aapka saath rahe last part - Page 3

i really like the fanfic.. please please continue to write it.. 😊

part 14 with continuation of part 13 pari thinks n makes an excuse] G- vo vo dadi mere right hand mein thora dard ho raha hai bas isiliye? G- accha..
[ then atlast rahul leaves her right hand, n both looks at each other pari looks bit upset n rahul gives a cunning smile......
[after rahul leaves pari's hand, she gets up..n rahul thinks something n sudenly he put the bowl of pulses(dal) on his shirt, pari suddenly looks at him](R)- [pretends, as it happened by mistake] ohh no!!!Tulsi- are rahul ye kaise gir gaya R- vo daadi, vo pari ka galati se haath lag gaya tha..[he lies, n pari looks at him n says] P- mera? mera kab haath laga..main to theek se hi uthi thi...[then damini n tulsi both looks at them, then rahul says]vo pari tumhara duppata bowl ke upar laga aur dal mere upar gir gayi...[pari understands tht he is lieing, but she do not say him anything at the spot,then mihir says]accha pari beta, koi baat nahi, tum rahul ko wash basin ke taraf le jao.?[then daksha says] arrrara rahul? mihir theek keh raha hai..jaldi iss daag ko dho lo varna surf excel lagane par bhi nahi jaeyga..[ tulsi n rahul looks at daksha n smiles, then pari says to him] p- aaiye?[n then they go upstairs in pari's room..after washing the stain as he come out.. he see tht pari was reading some paper n he comes from the back n says]pari ji? [pari turns around n shows some attitute..]haan boliye? R-[with a smile, he says]vo stain chala gaya? P- bari acchi baat hai, main kya kar sakti hoon aur? R[smiles again n says] kuch nahi,[then with a pause he says] magar aap chahe to bohot kuch kar sakti hai...P- jaise? R-hmmm, jaise? ki aap aur main kahin ghumne chal sakte hai? kahin bhi jahaan aap kahen? P-ooo, hello...aap din mei sapne dekhna band kijiye...aur aapne tab mera haath kyu pakra tha? R-[rahul looks at her innocent eyes, n with love he giggles a bit n says]vo.. vo main? P-(curiously pari asks) vo main kya???[rahul first looks at the ground while thinking n then he again looks at her n says with a arrogance] tumne apni shakal aaine mein dekhi hai ms chipkali..aur iss galat fami mein mat rahena ki main[with more attitude says] aur tumhara haath pakroonga..vo to maine socha ki main table ka handle pakar raha hoon..do you get it..P-[makes an expression of how could he says tht..with an open mouth, n b4 she says nything]P- look MR? [Rahul interupts]R- ok? bye?[he says this with a giggle]....[but when he goes pari looks at him n smiles..n mutters] pagal hai..[it's evening..scene now shifts to hall room where kt, archita n pari were talking, suddenly damini n taniya comes from back] P- are damini maami?aap log kahan se aa rahe hai[ damini n taniya sits n smiles n says] vo beta aaj maine aur taniya ne socha ki thori si shopping kar aaye..[KT n archita smiles..n archita says wid excitment] daamini chachi? aap hamare liye kya laaye ho? dikhaiye naa?[kt n pari also wid same excitment] haan haan dikhaiye naa plz plz??[ taniya says] ohh ho, ye bacche bhi naa[taniya wid smile] dikhaa rahi hoon, bas tum teeno shor mat machayo[n damini n taniya gives the clothes to kt n archita n then pari..wen damini was giving the gift to pari tht time joydeep arrvies there n stands n he looks at pari's hand..wen pari takes the gift.. joydeep standing there says] are pari? P- haan joydeep? J- pari? ye tumhare haath mein kya hua[asks with curiousity, then damini also looks at it n asks] are haan pari, kya hua tumhare haath mein?[pari thn looks at her hand n thinks the afternoon incident wen rahul holds her hand tightly]..[then pari suddenly unfolds her full t shirt sleeves n makes an excuse by lookin once at joydeep thn to damini n taniya] vo vo main vo.. (archita asks)bata naa kaise hua..P- vo actually, [then she was bout to say something..n tulsi arrives there n says] are damini, taniya aagaye tum log?? [ n everybody looks at tulsi..n almost 4get it, but joydeep still looks at pari n feels tht there is some problem mayb pari is in some problem n he keeps on looking at pari who looks at the ground like trying to hide something]...[he feels suspicious]

part15..with continuation of part 14 joydeep still looks at pari n feels tht there is some problem mayb pari is in some problem n he keeps on looking at pari who looks at the ground like trying to hide something]...[he feels suspicious
[scene shifts to pari at night standing on terrace..n looking at moon]...[n slowly the song rabba mere rabba beings..aftr it ends pari thinks] i think mujhe rahul pasand aane laga hai..kuch to khas hai ismein..[then she giggles n thinks] he is so cute..[thn she makes an aarongant face n says] par thora ghamandi hai..[she again giggles n thinks] parr..mujhe pasand hai, i really like him..kyaa, main jo uske liye feel karti hoon..vo bhi kya yehi feel karta hoga..aaj jis tarah usne mera haath pakra..usse to yehi lag raha tha mujhe..[n she again giggles]..[n from her back, joydeep comes..]J- pari?[she turns around n says] P- are joydeep tum? J- pari? vo main tumse kuch baat karne aaya hoon? P- haan bolo? kya baat hai? J- pata nahi pari? mera tumhe ye kehna theek hoga yaa nahi..par[with a pause]P- are nahi nahi joydeep tum bolo naa kya baat hai?[she asks wid curiosity]..[then joydeeo speaks]J- pari bohot dino se main tumhe thora tensed dekh raha hoon???uss din janmashtami ke din jab main aur archita tumhe kamre mein bulane ke liye aaye the u were upset..aur aaj sham ko tumhare haath mein ye chot..kaise pari, kaise hua ye..pls dekho main tumhara bhai hoon agar koi prob hai..[he indirectly points rahul], ya kisi "se" problem hai, to tum mujhe bata sakti ho???[pari then thinks n looks at joydeep]...[this part ends]

wow... getting interesting.. please continue... i am still trying to figure out if rahul is a good character or bad.. great suspense..

part 16 with the continuation of part 15..dekho main tumhara bhai hoon agar koi prob hai..[he indirectly points rahul], ya kisi "se" problem hai, to tum mujhe bata sakti ho???[pari then thinks n looks at joydeep]...[this part ends] [same scene]
[pari looks at joydeep n then she says]P-joydeep pata nahi, main tumhe kaise kahoon..[thn she smiles] i think main rahul ko pasand karne lagi hoon..J- kyaa? shobha bua jaanti hai iss bare mein[he asks with curiosity][then suddenly pari looks at joydeep n the smile goes from her face n she becomes tensed] actually joydeep,main khud ye baat der se samjhi hoon..are abhi to main ye bhi nahi jaanti ki rahul mujhe pasand karta hai ya nahi..iss waqt tum sirf ye keh sakte ho ki meri feelings ek tarfa hai[then she says with more tension,wid tears in her eyes but still the tears didn't touched her cheeks,n joydeep understands the whole situation]main sach keh rahi hoon joydeep,iss tarah maine kabhi kisi ke liye feel nahi kiya,jis tarah rahul ke liye feel kar rahi hoon..[joydeep, then smiles at pari, and takes his hands gently n says] tumhe mujhe explaination dene ki zarroorat nahi pari, main sab samajh gaya hoon..iss waqt tum rahul aur apne ristey ko mazboot banao..shobha bua ko abhi kuch batane ki zaroorat nahi[then pari smiles,n whn he was about to leave..pari says from the back..]joydeep, tum bhoomi se bohot payar karte ho naa[then he gets bit upset n looks back at pari n says]pyar karna,aur pyar pana...dono alag baatein hai pari[thn he leaves the terrace,n pari looks at him]...[next morning pari was going to mandir wid archita n tulsi dadi..they were just going to sit in the car whn rahul suddenly arrives..three of them looks at him]Tulsi- are rahul beta tum? itne subhe? R- haan dadi..[n smiles] vo mihir sir se kuch kaam tha mujhe..kuch files leni thi, isliye [archita thn interupts] rahul tumhe mihir dadu ne bataya nahi[ rahul wid curiosity looks at archita n tulsi] kyaa nahi bataya? [Thn tulsi interupts] vo kya hai beta..achanak mihir,aur karan ko kal hi kuch zaroori kaam ke liye banglore jaana padha..[rahul with ohh achha type reaction but he do not say anything]T- lekin beta unhone tumhe bataya nahi tha iss bare mein...[then rahul looks at tulsi n says] nahi daddi ho sakta hai jaldi jaldi mein inform karna bhool gaye[ whn he was saying this his eyes were on pari n pari was this time looking at him with smile to]R- vaise dadi aap log kahaan jaa rahe hai itne subhe(2)..T- haan beta vo hum mandir jaa rahe the..R[then smiles n says] Are aaiye naa?[n looks at pari] main aap logo ko chod deta hoon,T- nahi nahi beta? hum chale jaaeynge? R- lagta hai aap ke liye main abhi bhi ajnabee hoon[n he constantly looks at pari n speaks to tulsi] [tulsi smiles] are nahi beta aisi koi baat nahi hai[thn he looks at tulsi again] R- [thn he insists] to phir chaliye, vaise bhi mei usi taraf se office jaane vala tha,T-accha [n they agress 2 go]....part is not ended here i am going to continue this part further.dur 2 some reason i can't complete it now but just after some time i will do it..enjoy reading it!!!

Great fanfic dear. Excellent work. 😃 Hats off 2 u. 👏 . I l b waitin eagerly for d next part. Newayz keep it up.

Great 👏 Waiting 4 u to continue

part 16..continuation.. R- [thn he insists] to phir chaliye, vaise bhi mei usi taraf se office jaane vala tha,T-accha [n they agress 2 go].......[in the car tulsi sits in the front n pari n archta at the back...so after driving a distance rahul tries to adjusts the mirror so he can see pari's face clearly...n then tulsi says] T- are bas bas beta mandir aagaya?[whn tulsi,pari n archita comes out of the car, rahul also comes out n says to tulsi]R- daadi[hesitatingly]kya main? aap sab ke saath mandir aa sakta hoon? [tulsi looks at him n smiles n thinks]T- lagta hai larka sanskari hai...[thn she says 2 rahul] haan haan beta aao[ thn all of them goes to mandir, n when every1 were praying pari n rahul were standing beside each other n pari n rahul closed their eyes..but suddenly rahul opened his eyes..n looks at pari n thinks]R- kehte hai ki agar bhagwan se sacche dil se kuch maango to mil jaata hai[thn he again looks at god's statue n thinks]R- bhagwan aaj mere paas sab kuch hote hue bhi, kuch khali khali saa hai...main jisse chaahta hoon bas uska pyar mujhe dilwade..[then a pundit comes]Pandit- prashad..[every1 opens their eyes n takes the prashad..[aftr tht every1 were just coming out of the mandir...suddenly at a small distance some boys passes a comment on archita, all of them looks at the boys..n rahul was just about to bash them up but tulsi stops him] T- jaane de rahul...inn logo ke saath larne se koi faida nahi..Archita- haan rahul, daadi sahi keh rahi hai...lets go,[and the boys laughs at them..but rahul tries to keep himself calm..n whn the reaches near their car suddenly one of them comments on pari....n this time rahul turns around n in a blind rage he bashes up the boys.. very badly] tulsi n pari..rahul chod do unko....[but he do not listens to any1, sudenly he see a cocnut vendor is cutting a coconut..he goes n grabs the tool from his hand n was about to kill the guy, pari thn comes quickly with tears in her eyes n completely scared she holds rahul's wrist from side..n then sudenly rahul looks in2 her eyes..pari do not say anything nor rahul but he understands tht pari wants to stop him...n many people gathers them the boys were just trying to run away..n the police reaches at the spot.]police- ye sab kya ho raha hai..? [those boys]- sahab? sahab bachaiye? ye humme maar dega..[as rahul was holding the weapon][police, was about to question rahul then tulsi n pari speaks in between...]P- [gathering some courage but still tears r flowing from her eyes] inspector inhone kuch nahi kiya...ye larke hume ched rahe the..isiliye rahul ne inhe maara..[police]- dekhiye? inko humaare saath police staion chalna parega...[tulsi] are hum aap se keh rahe hai naa iss larke ne kuch nahi kiya...vo gunde larkiyon ko ched rahe the....[police]- dekhiye madam?? ye sab police dekhegi ki kiski galati thi.. yuun saare aam raste pe larai jhagra karne vaale ko hum aise hi nahi chod sakte...[thn rahul interuptts] R- rehene dijiye daadi..main police station chalne ke liye taiyaar hoon[thn he looks at pari] mujhe kuch nahi hoga...[pari n archita were standing 2gether archita was looking tensend while tears were not stoping to come out of pari's eyes]....n thn tulsi says[ rahul tu fikr mat karna hum jaldi kuch karte hai] n then police takes rahul n those boys inside van to police station. ....................................[part 16 ends]

I guess u r a vry gud scriptwriter😳 U cn sure get some space in Ektaz camp 😉 Cnt wait for d nxt part.

Originally posted by: cooldipti

I guess u r a vry gud scriptwriter😳 U cn sure get some space in Ektaz camp 😉 Cnt wait for d nxt part.

thanx 4 ur compliment dear😃