Manzil Last part-pg20 MaNan ArShi SS

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Manzil (Destination) Introduction

This SS is not a love story.It's an emotional family drama on the problems caused when a son is a bit too attached to his mother.The concept is slightly about Oedipus complex.

Oedipus complex, is a term used by Sigmund Freud to describe a child's feelings of desire for his or her opposite-sex parent and jealousy and anger toward his or her same-sex parent.If there are mothers here at least some of you must have experienced their baby son not liking the father around his mother as he does'nt like to share his mother with the father.The over possessiveness of sons towards their mother create such issues.

My dearest friend Sydell wanted me to write on this idea.So i dedicate this SS to her.

Those who expect romance will get disappointed with this SS as there is very less romance.Still there will be romance.ArShi romance will be very less.

Thank you so much Sydell 4 this lovely banner



Character Sketch

Aryan Singh Raizada:The cruel husband of Khushi.
Arnav Singh Raizada:The twin brother of Aryan.But a soft person who is a very good friend of Khushi.
Khushi Singh Raizada:Wife of Aryan and mother of Aarav.

Aarav Singh Raizada:The dearest son of Khushi.

Little Aarav
Adult Aarav
Ruhi Bhalla:Love interest of Aarav.
Raman Bhalla-Ishita Bhalla:Parents of Ruhi.




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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thankyou Jasmine for writing for me this SS on the concept Odeipus complex on Arshi and manan thank you so much and I am really looking forward to reading the full story and and going into my imaginary world with your writing
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting character sketch
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Awww... Didn't expected a MaNan FF from u, wow, what a pleasant surprise 😊
Excited to read this story, thanks for PM. Continue to PM me of this
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Posted: 6 years ago
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A big welcome to this concept ...

Jazz n Dellz ..
A little clarification ..

When a son gets too attached to his mother n doesn't like his father around her,it's called Oedipus complex..
But when a girl gets too possessive about her father n doesn't feel comfortable to see her mother around her father,it's called Electra complex ..

But it's not necessary that such kids can demand sexual consolation from their respective parent (though there r certain such cases) ..

Amazing character sketch..
A new thing..
Khushi is not married to Arnav but his brother 😕

@ Dellz..

Tu aur tere anokhe ideas..
I wonder how did u convince my BHOLI BHALI Jasmine to write about such a concept..
Or U guys must have chosen a light version of Oedipus complex ..

@ Less Arshi romance..


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Exactly.I have learnt Freud's theories on Oedipus complex and Electra complex in college.According to him all babies have this 😆.So when Sydell asked me to write on this I was reminded of the theries I learnt in college.
You are exactly right.This complex does'nt mean that sexuality is involved in it.

Originally posted by: pakpearl

A big welcome to this concept ...


Jazz n Dellz ..
A little clarification ..

When a son gets too attached to his mother n doesn't like his father around her,it's called Oedipus complex..
But when a girl gets too possessive about her father n doesn't feel comfortable to see her mother around her father,it's called Electra complex ..

But it's not necessary that such kids can demand sexual consolation from their respective parent (though there r certain such cases) ..

Amazing character sketch..
A new thing..
Khushi is not married to Arnav but his brother 😕

@ Dellz..

Tu aur tere anokhe ideas..
I wonder how did u convince my BHOLI BHALI Jasmine to write about such a concept..
Or U guys must have chosen a light version of Oedipus complex ..

@ Less Arshi romance..


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Waiting for Ch-1 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting idea dear!!! I am also now studying about these in my psychology class... Superb concept... N nice character sketch... ArShi r not couples... Eagerly waiting for the update dear... Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Exactly.I have learnt Freud's theories on Oedipus complex and Electra complex in college.According to him all babies have this 😆.So when Sydell asked me to write on this I was reminded of the theries I learnt in college.

You are exactly right.This complex does'nt mean that sexuality is involved in it.


yeah thats true 😆
haan mere saath rehte rehte Jasmine too became like ms 😃
and ya since i am in my college am learning and about this and i told Jasmine to do so because i have alot of novels to read which are based on such kind of concept 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats on the SS!! lovely introduction! nice cs! thanks for the pm!
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