Tere Bina (RajivAmna ff) last part updt! - Page 45

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ruksaar.......awesome part's yaar !!!!!! 👏 😊 😉 😊 👏 ..........finally rayan aur saima ek dusre ke kareeb arahe hai.........(rishab aur sahil ka plan kamiab hua 😆 😉 😆 )........yaar ab saima bhi rayan ko apne pyaar ka izhaar karde na plzzzzz 😭 😉 😊..........Happy Birthday Rayan 🥳 👏 🤗 👏 🥳 ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !..........adi is so cute 😛.....he's been waitting for rayan the whhole day to wish him 😊..........what did rayan read in the book?....was it saima's dairy?????...why is he so shocked??......what will happen next???????............plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon plzzzzzzzz................can't wait !!!!!!!!!! waitting eagerly for the next part !!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
heyi frnds, im xtremly soriie.. i had started wid my semesters so cudnt update. I'll update in a day or two..
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Part-33

Recap-
Saima aur Rayan ki nazdikiya badhne lagti hai. Saima Rayan ke birthday celebrate karti hai..
Rayan ko kamrein mein koi kitaab milti hai jise dekhke wo hairaan reh jaata hai...

Story further.....
Rayan ko wish karte hi adi daudta hua kamrei se bahar jaata hai... Rayan wahi rukta hai.. Adi ne sab color pencils aur baki papers u hi waha study table
per bikhra rakhe the, Rayan sab books, pencils, papers thik se rakhta hai.... phir achanak uski nazar ek book per
padti hai jo ki un papers ke neeche thi.. Wo papers uthakar side mein rakhta hai aur wo book uthata hai}
Rayan: yeh kya hai?
{he opens the book and was completely shocked...., use ek pal ke liye apni aankho per yakeen nahi ho raha tha... Wo uss book ka page palatta hai...
wo saima ki diary thi.... Us mein likhe har ek ek shabd ne Rayan ki zindagi badal di, pehle to use bahot gussa aata hai,per
jaise hi wo saima ki beeti zindagi ke baare mein padhta hai use samajh nahi aata ki wo kya kare? Saima se gusse ho, ya apne aap par...}
Rayan: {to himself} Saima ne mere liye apne pyar ki tak qurbaani de di.... per use ab tak bhula na payi.....
{neeche party ki tayyariya chal rahi thi, per saima iss baat se bekhabar thi..... kuch der baad rayan ko kisi ke aane ki aahat hoti hai to wo diary wahi rakh deta hai aur palatta hai to saima ko dekhta hai...}
Saima: mama aapko neeche bula rahe hai...
{rayan bas saima ki taraf dekhta hai..., aaj na to un aankho mien pyar tha aur naa hi koi khushi, koi ehsaas nahi tha... Maano Rayan ke saare ehsaas, saare jazbaat khatm ho chuke ho}
Saima: kya hua?
Rayan: tum chalo main aata hu.....
Saima: jaldi aana
{saying this saima leaves, by now rayan was completely shattered down, he picks the photo kept in front and cries bitterly, absolute helpless, didnt knew what to do..... just than saima comes there}
Saima: ye kya aap ab tak ready nahi hue? Chaliye bhi...humne aapke kapde bhi nikaal rakhe hai
{rayan bas saima ki taraf dekhta hai.. use samajh nahi aata ki wo usse kya kahe.. Ek pal ke liye use saima ka pyar bas dikhava lagta hai to dusre hi pal usse dur hone ka dar. Wo bas saima ko dekhte hi rehta hai}
Saima: are kya hua? Rayannn..... {shakes him} kya hua
Rayan: kuch nahi...tum chalo main aata hu
Saima: jaldi aana...
{saima leaves, after a while he gets ready and comes downstairs, where all other family members and his friends were waiting for him...
It was his birthday party.. Rayan managed hard to smile, and accepted wishes from everyone, pretending hard to be normal..
The party started, Rayan cut the cake and everything was going on fine. Everybody was extremely happy as everything was on normal terms now, but the only person who was extremely restless was Rayan.... He just kept on looking at Saima and behaved as normal as he could... Later music was played and Raina asked Rayan and Saima to dance... Saima, smiled and came close to Rayan, but now Rayan cudnt take it more and so he just took the wine bottle and excused himself from the party..Saima couldnt understand
Rayan's behaviour, few minutes later she too followed Rayan.... He was standing out in the garden,Saima came towards him}
Saima: kya hua Rayan? Aap party se aise chale kyun aaya?
{rayan na to use jawab deta hai aur naa hi uski taraf dekhta hai... }
Saima: party pasand nahi aayi? Khair koi baat nahi, hum kuch der yehi rukte hai.....
{ab rayan finally saima ki taraf dekhta hai...}
Saima: jante hai aaj hum bahot khush hai.... aaj kuch ajebsa lag raha hai... {laughs} aap soch rahe honge ki hum pagal
ho gaye hai, per beleive me hum khud iski wajah nahi jaante... Ek ander se khushi mehsoos ho rahi hai...shayad ye sab aapki
wajah se hai... Ufff!!! dekha hum to bhool hi gaye... aapka gift to reh hi gaya... Khair, waise to aapne hume itna kuch diya hai ki in sabke aage aapko hum kya de sakte hai.. per ha ye card aur ye chotisi gift de rahe hai...
{rayan takes the box without saying anything...}
Saima: i hope aapko pasand aaaye... Kaafi der ho gayi hai hum zara ander dekhkar aate hai...
{she goes in..while rayan opens that card....and a tear rolled down his eyes. He than opened the box, it had a wrist watch...now he couldnt understand anything}
Rayan: {to himself} iss sach ko haqeeqat maanu ya uss haqeeqat ko andekha karu.... Aaj jab ek taraf mujhe mera pyar mila to
wahi dusri taraf usi pyar ki haqeeqat bhi saamne aayi.....
{he kneels down and later sees someone standing right in front of him..., he looks up, that was Rishabh}
Rishabh: kya hua? kis haqeeqat ki baat kar rahe the tum...
{rayan turns the other way}
Rayan: kuch nahi...
Rishabh: kya kuch nahi, tum itne pareshan ho aur keh rahe ho kuch nahi?
{turns towards rishabh}
Rayan: kaha na kuch nahi, bas aise hi
Rishabh: tum nashe mein ho?
Rayan: {smiles sarcastically} ha... kam se kam nashe mein dard ka ehsaas to nahi hota...
Rishabh: kya matlab? aakhir baat kya hai? Kya tumhare aur saima ke beeche koi jhagda hua kya?
Rayan: hamare beech ab kuch hone ki gunjaish hi nahi hai... jaante ho main aajtak uss insaan ko apna
maanta tha jo saath hokar bhi mera kabhi bann naa saka...jispe haq jatana chaha wo to mera kabhi tha hi nahi... Rishabh, tum bilkul thik kehte the ki yeh pyar, jazbaat koi mayane nahi rakhte...yeh sab kitaabi batei hoti hai...
Rishabh: ye tum kya keh rahe ho Rayan? Dekho iss waqt tum bahot nashe mein ho, ander chalo
Rayan: nahi...mujhe akela chod do, ab to bas yehi meri zindagi hai... main pehle bhi akela tha aur aaj bhi akela hi hu
Rishabh: ye tum kya bakwaas kar rahe ho? Dekho iss waqt tum hosh mein nahi ho, agar Uncle, aunty ne tumhe aise
dekh liya to kya sochenge aur Adi... kam se kam uske baare mein to socho
Rayan: Rishabh tum mera ek kaam karoge?
Rishabh: kya?
Rayan: mujhe ye sab ab khatm karna hai, main iss jhut ko nahi jeena chahta... Main Saima to talaaq dena chahta hu
Rishabh: Rayann... tum please chalo yahase, hum kal baat karenge....
{rishabh kisi tarha se rayan ko uske kamre tak le jaata hai... Saima Rayan ke aise karne se kaafi pareshan hoti hai...
wo baar baar Rishabh se puchti hai per wo kuch nahi batata...wo bas sahil ke saath kahi chala jata hai}
Sahil: Ye sir ko achanak kya hua?
Rishabh: kuch samajh nahi aa raha.... wo pagal ho chuka hai, bakwaas kar raha hai
Sahil: kya matlab?
Rishabh: wo..... wo keh raha tha ki wo Saima ko.... Saima ko talaaq dena chahta hai
Sahil: whatttttt??????
Rishabh: ha... wo behad pareshan tha, kuch baat to zaroor hai
Sahil: unhone kuch to bataya hoga
Rishabh: nahi.... hume kal usse iss bare mein baat karni hogi.
Sahil: hmm.....

Garewal Masion......
Rayan's room.....
[ Saima Rayan ke paas baithi bas uski taraf dekhti hai. Usne pehle kabhi Rayan ko aise nahi dekhta tha]
Saima: {to herself} aakhir aisa kya ho gaya jo Rayan itne pareshan the? Isse pehle to kabhi wo itne nashe mein
nahi the... kal unse iss bare mein zaroor baat karenge....
{aur kuch der baad wo wahi so jaati hai}

Next morning...........
Rayan ki aankh khulti hai to dekhta hai ki Saima wahi baithe baithe so gayi hai aur uska haath Rayan ke haath per hai...
wo apna haath hata deta hai, aur uth jaata hai, aur phir kisi se bina kuch kahe ready hokar office chala jaata
hai. Sahil Rayan ko itne jaldi waha dekhkar hairaan hota hai
Sahil: Sir, aaj aap itne savere?
Rayan: ha, wo bas...
Sahil: kya baat hai aap kuch pareshan lag rahe hai
Rayan: kuch nahi, acha wo Mr.Mehta ne file bhijwa di?
Sahil: ha, wo saamne hi to hai, aur aapne saare details kal hi dekh liye the aaj bas unhe wapas bhijwani hai
Rayan: ha... wo main bhool gaya tha
Sahil: sir, kya baat hai... kal raat bhi aap...
Rayan: kal raat? Kya hua kal?
{rishabh enters}
Rishabh: pagal ho gaye the tum... yaad hai kya kya keh rahe the? Are chote chote jhagde, arguments to chalte rehte hai,
per iska matlab ye to nahi na ki tum iss tarha se behave karo?
Rayan: wo main kal kuch jyada hi pareshan tha bas...
Rishabh: per Rayan aisi bhi kya baat hai jisse tum itne pareshan the?
Rayan: kuch nahi...
{rayan's cell rings.. it was saima}
Rayan: hello
Saima: kya baat hai aaj aap office itne jaldi chale gaye? breakfast bhi nahi kiye...
Rayan: ha wo kuch zaroori kaam the isiliye...
Saima: thik hai to phir hum lunch saath karene, humkhaana lekar wahi aate hai..
Rayan: nahi, aaj Rishabh ke saath kuch important meeting hai....{he coudnt talk further} acha main tumse baad
mein baat karta hu.. {he just disconnects the call, while Sahil and Rishabh just looks at him}
Rishabh: dekha Sahil, meri iske saath aaj kaunsi meeting hai? Aur kya isse pehle kabhi bhi ise humne itna
disturbed dekha hai?
Rayan: shayad ab yehi meri taqdeer hai...tum nahi samjhoge... {saying this Rayan just walks out of the cabin...
and drives off somewhere. Here Saima was a bit confused to Rayan's behaviour, just than her cell rings, she thinks its Rayan}
Saima: ha Rayan..
Aryan: Aryan
Saima: what?
Aryan: are baba main Aryan
Saima: oh, hume laga ki.... khair
Aryan: acha suno main bas ek ghante mein tumse milne ghar aa raha hu
Saima: per Aryan, abhi hum nahi aa payenge, hum iss waqt apne
Aryan: uff ho, main sirf tumhare liye apna sab kaam chodkar itni dur aaya hu aur tum ho ki... shayad ab
tumhe meri zaroorat nahi hai
Saima: khabardar jo ayinda aisa kaha to... Dadima ke baad ek tum hi to apne ho
Aryan: acha baba main to bas mazak kar raha tha
Saima: acha tum ghar aao, hum bhi bas pohochte hai, phir tumse bahot si baatei karni hai
Aryan: thik hai...
{kuch der baad saima khanna house jaati hai, aur aryan ka intezar karti hai...
waha Rayan ab bhi bechain sa tha, kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare... tabhi use Sidhanth ka phone aata hai
aur wo Rayan se Kanaka ke kuch files laane ko kehte hai, jo ki Khanna house mein hoti hai, so Rayan turns towards
Khanna house...
Tab tak yaha Aryan bhi aa chuka hota hai. Saima Aryan ko dekhkar bahot khush hoti hai, itni khush ki uski aankho mien
aasu aate hai....}
Aryan: are Saima ye kya? Kya meri shakal itni buri hai ki mujhe dekhke ro rahi ho
Saima: {laughs} nahi... wo tumhe itne dino baad dekha to bas.... khair, aao baitho
Aryan: hmm.. aur batao tumhari life kaisi chal rahi hai?
Saima: filhaal to sab thik hai...
Aryan: ek baat batao, aisa bhi kya hua tha ki tum uss din itni upset thi? Uss din se yaha aane tak main
tumhare liye itna pareshan the ki kya kahu
Saima: chalo koi to hai jiske liye tum pareshan hote hai...
Aryan: main mazaak nahi kar raha Saima, acha ab tumhara business kaisa chal raha hai.. I mean ab Dadima ke baad to
tumhe hi sab kuch...
Saima: Kanaka ab Garewals ka hissa hai. Wo ab Rayan ki company hai
Aryan: kya matlab?
Saima: wo ek bahot lambi kahani hai, baad mien batayenge...
{just than aryan gets a call and he had to rush to his office immediately}
Aryan: i'm sorry Saima per mujhe isi waqt kahi jaana hai, ek bahot badi problem hui hai
Saima: anything serious?
Aryan: nahi, per abhi muhe jana hoga.... byee, main tumhe baad mein phone karunga
{and he rushes out}
Saima: are ye apni gaadi ki chabiya to yehi bhool gaya... {she takes the car keys and runs out}
Saima: Aryannn... keys to lete jao...
Aryan: oh ho.... bhool gaya tha... thanks, {aur wo halke se saima ke shoulder pe haath rakhta hai} apna khyaal rakhna...
Saima: {smiles} tum bhi...
Aryan: ok byee....
{and he drives off, while Rayan watches them both that added more to his misunderstandings}


......End Of Part-33........

comments awaited

luv,
ruksaar


Edited by ruksaar_khan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
ohhhhhhhh myyyyy godddd....... yeh sab kya hogaya .i mean rayan ne woh dairy toh padh li but i seriously think that he should ask saima about all this instead of making any stupid predictions and creating more misunderstandings in his and saima's life 😡 . kyunki jab tak yeh aisa nahi karega problem will increase upto the point where everything will be shattered for some time .abb saima sirf rayan ki hai and he should know this 😭 .yeh saab sharab pike,apne aap ko takleef deke kuch nahi hone wala 😡 .i wish that he should tell this problem to rishab and sahil so they can plan out something and make rayan understand that what he thinks is wrong 😉 or either he should discuss this with saima and start a fresh new life with her 😳 .hey ruksaar plzzzzzzzz..........kuch karo inn dono ko alag maat karnait's a request 😭 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzz.........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

awesome part ruksaar!!!!!!!! 👏 😊 👏 😉 👏 😊 👏 ........so rayan found saima's dairy 😲.......poor rayan he got to know about saima past life n also that she left her love for marry him 😭 .......i can understand how's he feeling 😒, he join his birthday party but was like now nothing matter's to him 😭.........i think finally saima has accept rayan competly,.......she seem so happy 😊 !!!!!!!!!........kinda rude of rayan not to dannce wt her ........!!!!!!!........yaar he should tell everything to rishab n sahil maybe they can make him understand .........or talk to saima n clear out things 😊..............aryan has to come now 😡 !!!............

rishab tell everything to sahil.......n that rayan is trying to give saima divorce 😭 😭.........yaar kuch karo....unko alag nahi karo plzzzzzzzzzz......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ,,,,aryan goes to meet saima to khanna mansion .........they meet after a long time 😊, i think saima should tell aryan everything about her maarrige with rayan n everything !!!!!!!............galat time pe phone baja aryan ka 😡 😆..............rayan saw aryan n saima toghter 😭....n he's believing all the misunderstaning 😭!.........plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon ........can't wait for the next part !!!!!!!!! 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭.........n to know what's gonning to happen next ????????

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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 😭 😭 oh no rayan is misunderstanding everything.....he should have talked to saima......y he's hurting himself 😭 😭 😭 .....very well written part 👏 👏 👏 ....cont soon....
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oh god not again ....saima should tell aryan the truth....hope rayan ki misunderstanding's durh ho jae...continue sooon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome part yaar!!!!!! Mast part!!!But i hope ye misunderstanding jaldi door ho jaye 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: fravashi

ohhhhhhhh myyyyy godddd....... yeh sab kya hogaya .i mean rayan ne woh dairy toh padh li but i seriously think that he should ask saima about all this instead of making any stupid predictions and creating more misunderstandings in his and saima's life 😡 . kyunki jab tak yeh aisa nahi karega problem will increase upto the point where everything will be shattered for some time .abb saima sirf rayan ki hai and he should know this 😭 .yeh saab sharab pike,apne aap ko takleef deke kuch nahi hone wala 😡 .i wish that he should tell this problem to rishab and sahil so they can plan out something and make rayan understand that what he thinks is wrong 😉 or either he should discuss this with saima and start a fresh new life with her 😳 .hey ruksaar plzzzzzzzz..........kuch karo inn dono ko alag maat karnait's a request 😭 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzz.........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

dont worry dear, aapki req ka pura dhyaan rakhenge 😉, thanks for ur comments... 😳

Originally posted by: le_me_star

awesome part ruksaar!!!!!!!! 👏 😊 👏 😉 👏 😊 👏 ........so rayan found saima's dairy 😲.......poor rayan he got to know about saima past life n also that she left her love for marry him 😭 .......i can understand how's he feeling 😒, he join his birthday party but was like now nothing matter's to him 😭.........i think finally saima has accept rayan competly,.......she seem so happy 😊 !!!!!!!!!........kinda rude of rayan not to dannce wt her ........!!!!!!!........yaar he should tell everything to rishab n sahil maybe they can make him understand .........or talk to saima n clear out things 😊..............aryan has to come now 😡 !!!............

rishab tell everything to sahil.......n that rayan is trying to give saima divorce 😭 😭.........yaar kuch karo....unko alag nahi karo plzzzzzzzzzz......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ,,,,aryan goes to meet saima to khanna mansion .........they meet after a long time 😊, i think saima should tell aryan everything about her maarrige with rayan n everything !!!!!!!............galat time pe phone baja aryan ka 😡 😆..............rayan saw aryan n saima toghter 😭....n he's believing all the misunderstaning 😭!.........plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon ........can't wait for the next part !!!!!!!!! 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭.........n to know what's gonning to happen next ????????

thanks for those comments dear.., will update soon...😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: naazbrar

😭 😭 😭 oh no rayan is misunderstanding everything.....he should have talked to saima......y he's hurting himself 😭 😭 😭 .....very well written part 👏 👏 👏 ....cont soon....

yes, dear...rayan's still in shock...

thanks for the comments...will update soon..😳

Originally posted by: Honii

oh god not again ....saima should tell aryan the truth....hope rayan ki misunderstanding's durh ho jae...continue sooon 👏 👏 👏

yeah... thrz a bit more to happen now.. just keep an eye the story..😳

Originally posted by: togepe30

Awesome part yaar!!!!!! Mast part!!!But i hope ye misunderstanding jaldi door ho jaye 😳

thanks a lot vandu.. 😳 will update soon..

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