And Then I Saw The Real You:Killers pg 51 - Page 4

OMG!!!
shreyu...it felt like i was reading a novel!! 😳
d intros r dun so well!!!! 👏 👏 👏
i LUVED it!!
i cant WAIT 2 read d next part 😳 ....do post soon!!! 😳

that was too good.i jst loved the letters.they all were so cute.pls continue.

It was not boring at all....it was just intro...it has to b like that.....yeah...w8ing for ur next part dear...... 😳
Swapna-Mobile 😳

continue soon... nd i loved it.....

ah!!!ooo!!!!omg!!!god!!!.........simple positive exclamations for your lovely+noteworthy fanfic,shreyasi!!excellent work,do post d next part really soon..... 👏

Originally posted by: abhita

Good One dear...
But except for Pooja, nobody sounded like their characters in LRL... was that deliberate??? 👏

yes. i will explain as the story goes on why alekh and ali are out of character

hey shreyu,
i hope i got ur name rite 😕 😳 😳

good starting.... 👏

i got reminded of Harry Potter when he used to get letters from Hermione and Ron..
the letters surely have that feel...

btw i dint like Alekh changing... if there wud be an ethnic tapori touch the story cud hav more masala
😉 😉

but im sure u hav some reason...
so explain soon 😳 😳

luv
kanak

Originally posted by: devilangel

Dear Naina,

My sweet sis, what is wrong with you? You haven't replied to our letters in, what, a week? And you didn't even tell me about your field programmes and all that. and Sweetie, please please tell me it was a guy. It's so long since you've gone out with someone.. its about time you know!

Okay fine, I know I'm embarrassing you with all this 'girl-talk'.. you can do that with Pooja (who by the way is furious because she didn't receive any letters from you).. but the important thing is, you're coming down to Mumbai this weekend, and you're taking a leave until Wednesday. Don't say No, Major Naina Singh.. your ticket is attached and the four of us are going to have a great time this weekend. If you don't come, we're officially never talking to you anymore. Oh ! and bring the new guy.. whoever he is, if you want.

Can't wait to see you sis,

Lots of love,

Alekh

NAINA SINGH AHLUWALIA!!

What the hell is wrong with your inbox? I mean, we keep on sending SMSes and you never bother to hit the reply button. Ali was in New Delhi last week for work and they said you were out for some inspection or something? Your outgoing is completely nutcase!

And Alekh said something about you and a guy! Oh my god! Who is he? Is he hot? I bet he is like Hrithik Roshan in Dhoom or Tom Cruise in the War of the Worlds. Bring him for our weekend together!! And you better come or I'll take out your call card and make sure you never receive any incoming again.

Miss you so much and reply before I have to come over and kill you!

Love and kisses,

Pooja

Dear Naina,

I know Pooja has already sent you a letter, but this is a warning. DO NOT REPLY HER TODAY! For some reason.. she is furious and has been acting really odd. I think it has got something to do with your 'quietness'. She doesn't have anyone to gossip with ( please please don't tell her I said that.. I'll be dead) She won't even let me go to work today.. can you believe it?!?!?!

Oh well.. the sacrifices I make for the woman I love. I'm getting too dramatic, no?. Anyway, reply back (again.. NOT today) and can't wait to see you during the weekend.

And remember, whatever your problem, you always have your brothers to talk to.

Love ya sistah!

Ali.

She folded the letters with laughter bubbling in her stomach. It was a long time since she talked to them, and she missed the fun they had together. They were the Golden Quartet, and she hoped they would always be that way. Feeling guilty for not replying their letters, she collected her folders and started off for work. Initially she had planned to not go to Mumbai for the weekend, but she had missed them too much. Over the years, she couldn't be glad enough to have two brothers and a sister who cared for her so much. Their frivolities would make her light once more.. and yes, she decided, it had been quite long since she had been with them. Yes, she resolved, she would be in Mumbai this weekend.

Preview Part 2

'Excuse me, is this seat 23B?'

'Yes.' She replied, as she couldn't help but feel that this man was a little stupid if he couldn't see the letters in blaring blue.

'Thank you.' He politely replied before sitting down.

I am so glad to read your fan-fic and I must tell you that you write so damn well!!!! I loved the first part and plz!!! Don't say it was boring......It was fantabulous!!!! Lokking foreward to the forthcoming parts!!!

Love

Khyati

Absolutely Smashing!

you Rock!

Plz continue soon! 👏

She was running late, well actually very late. Her flight was in two hours and she had to get to the airport. Well, that normally doesn't take two hours but the airport was really far from her workplace, and she had a reputation of always being in the car which broke down.

However, she did manage to reach the airport five minutes before boarding time, but not fast enough. As soon as she entered, she heard the all-too-familiar announcement blaring 'Miss Naina Singh Ahluwalia, please proceed to Boarding Gate 5A for the Air India flight to Delhi immediately.' Thinking how embarrassing it was to be caught in the act, she started running to the gate. However, that was a feat she did not achieve because of her all too heavy suitcase. But, as God never ceases miracles, she did manage to get into the plane and search for her seat before she was asked to put on her seat belt. Her seatmate, she noticed, hadn't arrived yet. It gave her a slight feeling of satisfaction at the fact that someone could be even later than her. Her thoughts, nonetheless, were cut short by

'Excuse me, is this seat 23B?'

'Yes.' She replied, as she couldn't help but feel that this man was a little stupid if he couldn't see the letters in blaring blue.

'Thank you.' He politely replied before sitting down.

There was something about him which was oddly familiar. Something about his voice and appearance immediately set her down memory lane. She still couldn't place who he was when he abruptly turned.

'Sir!' she gasped out, wanting to say more, before realizing that the last time she had spoken to him was quite dramatic, to say the least.

The man looked confused for a second before realizing it was him she was addressing. She looked different with her hair down and long hanging earrings, but he did recognize her.

He nodded curtly, hoping to avoid conversation, as the last time was clearly not very 'friendly'. He knew about her, of course. Everywhere in the Army they were always talking about her, the young prodigy. He, being in the army, knew all about her constant discoveries and promotions, and somehow couldn't fathom the fact that she was so much ahead of him in so little time.

But then again, his thoughts were cut out by a very cheerful

'So how are you nowadays, Captain?' she said the last word tentatively, knowing that he was her junior now, and also knowing that his formal stance hasn't been bent in the past five years.

'Fine, Madam. ' It was all he could do not to spit out the last word. 'And You?' But then again he fully knew that creating a scene on a plane was not the best idea.

Her eyebrows rose in surprise when he addressed her, but then she quickly hid it.

'Oh I'm fine,' she waved a hand dismissively. She thought that a professional approach was much better with him. She already knew that he was posted somewhere in the Northern Division.. and the Northern Division being in her control, she was directly responsible for his promotion.

Preview for Part 3

'Ahh..nice. and how is the Taj Mahal?' her feeble attempt at a joke was wasted.

'Will you cease your incessant questions right now, Cadet Singh?' and he was back in professor mode.