The Palace of Secrets2 Deva Gauri SS - Page 4

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Posted: 1 years ago
#31

Lovely that Pranila had befriended the shark too. Both Deva and Gauri are emotional. Deva’s parents and Gauri’s mother making them realize that they has fallen in love was nice. Love confession was nice. Their moments were romantic. Waiting for next, perfect pics.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#32

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MochaQueen

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Thank you so much for the lovely comments






The Palace of Secrets2 Part 4

The credit for the edit goes to Preeti Queen.


In the midnight....

Gauri was sleeping in Deva's arms.

Suddenly she heard someone singing.She opened her eyes.She went out of the room following the music.Suddenly the song stopped.

Gauri:Was it real or my hallucination?

Gauri went back to the bedroom.




In the morning Deva was sleeping.Gauri smiled seeing him sleep.

Gauri:Deva looks so cute like a small kid while sleeping.

Deva murmured:I am not a cute child.I am handsome.

Gauri:Oh..so you are not sleeping?

Deva opened his eyes and said:No.

He pulled her closer to him romantically.They both giggled.





Gauri cooked food for the kitchen ceremony.

Deva's parents appreciated her cooking skill and she became very happy.

Deva:Gauri got this talent from her mother.Pranaliji is an excellent cook.

Everyone including Gauri smiled.





Gauri rang up Pranila.Pranila was excited.

Pranila:Gauri,I am so happy that you rang me up.I miss you.

Gauri:I miss you too Maa.

Pranila:How is your sasural?

Gauri:All are very nice.I cooked food and everyone loved it.

Pranila:That's so nice.What else?

Gauri remembered hearing a girl singing at midnight.

Gauri:Nothing else Maa.

Pranila:Ok bye beta.Take care.

Gauri:You also take care Maa.Bye!

They cut the call.





Deva was showing her each and every corner of their Mansion to Gauri.

Gauri:Your house is so huge.It looks like a Palace.

Deva:This is actually my great grandfather's palace.

Gauri:That's surprising.So you are really a Prince.

They both giggled.

Deva:I am a Prince,but your Prince.

They smiled romantically.

Gauri noticed that one room was locked.

Gauri:Why is this room locked?

Deva became dull.

Shamsher and Sulakshana who came there became dull hearing this.

Gauri:Why you are all looking sad?Did I ask anything wrong?

Shamsher:No.But it's an unpleasant secret of our Mansion.

Gauri:Secret?

Sulakshana:Yes.Shamsher...let Gauri also know the secret.Now she is our family member only.

Shamsher:Yes.Let her know it.

Gauri:What's the matter?


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#33

Wonder why did the music stop when she followed it, hope u willunravel the mystery that why are Pranila and Gauri living in forest, are they adivaasipeople? Gauri commenting on Dev as he slept and he replying back was funny. Goodthat everyone liked her food. Waiting for next, perfect pics

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Posted: 1 years ago
#34

Very interesting update dear 🙂

Just loved it 🤗

Seems to be an interesting secret of this mansion

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 years ago
#35

such a short part...but is this story going the way that im thinkingsmiley9

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Posted: 1 years ago
#36

Tell me how it is going in ur mind?smiley1



Originally posted by: MochaQueen

such a short part...but is this story going the way that im thinkingsmiley9

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Posted: 1 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Tell me how it is going in ur mind?smiley1



Is the secret similar to bhool bhulaiya?

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Posted: 1 years ago
#38

Part 4

Amazing update... greatly written

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Posted: 1 years ago
#39

Not really.



Originally posted by: MochaQueen

Is the secret similar to bhool bhulaiya?

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Posted: 1 years ago
#40

Part 4


Interesting Update


Gauri living in the forest is interesting

Edited by taahir004 - 1 years ago

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