IPKKND “Saving hearts“ C13 p37 23rd Feb conclude - Page 7

Originally posted by: ranogill

She hesitates for a second and falls into the charming trap of his which reminds her that the nursery in

their new house needed children otherwise it was pointless.

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this is what i talking about

This was supposed to be Khushi still thinking of the nk situation however Arnav has away of taking her attention away and making her think about something more personal to them as a couple. Hope that makes sense.

Originally posted by: coderlady

How did Arnav miss all the phone calls coming for Khushi?

Dadi is coming. Lets see how Arnav will convince her.

Fiction has loop wholes maybe he was In the shower ? Ha

Just read all 6 chapters in one go amazing now this is one story with modern times trying to bring forward Modernization and banishing age old customs having no good at all.

Love the story line and now I am eagerly waiting for next updates keep going and we are here to read.

Thanks

Originally posted by: SURYAkvl1

Just read all 6 chapters in one go amazing now this is one story with modern times trying to bring forward Modernization and banishing age old customs having no good at all.

Love the story line and now I am eagerly waiting for next updates keep going and we are here to read.

Thanks

Exactly that you’ll see the narrative is geared towards a message.

I love this story of Khushi and her saheb. Khushi has her own gentle way to get Arnav to do things and her saheb does what she wants. Lovely.

Dadi is coming back and what will she make of Jennifer. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

I read 9 chapters of bittersweet and now I get it why is it that important for you and I must complement you for thinking this deep about a relationship with all difficulties present. But however much I love it the thing is that it needs a mind of Steel to understand it.

I am still on it and boy I am intrigued by the storyline the suspense with every chapter end is great from you. Thanks

I finally completed all 20 chapters of Bittersweet. It is amazing. The best thing it has is that it has more of ARSHI scenario in whole story than any other characters that part is predominant in the whole story, thanks for that and being an ARSHI fan you can't ask for more.

The story has got the underlaying message that Humans are not perfect neither are relationships but two individuals with their understanding maturity care and love makes it perfect this story was such an example for the same but in a very detailed way.

I would be truthful to you that the explanation of BITTERSWEET of KHUSHI I can't get completely because I think 19 is not the age for that much serious relationship thinking but still if I go twice over that explanation I will get it but it took 4 hours to complete it and I can't go twice for this also it requires a steel brain to understand.

Originally posted by: SURYAkvl1

I finally completed all 20 chapters of Bittersweet. It is amazing. The best thing it has is that it has more of ARSHI scenario in whole story than any other characters that part is predominant in the whole story, thanks for that and being an ARSHI fan you can't ask for more.

The story has got the underlaying message that Humans are not perfect neither are relationships but two individuals with their understanding maturity care and love makes it perfect this story was such an example for the same but in a very detailed way.

I would be truthful to you that the explanation of BITTERSWEET of KHUSHI I can't get completely because I think 19 is not the age for that much serious relationship thinking but still if I go twice over that explanation I will get it but it took 4 hours to complete it and I can't go twice for this also it requires a steel brain to understand.

So after seeing this comment I went Back to take a glance at the ff. Like you say it’s long and takes time to read but I picked the odd chapters to jog my memory. Like a leap back in time can’t remember exactly but I remember thinking some things in life are bittersweet and we fall in love with them. I landed on the chapter where it’s Arnavs Birthday and he is pleased with his gift. Narrative primarily being Arnav and Khushi but that added layer of complexity with Aarav forcing out different sides of the couple.

I’m planning to write a follow up on bitter sweet after I’ve finished the other two. It will be a stand alone story but connected to this .

Thanks for spending your time on my ffs 4 hours is a lot.

I will be waiting for that and ease mention Arnav's birthday chapter I can't seem to catch it or give any hint.

The best thing about your story is you don't detail so much about dress for any occasion in this just two lines and that is great We read story not fashion.

Originally posted by: SURYAkvl1

I will be waiting for that and ease mention Arnav's birthday chapter I can't seem to catch it or give any hint.

The best thing about your story is you don't detail so much about dress for any occasion in this just two lines and that is great We read story not fashion.

Thanks

Oh no I meant Aaravs birthday here :

Chapter 13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4068676/ipkknd-bitter-sweet-an-aquired-taste-c18-p152-thread-2-link-added

Chapter 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4068676?pn=93#119547369

I don’t care much about describing attire a lot only when it’s a must I rather write about emotions and gestures, dialogue and situation..