And Then I Saw The Real You:Killers pg 51 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys here you go the next part..
it will start being a lot more interesting after this.. because the third part is a conversation..

and as ppl asked, alekh has finnally learnt english because i dont speak hindi well enough to write it in hindi.. srry guys hope you dont mind 😳

and keep guessing what the third part will be from the preview.. u might actually think its a bit funny

till then, happy reading
shreyasi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dat was amazing shreyu dear!!(hope udot mind me callin udat 😊 ) 👏 never expected raj 2call naina MADAM 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
😆
alekh englihs bolega
cool very nice
and loved ur tarzan one too
good 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
very nice yaar keep it up wowwww raj called naina a madam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
hey a new and interesting twist in your fan fic with Naina faring better than her mentor!

Wow that must be something! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great Shreyasi

both the FF are too good

pl cotinue writing

waiting for ur next post
pl post ASAp
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great Shreyasi

both the FF are too good

pl cotinue writing

waiting for ur next post
pl post ASAp
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: devilangel


However, she did manage to reach the airport five minutes before boarding time, but not fast enough. As soon as she entered, she heard the all-too-familiar announcement blaring 'Miss Naina Singh Ahluwalia, please proceed to Boarding Gate 5A for the Air India flight to Delhi immediately.' Thinking how embarrassing it was to be caught in the act, she started running to the gate. However, that was a feat she did not achieve because of her all too heavy suitcase. But, as God never ceases miracles, she did manage to get into the plane and search for her seat before she was asked to put on her seat belt. Her seatmate, she noticed, hadn't arrived yet. It gave her a slight feeling of satisfaction at the fact that someone could be even later than her. Her thoughts, nonetheless, were cut short by

'Excuse me, is this seat 23B?'

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U mean Flight to Mumbai rite!!!!!!!

Ne-ways Raj & Naina face to face on d flight,Nice yaar!!!!Dis was short & sweet part.Eagerly w8ing for d nxt part!!!

BTW as for Alekh speaking English....it wasnt a comment bt a compliment for Alekh.He is an army officer......hoooott,guud luking & now english speaking too...dat makes him all d more perfect!!!!!Keep up d guuud job!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hmmmm...ya flight to Mumbai na...k cool observation sanya.....but ur FF is coooool ya...abb hum aise bade bade authors ke saamne kya moon khole....hum chuhon ki tarah jo aap jo likhe wo padhenge..... 😆 ooooo....I forgot u dunno hindi na....dun worry Shreyasi.....dhere dhere padne ki koshish karo....koi APPATI(difficulty) aaye toe mujhse pooch lo.....hoon na ekdum jhakas GURU 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 OMG!!! naina being addressed as "madam" by raj...dat was sumthing!!! 😛
GR8888 WORK shreyu!!! 👏 👏 i like dis FF of urs better den d last one..its sort of liter...(ya..luk whos talkin here.. 😛 )
but seriousely....amazing yaar!! 👏 👏 n bout alekh...dont worry 😛 ....he speaks perfect english now..all d better 4 us 😉 ...hot,handsome n now,perfect gentleman types 😳 ....wat more can a gurl ask 4?! 😳
plzzz plzz write d next part 😳 ..i cant wait 4 it!!! 😳

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