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Posted: 3 years ago

Sheriff Satyen

“Some things” Satyen grunted “I don’t need to be told” he knotted his tie. A help stood on the side praying he doesn’t fall off without his stick

Smrita was in the shower

Raanav was summoned

“I don’t want you moving out. I am not saying this so you can stick around and care for a broken old man” Satyen laughed

Raanav squirmed

“I am saying this because I want o assure you I will deal with this”

“I am fine I can too”

“My disappointment with you was because of what you believed in, or what I understood as your value system”

Raanav did not respond a word

“I am in many ways responsible for how dysfunctional this family is

“Umm”

“Ek second beta… I continued allowed Mum to hold on to her… I could have had a million squabbles with her, one I didn’t have the time, two, you two were born close together almost like twins, she did not get much help from her parents as you know because of the way she abandoned her education to get married. I decided I am going to be easy about this. I wasn’t going to sit around and trash her and delight in her failures. I decided to support her”

Satyen paused turning away from the mirror and facing his son

“Whatever she was telling herself along the way, however she decided to conduct herself was all NOT invisible to me Raanav. I saw it heard it and read about it” he sighed

Raanav leaned on the tall window sipping his coffee

“I should have cared, I should have intervened I did not. Now we have Viveka on the verge of leaving this house”

“She.. is not she doesn’t… I mean”

He raised his hand to shush Raanav

“But you brought it up

Raanav sipped again trying not to make eye contact

“You waited 30 years to stand up to your Mum. Only when it meant you were going to lose Viveka Mathur”

“Actually… Viveka knows what I feel about her”

“Phir to zyaada galat baat hai beta, you allowed your mother to influence you while you wooed your lady love”

“So my timing of rebellion is a big deal now?”

“Sure be angry… but somethings I heard at the Srivastav Satyanarayan Katha last June were NOT OK”

“Did u talk to Mum about it?” Raanav was gleeful

“Did u think I have not?” Satyen was not happy

“Umm”

“Tum dono yeh sochte ho the opinion you hold is something to be proud of… MA ki baat samajh aati hai mujhe…. YOU? U were not homeless, or undergoing any trauma of any sort, I am not sure why or how things came to be this way, where Mum decided she was going to tell you what to like and who to like”

Satyen sat down wobbly and reached for his socks

“Sire breakfast laga doon?”

“Yahin le aayen aap” he smiled at the help

“Will u eat?”

“Viveka is asleep with her?”

“SONEY do usko” “Sheesh” Satyen scolded his son

“Jesus!” “Chill” Raanav was irriated

“If u are anything like how I used to be then u must be pretty needy”

“I am NOT… my wife does too many things I hardly see her Dad” Raanav was hurt

“My wife was unemployed and I saw her all the time?” Satyen laughed out loud

“I did not say that”

“Don’t worry that’s not the issue here, the issue is, Viveka has been humiliated and what part you played in it?”

“Since you froze me off Ive attempted to… umm.. whats the word”

“Cleaned up your act”

“Viveka’s social status never bothered me”

“Only Naina’s did?” Satyen mocked his son and winked

Raanav hated that

He knew his Dad was right

“I am on board with you guys moving out… you are both young, I want you to be adventurous and have a good time and not be shackled, and travel the world. I just don’t want it to stem from a degraded precedent, u are a lawyer u understand what I mean”

“Its not”

“Aapko bahut logon se maafi maangni hai beta… probably all the Mathurs, while you are at it the Shrivastavs too”

“I”

“If you have an argument for that statement then obviously I have failed in making my point” Satyen leaned forward as the aroma wafted through the giant tray placed before him with many bowls in it

“Sir, Ma’am ke bhaisaab pooch rahe hain aap ke saath kar lein kya breakfast”

“Aap unko kahen, Ma’am karengi unke saath breakfast, hum yaha Raanav ke saath hain”

“Jee sir”

“How is Cleo?” Jet lagged?”

“Not really, his eyes lit up

“Bring her upstairs before I head out to work” Satyen whiled away time as the help set up his and raanav’s breakfast on a large side table and served the first portions and left

Raanav ambled toward his Dad

“You don’t have to make the apology formal if it shames you, but express to them what you think of them in a really nice way” Satyen chewed on the omelette, relishing the veggies and spices

“Umm…” Raanav was not at all on board with the idea

He didn’t care for Naina… or he cared for her as much or as little as he cared for Inder

This was going to be tricky for sure

He wondered why his Mum was taking so long

She was taking a bath and not a shower

When u are wealthy and don’t have to make breakfast for your brood you can take a hour long bath at 8 AM

Raanav ate quietly

“Under no circumstances should Viveka or her siblings or her family feel they are out of their league, its basic human courtesy. It would be like me shutting my lunch plate with a lid when Rajiv Syal walks into the room, samajh gaye na baat?” Or turn away from Chachu when I pull out my wallet, or ensure Viren Dhamija is not around when I make a land deal”

Raanav stared at him quietly

“If you cannot bring yourself to treat her like an equal, AND her FAMILY as your equal you have no business being married to her”

Satyen ate quietly afterwards

Smrita came out looking ravishing

“Without meeeeee? SATYAAA” she cooed

He pecked her on the lips

“Join me”

“Private breakfast date Huh?” she hugged Raanav

“Umm..” Raanav mumbled

“Whats the scoop”

“I said he could go live with Viveka under certain conditions” Satyen smiled satisfied

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Posted: 3 years ago

Can I just say I have a massive crush on Satyen❤️❤️

if he was real, Smrita would have a fight on her hands 🤣

I love that he is on to Raanav’s plans and I adore that he is not about to just sit and let things slide. 🤗

And I absolutely love that he gave it straight to Raanav about his own relatives. I mean he is the MAN❤️


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Posted: 3 years ago

I like Satyen even more now. He realized and accepted his mistakes and doesn't want Raanav to repeat them. He knows he is an intelligent person. He will surely make an effort if someone makes him see sense.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Satyen is love! ♥️

Loved the insight into their marriage..

Accepting his own culpability while reprimanding his son must not be easy. He put his point across fabulously! 👏

♥️♥️♥️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kalavathi5

Can I just say I have a massive crush on Satyen❤️❤️

if he was real, Smrita would have a fight on her hands 🤣

I love that he is on to Raanav’s plans and I adore that he is not about to just sit and let things slide. 🤗

And I absolutely love that he gave it straight to Raanav about his own relatives. I mean he is the MAN❤️



@bold +1 🤣🤣


Apart from what you mentioned, petty me also loved how he refused to breakfast with Viren! 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

If you cannot bring yourself to treat her like an equal, AND her FAMILY as your equal you have no business being married to her.


Every parent should give this lesson to their kid irrespective of gender/class etc.


Nisha, you have created some wonderful Male characters. I have fallen for:

R&B

Harit

Neel

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Posted: 3 years ago

“Ek second beta… I continued allowed Mum to hold on to her… I could have had a million squabbles with her, one I didn’t have the time, two, you two were born close together almost like twins, she did not get much help from her parents as you know because of the way she abandoned her education to get married. I decided I am going to be easy about this. I wasn’t going to sit around and trash her and delight in her failures. I decided to support her”

Satyen paused turning away from the mirror and facing his son

“Whatever she was telling herself along the way, however she decided to conduct herself was all NOT invisible to me Raanav. I saw it heard it and read about it” he sighed

Raanav leaned on the tall window sipping his coffee

“I should have cared, I should have intervened I did not. Now we have Viveka on the verge of leaving this house”


Yes, bitter fact is that if today Smrita is what she is, it is majorly due to Satyen. Whatever reasons he is trying to give,(having 2 kids etc etc), it feels like he is just trying to dodge the blame. Her beliefs, her outlook has been strengthened over the years and it is also a fact that Satyen did not address it till Viveka entered their lives.

And he even has agreed with her when she got someone who is one notch above her as their elder DIL.

So is it okay if Rakshit is married to someone whose ideals are even worse than Smrita?


Also a fact that people do not change over night. Smrita's outlook has become this strong gradually over decades. Does Satyen really think few words of "wisdom" will change her overnight? Frankly, I don't even know if people like Smrita, Lekha can ever change in life.


Tomorrow if Rakshit faces something what Satyen is facing now, what will he do? Lekha has been trained to be this way from birth. She might never understand what the other person is trying to show her.


And can Raanav see the world differently now or at least he wants to attempt? He is only seeing Viveka and a few Mathurs differently. What about the rest of the world?

Edited by canapoem - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Satyan did not check in Smrita because it didn't hit home before. Now someone he loves and respects is facing the insult. How does he plan to take care of it though? He can't have a fight with Smrita every day.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Out in the open

Smrita made a big deal out of it as expected, crying, hyper ventilating. Especially when she heard Satyen utter “Its not a big deal for her to walk away from a marriage that is not serving her well”

“Well you probably forgot but I am 31 and I don’t need you to make that decision for me POP” Raanav was derisive

“Satyaaa… kya ho raha hai”

“I” can see the power imbalance in this marriage” CANT YOU?” he quizzed his wife

“Umm.. there… is umm..”

“He takes care of her right?” Smrita mocked

“There is no room for her to assert her needs or opinions Smri”

“Aisi baat nahi hai, she doesn’t hang with me… she doesn’t call me, she doesn’t join me for lunch or dinner at Khan Market, its 20 minutes from Sarai Kale Khan or wherever she has her thing” Smrita blurted out her angst

“Aapne unko bulaya?”

“I am supposed to beg her now?” Smrita insulted Satyen

“U want the dynamic of your relationship with your DIL to be, she scoops you up and supports you through out with zero investment from you… just like my marriage to you” Satyen was harsh

He had crossed a line clearly

Smrita was a wonderful wife and mother

He was insinuating that she was his charity case

Ouch!!

“Relinquishing your power is SO HARD for you” satyen was scathing “I have made many many mistakes in this equation. I am wising up now. “You feel growing close to Viveka letting a friendship bloom, trusting her, allowing her to have your back is abhorrent. Things you have given to Lekha in a half a second”

“I cannot be arguing with you sorry “

Smri ta walked into her closet and began wearing large diamond hoop earrings

Nothing on her body was less than lakhs of rupees

She walked out itching for a fight

“You must be seeing how much wreckage is strewn around us in the last 10 months since we started seeing the Mathurs”

“We talked about it Satyaa” she begged

Raanav was glad to be allowed to eat

“Your attempt to “make peace” with things is basically elongated conversations where you reinforce what you believe in I do the same” “We both have not been fair to her”

Satyen drank his orange juice, she came forward to pour out the freshly brewed Columbian coffee

He stopped her and poured out on his own

Raanav and Smrita exchanged a glance

“Unless she complained to you I don’t see what the big deal is Satya” Smrita sat down arms crossed across her chest

“SHE did not… but looks like your son has had enough of this bull sh—he is moving out” Satyen smiled

“Kal raat ko kaha isko maine…”

“Your lengthy diatribe on how everyone needs to be direct but not doing a thing about what is expressed directly to YOU is amazing”

“Har baat ko aap meri galti keh rahe hain, I am willing to let her go with us”

“Your sugarcoating your dislike for her by saying you ALLOWED her to accompany you”

“If you are going to nitpick everything I say, then ZIPPPP” Smrita gestured with her fingers

“You have to acknowledge, Smri, you have to feel bad… you have to feel genuine love for Viveka Mathur”

Smrita looked at Raanav

Raanav served himself more omelette

“We shouldn’t be having this conversation even, the girl he dated while in college Syd? Sydney naam tha uska? She was practically homeless”

Raanav bristled

“She lived with you I know” Satyen mocked his son soundly

“You were great to Sydney, ALWAYS”

Smrita got up she did not have any defensible reason why Viveka was so hated by her

“When Raanav suggested he bought a place I decided it would be indeed a good idea for him to test the waters, if living with us means his wife will never receive the dignity Lekha does then its fine for him to live in Gurgaon”

Smrita began to cry and accused Satyen of twisting her words, accused Raanav of punishing HER publicly

Afterall she had a status to upkeep, she lived breathed and slept SM

What was she going to tell her friends?

Afterall their validation and approval was supreme

She got unconditional love from Parashar Sr and his wife, she was never made to feel like an outsider

Things she rarely recollected today because it went against her every fiber of existence

“Are you going to Oslo after Holi”

“I am” Raanav nodded filling his coffee mug and getting up

“Rakshit is headed to Singapore first aap bhi jao uske saath figure out what is going on with that pre sweeping sand excavation contractor. We are not doing it as professionally as I would like to, just figure that out” Satyen scratched his head

He was shrewd and professional, he hated setbacks

“Hydro dynamic hai, kya hai pata nahi, he muttered trying to look up an email from the company, I was told it works in non cohesive soils”

“I don’t think that’s the problem

Raanav spent a good 20 minutes explaining, father and son debated on the course of action

“Don’t let Viveka know what transpired over here” he waved his hand over the food symbolically

Smrita whimpered in a chair by the balcony as she made SM posts

“Mum…”

“She will be fine… now go bother ur wife”

“I can do that”

“And don’t forget the apology” he spoke gently but firmly

Raanav hated that edict

He had no intention to apologize… ughh

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Posted: 3 years ago

Satyan is the man we need. It’s good he is direct but what he doesn’t understand is that if it doesn’t come from within, the apology is no use! Raanav doesn’t wish to rectify and It’s high time he faces it with Viveka too!

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