And Then I Saw The Real You:Killers pg 51 - Page 3

I'll be waiting eagerly for your fan-fiction!!!! The intro is rocking.............I'm sure the story will be gr8

Originally posted by: lrl_biggest_fan

I agree with u yaar.Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Huda ko mat maro!!!!!!!!!😭

there is a particular reason for his death, 😉.. even i didnt want him to die.. srry guys😳

Originally posted by: tere_bin

i like the concept devilangel...
thats ur name rite?? 😕 😕

btw do start riting soon coz i cant wait to read why Raj is junior and why and how did Huda die... and how come Alekh is a junior too?????? 😕

plz plz rite soon 😳 😳

luv
kanak

my name is shreyasi 😆..even tho devilangel is a nice name!:P

and alekh is junior because he spent too much time with his daroo(kidding).. there's no such reason actually..

and Raj is junior because marrying ritu confused him, i think. but its specially important to the story😳

hope u understand!😳😛

Originally posted by: coolgirl_13

👏 👏 it sounds GR888 shreyu!! 👏
n no..m not goin 2 be sayin dont make dis or dat happen 😛 ...coz i no u'll hav a reason 4 dat.. 😳
i no dis ones gonna ROCK jus like d one before 😳 👏 👏 ...so PLZZZ start off fast!!! 😳 cant wait 4 it!!! 😳

thxx for understanding prerna! 😳.. and tell me if youu want to do the huda-tarzan fic still. 😆😳😉

Dear Naina,

My sweet sis, what is wrong with you? You haven't replied to our letters in, what, a week? And you didn't even tell me about your field programmes and all that. and Sweetie, please please tell me it was a guy. It's so long since you've gone out with someone.. its about time you know!

Okay fine, I know I'm embarrassing you with all this 'girl-talk'.. you can do that with Pooja (who by the way is furious because she didn't receive any letters from you).. but the important thing is, you're coming down to Mumbai this weekend, and you're taking a leave until Wednesday. Don't say No, Major Naina Singh.. your ticket is attached and the four of us are going to have a great time this weekend. If you don't come, we're officially never talking to you anymore. Oh ! and bring the new guy.. whoever he is, if you want.

Can't wait to see you sis,

Lots of love,

Alekh

NAINA SINGH AHLUWALIA!!

What the hell is wrong with your inbox? I mean, we keep on sending SMSes and you never bother to hit the reply button. Ali was in New Delhi last week for work and they said you were out for some inspection or something? Your outgoing is completely nutcase!

And Alekh said something about you and a guy! Oh my god! Who is he? Is he hot? I bet he is like Hrithik Roshan in Dhoom or Tom Cruise in the War of the Worlds. Bring him for our weekend together!! And you better come or I'll take out your call card and make sure you never receive any incoming again.

Miss you so much and reply before I have to come over and kill you!

Love and kisses,

Pooja

Dear Naina,

I know Pooja has already sent you a letter, but this is a warning. DO NOT REPLY HER TODAY! For some reason.. she is furious and has been acting really odd. I think it has got something to do with your 'quietness'. She doesn't have anyone to gossip with ( please please don't tell her I said that.. I'll be dead) She won't even let me go to work today.. can you believe it?!?!?!

Oh well.. the sacrifices I make for the woman I love. I'm getting too dramatic, no?. Anyway, reply back (again.. NOT today) and can't wait to see you during the weekend.

And remember, whatever your problem, you always have your brothers to talk to.

Love ya sistah!

Ali.

She folded the letters with laughter bubbling in her stomach. It was a long time since she talked to them, and she missed the fun they had together. They were the Golden Quartet, and she hoped they would always be that way. Feeling guilty for not replying their letters, she collected her folders and started off for work. Initially she had planned to not go to Mumbai for the weekend, but she had missed them too much. Over the years, she couldn't be glad enough to have two brothers and a sister who cared for her so much. Their frivolities would make her light once more.. and yes, she decided, it had been quite long since she had been with them. Yes, she resolved, she would be in Mumbai this weekend.

Preview Part 2

'Excuse me, is this seat 23B?'

'Yes.' She replied, as she couldn't help but feel that this man was a little stupid if he couldn't see the letters in blaring blue.

'Thank you.' He politely replied before sitting down.

hi guys!!!

do tell me how you liked the first chap. i know it was boring but i had to do the introductions. i will always give preview of each chapter just to get your minds working and wondering.. 😆 😉

and the next chapters will be interesting PROMISE.. so pretty please comment 😳 😳 .. they;re the only things which keep me going 😳 😳

happy reading
shreyasi

hi devilangel
i am the first one
and yes i like this part 👏 . cant say its awsome as its only intro.
but yes i realy like you narating power of character 👏 👏 👏
plz post next as soon as possible
and i think that person is MY hero RAJ 😳

hey devilangel i really like it it's very intersting plzzzzzzzz write the next part soon

Good One dear...
But except for Pooja, nobody sounded like their characters in LRL... was that deliberate??? 👏

I m sooooooooo glad u started dis!!!!!Gr8888888 start.Bt hey,is it Raj in preview!!!!
Bt it looks like fianlly Alekh learnt English & is quite well versed wid dat now. 😉 J/K
Coooooool start dear....carry on soon & d idea of preview its soooo guuuuuud!!!