The Palace of Secrets2 Deva Gauri SS - Page 2

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The Palace of Secrets2 Part 2

The credit for the edits goes to Preeti Queen.

Deva was walking through the jungle.He was shocked to see Gauri unconscious on the grass.

He lifted her up in his hands looking at her and walked to the house.

Pranila was shocked:What happened to Gauri?

Deva:I found her unconscious.

Pranila:Please place her on the bed.

Deva placed Gauri on the bed.

Pranila:Don't worry.Gauri takes fast every Tuesday to get a good life partner.She did not eat anything.That's why she fainted.I will bring her milk.

Deva nodded.

Pranila brought a bottle of goat milk.The goats followed her.

Pranila's hand slipped and the bottle fell of her hands.But Deva held it at the right time.

Pranila smiled with relief.

To her surprise,Deva made Gauri sit with his hands and fed her a few drops of milk.

Slowly she opened her eyes.She was stunned to see Deva near her feeding her milk.

They shared an eye lock.

Gauri came back to senses and moved away from him.

Pranila:Don't worry Gauri.Since you starved you fainted.It's Deva who brought you here.He fed you milk as you were weak.Thank God you are fine.

Gauri was silent.

The next morning...

Pranila was collecting the eggs laid by the birds in the garden.Gauri came there.

Gauri:Maa,did you see Deva?

Pranila asked her with a smile:Why is my daughter enquiring about Deva?

Gauri:Maa...I want to thank him.

Pranila smiled:Good.He has gone to bath in the river.

Gauri:Okay.

Gauri went out in search of Deva.She reached near the river.Deva was about to start from there to go back home after taking bath.Suddenly he saw Gauri.

Deva:Gauri!

Gauri:I was waiting for you here.

He was stunned:What?

Gauri:I did'nt see you bath.I swear.

He giggled.She smiled.

Gauri:Actually I came here to thank you.You took care of me when I was unconscious.Thank you.

He smiled:No need of thanking me.

She smiled.

Deva took Pranila's interview.He called the camera men too there to shoot.

Pranila wore a T-shirt which had the picture of a tiger.She was standing along with tigers.A huge crowd was there to see her with the tigers.

They took videos of Pranila with all her pet animals and birds.

They were surprised to see her taking class for her animals.

Deva was observing it with curiosity.

Deva:How is it possible?How can animals study?

Pranila:As I told you,while living with me my animals learnt human language.I only taught them everything like this.I teach them to read human language.

Deva could not believe it.

Deva:Wow!It's amazing.

Pranila smiled.

Pranila was enjoying in the sea water.Deva passed by.He was shocked to see a shark near her.

He screamed:Pranilaji...there is a shark behind you.

Pranila turned back to see the shark.

Deva carrying Gauri in his arms was romantic. Oh so Gauri fasts every Tuesday to get good life partner. Preeti Queen edits are really lovely. Deva making Gauri drink milk was sweet. Gauri thanking Dev was nice, she joking about not seeing him bath was hilarious. Is all the animals of Pranila shape shifting? That’s why they know how to study. I think she would be friendly with shark too. Perfect pics, waiting for next.

Amazing update dear 🙂

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Are these characters from Baghin?

Deva and Gauri are from Baghin.

Originally posted by: MochaQueen

Are these characters from Baghin?

Part 2

Majestic update... finely written

Gauri and Deva are beginning to connect with each other. Soon, we can see that feelings may start to develop.

A class for the animals. Now that's unusual. This will become such a big news.