P&P with a twist IV

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Finding & Gloating

Viveka returned to a Ma who felt much better, the doctor had suggested ECG and other heart stress tests since her dizzy spells were becoming more frequent

Naina was “in charge” of mother now

She took care of Ma’s needs and went to bat for Ma telling Papa Ma needed a full time cook

Akash had suggested it many times along the years

Anu had dismissed it saying “If the girls are going to be career women they need to know how to fill their bellies first”

The girls were usually in charge of dinner

The last 1.5 or so those rules had some how dissolved and Ma was cooking more frequently, the cooks the family had employed over time had just not come up to speed with the intense demands and the flurry of frequent relatives and guests and friends

Viveka was busy with her PhD applications, Naina was designing 3 houses at one point, one was a floor of a large kothi in Maharani Bagh

Ma had two additional new hires on her team who were eventually rotated out to other teams so she had two people to pick up some of her slack

Diya was taking two extra electives

Karuna was dealing with a broken right elbow after the Metro door almost closed on her arm, she pulled back and it had struck a steel handle bar

Naina had interviewed 4 girls and was on her 5th

Papa was impressed with how Naina had handled the whole thing

Naina had a strict beauty regimen for her hair her skin her cuticles and down to her cracked heels

She did it all while taking care of Ma

Papa was overjoyed to see Viveka, Ma’s reaction was muted or Viveka felt it was

“When are you getting your test results?”

Viveka made Ma Papa’s bed with new clean sheets

“In a week

“U need to slow down and do fewer hours”

We have a maid for everything other than cooking, who bhi chhod doon?” Ma laughed

“I did not say that”

“U are married Naina is busy Diya has to prepare for finals so does Karuna, Diya fall mein Bangalore ja rahi hai,”

“Diya does eat a lot” Viveka laughed

“Mazaak nahi”

“Naina is OK?” Viveka tried to act like she was stretching out the creases

“Oh yeah… she has been by my side.. every minute of the day

“That’s nice”

Viveka felt a pang of irritation

SHE was the one that was”there for everyone” “Did everything”

She was the oldest

Naina was supposed to be this flaky self absorbed falling in and out of love person

“Kitchen bhi rearrange kar diya dekha”

“DID U SEE” “Its like I have a new kitchen”

Naina had created a butler’s pantry of sort in the annexe of kitchen that served as a empty “Chalo yaha Dadi ke puraane solid rosewood and teakwood almirahs mein saara ghar ka garbage bhar dete hain”

She had moved stuff around, bought a nice table and put all the appliances over there. Showcased the nice wood almirahs in the living room, taking the doors off one to make it open, and arranging curios in it, and attached the freed up doors on both sides of the front door

“she is so talented” Viveka sighed

“Papa keh rahe hain she should start her own firm”

“I agree” Viveka sat on the bed and tied her hair

Raanav had talked her into getting short hair

She looked lovely but no one at home had noticed except Papa

Ma looked up from her laptop

She had taken the rest of the week off

Today was Wednesday

She made really great breakfast too” Viveka mumbled

She had taken Viveka’s banana bread recipe and had tricked it up

And she had made a oatmeal crumble of some sort

“Its like I have my old Naina back” Ma nodded with joy

Viveka went to find Papa, he was researching cars

“Kya hua?” she sat down

“I am thinking I can get Ma another Corolla or something with a driver

“laayiye” “Let me look” she leaned on him as father and daughter talked about torgue emissions and combustion and axles for the next two hours

She slept on the divan

Naina had fixed lunch when she sat up at 6, her and Ma were off to see a “garden oasis” of sort Naina’s horticulturalist friend Kopal had created in a home near Sujan Singh Park

“Metro mein gaye dono? Viveka asked Diya

“I don’t think so, Naina Di was going to take Ma to some spa after”

“RAAT KO?” Viveka was curious

“I DON’T KNOW Di” Diya rolled her eyes and went back on her phone

Viveka went to find Papa, he wasn’t home either… Naina had rearranged Diya Karu’s room as well

Diya explained breathlessly where/how everything was so easy to find now

Viveka loved Naina

But I mean C’mon

Naina caused ruckus not too long ago, does no one remember now?

Naina is so selfish too

She checked her phone

There was a call from Raanav

Her heart skipped a beat

Its like within the confines of the Rohini house he did not exist… in her mind or thought… or body

“My hair is so short I cant even tie it” she growled as soon as he answered

“Good evening?”

“Hmm”

“Hmm what?”

“Nothing”

“how is your Mum?”

“Good I guess… she is not home”

“Where is she? Did she go on a biz trip?” he was surprised

“Umm.. no… I would have told you 18 hours ago when I landed” she laughed

“then?”

“she went out with Naina”

“Greatt!” he sounded happy

“She had many dizzy spells… why would Ma go out in the Feb wind?”

“Umm.. she felt OK maybe?” (His tine was of why are u complaining to me?”)

“Naina is so opinionated she doesn’t listen to anyone”

“Um..”

“I find that She has changed the house” “Moved everything around”

“Ah” (his tone was of bewilderment)

Viveka realized she need not have returned….

Her husband was not detecting her despair

Or he was but was not encouraging that thought

“Umm.. did u have a good day?”

“I am in Norway”

“Kab gaye?”

“6 hours ago”

“Hmm”

“Vi?”

“Kuch nahi…. Is Inder still upset?”

Her petty mind wanted him to have caused trouble

“Do u really want me to answer that?”

“Umm.. OK fine”

“I have ur other earring”

He had “caused” yet another earring to be lost in bed

“U have a fetish dude…”

He laughed

“I should not even bother I should show up with nothing and that would save u the trouble of finding and gloating”

“That sounds amazing” he laughed under his breath

Imagining a n-de Viveka

His voice his tone and his mere verbal ero---cism sent her heart soaring

She sighed deeply

Maybe hes OK… Parashar kid is mine… yeah

yeah he still cares for me... see he is someone that still seeks me out


she decided childishly feeling unreasonable jealousy clawing at her insides

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congratulations nisha…. Another good tale and great writing!

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Congratulations on your new thread Nisha ji! 👍🏼

Love your storytelling.. everyone of your characters is so real and relatable! I wish this runs into many more of such awesome threads ahead ♥️

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Congratulations mam 💐💐💐

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Wow 🤩

That’s first for Viveka.

I don’t think she has ever missed Ranaav so much. And this time it wasn’t merely for sex.
He has made her feel wanted and sought for in these two/three months and for a change she misses him.

Lovely update Nisha.

Gradual realisation.
I for so long wanted to see her feelings for Ranaav.

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Maybe hes OK… Parashar kid is mine… yeah

yeah he still cares for me... see he is someone that still seeks me out"


This is how u feel when u visit ur parents place after ur marriage.... These type of jealousy to ur younger siblings and the feel of being left out and then seeking comfort with the feel of having someone in life.....

Viveka is now a newly married woman....


Congrats for this new thread nisha😘😘😘😘

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It would be lovely if the Parashar kid senses the desperation of his wife.

He would be super happy.
She hasn’t ever made him feel wanted I guess.

This would be first in their relationship.

Can she go back to be him in Norway ?

She just has to spell out once and Ranaav will arrange for it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congratulations on the new thread Nisha 👏


It is nice to read Naina taking up these responsibilities and being there for the family.


A jealous Viveka - was it the first time we saw?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was lovely,Nisha 😍.

Naina had a strict beauty regimen for her hair her skin her cuticles and down to her cracked heels

She did it all while taking care of Ma"


This brought a smile and a cheer for Naina. She does not compromise on her own needs and still manages her new responsibilities. 😍

An independent personality. Loved how easily you have sketched the differences between the two sisters. Tweaked Viveka banana bread and made it better 😍 Reminded me when Viv had to manage house when Anu. was travelling..her own needs were forgotten..was at wits ends..trying to meet all relatives demands.

Cooks/help are being interviewed by 'her'...she will hire someone and find a permanent solution rather than the constant lament. I bet Anu is loving the pamper and relaxation at the spa will do wonders for her BP and peace of mind.


Viv. It would not fit Viv if she started missing Ra.


Its like within the confines of the Rohini house he did not exist… in her mind or thought… or bodydy"

She only remembers Ra when she is not required at her parents home .(see.they have found solution and life is running more smoothly there now) 😊

Her rant and jealousy of Naina is natural..so will be the acceptance. ❤️

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Naina is a boss lady !! Naina 2.0😛


I guess, Naina is one of those people who take their own sweet time to come into their own and probably crisis situation, personal and professional pushed Naina to take a look at herself and step up! May be she feels useful and good ,doing up the home, may be she has time on her hands now, maybe there's a lot of regret and guilt in her, may be there's hurt pride and ego in her (that's pretty wounded at the moment) over the ridicule she has been subject to partly due to her own irresponsible modus operandi! It's a combo that we are seeing Naina 2.0 now . But what matters most is how one EVOLVES after taking a hit to one's pride and growth.

I'm only glad to see Naina taking a step in the right direction. This chapter warms me the most for very obvious reasons !!❤️

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