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Posted: 1 years ago

Sparkle in a speck!


Waiting

Over at his high profile Accounting firm, Indraneel finishedup his morning meetings and focus work and grabbed a bite to eat in thebasement cafeteria of the high rise

He sat down alone at a table with his sandwich and soda andwent to his phone

The name was Nihaka…

He was mesmerized by the eyes, the high cheekbones and thefull lower lip. He sat up straight and chewed on his sandwich

He was curious, he looked at the profile

Sunrise>sunset

Hate broccoli

Love butterflies

Love to paint my toe nails all different colors

Promise to ban bras if I am Prime Minister

Want to jump off a plane sometime

Wash my white with colors…. Yeah… deal with that!!

Sing in my sleep… yeah ONLY in my sleep

“If I am your type… then you are O positive”

He stared at it dumbfounded

His heart was racing, he wanted to meet up

He spent the next week looking at her profile, over and overagain

Work was getting busy and fun, with two complicated audits,and tax problem

He sent a message about the picture and those stunning eyes

He found himself checking his in box for a response…. Multipletimes

His SIL texted him “Hey I have to go to a friend’s, will yoube home?”

“Umm.. sure”

“What time?”

“Umm.. How about 8?”

“How can I go and come back before 10?”

“I am sorry… did you want me to come sooner? Why don’t yousay so”

“I was not going to ask you Indra.. your Baba insisted”

“You did right?”

They both didn’t say anything afterwards

He drove a Honda Accord, his brother drove a Maruti

His Dad saw the social status difference

He didn’t say much

Losing his wife, canceled wedding had all taken a toll onhim as well

THEY had picked Vrushali Mhatre for Indraneel

She was perfect for him. Talkative, funny and eager to help.He was funny and talkative, and grew up mostly at neighbors’ homes, fixingtheir plumbing electrical problems and lifting heavy stuff

His mother was very proud of him

He was called Upyukta Maanus by his mother, translating to “HelpfulDude”

He loved titled and fame. But he was an Accountant

Vrushali Mhatre had crushed him

“I will see you at 5:45” she sent him a text at 5

“If traffic permits”

“I can drop them off at your office and go”

“No don’t do that”

The kids were a handful

9 and 7, they were out of control. His Dad blew hisretirement pension all on both.

Parents did the remaining damage. The kids did poorly inschool and got everything they didn’t ask for.

Dad’s apartment was big, he had bought it before Pune was athing

5 bedrooms and two living rooms, it was combined by pullingtwo flats together

With no marriage or wife in sight for Indraneel Dad waslooking forward to leaving everything to his grandkids

Suhasini Deshmukh knew it and was happy to pamper her FIL

Vinayak Deshmukh was a putty in her hands

Indraneel wanted to move out but knew it would turn into abig fight, he was waiting…. For the right moment.

His relationship with his father was paper thin right now.The moment he said he will not clinically jump from one bride to another andget married and “settle down” he had become a stranger to his Dad

His brother was the other extreme…. Over protective andcontrolling

Always afraid Indraneel was going to take his life or vanishwithout a trace.

He used friends’ apartments for Tinder dates

He went back to Nahika’s profile and looked and re-readeverything

“Thanks” “I am going to look at my eyes again tonight” shepromised

“Let me know what you discover” he said, his lips twitching

“About my eyes?”

“Yeah!”

She sent a laugh out loud emoji

“Waiting…” he said

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Posted: 1 years ago

He is intrigued by her eyes and told her that. He loves her comeback to that even more.

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Posted: 1 years ago

This girl is so full of personality. A good sense of humor. Never ending spirit.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Sparkle in a specksmiley27

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Posted: 1 years ago

Congratulations on the new one Nisha…! Looking awesome like always 👍🏻

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Posted: 1 years ago

Nisha, can we have new thread for this new story?

Would be easier later when we re-read.

The chemistry is going to be explosive.
they seeem to fit like puzzle.
he wants to live his house. She can’t. Ghar jamai bane ke asar hain.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Telling eyes

“I found nothing” she said the next morning

His first text of the morning

“Oh yeah?”

“Sahi me”

“How can it be? I see large sparkling orbs”

“In Marathi we say ….”

She cracked a joke in Marathi

“Mulgi?”

“Ho” she smiled

“I would have never guessed”

“Every Marathi girl I know has brown eyes”

“With green flecks?” he demanded

Oh? Can u see it?” she opened her app and checked out her pictures

The dark green bordering her light brown eye balls were clearly visible

Ajji had no idea what she was up to when she came into the room to ask her if her sister Prajakta was going away on a trip

“Mala mahit nai Ajji”

“Ask her” Ajji ordered in Marathi

“Are you planning to go somewhere?” she giggled

“Where would I go leaving you three dust mites” Ajji rolled her eyes

“Niiice ajji, dust mites? Huh?”

“Yeah… you are invisible yet make me itchy”

Punky laughed out loud

Her Tinder date had sent a series of texts

She was excited about reading them

A spasm of raw fear swept thru her underbelly

Prajakta did not know. How could she tell her sister

She was on a dating app?

No way…

Prateek would never know either

He was barely 20, still finishing up college

Sulu had told her kids these days were all over these apps

She felt terror, she hoped her brother didn’t find her profile

She cursed her distinct eyes

Their mother had beautiful dark green eyes, neither siblings got it, theirs was brown too, but Punky got the really light brown with green flecks

She breathed audibly as she got ready for work

Both of Baba’s sisters lived in remote Maharashtra towns

They would disown her for doing this

She wanted to do this!!!

“I have to live a little” she told her reflection

“You don’t have to answer, are you in college?”

“No longer… but thanks” she sent a smiley

“That was a clear line huh?”

“I guess so”

“I can be honest in return… I work as a Tax consultant for a Big 5 accounting firm”

“Oh?” “Nerdy”

“Sure... you can call it that”

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Posted: 1 years ago

She never noticed the green specs in her eyes until he pointed it out. He has her looking in the mirror seeing herself through his eyes.

Edited by coderlady - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

She wants to live a little but at the same time worries about being exposed.

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Posted: 1 years ago

He was not offended one bit when she called him nerdy. He is secure in himself.

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