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awesome update! thanks for the pm!

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Aryan deserves that

where is khushi and Arnav?

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Congratulations on your new story

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Concept is Refreshingly Different

this will be something that interest me to actually see

a child's response or they POV in such cases

I'm really looking forward to reading this story

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Taahir

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Character Sketch is extremely Interesting

Khushi is married to Ayaan and he is cruel towards her

maybe she somewhere will fall in love with Arnav otherwise

he will be her friend and greatest support system

Looking forward to seeing each character in its role

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Thanks a lot 4 supporting this theme friends.

Moumina, gopsss, sharda_123, hajr, dellzcreationz,

suji5, Srivalli.t, jeb1, pakpearl, khwaishfan

Manzil (Destination) Part 2

Ruhi:Aarav...do you know what you are saying?Are you out of senses?You are supposed to take care of your father.But you are torturing him and finding pleasure in it?Are you a sadist?

Aarav:Yes,I am torturing him.
Ruhi:Disgusting.Usually kids cry when their parents are in pain.But you are laughing seeing your father in pain.
Aarav:You won't understand it Ruhi as you have loving parents.But I am ashamed to call my father my own as he is a beast.He does'nt deserve any mercy.From day one my mother suffered because of my father.

Flash back...

Khushi was sitting on the bed as a bride.She was a bit nervous as her husband is coming.She has never known him before as it's an arranged marriage.Aryan came with a smile.He sat near her and held her hand.Without even talking to her he started brushing his lips against her delicate skin.She became nervous and moved backward.
Aryan:What happened?
Khushi:Don't you think things are getting rushed up?I mean so fast..we don't even know properly.
Aryan got angry:What the hell!Are you really hesitant to come closer to me because of this or you have someone else in your mind?
Khushi was shocked by his reaction.
Khushi:No no.You are misunderstanding me.I have not loved anyone else.I swear.

Aryan:Then prove it by surrendering to me.Just remember that i am your husband and I have right on your body.

Khushi could'nt move as if she tries to resist he will doubt her faithfulness and loyalty towards him.
When he pulled her closer to him roughly she did'nt resist.He was so wild with her that she got more and more scared about the upcoming nights.
He used her body whenever he want wildly.She could not even walk properly due to weakness and pain.But he never allowed her to rest.
Aryan grabbed her by her hair roughly:Don't think that you can sit here like a lazy girl.Go do your work.Clean the house and cook food.
Khushi:Yes.I will.

Even in weakness she did all the work by herself.

Present...

Aarav:My so called father himself said this to me without any shame like a proud person as he thinks that this is manliness.
Ruhi was shocked.
Aarav:My mother's solace was my father's twin brother Arnav.He was not a beast like my father though he looked exactly like my father.He was a good friend to my mother.

But my mother lost her friendship too because of my father.

Flash back...

The drunkard Aryan beating Khushi always became a routine.
Khushi was very upset.Arnav went near her:Khushiji...Are you alright?
Khushi :Ya...
Arnav knew that she was sad because of Aryan.
Arnav:Khushiji...you know today someone asked me to sing in the party I attended.But when I sang they started laughing.Do you know why they laughed?Does the song I sang have any problem?
Khushi:I don't know.
Arnav:Then I will sing.You tell me why they laughed.
Arnav started singing so horribly that Khushi started laughing.
Khushi:How are you singing Arnavji?
Khushi continued laughing.

Arnav felt happy to see her laugh.Purposefully he talked and sang like this to make her laugh.

Aryan saw Arnav-Khushi laughing.

Aryan got jealous and angry to see it.
Aryan:Arnavvv!Don't you know that she is your sister in law?Then why are you trying to woo her?And Khushi,are you not ashamed to get romantic with your brother in law?
Arnav and Khushi were shocked.
Arnav:What are you saying Aryan?We just talked.Why are you making it a big issue?
Aryan:Oh really?Should I be calm when I see my wife and brother together?
Arnav:Aryan!Be in your limits.
Aryan:You be in your limits.
Khushi wept:Aryanji...please believe.We are not in a relationship like you think.
Aryan:Now onwards you both should not talk to each other.If I see you both talk it will get confirmed that you both are lovers.So better not do it.

Aryan left the room angrily.
Arnav:Why is Aryan like this?
Khushi:Arnavji..we should not talk to each other.Otherwise Aryan will go to any extent.So please..let us pretend like strangers.
Arnav became upset:Khushiji...

Khushi left tearfully.

Arnav and Khushi stopped talking to each other.
One day while walking Khushi bumped into Arnav accidentally and they both fell down.Arnav was on top of Khushi.

Aryan who saw this misunderstood them and roared.
Aryan:You both betrayed me in front of me shamelessly.
Arnav:No Aryan.You are misunderstanding us.
Khushi:Aryanji..please believe us.
Aryan:You liars!
Aryan pulled Khushi by her hair and started slapping her brutally.Arnav tried to save Khushi from Aryan.But Aryan started hitting Arnav beyond a limit and Arnav fell unconscious.
Khushi cried:Arnavjiii
Aryan:Are you feeling hurt seeing your lover in distress?
Aryan continued beating her.
Aarav cried helplessly:Papa..please don't beat Maa.She is very nice.

Aryan continued hurting Khushi without minding Aarav.

Aryan lit the match stick with burning eyes.

Khushi got scared:Aryanji..please..no...

Her pleadings and cry fell on his deaf ears.He walked towards Khushi with the burning match stick like a beast.

He hurt Khushi's body with lit match sticks.Khushi moaned in pain.

Aryan filed a divorce case against Khushi.He proved that Khushi was immoral with false evidence and defamed her in public.So even public started hating Khushi.Aryan got the custody of Aarav as Khushi was proved immoral.

Court...

Aarav hugged Khushi crying:Maa..please take me with you.I want to be with you.
Khushi cried kissing him:Beta..even i want you with me.
Aarav hugged her so tightly that she won't be able to leave him.
Aryan came:Stop this emotional drama.

The heartless Aryan snatched Aarav from Khushi.
Khushi cried:Please Aryanji..give me my Aarav.I can't live without him.
Aryan smirked at her without paying any attention to the tears of Aarav and Khushi.

Present...

Aarav's eyes were full of tears.
Aarav:I lost my mother because of that wolf Ruhi.I promised my mother that I will always be with her.But I could'nt keep up my promise.
Ruhi wept unknowingly:I never knew that you suffered this much Aarav.
Aarav:Atleast he kept us alive.But what he did to Arnav chachu was unbearable.
Ruhi:What happened to Arnav Chachu?
Aarav:Arnav chachu disappeared after the court case.Later my beast dad confessed to me that he sent goons to kill him and after stabbing him they threw his body off a cliff.
Ruhi was shocked.
Aarav:Tell me how I will love my dad?
Ruhi was silent.
Aarav:I can be peaceful only when I see my dad in pain.After my mother left he brought many girls to our house to spend night with.Even when I became an adult he kept affairs with girls.But look at his condition now.Gid punished him.After the stroke he s paralyzed and no girl looks at him.I am very happy about that.I enquired about my mother.Poor Maa is all alone.She has no one.She is stitching clothes and living her life.But I have promised myself that after taking revenge on my father I will return to my mother.First I want to see him dying painfully.
Ruhi did not know what to say as she knew that Aarav was blinded by his hatred for his father.
Ruhi embraced him and caressed his head to comfort him.

Aarav was in tears:Ruhi..because of that person I lost my Maa.How can I even consider him as my father?I lost my biggest happiness because of him.
Ruhi said cupping his face in her hands:Don't think of the past and hurt yourself Aarav.

Aarav:I can't forget my past easily as the past has become a part of my life.My past keeps influencing me as I live in my past memories which I hate the most.
Ruhi could'nt bear his pain and she held him closer to sooth his pain.
Ruhi:Aarav!
Aarav:Until that devil gets punishment and I get my mother back I won't get peace of mind.
Aarav was crying like a child.
Ruhi did know how to erase his pain,but all she knew was her love can give him relief.
She pressed her lips on his forehead and embraced him caressing him more and more to give him relief.
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Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago

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Sydell

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Posted: 6 years ago

#27

wow what a beautiful update,Ruhi didnt like the fact that Aarav was ill treating his father but then Aarav told her the truth that Aryan used to torture Khushi and only used to use her for sex and not only that he used to ill treat her while she used to do household chores ,he even went to the extent of accusing her of extra marital affair with his bro Arnav,when they were just freinds but i loved that cute moment of Arshi when Arnav sang and Khushi laughed.

Shocking that Aryan filed a divorced Khushi and not only that he also defamed her to which Aarav's custody came to Aryan ,awee loved Khurav scene when Aarav didnt wanted to let go of Khushi and another horrifying act was that Aryan even sent goons behind Arnav to kill him again reminds me of Hamlet/Haider

Loved Ruhi consolling Aarav and her love will ease out the pain of his ..so khushi is living all alone and living on the means of sticthing clothes sad