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Posted: 4 years ago

Seeing

Smrita sees nothing and Raanav sees everything in that nerdy middle class girl.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Secrets…

Smrita thinks she will inspire feelings of jealousy in Viveka. But I don't think so. Naina lost her wallet. Viveka already knew. Don't think she will read too much into it.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Propensity to worry

Smrita has not managed to make Viveka jealous. But Viveka did want to ask Raanav about it. Will she make an issue of Raanav paying?

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Posted: 4 years ago

It is nice that Viv and Raanav are talking but still there are not opening up. I do get that it takes time to talk freely but somewhere Viv is still stuck with only issues concerning how she will not take any kind of money from the Parashers or how her pride will not let her take it.

For instance, Lekha's car damage is really a very trivial issue for Raanav and I agree with him. It was Lekha's mistake and it happened in his house and it is his wife, for once Viv can let it go and allow him to take care of matters.

She could have spoken about Naina which is a far more important matter. Maybe she was waiting for Raanav for tell, but maybe he too is waiting for her to question him, talk to him, ask him. Instead, she chose car insurance topic.

Either way both really need to be more open.

Let's see what happens next.


Nisha, what kind of handloom sarees did Smrita gift Viv? We readers would love to look at it.

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Posted: 4 years ago

mujhe lagta hai, my double chin flub is going to occupy this real estate Mujhe bhi apne lie aisa hi lagta hai.. someday, soon, there won't be any neck to speak of!!😆 Yeah, to speak of.. 🤣


no I told her Ive ordered you to wear only sarees, your skin is easier to get to” I was sputtering thinking.. really? Really?? Then I remembered the peanuts incident.. oh yeah, really! 😳

An outrageously shameless pair of brothers, is it??😆 It would be so much fun to see them that way at the dinner table someday.. baki ki family ke expressions 🤣


To meri sadak par ladne ki stamina high hai, aur mere genes bhi achha hain” 🤣🤣 My favourite!


Does she sleep poorly aaj kal?” Viveka was curious, feeling a moment of compassion Her ability to be compassionate towards Smrita, especially in the light of how the last few days have been for her.. is ❤️

Such a darling!! 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Facts & Hypothesis

“Havent seen you in two days” Sid smiled waving at her as he attempted to get up from his seat at the breakfast table

“After Lohri I went home to my parents for a day, they had a ceremony over there, my cousin married too so there were two newly weds in the house” she sat down with her paratha

“Why are you up so early?”

“We have a show at Maurya, well I don’t have a show, we have a 10 feet by 10 feet space to the craftspersons at the NGO I work for can display their wares”

“What time?” he asked curiously

“Abhi 11-4 for the next 3 days”

“Its only 7:12 AM”

“I will go inventory everything again, round up everyone, load everything, we have to be set up by 10”

“Wow sounds exciting”

“I can tell how excited you are” Raanav mocked his cousin as he sat down by his wife

“Kyon chhed rahe ho usko?” Viveka accused

“Gee thanks, I don’t think anyone has ever defended me”

“Yep” Raanav shook his head and ate quietly

“Tum dono mein koi ladai hai?”

“You sound like my Mum”

“Rakshit and him fight too…”

“Ive heard Rakshit walked in on you two famously arguing”

“We argue everyday” Viveka soke dismissively

“Everyone I date agrees with me” Sid looked at her longingly

“HOW?” Viveka was confused she started laughing

“I don’t know” he shook his head in disbelief

“Is this some new way of finding a date?” Raanav asked mock politely

“No I MEAN it… I am sure she knows tons of debaters”

“My SISTER Naina is worse than I”

Viveka realized what she had just said

Sid looked at her looked at her plate and looked up at her

“They broke up I heard so why not” he smiled slowly

Viveka was SHOCKED

She tried to hide it but was unsuccessful

She turned to Raanav, he was responding to a text on the phone

“Tum jaante the?” she asked softly

“About what?” he raised his head

“Umm.. never mind” she said softly

“I doubt dating Naina is a good idea Sid” she said softly

“Well you are not available so….” “Whats a guy supposed to do”

Viveka realized he was trying to blunt the blow from his announcement

He really was a very very sweet man she realized

He hadn’t intended to hurt her in any way

He realized she did not know and was ashamed about blurting it out

“Great Sid… hit on my wife now” Raanav mock clapped

“Raanav pagal ho” Viveka used her stock line followed by a “Uff” and shaking of head and pushing up her glasses

“Did u not hear him?” Raanav was furious

“Chill dude”

“Don’t do that ever again” Raanav got up coolly shoved his chair under the table and looked at her

“Kya?” she asked coolly

“A word?”

“Ruko,” she mumbled finishing her roti and got up, as Sid talked on the phone in what sounded like Swahili

“Did you know Naina broke up?”

:”Why?”

“Mere sawaal ka jawab doosra sawal nahi hai”

He walked with her as she headed to their suite

“Instead of being mad at me shouldn’t you ask your sister?”

“I WOULD if she would TALK to me” she said exasperated, pausing and turning to look at him

“I am sorry”

“Tumhari Ma ne kaha,”

“Stop” he whispered as if warning her

“I am not about to say ANYTHING negative. Why are you so touchy?” she was shocked

“Because I know its going to be my mother’s fault your sister broke up”

“With the right suspicion…. You and her have hated Naina Raanav” her lower lip trembled

A help walked by not even looking up as they fought in the wide cool walkway lined with original art work

“You think my Mum orchestrated it?”

“I was not going to say that, but since you ask, yes, if they broke up, and if there was a falling out, she probably had at least a 5% contribution”

“You assume your sister is not an adult then?” he was mad

“My sister was… IS AN adult, par kisi ne dee nahi usko freedom, neither Inder’s parents, nor your Mom. There has been so much harsh scrutiny of her every move” Viveka looked straight at him

“Inder’s parent..”

“I know she told my Ma off at Lohri” she was teary

He lowered his gaze sadly, he knew what had transpired right then and there, Viveka only learned about it when she had gone home a couple days later for the Sankranti ceremony at Bua’s

“Your aunt’s accusations were out of line” “Totally”

“Its not about what she said, its about what I knew or did not know about Naina’s break up”

“I am sure your mother aligned with Mamiji and told you what a terrible person Ma is to let Naina be a loose girl” Viveka was choking up

Raanav realized she was right again, Smrita had texted him saying Anubha had made Nupur cry

“You might have as well, since class difference has been this deep gorge between us”

“Lashing out at me for a mutually agreed separation by two grown in your own admission “adults” is the most asinine hypothesis you have ever arrived at Viveka Mathur”

“raanav tum NAHI chahte ho Naina ko, jhooth nahi hai yeh baat….. mujhse shaadi Dad ki wajah se ki, for the most part, “I” agreed too, but this will chase us like a shadow every where like an invisible being”

He glared at her, turned around and took off

Her heart melted for Naina,

She wanted to punch every one who misunderstood her

She had appeared calm and subdued at the Sankranti events

Now Viveka knew why…

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hope Kalpana Jazz, Nouf Sonal are all doing well, havent seen any in a while

Hugs and Cheers

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Posted: 4 years ago

I am doing good, i guess nisha...

My duty timings are a lil messy and over that, this covid is not leaving us....

But havent left my routine of checking ur page twice daily😘

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Posted: 4 years ago

Viveka defended her sister Naina . She told Raanav that his mum may have a hand in Naina and Inder's breaking up. She also told him that Inder's mum had a go at her mum. Viveka was feeling sad that no one allowed Naina and Inder to work out their relationship. She told that they married because of hid dad and she wanted to but the class difference will always be there.

Thank you, Nisha.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Hope Kalpana Jazz, Nouf Sonal are all doing well, havent seen any in a while

Hugs and Cheers

I’m here thaan Nisha. Reading the updates everyday. Little busy at work and home. Hope everything is good at your end.

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