis person is the same inspector who put rahul behind the lock up...whn rahul fought for pari in the temple area,his name is ramakant desai...but called as desai....desai- aaiye???? R-kaho kyaa zaroori baat thi[anxiously]...desai:- batate hai batate hai...pehele baith to jaiye sir[he smiles,n then rahul sits] R-kyaa baat hai bataao...Desai[giving a devilish smile] pehele mere paise...R- PAISE PAISE PAISE....tumhe isse pehele paise nahi diye kyaa...yaa AB TUMHE MUJHPE BHAROSAA NAHI HOTA...[desai with a witty smile says] aap bharose ki baat naa hi kare to accha hai saab[rahul looks angrily at him..main maanta hoon ki ek haath de ek haath le....ab aage aap jaano..bina paise liye main aapna muh nahi kholenewala..R- lekin iss baat ki kyaa garauntee hai ki paise lekar tum sach bologe..Desai- ab itna bharosa to aap kar hi sakte hai mujhe sirjee..[smiling] ab itne saalon se aapka vafadaar reh chukaa hoon..abhi kyu namak halali karoonga..[then rahul takes the bag n handovr it to desai..] Desai- [holds the bag n shakes it laughs n says] bag mein vazan to hai...R-[angrily] AB BAKO...Desai- haan to suniye?? jo case paanch saal pehele band ho gaya tha..ab ek naya inspector aaya hai....aur vo iss case ko reopen karna chahata hai...maine use kuch naa kuch karke itna samjhyaa hai ki ye ek accident tha..par vo sa**la maanne ke liye taiyaar hi nahi...Rahul-[very anxioulsy]..kya usko koi saboot mila hai..ye proof karne ke liye ki ye accident nahi tha...Desai- KYAA BAAT KAR RAHE HAI AAP SIRJEE...vo saboot to humne usi din khatam kar diye the..yaad nahi aapko..ARREE HAAAAAN...aapko kaise yaad hoga...aap ko to???? Rahul-[angrily] AAEE AAPNA MUH BAND RAKH SAMJHAA...AUR YE BATA ki kyaa naam hai uss inspector kaa..use to dekh loonga main....Desai-[wid witty smile] Sanjiv mallik...[rahul gets shocked....so much so tht it feels like floor slipped from his feet][very much in tension..n upset..rahul says] SANJEEV MALLIK...ye yahaan par kaise ponchocha....[this part ends here]
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part 23with d continuation of part 22[very much in tension..n upset..rahul says] SANJAY MALLIK...ye yahaan par kaise ponchocha..] again in the same scene,by seeing rahul's reaction...desai feels something doubtful n ask...desai-kyaa aap sanjay ko jante hai [rahul suddenly comes out of his shock] bohot acchi tarah janta hoon, desai- kaise??(curiously)[but rahul thinks] agar isko puri sachhaya bata di, to kal ye mujhe aur zyada black mail naa karen[n thn he interuptts n says] TUMHE YE SAB JANNE KI KOI ZAROORAT NAHI...tumhe tumhare paise mil gaye hai...ab jaao...AUR HAAN..ek baat aur...aapna muh kisi saamne khola to mujhse bura koi nahi hogaa..tujhe pata hai naa, mera gussa kitna khraab hai...desai[wid witty smile] haan haan pata sirjee, ek example to dekh hi chukaa hoon..[n then rahul gives a devilish smile].....[thn desai leaves the place n rahul calls mr mehra] Mr mehra:- hello? rahul:- hai, hello kehne ke liye phone nahi kiya dad..ek zaroori baat hai....mr mehra:- RAHUL??? tum??? haan batao kya zaroori baat hai, R;- main abhi desai se sunshine coffe house mein baat kar raha tha...[mr mehra gets shocked] KYAAA? USSE KYAA BAAT KAR RAHE THE TUM...RAHUL KAHIN TUMNE PHIR SE TO KUCH, rahul:- dad? dad/ meri baat suniye pehele...vo desai bata raha tha ki ek naya inspector aayaa hai, aur vo uss case ko phir se reopen karnaa chahata hai...Mr mehra:- WAT??? kon hai vo inspector....[rahul with a pause] aap naam sunenge naa..to aap ke pairo se zameen kheesak jaaiyegi...mr mehra:- RAHUL? naam bata uska...[rahul again wid a pause] SANJAY MALLIK [mr mehra gets the same shock as rahul got] mr mehra:- KYAAA? SANJAY??? vo mumbai kab aayaa??? use to hummne[ very anxiously] ??????, rahul:- haan haan jaanta hoon dad?? par ab sach ye hai ki vo mumbai aaa chuka hai, aur vo ab jalaad ki tarah mere peeche lagega....kyunki uska personal interst jo hai...[mr mehra quiet scared...n worried 4 his son] rahul...kisi bhi tarha koshish karke, use bhagao yahaan se....kahin tum phas naa jaao..rahul[wid a clever smile] jaanta hoon dad, par vo mera kuch nahi bigar sakta.....vo mujhse nahi bach sakta...anyways dad mujhe abhi kahin jaana hai..i will call u later...bye, mr mehra;- bye....
scene now shifts to SN..archita is cutting the cake, n then rahul comes..pari see him..rahul passes a smile to pari..she also returns it n then she something comes to her mind n she ignores him,n thn rahul stands closer to pari n then says to archita rahul:- haapy b'day architaa...ye gift tumhare liye,archita:- thanks.... [then as the cake was cut n all guests were busy dancing..pari was standing alone at a corner..n rahul comes n stands by her side] Rahul:-[in a very loving voice] naaraz ho mujhse??? P- NAHIIN? main kyun naraaz hone lagi...vaise bhi main khush rahoon, naraaz ho jaaun kisi ko kyaa fark parta hai...JISKO JO KARNA HAI VO KAREN..[ rahul smiles n without saying anything takes her hand..to the dance floor..n hold her from waist n get her closer to her face...n pari gets a bit shocked on this] P:- rahul?? [nervously] Rahul:- jaanti ho pari...tumhare chehre mein sabse zyaadaa mujhe tumhaari ye aankhen pasand hai,[n then slowly he get her more closer to his face n says wid more passion in his voice]....jab maine tumhe peheli baar dekhaa thaa..telephone booth ke andar..dari hui, sehemi hui..man kiya ki tumhe ek baar gale se lagaloon, lekin agar aisa karta naa..to tum shayad darke behosh hi jaati..BATAAO PARI....kaisa lagta hai, mere itne kareeb aane pe, tumhari in khoobsurat aakhon mein maine apne liye darr dekha hai....kyaaa abhi bhi darti ho mujhse??[pari gets more scared but she constantly look in2 his eyes n then gathering som courage she says] HAAN...darti hoon..bohot darti hoon..par ab zayaada dar, dur jaane se lagta hai..[rahul pases a witty smile on this]......
[this part ends here...]
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part24[with continuation of part 23]pari gets more scared but she constantly look in2 his eyes n then gathering som courage she says] HAAN...darti hoon..bohot darti hoon..par ab zayaada dar, dur jaane se lagta hai..[rahul pases a witty smile on this....

[scene now shifts, it's morning n pari is sleeping in her bedroom....sudenly some1 comes n tickles at her feet..pari gets disturbed...again the same thing happens...pari giggles n open her eyes..n with an excitment n great zeal..she says] SANJU TUMMMMM...[a smart guy standing at a distance frm pari's bed n smiling] [pari wid lots of excitment on her face, she gets up from her bed n goes near to sanjeev] TUM MUMBAI KAB AAYE[wid smile sanjay says] bas samjhlo,jab tumne aapni aankhen kholi,tabhi mumbai aaya...P:- hmmmmm, bohot baatein banana seekh gaye ho..[ then she holds his ears n says] S:- Ouch!! pari kaan hi nikal jaaeygaa[thn she leaves n says] STUPID!! pata hai mummy tumhe kitna yaad kar rahi thi...ye nahi ki ek phone kar lo..tumhare saare emails mail roz parti thi...lekin lagta hai jabse tum inspector bane ho, tumhare paas hum logo ke liye time hi nahi hai[pari says this wid innocence n lil bit annoy] S- arre buddhu[wid smile he gently hits on her forhead] main chahhata tha ki tumhe aur shobha aunty ko surprise doon....abhi abhi meri shobha aunty se phone pe baat hui hai...AUR AUNTY JII, hum police vaalon ke paas aapki tarah faaltoo time nahi hai[pari makes a face n says]HOWWWW MEAN.]THN they both giggles n thn he gets a bit serious] n says.... aur pari tumhe to pata hai ki main police mein bherti, ek khaas maksad ke vajay se hua hoon..[pari also becom serious]..lekin sanju tumne kabhi bhi mujhe apne uss maksad ke baare nahi batayaa..S[bit upset] pari kabhi kabhi, dard itnaa zyadaa gehraa hota hai naa ki..use naa batayaa jaa saktaa hai naa dabayaa jaa sakta hai..[pari becomes more curious] kyaa baat hai sanju, dekho main tumhari dost hoon..tumhari aankhon mein ek ajeeb sa dard nazar aata hai mujhe...kyaa tum mujhe bhi nahi bataoge...[then sanjay takes her hand gently n says] pari iss duniya mei mera tumhare aur shobha aunty ke alawa aur koi nahi hai..jis din sahii waqt aayega main sabse pehele tumhe bataunga[pari becomes upset but she smiles n trusts him, thn sanjay changes the topic n says] accha ye sab baatein chodo..aur jaldi taiyaar hokar breakfast karne pohoncho...P- YES SIR??? [sanjay n pari giggles....then sanjay leaves the room..[next scene:- then pari is shown she gets ready n was about to leave the room n at the same time pari's phone rings..pari picks up her cell n see that it was rahul's number..she cuts his call..thn again rahul calls she again cuts the phone n smiles..she do this 3-4 time..thn on the 5th call she takes his call, she was about to say hello..but rahul says] DO YOU THINK I'M MAD..[he shouts at pari..but she keep on giggling]SAMJHTI KYA HAI AAPNE AAP KO..HAAN..5 BAAR PHONE KIYAA..par baar baar phone kaat deti ho..WATS THE MATTER..[thn she starts laughing..n rahul gets shocked..] ab hans kyu rahi ho tum..maine koi joke nahi sunayaa[ n she laughs again] pari mujhe lagta hai..aaj tumhe rest karne ki zaroorat hai..kal jab theek ho jaogi tab baat karenge theek hai..[thn she interuppts but still smiles] rahul..mujhe kuch nahi huaa hai..main tumhe aaj jaan bujhke pareshaan kar rahi thi..R- kyiiiuuunn ? kis khushi mein, P- vo kyaa naa ki main dekhna chahati thi ki tum mujhe kitna miss karte ho...R- aur kyaa dikhaa [she blushes in a shallow voice she says] bohot miss karte ho....R- acchaa, really? [she smiles] hmmmmm reallllyyy...[rahul giggles n says] accha ye sab baatein chodo aur ek baat suno, aaj shaam ko main soch rahaa hoon ki kahin bahaar ghumne chale..[pari makes a face wid excitment]....R- kyunki dekho subhe tumhe pataa hi hai office ka kaam reheta hai..so i think...shaam ka waqt hi theek hai..wat u say...[she smiles n wid excitment says] joeee hukum mere aakaa..[n both giggles]..[sudenly sanjay comes at room's doorstep n says....] pari jaldi karo tulsi daadi nashte ke liye bula rahi hai..he says this n goes[rahul listens to the voice n gets nervous]pari??? P:- haan mere aakaa? R:- ye aawaaz kiski..P:- vooeee... vo to mera dost thaa...kyun kyaa huaa...any problem... R;- nahi..kuch nahi....main phone rakhtaa hoon tum shaam ko ponchon jaanaa..P:- okkk[ n then they cuts the phone n pari also leaves the room]

this part is not ended here...it will b updated soon...enjoy reading 😃 😊

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